Kaise Kahe Hum(RN fic)'The Concluding Part' pg. 99 - Page 60

Originally posted by: nihatri

too hot

thanks 😉 😉 😉

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

sab se pahle...is MOTI k muh me keede...us k muh me dhul... 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡
Kya baat hai, kitne saari cheejin khaane ko milengi Moti ko. 😆 😆 😆

idiot ne achhe khaase romantic scene ka kabada kar diya...😡!!! is ki aqal kya ghaas charne gayi thi...😡!!! agar malkin...malik ko bulane jaye aur wapas hi na aaye toh do hi matlab hota hai na...😃 😆!!! pahla yeh ki ya toh malkin ne malik ka khun kar diya ya malik ne malkin ka khum kar diya😆 😆 😆...aur dushra option yeh hai ki...shayad voh kisi khaas kaam me busy hain...😉 😉 😉!!! ab pahlewala scene toh ho nahin sakta... 😆 😆 😆obviously dushrewala scene ki jyada fit baithta hai na...!!! tabhi is ullu de patthe ko chillana tha...!!!😡
Bus kar yaar, vaise bhi bechara single pasli ka hai; 😉 😉 😉 tu itna gussa karegi na to us ka kaam tamaam hi ho jaayega yaar. 😆 😆 😆 Kyoun bekaar me apna bp high kar rahi hai? 😉 😉 😉 Vaise logic to bada jhakaas diya na tune. 😆 😆 😆

vaiseeeeeeeeeeee... itne dino baad raj k dil ne mere dil ki baat kah di...ki us ne us tym me jo kuch bhi kiya tha...voh bilkul sahi tha...😉 😉 😉!!! mera dil bhi bilkul yahi kah raha hai...😛 😛 😛!!! chalo...raj ne kadam toh badhya...😃 😃 😃!!! ab toh use baht kuch karna hai...😉 😉 😉!!! oye... dushre meanings se mat soch😆 😆 😆...mere kahne ka matlab hai ki...abhi raj ko naina se yeh bhi toh kahna hai ki voh us se kitna pyar karta hai...😳 😳 😳!!! tabhi toh sare bandhan tod kar un dono ka pyar aage badhega...aur hum sab seeti marenge...!!!😛 😛 😛
Bilkul sahi bol rahi hai yaar tu, rishta aage badhna hai to kahin na kahin se shuruvaat to karni hi hogi na dono ko. 😉 😉 😉 Aise thode na kaam chalega? 😊 😊 😊

flashback was nyc...😃!!! naina ko jaise hi pata chala ki yeh sab misunderstanding ki wajah se hui hai toh us ne bhi pakka iraada bana liya ki voh raj ki zindagi me khushiyan la kar hi rahegi...😃 😃 😃!!! mujhe sab se jyada achha laga naina ka raj ko directly kahna...😃 😃 😃!!! raj toh pahle gussa hua...jo ki jayaj tha...par...phir use naina k samne jhukna hi pada...!!!😃 😃 😃
Haan par ye sab hua bhi to dadi k kehne se varna Raj maanta nahi. 😭 😭 😭 Vaise bhi Raj apni jagah sahi hai na aur Naina bhi apni jagah ki past k liye hum apna future kyoun kharab karein?

alekh bhi soch me hai ki kis insaan ki wajah se teen logon ki zindagiyaan barbaad ho gayi...!!! arre yaar...alekh apna baht smart banda hai toh voh us main villian ko dhudh bhi lega aur sab k samne us ka bhanda bhi phod dalega...!!!😃 😃 😃
Saare sabooton k saath laayega na sach saamne jis se sab bharosa karein us pe. 😊 😊 😊

beautiful ud(sirf MOTI wale part ko chod kar😡)....!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
oho, kitne nafrat ho gayi hai itne jaldi Moti se na tujhe. 😉 😉 😉

cont soon.

thanks a lot 😃 😃 😃

Originally posted by: nisha1984

awesome part

thanks dear 😃 😃 😃

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Dear

How r u???😛😛
Hello i am fine 😃 😃 😃

Update was really cool n romantic...😊😊😊
thanks a lot 😉 😉 😉

Raj finally realized dat Naina se woh ab bhi bahut pyaar karta hai n agar usne ab kuch nahin kiya to shayad bahut der ho jaaye...

