Kaise Kahe Hum(RN fic)'The Concluding Part' pg. 99 - Page 80

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: desaiprachi07

Sorry for being late,
it's k 😃 😃 😃

Raj ne aakhir Naina k saath apna doubt clear hi kar liya ki us k aur Alekh k beech me kuch nahi hai. 😛Thank god timely Appu ka sach saamne aa gaya varna na jaane Raj ka dimaag to kya kya soche jaa raha tha.😡
Raj bhi na buddhu hai, ye sab baatein vo Naina se direct bhi to pooch sakta tha but us ko laga hoga ki kahin Naina ko bura na lag jaaye.

Naina ko mujhe lagta hai shaadi k baad pehli baar Raj ne saari me aur vo bhi apni patni k roop me dekha hai. 😳
yes exactly 😊 😊 😊

Rahul ka kehna sahi hai ki ab Raj ko apni zindagi me aage badhne ki koshish karni chahiye.😃 Alekh Appu ko chodne jaa raha tha to Naina us ko tease kar rahi thi. 😆
Varna kab tak aise hi jiyega na Raj. Rahul sahi to tha hi apni jagah. 😉 😉 😉
Ab Naina bhi mauka kyoun chode? 😛 😛 😛




thanks jee 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: desaiprachi07

Vow kitna funny update tha part 17 na,😉 Naina ne kitne aaram se keh diya tha Raj se ki vo shaadi karna chahti hai Raj se, 😲 par mujhe lagta hai ki yahan Raj ka Naina pe gussa jayaj hai aakhir itne asaani se Vishu ki maut ka gum bhool kar kaise vo Naina k saath shaadi kar sakta hai? 😡 Par Naina ne to jaane ka naam hi nahi liya aur tan man dhan se jut gayi hai Raj ko manane me. 😆

Ohhhhhhhhh ye irritating Moti bi na, koi aur time nahi mila tha us ko Raj aur Naina k beech aane ka 😡? Raj ka dialogue mujhe bahut accha laga jo us ne kaha tha ki haan ab shayad vapas jaane ka waqt aa gaya hai.😊



Thanks for liking my post i mean the update dear.😃 😃 😃 Raj k liye sach me ye possible nahi tha ki vo itne jaldi Vishu ko bhool kar Naina ko apna le aur Naina bhi acche se samajhti hai na ye baat. Raj ko manane k liye tabhi vo lagi hue hai aur Raj ko maana hi hoga aaj nahi kal.
😉 😉 😉
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Vartika07 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: desaiprachi07

Superb part 18 dear. 😊
thanks 😃 😃 😃

Raj ko apne aap ka hosh nahi tha, par Naina ne apne aap par kaboo rakha aur un dono ko koi aisa kadam uthane se ruk gaye varna na jaane us ka kya anjaam hota? 👏
Sahi kiya na Naina ne kyounki josh me hosh kho k sab kuch tabaah ho jaata hai na.

Naina ne jaane me hi bhalai samjhi aur kuch had tak vo sahi bhi hai is baar.😃 I loved dadi maa n wanted to give her a big hug kyounki jis tarah se unhone Raj ko manaya shaadi k liye i think koi aur nahi kar sakta tha.😉
Sach me ek baat to maanai padegi na ki shayad ye kaam aur koi nahi kar paata jo kaam unhone kar dikhaya.👍🏼
👍🏼 👍🏼

But present time me Raj aur Naina ka rishta sudhar raha hai that's gud sign 😳, Raj maan gaya Naina k kehne par ghar jaane k liye ye bhi accha raha. 😉
Haan kuch had tak progress hue hai aur mujhe lagta hai ab sab bus theek hone waala hai, kyoun? 😉 😉 😉

I think now the secreat is going 2 b revealed soon.
yeah bus thoda time wait karna padega.😆 😆 😆



thanks dear a lot 🤗 🤗 🤗
Vartika07 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

Wondeful, brilliant ,superb update.very romantic and passoinate update.
thanks dear so much for liking it. 😳 😳 😳

Alekh's plan is done , alekh ka tease karna niana aur raj ko bahut aacha laga and now both raj and naina clear their all misunderstandings.
Yahi to sab se jyada jaroori tha na is relation me ab sab accha hi hoga.😃 😃 😃

Great , alekh aur appu's marrige ho gaya aur raj and naina are still in their romantic mood.
Haan aaj kal bus romance soojhta hai dono ko. 😳 😳 😳

Dono ki bacche ho gaye hain.Ur epilogue is superb.
Thanks again.......................

