~*~*~FATINY~*~*~(RN/RM FF)Ud- PAge 146--9/1/2010 - Page 64

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it was really gud plz contd soon srry 4 late comment it was really gud nice to see rm 2gether waitin 2 c wat sheetel does
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Good yaar,👏 aaj kal sab apni setting me lage hue hain.😉 Rahul to ab lagta hai bus Muskaan k paas aane ka bahana talaash kar raha hai.😳 Muskaan bhi aaj kal ladkiyon jaise blush kar rahi hai.😆 Naina aur Raj k rishte se koi inkaar nahi tha 😊 Sheetal ko bus us ko apne aur Sameer k liye time chahiye n that was obvious.
continue soon.
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RECAP
RAhul about to kiss muskaan...naina sees and wants to do something before raj sees..
She screams at the top of her voice..
Naina-Rahul!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Rahul immediately came out shocked to the core....
Looked at Naina..
Raj was shocked..
Raj-Naina kya hua...tum chila kyun rahi thi??
Naina-Ahh nahi woh rahul ko dekha toh usse bhi drinks puch lete hain..
Raj-Is main chilana kyun tha??😆
Naina-Woh gana chal raha hain na...sunai nahi deta..😕
Raj-Naina background main instrumetnal theme hain..😆😆
Naina-Raj..chodho na...mera dost main bulaoon..tumhe kya??😛😉
Raj -Fine...
He went away..
Rahul came to Naina..
Rahul-Chilaa kyun rahi thi?????????
Naina-What???....do you even know tum kya kar rahe the.....raj was about to turn...agaar woh dekh leta toh shayad acha hota....nahi kyun??😉
Rahul turned red..
Naina-Balai ka toh zamana hi nahi raha..main tumhe bachaya aur tum ho ki..
Muskaan-Ah..thankyou bhabs!!..😛
Naina-Oyye chup reh bhabs ke bachi..😆
Muskaan smiled..
Naina-Hmmm...yeh sab cheezin room main kartein hain...samjhe...aise nahi...rahul...kya yaar..tujhe sikhana padega kya..😆😆
Rahul ruffled his hair..
Rahul-Ahh Naina woh..
Naina-Chal chodh...Raj ko kab bata raha hain?..
Rahul-Pata nahi naina..
NAina-Hey...kya hua koi problem??
Raj-Loo aa gaya tumhara rahul..😆😆
He came with the drinks...niana saw rahul a bit disturbed....
They all had fun and left..
While going..
Naina-Muskaan if you dont mind kya tum please raj ke saath chali jaogi...main rahul se kuch baat karna chathi hoon..i mean only if you dont mind....agaar tum jana chathi hoon toh i mean..
Muskaan-Chilll bhabs!!...relax...aap ko usse baat karni hain na kar loon...its fine..main bhai ke saath chali jaongi..😊
Naina smiled..😛
Naina-Nahi aggar tujhe jana hain toh jaa....woh andarr ki ceremony khatam jo karni hain jo meri wajah se reh gayyi..😉
Muskaan blushed 😳
Muskaan-Bhabs!1...😳
She went towards Raj..
Raj wass like ok..
Muskaan-Dunt gimme that look....un dostoon ko kuch gapshap karni hain...and by the way ek round apni behen ke saath baitogey toh kuch nahi hoga...bhabs ke kamre main janeey ka bahana mil jayega...😉
Rahul came from somewhere..
Rahul-Chalein..
Muskaan-Hmm Bhabs tumharey saath aa rahi hain....so i'll seyou then..
Rahul was blank..
Rahul-Umm ok seeyou...
She smiled at him..
Raj-Bye rahul...
Rahul-Hmm bye!!..
Rahul turned around to see naina.
Naina-Sorry sorry sorry tumhari romantic drive ko kharab karney ke liye..but tumse baat karni thi....woh raj ko lekar tum pareshaan lag rahe the..kya hua??
RAhul smiled..
Rahul-Awesome man...mann gayee tumne pasiey dekar apni degree puri nahi ki...😉
Naina smiled.
Rahul-Actually woh....pata nahi.....you know raj hamesha muskaan ki liye ek acha aur bada aadmi chathe tha....main shayad utna ....
Naina cut him..
Naina-Tumharey drinks main kisi ne kuch milaya tha kya?..Alcohol or something?????
Rahul smiled..
Rahul-Kamal hain sab ko iasakyun lagta hain ki I m drunk!!