chalo akal aayi to sahi...
Aani to thi hi, but apna Raj kuch dhakkan types ho jaata hai kabhi kabhi bus yahi problem hai us k saath. 😆 😆 😆

Raj n Naina kitne romantic the 😉😉😉 par uss Moti ne sab bigaad diya😡😡

Yehi time mila tha aawaz dene ka..(idiot)

acche khase romance ka the end kar diya....
Ab us bechare Moti ko kya pata ki us k sahab vapas track par aa gaye hain na. 😳 😳 😳 Us ne vahi kiya jo vo humesha karta hai. 😆 😆 😆

Naina bhi bahut khush hai aakhir usko uska pyaar phir se jo mil gaya hai..😛

Vaishali ki death ke baad Raj bahut gumsum sa ho gaya tha....woh uski death ka reason khud ko manta tha..
Kahin na kahin us k andar ye guilt chipa hua hai ki vo hi responsible hai in sab cheejon ka, jab ki ye sab to kismat thi na is me kisi ka koi dosh nahi hai.

Naina se Raj ki halat dekhi nahi gayi to usne usse shadi karne ka faisla kiya...

But Raj nahin mana..Apni jagah Raj bhi sahi hai...aaj jab Naina ko sach pata hai to woh uske paas aayi but jab us sach ko Raj ne bataya the to usko jhuth laga the..Aakhir Raj bhi insaan hai...
Itna asaan nahi hota na ek baar jo ho chuka hai zindagi me us ko bhool k new start karna.😭 😭 😭 Raj ne jo kaha jaisa kaha sab sahi tha. 😉 😉 😉

Naina ko apni galti ka ehsaas hai tabhi woh uski har baat ko maan rahi hai... Lagta hai woh Raj se shadi karke hi dam legi..😃😃😃
Kar legi, karna to hai hi; bach k kahan jaayega vo. 😉 😉 😉

Do update soon

Bye

thanks a lot 😊 😊 😊

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Originally posted by: manatated

awesome part!

why did u stop here??

waiting for more....

Thanks n don't worry u will get it soon. 😉 😉 😉

Hey guys, being so busy now a days i am just updating it without replying on ur comments so pls forgive me for my mistake. After this week i will be regular on commenting on ur replies which u all write for me.
So pls bear me with it.

Part 18:-

Naina was shocked. She didn't know what to say.

"Tum mujh se shaadi karna chahti ho na?" he asked her.

She nodded.

"To aaj raat kya meri ho sakti ho saare bandhan tod k?" what Raj asked was unexpected.

Naina was more than shocked, she didn't know what to say she was silently gazing at Raj.

"Kya hua? Tum pyaar karti ho na mujhe se to mere liye itna nahi kar sakti?" he asked with heavy eyes.

Naina was trying her best to figure out that what's in his mind but t was really getting hard for her.

"Veer ye kya keh rahe ho? Shaadi k pehle ye sab'.." Raj ne Naina ko aage bolne ka mauka nahi diya aur apne hothon se Naina k hothon ko jab touch kiya to Naina k andar 2 saal purane ehsaas fir se jaagne lage. Raj apne lips ka pressure badhata gaya aur Naina bhi apne aap ko usi purane passion se jawab dene se nahi rok paayi. Shayad vo pal kuch aisa tha ki Naina apne aap ko rok hi nahi paa rahi thi.

Kuch der baad Raj ne Naina ko chod diya aur Raj ne mehsoos kiya ki Naina abhi bhi shayad aur chahti hai. Raj ne Naina ko lightly push kiya n he trapped her b/w the wall n him self. He looked at her face n her eyes were still closed. He started kissing her face n then moved towards her neck n shoulders. Raj nashe me shayad bhool gaya tha bahut kuch aur Naina bhi week pad rahi thi kyounki vo rok nahi paa rahi thi apne aap ko aur shayad ye kehna jyada sahi hoga ki rokna bhi nahi chah rahi thi.

