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Posted: 16 years ago
lovely parts Madhu.....awesome...👏
all the best honey....🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
nice part Madhu!
VS getting to know each other, and having some simpathy towards the other... nothing much to comment, liked when he was talkin sincerely wid her, and when she was doing so too, (thats he doesnt look an aryavart)...
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Posted: 16 years ago
Prt 5 C: Dashing past the swaying trees, he cudn't help but wonder, how did he get involved in all this..He was a Prince and cud hav easily defeated them all, buh then he had to fled as they wudn't cum out and attack front to front..They jus sumhow wanted to catch his beautiful companion abt whom he himself didn't knw.. She silently, suddenly halted her stallion and signaled him to do so too, he again wondered how tis gal knw each and every place in tht vry forest…As soon as they had tied the horses to the trees and collected those green leaves from the fallen trees in a heap leaving the couple of horses wiv enuf fodder..she started moving away..down into the valley.. "Suno!!.." " Itni jaldi jaldi kahan jaa rahi ho.." " Dekho lagg jaegi.." she suddenly turned around so tht they stood facing each oder only a few centimeters away..poiting a finger at him, she lashed out, " Agar app humare saath nahi hote toh hum kab ka unn dakuon ko sabak sikha chuke hote.." " Ohh haan haan..pata hai mujhe.." and he slowly brought his hand to catch the small finger tht she had pointed towards him, buh b4 he cud do so..she pulled away moving back tilting a lil.." Apko nahi pata ki inn dakuon ne kitni masumon aur bakasuron ki jaan li hai..Aas pass ke gaon mein kitni lut patt machai hai..ajj apki wajah se itna acha mauka haath se nikaal gaya.." She said grimacing.. " Arey toh humne kahan apke haath pakde the.." He folded his hands onto his chest.. " Apko toh yeh pata hi hai ki app ek 'RAJKUMAR' hai..so apki jaan ko jokhim mein dalne ki pyaari bhul hum kar hi nahi sakte the.." " Maana ki mein ek Rajkumar hoon..par shayad app bhul rahi hai ki apni khud ki raksha karna toh humein atta hi hai.." He too felt his temper rising now..why was she blaming him to tht..n why cudn't she say tht straight tht she didn't want him to be wiv her..buh he remained normal.. She jus rolled her eyes and walked ahead.. " Agli baar jab voh humein milenge toh..hum unka khatma kar denge.." " Ji..Par iss hum mein app shamil nahi hai.." " Kyun??" " Kyunki yahan se nikalte hi app ek alag zyada surakshit raste se chale jaenge.." " Mein kahin nahi jaunga.." " App jaenge.." " Nahi jaunga.." " App pakka jaenge.." " Nahi.." " haan.." " nahi" " haan" " NAHI" " nahi" "HAAN"… she gav him tht gotcha luk.. He luked at her miserably, he didn't knw why he felt tht he just wanted to be wiv her..talkin to her was so easy..and gd and interesting..He cud go on wiv her praises for days..buh howsoeva much he tried to make her understand, she remained adamant abt him leaving the place asap.. It was even when his last attempt went futile did he get rilli pissed off..as he saw her walking away giving her final statement..He stood there watching her go..His heart, chained by her curly locks was mre than eager to follow her, while his mind had anoder crappy story of self-respect and she doesn't want U to go wiv her and ruin her time..so it's betta if u go away…Jus don't tag wiv her wivout a reason..if she doesn't want u to… ******************************* " Dekhiye Rajkumar humein pata hai ki iss tarah apse baat karna humare liye uchit nahi tha, par chunki apki jaan ko khatra hai, isliye hum uss samay ghbra gaye the…Agar humara jaan ki baat hoti toh koi faraq nahi padta lekin Aryanagar ke bhavi samrat..ya phir Rajkumar hi sahi..Humein apke jeevan ko jokhim mein dalne ka koi haq nahi hai..aur agar apko kuch ho jata toh..Hum jante hai ki app bohot hi ache yodha hai..par phir bhi..ek Rajkumar ke prati humara yahi farz hai ki hum unhe har jhokhim se bachaye.." " App samajh rahe hai na Rajkumar.." She