Naina-Kyunki tum bata aise ka rahe hoon...tumne toh mujhe kaha tha raj ke day pe.....pyaar yeh nahi dekhta naina ki kaun kitna bada hain ya kisney kya kiya...pyaar toh bas ho jata hain..
Rahul nodded...
Rahul-I know but....Raj se main darta hoon.....hes too protective of muskaan....kahin ere tukde tukde karke kutoon ko khila diya toh??😆😆
Naina-Pagal ho kya?..I am sure...Raj will be more than happy!!..Akhir muskaan ko tum jaisa ...
Pause...
Rahul-Mujh jaisa what?
Naina-Woh if you dont mind diamond ko hindi main kya kehte hain..
Rahul laughed..
Rahul-Hera..
Naina-Oh yeah ofcourse...kabhi kabhi thodi si memory kharab ho jati hain..
Rahul-Zyada romance ke saath wahi hota hain..
Naina blushed!!
Naina-Khair abb raj ko bata de?...Aaj raat...sneak into the academy...sab dost saath main baith kar...what say?
Rahul-No....i am not too sure.
Naina-No worries rahul....main hoon na!!
Naina somehow convinced rahul but he wanted to come tommorow...he said that they had enough activity for the day..
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Around an hour later...Sameer spoke to Raj and left to meet sheetal..
While Naina came to Raj's room...
Sameer and Sheetal went down to the garden....and started chit chatting..
Sameer-Sheetal..I like it if we speak stuff straight and to the point..
She nodded..
Sameer-Problem kya hain?...Just let it all out...dont hold on to it...
Sheetal-Sameer...Its just this feeling of guilt you know.....everyday when i see you i feel guilty....guilty to have hurt you....you are a nice guy.....but i have my own reservations.....i just dont have the courage to move on...i am really scared...maybe i like you too....but still i am scared.....
Sameer took her hands into his..
Sameer-Look sheetal....you dont ever need to feel guilty ok.....its just your decision..make it....alright...see....lets suppose if you dont like me then just say it and forget it dont live on to it...and if you like me sheetal i promise to never ever leave your side...come what may........i'll be with you forever thats my promise.....i wont ditch you sheetal....i cant ditch you....i cant ditch my life...
There were tears in their eyes..
Sameer built up the courage and seeing som positive response for her he told her again..
Sameer-I really really ...
No he wouldnt....he wouldnt spoilt it all over again.
Sheetal-Keh doon Sameer..I am waiting..
Sameer looked at her shocked..
SHe smiled..
Sameer-I really really love you sheetal..
She hugged him..
Sheetal-I know you wont ever leave me..I trust you.....you wont leave your girlfriend na!!..
Sameer was smiling and there were tears in his eyes...his love was with him!!...she called herself his girlfriend!!..There was nothing else he needed in life!...nothing!!..He was indebted to Raj thanx to whom sheetal had accepted her feelings!!..
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Raj and Naina..
Raj was rather silent..
Naina-Kya hua sab theekh?..Wahan toh bade romantic ho rahe the??
Raj-PAta hain...just feeling a little unwell...thoda uncomfortable feel kar raha hoon..
Naina-Kya hua Raj?.....
Raj-I dont know naina....ek uneasy si feeling hoo rahi hain..i just cant describe.......something is gonna happen soon..i dunno...i really cant get it into words..its weird!!..
Naina just hugged him....
Naina-Relax sweety!!..Everythings gonna be ok!!...kuch nahi hooney wala.....relax.......
He stayed in her arms....
Raj-Tum mere saath hoon na?
Naina nodded..
Naina-Ofcourse sweety....always!!..
Raj just held on to her...not wanting her to go...
He was feeling really uncomfortable...something was disturbing him and he dint know what....
He broke from her..
Raj-Sorry...its just that ....i mean..forget it...leave it....
NAina nodded...
She took his hands into hers..