Raj ne Naina k top k buttons open kiye aur Naina ne us ko kas k pakad liya in order to get more excess of her bare skin. Raj made his way down from her neck to her chest n started getting wild with each passing second when he was making Naina more n more arose with each of his kiss. Naina murmured, "Veer'". Raj apne hosh me nahi tha varna shayad ye kadam kabhi nahi uthata. Raj k haath Naina ki shirt pe gaye aur vo bus Naina ki shirt utaarne hi vaala tha jab''..

Tabhi achanak Naina ki najar ek kone me rakhi Vaishali aur Raj ki photo pe gayi aur ab us ko ye ehsaas hua ki kitne badi galti kar rahi hai vo. Bina shaadi k ek aisa rishta banana jaa rahi hai jis ka koi anzaam nahi hai aur shayad jo kal ko Naina ko Raj ki najron me aur bhi gira dega.

"Nooooooooooo", she screamed n pushed Raj back.

Raj was shocked aur Naina k is sudden move se shayad Raj ka nasha bhi kuch had tak kam ho gayagaya. Naina ko ajeeb najron se dekh raha tha vo. Naina vahan se chali gayi kyounki Raj ki najron ka saamna karne k liye vo ready nahi thi. tha.Raj ko suddenly samajh me nahi aaya ki aisa us ne kya kiya aur vo bed pe baith

Kuch der baad jab Naina room me aayi to dekha ki Raj aise hi so gaya hai. Us ne properly Raj ko bed pe litya. Fir kuch der tak aise hi dekhti rahi us k face ko aur fir ek short kiss de k bahar chali gayi.

Next morning:-

"Veer,

Mai tum se bahut pyaar karti hoon aur shayad humesha karti rahoongi. Par maine ek galti ki jo mujhe kal raat me ehsaas hue ki shayad tumhare saath aur paas reh kar mai aisa koi kadam kabhi utha loon jo mujhe humesha k liye apni aur tumhari najron me gira de. Kal raat me kamjor pad rahi thi aur shayad ye mai nahi chahti thi.

Mai tum se shaadi karna chahti hoon aur mai tumhara intejaar ab tum se door reh kar hi karoon to shayad is me hi humari bhalayi hai.

Sirf tumhari

Naina"

Raj ne Naina k khat ki jab ye lines padhi to us ko ehsaas hua ki jaane anjaane me us ne ek baar fir se Naina ko bahut dukh pahuchaya hai jis ka us ko koi hak nahi tha. Raj ne fir se Naina ka dil dhuakhaya ek baar fir Naina us ko chod k gayi. Kahin is baar humesha k liye to nahi. 'Kya mai Vaishali ko khone k baad Naina ko bhi humesha k liye kho doonga vo bhi us baat k liye jis me na kabhi Naina galat thi na Vaishali?'

Tabhi door knock hua aur Moti gaya door open karne. "Sahab dadi maa aayi hain."

Raj ko samajh nahi aaya ki achanak se dadi maa kaise fir bhi vo itna pyaar jo karta tha apni dadi se ki un ko sab se jyada miss karta tha isliye fauran uth k gaya.

"Are dadi aap kab aaye yahan? Mujhe batana tha mai lene aa jaata." He said touching his gm's feet.

"Bus bhi kar, tu mujhe lene aata? Jo apne maa baap k ghar kabhi jaata nahi vo mujhe lene aata?" she said with a dull face, "Vo to mujhe teri maa ne na bataya hota ki Naina yahan hai to mai bhi nahi aati tere se milne."

"Maa ko pata hai Naina k baare me?" Raj was really confused this time.

"Haan Naina ne aane se pehle un ko bataya tha aur unhe teri aur Naina ki shaadi se koi aiteraaj nahi hai." Dadi maa told sitting on chair.

"Nahi daadi maa , is baar nahi. Ek baar shaadi kar k dekha hai maine ki kaun sa sukh mila hai mujhe. Bus ab vo galti nahi karma chahta." Raj ne kaha.

"Tujhe kyoun lag raha hai ki galti karne jana hota hai shaadi karma." Dadi ne poocha.

"Dadi na mai ek accha premi ban paaya hoon na ek accha dost aur na hi ek accha pati." Ye kehte kehte Raj ka gala bhar aaya aur ansoon aa gaye aankhon me.

"Beta tu ek accha pati bhi banega, dost bhi banega mujhe bharosa hai. Samjha tu aur haan tu ek bahut accha premi hai tabhi to Naina tujh se itna pyaar karti hain na."