paused hearing not a single wrd from behind..Jus the rustling of the green leaves tht were shining golden-yellow due to the colourful dusk sky.. " Raj.." she fell silent the moment she turned..He wasn't behind her.. " Ohhh!!" " Na jane kahan Gayab ho gaye.." she said to herself.. " Agar app humein darane ki koshish kar rahe hai toh yeh sab bekar hai..humein aisi cheezon se darr nahi lagta.." she stated as a matter of factly..she was not at all scared..like Heck..wht was there to be scared on..So she moved ahead..returning to the track from where she had begun.. ******************************* " Rajkumar…" " Rajkumar…Dekhiye bahar aa jaiye.." " Kahan hai app.." " Rajkumar…" she kept calling his name whilst looking for his jooti's print or for possible directions and clues..It had been an hour she had set in search of him..and he was nowhere near..She was jus a few miles away from the clearing.. ******************************* He was all set to take his the route bac to the village..buh had to wait as he had seen those dakoos still searching for them..A slightest hint and they wud cum down to him..no her..and tht's why he didn't jump in action and strangle them all alive..He wud hav to wait for anoder opportunity to do so.. then he heard the same voice..in a moments time the tranquil surroundings ( she's still down the valley) were filled by the respectful prefix she always used.. He had listened to his brainy brain and had cum bac here and rested for a while...trying to figure out his feelings, his thoughts, his actions, his journey so far..and mst of all abt her..and then wht now..wht wud he do now.. As he heard the voice calling out again n again..He had to rush..the dakoos were just nearby and if by chance they hear her..They might be in danger..and he made a mentle note of telling her to stop calling him by tht respectful suffix..not coz he loved the way she said his name buh coz if those dakoos came to knw he was a Prince they wud be in even mre danger then they were in now..and he didn't want her to risk her life on such a small tin as a respectful suffix for the to be Yuvraj…he scowled.. Buh then as he saw the rustling of leaves he knw leave now or neva..he knw tht one of the Dakoos had heard it too..as he saw him cumin around..He carefully, wivout making a noice slipped away from tree to tree..and then finally once out of earshot he broke into a sprint..As he ran the voice sounded louder and louder..He kept running towards the source..until ofcourse he bumped into it.. ******************************* She was abt to scream buh had anoder idea..It wud take time to becum steady afta the sudden bump and so she quickly took the dagger and along wiv the still blunt cover she poked the person in the ass.. " Ahh…ahhhhhhh…awwwww…." He bit his tongue and pursed his lips in order to not let out anoder howl..It had been five mins since she had actually..poked him..no a Rajkumar in statement at a place he was so vulnerable…and she said she cared.. ( as she had asked him to leave n all..as it was dangerous for him..) She didn't knw wht to do..laugh or be embarrassed for wht she did..as she saw him still literally jumping up and down turning around holding his ass.. Finally she gav in to the urge to laugh… " Haan haan..hason hason..bohot hasi aa rahi hai na.." he said wiv pearls shining in his eyes..still facing away from her..tryin to get ova the fact tht she actually poked him there.. " YEH kya tha????" She becam quiet all of a sudden and then vry embarrassed abt wht she had done..she said.." Voh humein laga ki app koi..aur.." " ISs tarah se.." He cud hardly control the amusement in his tone..Gosh she cud do tht wiv nyone.. " Voh..maaf kijiyega..voh..Uhh.." she shifted her weight uncomfortably.. " Zyada zorr se toh nahi lagi..uhh" " Tum..urghh…Apko is sey kya.." " Voh humne hi toh..humein sachi nahi pata tha ki app hai..Humein laga koi aur hai so..isliye.." " Itni zorr zorr se kyun chilla rahi thi.." He tried to get away from tht topic..man he was here in middle of the jungle wiv tis wild cat and