Naina-I am always there for you!!....ok?......anyways now lets get to what we are here for????
Naina dint miss the smile he gave her...
Raj-Sure baby!!..
Naina-Planning for the next class 😉
Raj-Yeah ofcourse.....the next romantic class....ok now will you teach me how to kiss??
Naina blushed...Raj was a nautanki..
NAina-Ofcourse....wait let me get someone to demontstrate..
Raj caught hold of her hand..
Raj-Hey....noone but me.......
Naina-But you dont know na...i'l give you a demo...with
someone else..
Raj-Dont even think about it......only me and jusst me..
He took her lips into his own and kissed her crazily..
Raj began kissing her neck and going lower......he was on her cleavage and pushing her top lower..
Naina-Mmmmmm Raj.....
Raj smiled....
He kissed her..
Raj-Pura karna hain kya? 😉
Naina-Raj sammer wapas aa jayega toh??
Raj-Theekhe aaj raat janeey donga....lekin kal raat sameer chala jayega.....phir tum mere saath mere bed par..
Naina blushed..
Naina-Bas bas..Shhh!!....sharam karo captain..
Raj smiled..
Raj-No sharm ...sirf pyaar!!..
Naina smiled!!.
Naina-Ab chodo....please.......woh aa jayega..
Raj left her..
She adjusted her top...
He was gazing at her..😛
Naina-Raj dont look at me like that..
Raj-Kyun sharm aa rahi hain??
Naina-Raj pleasee...
Raj smiled and hugged her..
Raj-Aisey hi muskurati raho naina....main tumhe harkadam par khush dekhna chatha hoon..
He smiled and she rested her shoulder on his chest!!..
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NExt morning naina called Rahul..
Rahul-Haan naina bolo?
Naina-Rahul....tum aaj raat aa rahe hoon na....raj ko sab bataney??
Rahul-Ahh nahi...woh mujhe kaam hain..
Naina-Kya kaam?
Rahul was looking around...and the first thing he saw was curtains..
Rahul-Woh pardey
Naina-PArdey??
Rahul-Haan woh mere pardey main chota sa hole hain...😛😆
Naina-Rahul..kya bakwaas kar rahe hoon..
Rahul-Ahh woh bakwass nahi naina....pardey ka hole hain....usko theekh karwana hain....aggar hole theekh nahi karengey toh hole se koi andar aa jayega...😆😆
Naina-Rahul pagal ho gaye ho kya???
Rahul-Please naina..tum Raj jo bata doon na..I am really nervous and scared......main nahi bol paonga....
NAina-Kaisey aadmi hoon tum?...Raj se itna kyun darte hoon..hes such a sweetheart!!😊
Rahul-Haan hoga tumhara sweeetheart.....you know its alwys tough to meet your girlfriends elder brother....uff....this is so filmy....😆😆
Naina-Your such a loser with a Capital L............tum raj jaisey harmless aadmi se itna darr rahe hoon..
Naina was trying all kinds of tricks..
Naina-Main sab sambhal dongi..tum bas chup chap aoo..
Rahul-Magar
Naina-Shut up!!...chup karke aoo!!...mere pass bada plan hain..
Naina sounded excited...Rahul had to give in........this was yet another phase in his life......
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PRECAP
Rahul-Raj...main muskaan ka haath tujhse mangta hoon.....main muskaan se shaadi karna chatha hoon Raj..
Rahul looked at Raj...expecting something good...muskaan closed her eyes...and naina looked at Raj..
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Raj-Tu muskaan se pyaar karta hain ??
RAhul-Haan Raj hum dunoo ek dusre se pyaar karte hain..
Raj-Kabse chal raha hain yeh sab???
Muskaan looked down guilty..
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Thanx guys for all the comments!!...This is another part !!..I am glad you all liked the previous part!!..hope u lyk this one as well!!...
Luv
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Posted: 16 years ago
it was really gud plz contd soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesomely great!!!!!
nyc part!!!!!!
luved Rahul anywayzZZ!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!!

