Kaise Kahe Hum(RN fic)'The Concluding Part' pg. 99 - Page 73

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey vertika...yeh ud aisa kyoun tha...??? matlab mujhe laga tum ne is ud k lagbhag sare dails ko edit kar diye hain...!!! kyoun ki kai baar sawal kuch aur the aur jawab kuch aur...!!! baad me tumhare note ko read kiya toh pata chala ki aisa kyoun kiya hai...!!!
romantic n hot ud...😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
achhi gift di hai raj ne naina ko...!!! aur toh aur us ne baaton hi baton me naina k muh se yeh bhi bahar nikal liya ki alekh k room me kya hua tha...!!! 😛 😛 😛 😉 😉 😉
baki aur main kuch nahin bol sakti...!!! kyoun ki aur kuch bol ne k liye layak nahin choda hai tune...!!! samajh gayi na...!!!😆 😳 😆 😳 😆 😳
ab aage likh na...subah hui ya nahin...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Too hot to handle...!!!!😳😳😳
I guess this is one of the most awaited updates of KKH...!!!!😉😉😉



Yes yaar, this is the most awaited update n thanx a lot for liking
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Posted: 15 years ago
first of all i m really sorry for being sooooooo irregular with the comments...kya karun yaar bhut busy hun aaj kal.....update padhne ka bhi tym nhn milta.....but still i try my level best ki har kisi ki fic pe comment kiya karun...jo ki aksar ho nhn paata...i hope u understand....now coming to the update....bhut hi mast update tha boss!!!!!!aur haan hot bhi😉raj ne diwali ke din naina ko uski khushiyaan dedi...i m sooooo happpy for them...aur raj ne jis tarah se room ko decorate kiya😳that was awesome...aur fir raj ka gift.....😳isske baare mein main kuch nhn bolungi😉😉unka personal matter hai😆...aur raj sach mein bhut shaitaan hai...aalekh ki baat kaise nikalwaa li naina se...even naina was soooo shocked....naina sach mein raj ke saamne budhu hai😆..aur fir raj ne accha demo bhi diya😳...par ab jab ki sab theek ho gaya hai to mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai ki ye fic ab tum khatam kar dogi😭i love this fic yaaar...iske khatam hone se mujhe bhuuuuuuut dukh hoga..if possibletry to cont it for some more time..rest u know better than us...😊 update soooon....
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: manatated

hi vertika!! 😊

very romantic,passionate and hot update indeed...
I hope Ab sab achcha hi ho...
continue soon... 😊



Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii dear, 😊 😊 😊
mai bhi chahti hoon ki ab Raj aur Naina ki life me sab accha hi ho aur hoga bhi i know. 😆 😆 😆
thanx for support
😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Wat a hot n sensational part. It was very romantic!!! Liked the way Raj got to knw abt Aalekh n Appu....hehe. Btw, I hope ab dono k beech hamesha sab thik hoga.
Raj bahut chaloo ho gaya hai Naina se sab baatein nikalwa leta hai aur humari Naina jee sochti reh jaati hain bus. 😉 😉 😉


Pls continue soon.



I know ab sab accha hi hoga un ki zindagi me. 😃 😃 😃
thanx dear
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

Very romantic update, wonderful part.

Continue soon dear.



thanx a lot 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sweta2005

awesomeeeeee too good waitinggggggg for next asap.



It's last part will be updated tomorrow, 😉 😉 😉
thanks dear for liking
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: guglu088

Hi Mahak,

Such a romantic and Passionate update. Raj bhi bada shaitan hai, kaise Naina ke muh se Aalekh aur Appu wali baat nikal li.😆
toh 3 saal aur 8 mahine dur rehne ki kami Raj ek hi raat me puri karne par laga hua hai.😆 The update was sizzling hote.
I just hope ki iske baad dono ki life me aur koi pareshani nahhi aaye.

