Originally posted by: Shaina_b
Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!Mindblowing!!!!!!
thanks Shaina π π π
Naina's morning kiss to Raj while he was sleeping was very sweet!!!!!π π π π π π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³
Par Raj ko pata kahan chala? π π π
Aalekh Naina se milne aaya hai and he is teasing her about last night!!!!!π π π π π π π π
Doston me leg pulling hi to sab se mast kaam hai. π π π
Aalekh is going now as his work is done and Raj and Naina are together now!!!!!π π π π π π π π
Yahi to karne aaya tha na vo un ki zindgiyon me. π π π
Naina wanted him to stay till his wedding par woh nahi chahta ke koi unke riste par shaque kare!!!!π π π π
Sahi to hai, shayad ab Raj nahi par baaki k logon ka kya?
Naina wanted to thank Aalekh but he said it was her right and he helped just helped her in getting it back!!!!π π π π π π π π
Aalekh is an awesome friend which everyone would love to have!!!!!!π π π π π π π π π
Alekh jaisa dost sab ko chahiye life me, par kisi ko mil jaata hai kisi ko nahi. π π π
Aalekh is teasing Naina again aur usse kaha ke jaldi se usse mama banaye!!!!!π π π π π π π π π
Lage raho bacchon. π π π
Naina is blushing and said to Aalekh ke ek baar uski shaadi hone de phir batayegi!!!!π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ
Raj tabhi waha aaya and Aalekh is pulling his leg as well and Raj blushed!!!!!π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ
Alekh ka kaam poora ho gaya hai na to ab bus leg pulling me hi laga rahega vo. π³ π³ π³
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Raj also wanted Aalekh to stay and said usne unke liye bahut kuch kiya hai magar Aalekh ne usse senti hone se mana kiya!!!!π π π π π π π π π
Off course Raj senti ho k jara bhi accha nahi lagega.π€ͺπ€ͺπ€ͺ
Aalekh ne apni shaadi ki zimmedari Naina aur Raj ko sambhalne ko kaha kyunki uska Naina ke alawa aur koi nahi hai!!!!π π π π ππΌ ππΌ ππΌ ππΌ
Vahi to us ki family hai na. π π π
Aalekh gives them honeymoon tickets which Naina's mom had given him!!!!!!π π π π π π π π
Nice work, accha kiya ab is ka sahi tarah se use hoga. π³ π³ π³
He said shaadi ke baad sab log honeymoon pe jaate hai toh Raj aur Naina bhi jaaye!!!!!!π π π π π π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³
Pehle jaate bhi to kya karte? Is liye ab sahi waqt hai. π π π
Aur sahi bhi hai kyunki Raj aur Naina ki shaadi toh sahi mayeno mein ab jaake huyi hai!!!!! π π π π
Aalekh told them to go and pack and soon he left!!!!!!π π π π
Sahi maayno me ab jaa k vo dono patni pati bane hai na.π³ π³ π³
Raj ab romantic ho raha hai aur usko morning kiss jaagte huye bhi chahiye and he kissed her hard!!!!!π π π π π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ
It was great to see Raj romancing with Naina all day!!!!!!!π π π π π π π π π
In the night Raj didn't allow Naina to do anything except loving him even though Naina is tired!!!!π π π π π π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ
Raj toh lagta hai itne saalo ki kasar puri karke ki rahega!!!!!π π π π π π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³
Ab poori tarah se khali ho gaya hai na us ka uperi maala to bus ab romance hi karenge janab. π π π
Raj is teasing Naina ke waha itni hot aur beautiful ladkiyan hongi ke shayad uske paas Naina ke liye time na ho!!!!!π π π π π π π π π π π
Jaanta hai na ki Naina inhe baaton se sab se jyada chidti hai. π π π
Obviously Naina got irritated and told him ke woh akele jaye honeymoon pe aur manaye honeymoon un ladkiyon ke saath uski kya zaroorat hai wahan??π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘
Sahi to kaha na, π π π
Raj looked at her adoringly and said honey ke bina moon kaisa and started kissing her shoulders but Naina pushed him back!!!!π π π π π π π π π π
Raj bhi sahi hai na ki honey k bina moon kis kaam ka. π π π
But Naina could not control her desires for long and said to Raj that he knew how to take her!!!!!π π π π π π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³
I loved it when Raj said gusse mein bhi Naina kamaal ki hot lagti hai bilkul ek teekhi tej laal mirch jaise!!!!!π π π π π π π π π π π
Raj and Naina are sooo romantic and passionate!!!!!π π π π π π π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ
It was sizzling hot!!!!!π π π π π π π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ
thanks madam..........π π π
They went for their honeymoon to Switzerland and enjoyed a lot and came back after 15 days!!!!!π π π π π ππΌ ππΌ ππΌ ππΌ
Raj ko ab apne kaam vaam ki koi chinta nahi hai bus biwi ki chinta hai. π π π
Even at Aparna and Aalekh's wedding Raj is flirting with Naina and kissing her whenever you could!!!!!π π π π π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³He has become very naughty!!!!!π π π π π π π π