Naina ne bahut acche tareeke se bachaya hai Raj se Rahul aur Muskaan ko!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Naina's explainations to Raj for her screaming like that were so funny!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Log sach kehte hai ke pyaar mein log pagal ho jaate hai tabhi toh Raj ne Naina ke ish excuse ko maan liya!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina ne sahi kaha ke yeh sab cheezein room mein karte hai aise nahi!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Yeh log toh kahi bhi chalu ho jaate hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛

Naina Rahul ki pareshani samaj gayi and asked Muskaan to go with Raj as she wanted to talk with Rahul!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Muskaan agreed but Naina started teasing her about andar ki ceremony!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆

Muskaan is now teasing Raj ke round apni behen ke saath baithoge toh kuch nahi hoga aur Naina ke kamre mein jaane ka bahana mil jayega!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Rahul ka yeh dialogue bahut funny tha ke maan gaye tumne paise dekar apni degree puri nahi ki!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Rahul started off about how Raj ko hamesha ek accha aur bada admi chahiye tha Muskaan ke liye!!!!!

Naina said almost the same thing as Muskaan ke uske drinks mein kuch milaya hai kya alcohol or something!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Rahul said ke sab ko aise kyun lagta hai that he is drunk!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Naina reminds him of what he had said to her about love!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Rahul Raj se itna darta kyun hai baat karne se??😕 😕 😕 😕He must talk about them!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

He thinks Raj kahin uske tukde tukde karke na tutto ko khila de!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣He is really being too filmy!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Naina is right that Raj will be more than happy!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Accha huya Naina ne usse convince kar liya aane ke liye!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊They don't need to worry as Naina hai naa un ke saath!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Sheetal feels guilty about hurting Sameer but he said its her decision!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Sheetal ne accha kiya that she accepted Sameer!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊Sameer is really happy and indebted to Raj because of whom Sheetal had accepted her feelings!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj's insticts are saying that something is going to happen soon and it is disturbing him!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔I think he is right!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina assured him that she will be always with him!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj anf Naina flirting with each other was very cute and romantic!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️I love them like this!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj was kissing her crazily!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Raj hamesha beikar hota hai but Naina kehti hai Sameer wapas aa jayega toh!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Yeh Raj bhi Sameer ke jaane ka wait kar raha hai so that he can fulfil his promise!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😛How naughty!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj said to Naina ke aise hi muskurati rahe aur woh usse har kadam par khush dekhna chahta hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Rahul makes up the strangest excuse not to come that night!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕It was hilarious!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Rahul is again chickening out and Naina keh rahi hai ke Raj is such a sweetheart!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Rahul bol raha hai hoga tumhara sweetheart but its always tough to meet your girlfriend's older brother and this is so filmy!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Naina tried all kinds of tricks and Rahul had to give in!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊I am sure Raj will agee to Rahul and Muskaan's releationship!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊


Edited by Shaina_b - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey nice part.....rn r sooooo cute.....hey i did not get any mail regarding da update....anywayz. thanx 4 da update....take care
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Posted: 16 years ago
totallly amazing!!!!!!! and raj is too naughty yaar..lol..ek mauka bhi nai chodta naina ke saathe..lol anyways it was totallly awesome part waiting to read to next part, hope raj accepts thier relationship!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
too good......

loved d way naina handled d situation.......

d dialuges wer awesome der......

den comes rahul n naina convo wich was too good.....

rn as usual fabulous....

interesting precap.....

overall njoyed d updt
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Posted: 16 years ago
wonderful part!!
will be waiting for your next update!!

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