Continue soon

Love
Guglu



Hi dear , 😃 😃 😃
thanx for liking 😊 😊 😊, ab Raj ko kaun samjhaye ki beta have paitence vo to rukne hi nahi vaala ab. 😳 😳 😳 Par ab koi problem nahi aayegi dono ki life me.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hello friends,
Here comes the last part of Kaise Kahein Hum. I know aap kuch logon ko is fic k finish hone ka gum hoga but aap sab jaante hain na ki saari acchi cheejen kabhi na kabhi shuru hoti hain to khatam bhi hoti hain na.
Ye ek nayi shuruvaat hai Raj aur Naina k us khoobsurat rishte ki jo ab behad majboot ho gaya hai ki koi bhi Agnipareeksha un ko kabhi bhi alag nahi kar sakti hai.


Part 22 (The Concluding Part)

This was only start of their new life.

Next day morning:-

Kareeb 10 baje Naina k room ka door knock hua. Naina ki neend khuli to us ne dekha ki 10 baj gaye hain.

"Oh god aaj to bahut der ho gayi." Naina ne uthne ki koshish ki to dekha ki Raj ka haath us ki kamar pe hai. She smiled n kissed him briefly on his lips. Naina ne dheere se Raj ka haath hataya aur uthne lagi to kamre ki haalat dekh k Naina ko last night yaad aayi n she blushed. Their clothes were scattered on the floor n she was not in condition to open the door.

"Kaun hai?" she asked.

"Mai hoon Alekh madam, dawaaja kholo aur bahar aao mujhe tum se kuch jaroori baat karni hai." Alekh ne kaha.

"Theek hai mai aati hoon 10 minute me." She got up picking her clothes n came out quickly.

"Kya hua Alekh?" she asked.

"I think raat bhar bahut mehnat ki hai tune." He teased Naina n she blushed.

"Tu seedhe seedhe bata na baat kya hai?" Naina asked trying her best to hide her blush.

"Ok to sun ab mai jaana chahta hoon. Mai yahan jis maksad se aaya tha vo to poora ho gaya aur agle month me meri shaadi bhi hai to maine ek new flat liya hai vahan shift hone jaa raha hoon aaj se. Tum dono ko bhi saath chalna hoga." Alekh told.

"Par is sab ki kya jaroorat thi shaadi tak tum yahan bhi reh sakte ho na?" Naina asked in complaining tone.

"Nahi Naina mera maksad tha tujhe aur Raj ko vapas zindagi jeena sikhana aur vo ho gaya. Bus aur rahi baat yahan rehne ki to mai nahi chahta ki koi humare rishte me shak kare." Alekh ne sahi kaha tha.

"Par Alekh..........." Naina ko aage kuch nahi bolne diya Alekh ne.

"Naina tum ko khushi hone chahiye ki mai aage badh raha hoon aur vaise bhi aur meri leaves khatam ho gayi hain to mujhe vapas join bhi karna hai. Varna next month apni hi shaadi me leaves nahi milenge." Alekh ne funny style me kaha.

Naina khush thi par us ki aakhon me ansoon the, "Thanx Alekh mai tumhara thanks kaise karoon mai nahi jaanti. Tum ne mere aur Veer k liye jo bhi kiya hai us k liye mai.........".

Alekh ne Naina ko rokte hue kaha, "Maine koi ehsaan nahi kiya tujh par. Ye tera hak tha aur tujhe milna hi chahiye tha maine to bus madad ki hai is ko vapas pane me."

Naina hugged Alekh n Alekh blessed her,"Humesha khush rehna aur jaldi se mujhe mama banana."

"Dhat tum bhi na." Naina blushed n smiled.

"Lo bhai is me itne sharmaane vaali kya baat hai? Raat bhar itne mehnat karti hai to us ka response bhi to jaldi aana chahiye na." Alekh teased her more.

"Shut up bus kar. Ek baar teri shaadi hone de fir batatai hoon." Tabhi Raj vahana aa gaya.