her deadly daggers..He thanked god for givin her enuf sense of not taking out the dagger or else..he shuddered at the thought.. " Voh..hum apko hi dhundh rahe the.." " Kyun..app hi ne toh kaha tha ki chale jaiye.." " Voh..par..humne yeh kaha tha ki baad mein.." he cut her off again.. " Itni derr baad yaad aayi.." " Hum toh bole jaa rahe the aur humein laga app sun rahe hai..isliye..par phir jab koi awaj nahi ayi toh humne piche mud kar dekha aur phir app nahi mille toh.." " Unhone apki awaj sun li thi..so shayad voh yahan bhi jald hi pohonch jaenge.." and so they both broke into a sprint..and ran away from there.. ******************************* " Yeh lijiye" " hmm..Kya hai yeh.." He luked at the odd thing she was offering him.. " Yeh kuch jade(roots) hai.." " Haan..yeh toh mijhe bhi pata hai.." he said a lil irritated..did she tink he knw notin.. " Apko bhook lag rahi hogi isliye.." " Nahi shukriya.." " Humara gussa khane par kyun nikaal rahe hai..Kha lijiye.." " Pehli baat mein kisi se bhi gussa nahi aur dusri baat mujhe yeh sab nahi khana..mujhe koi bhook nahi.." saying so he closed his eyes and leaned back on the tree trunk.. " Thik hai hum samajh gaye..Par yahan par iske alawa khane ke liye kuch nahi hai Rajkumar.." " Maine kaha na..mujhe kuch nahi khana..aur haan..mujhe yeh Rajkumar sambodhit karna chod dijiye.." " JI…par.." " Isliye Kyunki agar koi apko mujhe Rajkumar kehte hue sun lega toh meri jaan ko AUR bhi khatra bhad jaega.." sayin so he closed his eyes again.. " Ji..Raj..Uh..voh..App..app humse abb bhi naraaz hai.." she said gazing at him timidly.. She had noticed he was not the sweet n cool prince now..he appeared a lil angry and hurt and..she didn't knw..It was like she didn't like tis change..She knw it was coz of her..She shudn't hav been so rude and bossy..afta all who was she to tell him wht to do n wht not..He had been sweet n she had actually forgotten tht he was a prince himself who wasn't used to an attitude as hers and was equally able to save himself from any kind of harm..So she shudn't hav fused ova tht thing.. " Ji nahi.." came the shrt reply..he didn't knw wht happened to him..buh he jus didn't knw..why was he feeling restless..wht was he angry at..at her..or at himself.. " Toh phir yeh kha lijiye…" " Jab ek baar keh diya ki nahi khana..toh phir kyun puch rahi ho baar baar.." he snapped at her buh then lukin at her face he softened.. " Baad mein khana hoga toh kha lunga.." " th..thik hai.." she said in a small voice..even though they weren't so close as to mind whether the oder ate or not..It was in her nature and she had always learned tht U shud always offer u'r food to u'r companion..and also she wanted to satisfy herself tht he felt right at home and didn't remain hungry n all coz afta all he was in her territory..her domain..and so it was her responsibility to make him feel all in place.. She placed the big leaf on the ground and covered the small roots she had been picking up all the while she was down the valley and had thought he was right behind.. " T..app nahi kha rahi.." " Agar app nahi kha rahe toh hum kaise kha sakte hai.." " Kyun.." " Kyunki Attithi ki seva karna humara param dharm hai..aur app toh ek Rajkumar bhi hai..aur waise bhi apke pehle khaye bina hum kaise kha sakte hai.." " Acha.." he smiled..then picked up the a lil piece and was abt to eat it when she stopped him.. " Kya hua.." " Yeh thodi na khate hai..Yeh toh sirf bahari kavach hai..issey kha lete toh pura muh kharab ho jata..Apko iske undar se yeh guda (pulp) nikaal kar khana hai..iske undar hi toh sab kuch hai..yeh undar se thoda mitha hai..." she told him.. " Bohot mithi hai.." he said as an understatement.. " Ji.." " Voh app nahi kha rahi.." he immediately changed the topic..god if she heard tht.. " Humein nahi khana..isliye Kyunki abhi bhook nahi hai.." she added b4 he asked.. " Pakka.." " Haan.." " Toh phir hum bhi baad mein hi.." " Nahi...vishwaas kijiye..jab humein khana hoga hum kha lenge.." " Hmm.." then he luked at the root in his hand and started peeling of the upper hard cover..buh