Originally posted by: suhana_dixit
Hi Vertika
How r u????😊
Hi Suhana i am pretty fine........... 😃 😃 😃
It was indeed one of your finest fictions'.👏👏👏
Thanks dear, bahut kam logon ko i think ye fic accha laga hoga. 😆 😆 😆
I really loved the way u expressed this story..It was not a fairy tale romance but a mature love story'😊
Yeah that's what it is, sab kuch itna asaan nahi hota hai na life me. 😕 😕 😕
Alekh was the most intelligent character in this story..
The most intelligent person. 😃 😃 😃
Way he bridged the gap between Raj n Naina was commendable..It was bcoz of him dat both Raj n Naina found their lost love'😛
Sach me, agar Alekh nahi aata to dono kabhi bhi nahi mil paate. 😛 😛 😛
Raj was too guilty coz he always blamed himself for Vaishali's death ..He didn't accepted Naina's love coz he was not able to forget the injustice done to Vaishali.
Unknowingly he has become the reason for her tragic death
Galti us ki nahi thi na, kisi ne jaan boojh kar to kiya nahi hai na kuch.
Naina was guilty too ..She hated herself for not believing in her love..
Ritu misguided her n she believed her more dan Raj whom she loved dearly..
Ye sab poorii story me main points the na jo bus bharosa na hone ki vajah se hua tha.
Raj n Naina dono hi ek dusre se opyaar to karte the par who ek dusre pe trust nahin klar sake jiski wajah se yeh sab problems hui.
Kisi ne sach hi kaha hai pyaar karma to aasan hain but usko nibhana utna hi mushkil.Vishwas ke bina pyaar ka koi matlab nahin hota
Vishwaas har rishte ka adhaar hota hai na, jab vishwaas nahi hoga tab rishta kaise tikega? 😕 😕 😕
Apu was a real support of Naina .
Raj ne Vaishali se shadi to ki par usko apna nahin paya..Woh chahkar bhi Naina ko bhool nahin paya'Vaishali mein usko Naina dikhti thi..
Haan Appu n Alekh Naina k pass do best friend hai na, kyounki us ne humesha bus Naina ko chaha tha. 😊 😊 😊
Vaishali ka bhi isme koi dosh nahin hai..Woh bechari to kuch janti hi nahin thi'Agar usko pata hota to who Raj n Naina ke beech kabhi nahin aati..
Koi bhi behan apni behan ki khushiyon k raaste me jaan moojh k kabhi nahi aayegi.
Ritu jaisi na jane kitni girls hai jo pyaar ko badnaam karti hai..Ritu Raj se pyaar nahin karti thi... Ritu ke liye Raj ek junoon tha jisko who har hal mein pana chahti thi .......
Ritu ka pyaar nahi tha bus ghatiyapan tha. Vo bus hasil karna chahti thi na Raj ko kisi bhi tarah. 😡 😡 😡
Pyaar to khushi deta hai gham nahin..
Sacchiiiiiiii 😳 😳 😳
Finally end mein saari problems solve ho gayi.Raj ko sach pata chala n who kitna shocked tha 'Ritu ki dosti ne uska sab kuch chhen liya........
Raj n Naina ke beech ki sab problems door ho gayi n dey were happy now..
Ek happy ending se ek fic finish ho gaya. 😉 😉 😉
End mein sirf itna kehna hai'.
" Pyar koi bol nahi, pyar aawaz nahi
Ek khamoshi hai sunti hai kaha karti hai
Na ye bujhtee hai, na rukti hai, na thahri hai kahin
Noor ki boond hai sadiyon se baha karti hai
Sirf ehsaas hai ye rooh se mehsoos karo
Pyar ko pyar hi rehne do koi naam na do
Muskarahat si khili rehti aankhon mein kahin
Aur palkon pe ujaale se jhuke rehte hain
Honth kuch kehte nahi kaanpte hothon pe magar
Kitne khaamsoh se afsaane ruke rehte hain
Sirf ehsaas hai ye rooh se mehsoos karo
Pyar ko pyar hi rehne do koi naam na do"
U r a brilliant writer Vertika n koi kuch bhi kahe hamesha likhti rehna..Bahut kam log hote hain jo shabdon ko kahaniyon mein piro pate hain..😊😊
Bye
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