"Itne subah suabh kahan ki taiyaari hai Alekh?" Raj asked.

"Jahan tak mujhe lagta hai subah bahut pehle khatam ho chuki hai par aap to JAB JAAGO TABHI SAVERVA maante hai na." Alekh pulled Raj's leg too.

Raj blushed but ignored, "Bataya nahi tum ne."

Alekh ne bataya fir se sab.

"Kuch din ruk jaate to hume accha lagta. Vaise bhi tum ne humare liye bahut kuch kiya hai aur hum .........." Par Alekh ne beech me hi baat kaate hue kaha.

"Yaar pls ab tum Naina ki tarah senti mat ho jaana." Ye keh kar smile karne laga.

Raj bhi smile karne laga aur us ne Alekh ko hug kiya, "Thanks yaar."

"Ur welcome accha mujhe ab jaane do late ho raha hai."

"To next month shaadi me milte hain." Naina ne kaha.

"Shaadi k kam se kam 15 din pehle aana hoga tujhe. Vaise mujhe pata hai ki Raj tere bina nahi reh sakta hai to us ko bhi leti aana." Alekh was again teasing them.

"Par mai to ladki vaalon ki taraf se rahoongi na?" Naina ne poocha.

"Oye chup kar, acche se jaanti hai ki mere ghar me koi nahi hai tere sivaay to tujhe bus meri taraf se rehna hai aur Raj ko hi saara arrangement dekhna hai samjhe tum dono." Alekh warned them.

"Ok baba sorry mai apne bhai ki taraf se hi hoon. Theek hai na ab?" she asked.

"Perfect." N Alekh smiled at them.

"To thik hai hum pahuch jaayegne." Raj said smiling.

"Are mai to bhool hi gaya."aur Alekh apne bag me kuch dhoondhne laga.

"Kya hua Alekh?" Raj ne poocha.

"Haan mil gaya," he took out an envelope and looked at both of them he said, "Ye rahi aap dono ki honeymoon tickets." And handed over to Naina.

"Par ye kyoun?" Naina asked.

"Off Naina tum bhi na kitne sawaal poochti ho. Shaadi k baad sab log honeymoon pe jaate hain na tum dono bhi jaao." Alekh told.

"Par tum ne ye sab kab?"

"Vo jab mai yahan aa raha tha tab aunty ne diye the."(Naina's mom)

"Oh to maa ne mujhe kuch bataya nahi?" she was confused.

"Maa ne ye bhi to nahi bataya na ki mai yahan kyoun aaya tha?" Alekh said smiling.

"Haan so to hai." Naina sighed.

"So kal ki flight hai aap dono ki so go n pack soon." Soon Alekh left. Raj came to Naina n encircled his arms around her waist, "Morning kiss kaun dega madam?"

"Maine di thi Veer jab aap so rahe the." She told.

"Jaagte hue do na." he insisted n without waiting for her reply he turned her n kissed her hard. They parted after 10 minutes.

"Veer u r too much."

Later the day passed with a little work n a lot of romance of Raj n Naina. Both called Naina's parents n thanked them. In evening Naina was busy in packing when Raj brought her out for dinner. They took food less bcz their stomachs were filled with romance.

In night when they came back, Raj didn't allow Naina to do anything expect loving him.

"Veer hum honeymoon pe jaa rahe hain na to yahan ab jaroori hai kya?" she asked bcz she was so tired that day as she couldn't sleep previous night too.

"Haan jaroori hai pata nahi vahan mere paas time ho ya nahi?" Raj said playing with her hair.

"Kyoun vahan kaun sa kaam rahega aap k paas?" Naina asked tracing his face.

"U know vahan already itne beautiful n hot ladkiyaan hongi ki shayad tumhare liye mere paas time na ho?" he teased her.

As usual Naina got irritated, "Accha to mai vahan kya karoongi?"

"Tum bus wait karna mai jab free honga to tumhe shopping pe aur ghumane le jaaonga."