then his finger just dipped in the pulp and it fell out..he just cudn't eat it.. " Issey thoda pyaar se hi chilna padta hai..warna sab gir jata hai.." He tried to do so..he tried to peel it vry slowly and carefully.. " Itne pyaar se bhi nahi..warna puri zindagi nikaal jaegi aur app issey kabhi nahi nikaal paenge…laiye humein dijiye.." she asked him He handed ova the root to her and she slowly peeled away all the root and gav away the pulp to him.. As he ate it..he just wanted to savour the taste..It was sweet and also gd at taste..he was hungry and even though he didn't tell her she seemed to understand..so she peeled anoder of the roots.. Feeling his eyes on her she said.. " Aise khane ka mazza hi kuch aur hai.." " Hmm.." " Aur apke haath se khane mein toh aur bhi jyada mazza hai.." he said to himself.. " Yeh dakko hai bade chalu..Yeh abb tak humein dhund rahe hai.." " Haan..isliye toh hum chahte the ki ajj unhe marr hi dale..Kyunki yeh iss kadr khule mein kabhi nahi ate..humesha chip kar kissi masum se hi yeh sab karvate hai.." " Oh..!! Par acha hai humara unse amna-samna nahi hua..warna..Apko kuch ho jata toh.." " Humein kuch ho bhi jata toh kya faraq padta..kaam se kaam bai log toh inn zalimon se bach jate…" she dropped the root and shook her head "Toh phir Humara kya hota.." She gav him tht luk wiv those killer eyes.. " Humara matlab, phir hum iss jungle meinbhatak jate, aur.." " Swarthi Aryavrath.." she smirked..buh she felt glad to see him bac in the same form.. " Ek dinn apko bhi dikha denge..app bhi kissi karan toh swarthi hongi…" " Apne toh bohot hi agey ki soch rakhi hai..par aisa kuch nahi hoga.." " Abhi toh is baarein mein kuch nahi kehna chahiye..Yeh toh waqt hi bataega.." Busy in their lil chit-chat they didn't realize it until the foot-steps sounded too near..and then when they had actually heard them..It was too late.. ******************************* "Yahan toh nahi hai.." " Lagta hai chale gaye.." " Par itni jaldi kaise chale gaye..Abhi kuch waqt pehle toh awaz aa rahi thi.." " Dhang se dekho yahin kahin honge.." He pulled her even closer..causing her balled fists which kept their chests from touching go flat..Her hands due to the sudden pull reached up till his shoulders..buh then she cud do notin oder than getting even mre close to him..He scrunched a lil mre so tht they wudn't be noticed..His hands pulled her closer making her lean into his broad lean chest…Feeling the Silkiness of her hair he moved his hand up her back and smoothly threaded it along her silky black locks..She jus stifled anoder gasp as he leaned closer into her..taking in the aroma of her hair.. She let him slip his hands in and out her hair as she got intoxicated by his manly smell..Even in such a tense situation she found herself relaxing slowly in his tight warm embrace..She didn't tink of the consequences and let her body becum free accommodating in the small space b/w them.. He cud feel her chest rising and falling wiv his…As he felt her let loose her body..his hands slowly almost automatically down towards her small bare waist... he intended to feel her curves..he restrained himself as he heard her taking in a sharp breath and wanting to move away.. The air B/w them vibrated wiv tension from being so close.. She suddenly felt too close to him..The moment he had hauled her vry close to him when those looters were searching for them..she had felt it was needed..buh now it wasn't jus tht..She found herself loosing it in his embrace..and she didn't knw why she felt tht if she didn't get away now she'd completely loose it.. She pulled herself away from him wanting him to loosen his hold on her.. When he still didn't loosen his grip, she luked up at him.. Knwing tht his chocolaty eyes were steadily gazing at her..she turned her face to the oder side pretending to look wether the pursures had gone away…buh in reality she was jus giving herself time to calm down her drumming heartbeats, to make the colour of her flushed cheeks go normal..finding it the best way to avoid his burning gaze.. Letting go off her was