But,I'm very sad ,that this fic is end .Pls start a new fic.



thanks yaar 😃 😃 😃, tum sab k support ki hi vajah se mai ye fic acche se finish kar paayi hoon varna ek pal k liye mai bhi nirash ho gayi thi.😭 😭 😭
Thanks a lot 4 encouragement.
🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

awesome ending and a perfect one.....👏
thanks a lot dear 😃 😃 😃

this fic was all about ups and downs in a relationship and u brought up here very well.........it was gr8 to see both rn finally one n happy family....👏
thanks aur sahi maayno me humari real life me bhi sab kuch bahut asaan nahi hota hai na bus vahi soch k fic me maine ye plot rakha tha. 😛 😛 😛

dis updt was again gr8 1...rn were romancing ...aalekh teasing.....n den role reversal wer naina was teasing.....it was all amazing....😉😳
Haan jab jis ko mauka mil jaaye bus apna kaam start kar deta hai vo. 😆 😆 😆

loved aalekh charachter here......afterall it was him who brought rn together......
Tabhi us k yahan aane ka maksad poora ho gaya na. 😊 😊 😊

awesome fic.....gr8 ending ......awesomely presented by......⭐️⭐️⭐️
thanks a lot yaar mere support k liye. 😳 😳 😳

gr8 work dear......hope to see another frm you soon....😊😛
Abhi kuch keh nahi sakte new fic k baare me.



But mai koshish karoongi ki tum sab ki hopes poori karoon ek aur fic se.
Thanks for all ur love n support.
😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: vvdn

It's ended😭
actually m feeling sad becouse it Ended.but toooo Happy that Finally RN have a lots of happiness in their life.😃
Thanks Namita for all ur love n support to the fic.🤗
🤗🤗 Tum jaise logon ne hi mujhe encourage kiya hai fic k liye 😃 😃 😃. Jo aata hai us ko jaana bhi hota hai na i think tum samajh sakti ho ki mujhe bhi bahut dukh hai is ko aise end karne ka.😭 😭 😭 Kyounki it is my most fav fic till date. 😃 😃 😃
😃
u ended it really nice way.i have already told u it is 1 of my verrry favorite fic of urs.i just luved it n m gonna miss it.
mujhe pata hai tabhi to maine kaha. 😉 😉 😉 I miss it too so much.

wonderful writing dear👏Amazing fiction.keep it up.👍🏼



Thanks a lot sweety n keep giving me ur support in other fics too. 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanskruthi

Hi vertika......

wow !!!!!!! superb part dear.....this is an awesome fic with a perfect ending 👏 👏
Hello dear, thanks a lot for appreciating. 😳 😳 😳

alekh aur appu ki shaadi bhi hogayi n appu gave birth to a baby boy......too good
raj n naina r so happy .......they truly deserve the happiness .......after all the pain they went through ........n they named vaishali to their baby .....so cute
Thanks, Raj aur Naina sach me in khusiyon k hakdaar hain after all un k saath jo bhi hua. 😃 😃 😃
u r really an amazing writer n i loved all the parts of the fic ...........n now i am sad that u r ending this fic............n i seriously hope that u start a new one
Same cheej jo maine prologue me kahi thi vo yahan bhi kahoongi ki jo aaya hai us ko jaana hi hai na aur acche se jaaye bus yahi chahti hoon mai. 😛 😛 😛
😛
🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗🤗🤗
this one for u dear for giving us such a wonderful fic



Thank u darling, mai koshish karoongi ki tum sab k liye kuch new le k aaon par filhaal abhi mai kuch keh nahi sakti. 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Vertika

How r u????😊

Hi Suhana i am pretty fine........... 😃 😃 😃

It was indeed one of your finest fictions'.👏👏👏

Thanks dear, bahut kam logon ko i think ye fic accha laga hoga. 😆 😆 😆

I really loved the way u expressed this story..It was not a fairy tale romance but a mature love story'😊

Yeah that's what it is, sab kuch itna asaan nahi hota hai na life me. 😕 😕 😕

Alekh was the most intelligent character in this story..