"To theek hai mai nahi jaa rahi. Tum akele jaao honeymoon pe aur manao HONEYMOONNNNNN un ladkiyon k saath; meri kaya jarorat hai vahan?" she stressed on honeymoon.

Raj looked at her adoringly n said, "Honey k bina moon kaisa?" n removing her strings of nighty he started kissing her shoulders n neckline. Naina pushed him back. Raj jaanta tha ki Naina abhi naraj hai isiliye vo aisa kar rahi hai so he again started kissing her. Naina again did the same. Finally he trapped her hands with his n started exploring her bare skin with his thirsty lips.

After sometime Naina left her self loose as she was unable to control her desires more whenever his Veer touched her. "U know how to take me na?" she asked feeling the pleasure of his lips on her bare body.

"Hmmmmm, mai to bus tum ko tease kar raha tha aur tumhara gussa baap re. Par gusse me bhi tum kamaal ki hot lagti ho bilkul teekhi tej laal mirch jaise." He said cupping her curves with his hands n kissing it's nipples n sucking them with thirst.

Naina blushed which made her body pink n more hot.

"Dekha?" he showed her bare body to her to which she blushed more. When Raj moved downwards Naina clutched the bed sheet tightly n with each passing minute her grip was getting tighter. Now Raj made her sit into his lap n made her open her eyes. Naina looked at him n his bare body , she started kissing his bare chest with all passion in her n it was making him more wild so finally after sometime Raj stopped her n kissing her lips deeply he moved downwards n parting her legs he placed his lips on her curves than he entered in her body. This was the peak point where their lust gave them final pleasure. After sometime of their romantic talking they slept peacefully in each other's arms.

Next day both went for honeymoon to Switzerland where Raj has only work to love Naina more n more. They enjoyed a lot n came back after 15 days jab ki un ko bus 7 days hi rehna tha. Every single night Raj didn't let Naina sleep peacefully.

One month later:-

This was the day of wedding of Aparna n Alekh. Both were nervous n their relatives n friends were making them more n more nervous specially Raj n Naina. Raj didn't leave a single chance to flirt with Naina n to kiss her whenever he find the time.

Barat reached there on time n after welcoming the barat Aparna's bro brought Alekh to the mandap. Alekh was impatient to see his bride. As soon as Aparna was brought by her friends Alekh saw her n was completely mesmerized by her looks. Behosh hote hote bacha vo.

"Samhal k aage kya hoga tera jab abhi se ye haal hai?" Naina teased him.

After all the rituals of the marriage it was the time for vidai n it was really a senti moment. Naina also cried because her best friend is now leaving her. Aparna was crying like hell which made Alekh senti too his eyes moistened.

"Beta bade naajo se paala hai maine is ko khayal rakhna is ka." Appu ki mom ne kaha.

Alekh nodded when Naina said, " Aunty jee aap jara bhi fikr mat kariye Alekh humesha khush rakhega Aparna ko aur agar is ne kabhi koi takleef pahuchayi na Appu ko to mai hoon na." all smiled at Naina's concern.

Naina welcomed Aparna in her new world n after spending two days with them they came back to their place. After six months Raj got to know that Aparna n Naina r pregnant. Alekh n Raj were going to be father soon.

After one an hour year:-

Naina was admitted in the hospital. Raj called his parents n Naina's too. After an hour doc informed that Raj has became father of a baby gal.

"Vow Naina mai kitna khush hoon bata nahi sakta." Raj was over the moon. "Par meri gudiya kahan hai?" his eyes were searching for her baby.

"Abhi laa rahi hai nurse. Par gudiya ki maa ko kuch nahi milega kya?" Naina asked in complaining tone.

"Off course janam, ye sab tumhari vajah se hi to hua hai na." n he gave a passionate kiss to her when nurse bought their baby.

"Sorry beta aap k maa paa romance me busy hain to aap ko thoda wait karna padega." The nurse teased them n both embarrassed.