so difficult..He wanted to keep her in his embrace 4eva..feeling her shallow breath, her gasps.. Loosening his grip he smiled… He didn't knw how much time had passed by buh he felt it was jus a moment..while she thought it was ages since she breathed in such air away from tht manly smell of his… ******************************* She kept leaning back until she was dangerously close to hitting the ground..Why was he cumin so close to her..She wanted to say sumfin..well anytin..so tht she escaped this situation..from him..buh she cudn't..she felt tongue-tied..She lowered her eyes in attempt to luk away from his mesmerizing gaze..buh it was not all..She felt his hands crawling to her waist.. " Veer" She whispered for no reason in particular.. Seeing him smiling..she got confused..Why the heck was he smiling..was he mocking at her.. Biting her lower lip she luked down..Gosh he had been so damn close..she was nearly abt to fall whn his hands..and then how he tuk the roots bac leaving her dumbfounded..Wht the..Gosh and here she was imagining all kinds of things.. He looked at her..she was still avoiding his gaze..she hadn't said a thing since they started to get bac..Seeing her making those cute weird faces he cudn't help buh smile.. " Chalo unn dakuon ke aney ka kuch toh fayda hua.." He thought aloud.. " Huh...vo..voh kaise.." she said still not luking at him..she was so embarrassed to face him..buh she didn't want tht to be cumin out in open..Buh he already knw..Gosh..she didn't knw wht to do..yet again when she was goin bac to cursing him for being such a..Gosh..she didn't knw..she was so confused..evrytime she was close to him..this happened..she cudn't think properly..she wud becum shy all of a sudden, she cudn't bring herself to speak even if tht made it clear tht she was embarassed by the events B4..She cudn't blame him..she cudn't blame herself..she jus cudn't blame anyone and yet the question remained just the sme..Wht happened to her..why all of a sudden..why were things so different wiv him..why was he so gd, sweet, charming..so handsum so manly..why him..and why was he doing tis to her.. " Voh aise ki apne..mujhe Rajkumar ki bajai Veer kaha.." as she luked at him shocked he gav her tht trihumphant luk.. " Voh..uhh..Maaf kijiyega..humne galti se.." she bit her lip..She wasn't supposed to say tht..afta all he was a Prince and calling him by his name wasn't right.. " Uski koi zarurat nahi hai.. Aryanagar ke Rajkumar hone ke nate hum apko yeh adesh dete hai ki ajj se..balki abhi se app humein Veer hi bulanegi.." he said wiv loads of authority.. " Apka hukm sar-ankhon par Rajkumar.." she teased him.. buh then he got serious all of a sudden..He still didn't knw who she was… " Yeh..Yeh sab kya hai..Yeh apke peeche kyun lage hai.." " Hum sab bataenge..par abhi nahi..jab waqt ayega tab hum apko sab bata denge.." " Par abhi kyun nahi.." " Jaise hi hum yahan se nikaal jaenge..waise hi hum apko bata denge.." " Pakka.."

" Ji.."…

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Posted: 16 years ago
thank u soooo much dear
thanx for updating

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Posted: 16 years ago

Thanks for updating.I'll comment in details soon.

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Posted: 16 years ago
thank u for this lovly update
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Posted: 16 years ago
i just loved the update
its amazing
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Posted: 16 years ago
Wow, It's great update.I just loved it.post next update soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
good part dear
madhu had wirtten it beutifully.
and thanks for updating this.
wow shera and veer so close.
oh god
that was something .
do continue dear
bye sumi
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Posted: 16 years ago
nice part yaar
madhu had written it so beautifully.
thanks you for continuing it.
its really awesome.
their closeness scenes were too good.
do continue dear
bye sumi

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