Saari kasar poori ho jaayegi na 3 yrs ki. π π π
When Aalekh saw Aparna woh toh behosh hote hote bacha and Naina is teasing him!!!!!π π π π π π π π π π
Ab Naina ne apna kiya hua vaada nibhana start kar diya hai. π π π
Naina welcomed Aparna in her new world and its great ke yeh dono bhi settle ho gaye!!!!!! π π π π
Khushi ki baat hai hi ki story k end me sab well settled hai. π π π
Naina gave birth to a baby girl and Raj was over the moon with happiness!!!!!π π π π π
Vo chahta tha ki beti ho us ki .π π π
Raj gave Naina a passionate kiss to her in the hospital and the nurse teased them by saying to their daughter ke uske maa aur paa romance mein busy hai!!!!!π π π π π π π π π π π π π
Batao yahan bhi Raj laga hua hai jara bhi fursat nahi hai. π π π
Raj took his daughter in his lap aur usse laga usse saari duniya ki khushiyan ek saath mil gayi hai!!!!!π π π π π
Kitna khushh hai na apne pyaar ki nishaani apne samne dekh kar. π π π
They named their daughter Vaishali and swore that they will give her all the love!!!!!π π π π ππΌ ππΌ ππΌ ππΌ
Sahi hai, har maa baap ki yahi khwahish hoti hai na.π π π
Aalekh and Aparna had a baby boy named Saumy!!!!!!!π π π π
I would not say this is your best fic but yes on the whole it's a good fic!!!!!!π π π π π π π
Dhnyavaad itna hi keh kar aapne ehsaan kar diya. π π π
As for showing reality in it, I wouldn't really agree that this is reality!!!!!π€ π€ π€ π€
I am happy that u accepted it that it's reality. πππ
Reality is actually quite different from it!!!!!π π π πThis was too much like hindi soaps!!!!!!π π π π π π π π
To tum to vaise bhi soaps like karti ho na to tum ko to theek lagna chahiye. π π π
Reality mein agar aisa ho jaye toh the sister does not conveniently die enabling one to get back ones love!!!!!π π π π
Oho Soaps me aap logic bhi lagati hain kamaal hai. π π π
Yes in reality what you come across is an affair between a jija and a saali!!!!!π π π π π π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘
Shaadi k pehle jo tha us ko tum present time me le rahi ho. Shaadi k baad na kabhi Naina ne aur na hi Raj ne ek doosre se koi relation nahi rakha. Galat tab hota jab shaadi k baad bhi Naina aur Raj aisa kuch karte.
Also mujhe yeh samajh mein nahi aaya how Naina can let her sister get married to a guy who according to her had betrayed her!!!!π π π π π
Jab shaadi fix ho gayi hai to koi bhi insaan tamasha nahi karta hai. π‘ π‘ π‘
Main toh aise ladke ko apni behen ke aas paas bhi na bhatak ne doon, shaadi toh dur ki baat hai!!!!!π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘
Tumhari baat to vaise bhi alag hai, neways jab tum ko ye pata hoga ki kaun hai vo tabhi kuch aisa kar paaogi na tum varna kaise kar sakti ho? Vo bhi tab jab yahan shaadi agle hi din hai tab. π³ π³ π³
Raj ne jo scene Vaishali ke saath imagine kiya tha that was in flashback and that means it had happened at some point of time!!!!π π π π π
Us k liye maine already kaafi baar bahut kuch keh chuki hoon par ab nahi kahoongi kuch. π‘ π‘ π‘
Even if it was only in his imagination then why would he think like that if he never loved Vaishali and that too so long after her death??π π π π
Us ne kabhi pyaar nahi kiya tha ye sach hai aur aage se mai jab bhi fic likhoongi kahin na kahin reality ka link hoga us me. π‘ π‘ π‘
To be honest I hated Vaishali and Ritu in this fic kyunki unki wajah se hi Raj aur Naina alag ho gaye!!!!!π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘
Jo bhi hua vo Ritu ki hi vajah se hua aur Vaishali beech me piss gayi thi. π π π
Raj and Naina loved each other but they did not completely trust each other!!!!!!!!π π π π
Kahin na kahin pichli baar vishwaas ki kami thi jis ki vajah se ye sab hua par ab mujhe nahi lagta hai aage kabhi dono ka ek doosre par vishwaas kam hoga. π π π
Lekin unka pyaar saccha tha aur isilye saari problems ke baad bhi dono ek ho gaye!!!!π π π π π π π π
Yahi to sab se badi baat hai na, do logon k beech me pyaar itna hai ki koi kabhi na aa sakta un k beech. π π π
Aalekh was a great friend who brought happiness back into their lives aur unhe phir se ek kiya!!!!!π π π π π π π π π
Aise dost sab ko mil jaayein to sab ki zindagi me khushiyaan bhar jaaye. π π π
Raj and Naina are together and happy now and thats what matters the most!!!!!!π π π π π π π π π π
Vo to humesha khush the na ek doosre k saath par ab ye baat jyada acche se samajh me aa gayi hai dono ko. π π π
Now its time for the ending where they are together and now nothing will ever come between them!!!!!!!π π π π π
And they lived happily ever after!!!!!!π π π π π π π π π π
Ab koi nahi aa sakta un k beech. π π π
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