Raj took his little daughter in his lap n the feeling in his heart was more than joy n beyond pleasure. He was unable to express the feeling on his own. Shayad pehli baar us ko saari duniya ki khushiyan ek saath mil gayi thi.

"Is ka naam kya rakhenge socha hai Naina?" Raj asked while playing with his daughter.

"Haan, Vaishali." She replied.

Raj looked at her n both's eyes were moistened mentioning the name. "Haan is ka naam hoga Vaishali aur is baar hum is ko dard nahi dher saara pyaar denge." These eyes were determined.

Yahan after a week Aparna k beta hua jis ka naam Alekh ne Saumy rakha.


Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago
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Epilogue

Now it's time for my view about the fic:-

According to me it is the best fic I wrote till date because it has all twist n turns which sometime we see in a relationship in our real life. Kabhi kabhi rishte itne complicated ho jaate hain na ki hum sab khud samajh nahi paate ki bhagwaan kya chahta hai hum se. Naina ki life me Raj ka aana aur fir dono ka ek doosre se pyaar karne lagna ek khoobsurat ehsaas tha Naina k liye. Shayad jo khoobsurat pal Naina ne Raj k saath tab bitaye the vo zindagi bhar nahi bhool paati par vo kehte hain na ki hum humesha sochte kuch aur hain aur uperwaala humare liye kuch aur hi plan kar k rakhta hai.

Theek aisa hi hua Naina aur Raj k rishte me, shayad kahin ek vishwaas ki kami se Naina ne Raj ko kho diya shayad humesha k liye tab laga tha. Par dono ko saath to aana hi than a kyounki pyaar hi itna jyada tha dono ka. Jahan tak Ritu ki baat hai Ritu ki family Naina ki family ki friend thi is naate us ko shaadi me to aana hi tha na Vishu ki, par us ko laga tha ki tamaam koshishon k baad bhi vo Raj aur Naina ko alag nahi kar paayi, aur jab pata chala ki Raj ki shaadi Naina se nahi balki Vaishali se ho rahi hai to us ne man hi man shayad bhagwaan ko thanks kaha hoga na.

Ek aur mauka mila us ko Raj aur Naina ki zindagi me aa k un ki zindagi tabaah karne ka jab Naina ki maa ka phone uthne par us ko sach pata chal gaya ki Raj ek bhulaave me tha abhi tak par ab us ko sacchai pata chal gayi hai na to vo ab Vaishali ki zindagi barbaad nahi karna chahta hai. Ritu k shatir dimaag ne kaha ki agar Raj us ka nahi to itne asaani se Naina ka bhi nahi hoga kabhi aur fir aage kya hua ye sab aap ne padh hi liya na. Mere kuch doston ko meri is fic me kuch bhi accha nahi laga par sach kahoon to shayad meri ye fic mere dil k jitna kareeb hai utni koi aur nahi. Ek problem ye bhi hue thi ki start me Raj aur Vaishali ka ek scene tha vo Raj ki soch me tha hakeekat nahi tha.

Darsal galti kisi ki nahi hai, hum sab apni fics me sab kuch itna sweet aur accha dikhate hain na ki kabhi kabhi vo reality se bahut door ho jaati hain, meri ye fic to bus ek choti se koshish thi ki ye batane ki ki shayad practical life itne jyada fantasy se bhari hue nahi hoti jitna aksar hum sochte hain aur chahte hain. Takleef tabhi hoti hai jab humari life kahin bhi fantasy jaise nahi hoti jaisa hum aaj tak expect kar k aaye hain. Rishte vishwaas na hone se toote hain to jab bhi rishta banaye ye dhyaan rakhe ki saamne waale par trust kitna hai aap ko. I hope ab Raj aur Naina k beech kabhi is tarah ki koi problem nahi aayegi.Ab ye aap sab par hai ki aap ko meri ye fic kaise lagi?


Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago

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