The most intelligent person. 😃 😃 😃

Way he bridged the gap between Raj n Naina was commendable..It was bcoz of him dat both Raj n Naina found their lost love'😛

Sach me, agar Alekh nahi aata to dono kabhi bhi nahi mil paate. 😛 😛 😛

Raj was too guilty coz he always blamed himself for Vaishali's death ..He didn't accepted Naina's love coz he was not able to forget the injustice done to Vaishali.

Unknowingly he has become the reason for her tragic death

Galti us ki nahi thi na, kisi ne jaan boojh kar to kiya nahi hai na kuch.


Naina was guilty too ..She hated herself for not believing in her love..

Ritu misguided her n she believed her more dan Raj whom she loved dearly..

Ye sab poorii story me main points the na jo bus bharosa na hone ki vajah se hua tha.

Raj n Naina dono hi ek dusre se opyaar to karte the par who ek dusre pe trust nahin klar sake jiski wajah se yeh sab problems hui.

Kisi ne sach hi kaha hai pyaar karma to aasan hain but usko nibhana utna hi mushkil.Vishwas ke bina pyaar ka koi matlab nahin hota

Vishwaas har rishte ka adhaar hota hai na, jab vishwaas nahi hoga tab rishta kaise tikega? 😕 😕 😕


Apu was a real support of Naina .

Raj ne Vaishali se shadi to ki par usko apna nahin paya..Woh chahkar bhi Naina ko bhool nahin paya'Vaishali mein usko Naina dikhti thi..

Haan Appu n Alekh Naina k pass do best friend hai na, kyounki us ne humesha bus Naina ko chaha tha. 😊 😊 😊

Vaishali ka bhi isme koi dosh nahin hai..Woh bechari to kuch janti hi nahin thi'Agar usko pata hota to who Raj n Naina ke beech kabhi nahin aati..

Koi bhi behan apni behan ki khushiyon k raaste me jaan moojh k kabhi nahi aayegi.

Ritu jaisi na jane kitni girls hai jo pyaar ko badnaam karti hai..Ritu Raj se pyaar nahin karti thi... Ritu ke liye Raj ek junoon tha jisko who har hal mein pana chahti thi .......

Ritu ka pyaar nahi tha bus ghatiyapan tha. Vo bus hasil karna chahti thi na Raj ko kisi bhi tarah. 😡 😡 😡

Pyaar to khushi deta hai gham nahin..

Sacchiiiiiiii 😳 😳 😳

Finally end mein saari problems solve ho gayi.Raj ko sach pata chala n who kitna shocked tha 'Ritu ki dosti ne uska sab kuch chhen liya........

Raj n Naina ke beech ki sab problems door ho gayi n dey were happy now..

Ek happy ending se ek fic finish ho gaya. 😉 😉 😉

End mein sirf itna kehna hai'.

" Pyar koi bol nahi, pyar aawaz nahi
Ek khamoshi hai sunti hai kaha karti hai
Na ye bujhtee hai, na rukti hai, na thahri hai kahin
Noor ki boond hai sadiyon se baha karti hai
Sirf ehsaas hai ye rooh se mehsoos karo
Pyar ko pyar hi rehne do koi naam na do
Muskarahat si khili rehti aankhon mein kahin
Aur palkon pe ujaale se jhuke rehte hain
Honth kuch kehte nahi kaanpte hothon pe magar
Kitne khaamsoh se afsaane ruke rehte hain
Sirf ehsaas hai ye rooh se mehsoos karo
Pyar ko pyar hi rehne do koi naam na do"

U r a brilliant writer Vertika n koi kuch bhi kahe hamesha likhti rehna..Bahut kam log hote hain jo shabdon ko kahaniyon mein piro pate hain..😊😊

Bye




Thanks for writing these wonderful lines of one of my fav song.🤗
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Love u a lot and take care..................
😍 😍 😍
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

abt d ud...😃

asusall AWESOME...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
thanks a lot sweety 😳 😳 😳
is ud ki suruwat hui naina k morning kiss se. aur mujhe tabhi laga tha ki yeh ud kaisa hai...???😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃
romantic... n sweet...
oho, sab guess kar lene lagi hai na aaj kal tu. 😉 😉 😉
itne saalon k sari kasar raj wasool kar raha hai naina se...!!! par achha laga yeh jaan kar ki ab kabhi yeh do dil alaga nahin honge. jo rishta jo ek chupe hue sach ki wajah se adhura rah gayi tha...voh finally pura ho gaya...!!! 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃
Haan sab kuch Alekh ne theek kar hi diya na.😃 😃 😃 Us ka maksad yahi tha na. 😉 😉 😉
alekh ka RN ka leg pulling sab se jyada achha tha. after all aaj agar RN mil paye hain toh is ki sab se badi wajah alekh hi toh hai...!!!😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃
After all he is the best in the story na. 😛 😛 😛
finally alekh bhi settle ho hi gaya. par us ki shaadi ki sari zimmedari us ne RN par daal di...vaise bhi naina aur raj k alwa aur koi hai bhi toh nahin. alekh ek sachha dost hai...jis ne apni dosti ka farz nibhya...RN ko milwa kar....!!!😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃
Haan ab ye sab mil k small n cute se family banayenge na.😃 😃 😃 Jis me RN aur A2 honge. 😉 😉 😉
RN ka choti choti baaton par jhagda karna, raj ka use romanticlly manana...sab kuch perfect tha...!!! baas kami thi ek chiz ki jo tum ne akhir me pura kar di. VAISHALI...jo phir se RN k zindagi me aayi...lekin is baar teeno ki zindagi me dher sari khushiyan hongi...!!!😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃
Haan aur ab Vaishali ko bhi koi takleef nahi hogi. 😃 😃 😃
ummed hai ki is fic k end k baad tum ek aur RN fic start karogi...!!!😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃
Sochoongi, abhi kuch keh nahi sakti. 😕 😕 😕




Thank u sweety. 🤗 🤗🤗
Lots of love to u 😳 😳 😳


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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: varshita

Sab se pehle mai kuch kehna chahti hoon is update k baare me us k baad is fic k baare me kahoongi.
ok 😛 😛 😛

Is update k liye bus mere pass itna hi hai filhaal kehne k liye ki "JHAKAS".😊
Thank u sweety 😳 😳 😳

Raj n Naina aur un k rishte sulajh gaye hain. 😃 Diwali khushiyon ki roshini le kar aayi hai un dono ki zindagi me aur bus mai yahi chahti hoon ki ye khushiyan humesha aise hi bani rahein.😊
Aise hi bani rahengi ye khushiyan ab don't worry.😛 😛 😛 Koi nahi aa sakta hai in k beech ab. 😉 😉 😉

Alekh bhi settle ho gaya hai Appu k saath aur is kaam ki zimedaari Naina ne le k dikha diya ki vo Alekh ki best freind hai.😉 Last lines to bahut kool thin jab ek lost character vapas aa gaya jis ka naam hai Vaishali n A2 ki life me Samuya.😊
Thanks again for liking it,😳 😳 😳 Naina hi hai na Alekh ki family to obviously vo us se hi kahega na in sab cheejon k liye. 😃 😃 😃

Subah to bahut romantic thi na RN ki, aur raat to "hot".😳 Raj bus Naina se jyada se jyada pyaar karna chahta hai lagta hai aur kuch nahi.😳
Filhaal janab k pass bus yahi kaam hai. 😉 😉 😉

"Brilliant" 👏



Thanks and love u darling............

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