"Dadi mai kisi k kaabil nahi hoon aur mai nahi chahta ki meri vajah se kisi ko ab koi aur takleef ho. I am a cursed person." Raj ne rote hue kaha.

"Khabardaar agar tune mere Raj puttar k liye koi bhi aise vaise baat kahi to. Mere liye vo duniya ka sab se accha beta aur pota hai."

"Dadi aisa kyoun hua mere saath? Maine kisi ka kya bigaada tha jo mujhe aise zindagi mile?" ye kehte kehte Raj k sabr ka baandh to Vishu k jaane k khul k toot nahi paaya tha ab beh nikla. Yahi dard tha jo aaj tak Raj ko akele rakhta tha aur vo shayad apna dard bhool nahi paaya tha abhi tak.

Kuch der tak Raj aise hi apne man ka bojh halka karta raha aur fir dadi ne kaha, "Ek baat kahoon?"

"Hmm" he nodded.

"Tu Naina se shaadi kyoun nahi kar leta?"

"Par dadi aap samajh nahi rahi hain mai''"

"Mujhe kuch nahi sun na aur haan koi aur bahana banana ki koshish bhi mat karma. Tu nahi chahata na ki mai marne se pehle tera ghar dubara basta hua dekhoon."

"Aisa kuch nahi hai dadi par mai Naina k saath?"

"Kyoun tu pyaar nahi karta tha Naina se? Aur jahaan tak mujhe dikh raha hai abhi bhi tu Naina se pyaar karta hai."

Raj k paas shayad koi jawaab nahi tha is baar dadi k swaalon ka.

"Bus ab mai kuch nahi jaanti mujhe shaadi karwaani hai tum dono ki jaise bhi aur shaadi kal hi hogi." Dadi ne kaha.

"Par dadi itne jaldi."

"Oye par var kuch nahi. Teri dadi ne keh diya to keh diya shaadi kal hi hogi." Fir kuch rukte hue unhone kaha, "Beta khusyion k aane me deri nahi karni chahiye aur mujhe lagta hai Naina se milne k baad ki is ghar ki saari khushiyaan us se hi judi hain."

Dadi ne Naina aur us k gharwaalon ko khabar ki aur Raj k mom dad ko bhi. Kuch khaas guests k alawa shaadi me kisi ko bhi nahi bulaya gaya. Appu abroad thi is liye nahi aa paayi. Ek simple ceremony me shaadi ho gayi aur Naina ko ab Raj humesha k liye mil gaya. Haalaki vo jaanti thi ki Raj ko dubara se fir jaisa Raj banana asaan nahi hone waala hai.

Raj aur Naina ki pehli raat thi aur room flowers se aur candels se decorate tha, jab Raj andar aaya to us ne dekha Naina ko aur kaha, "Naina mai abhi man se apne aap ko samjha nahi paaya hoon mujhe lagta hai ki hume apne is rishte ko thoda time dena chahiye."ye keh k Raj doosre room me chala gaya.

"Mujhe pata hai Veer tum aaj is confusion me ho ki Kaise Kahoge par mai jaanti hoon ki jald hi tum mere hoge bus mere."

Flashbak end.

A few days passed. Do dino baad Deewali thi aur Naina us ki hi taiyaariyon me lagi thi. Alekh us ki har possible help kar raha tha. Raj bhi ab thoda apne gum se bahar aa k Naina par dhyaan dene laga tha aur apne free time me Naina k paas rehta tha aur us ka dhyan bhi rakhne laga tha.

Ek din shaam ko:-

"Tum ne batya nahi ki kaun tha vo Alekh?" Naina ne poocha.

"Bata doonga Naina par abhi nahi Raj k saamne. Kyounki mai chahta hoon ki jab sach bahar aaye to Raj bhi vahan ho." Ye keh kar Alekh bahar chala gaya.

'Pata nahi kya hone vaala hai? Mera man bahut ghabra raha hai.' Naina sochne lagi.

Us din shaam ko Naina aur Raj ko Naina ki maa ne apne ghar bulaya. Naina jaanti thi ki Raj vahan jaana pasand nahi karta hai to us ne baat to taalne ki koshish ki par jab us ki maa ne force kiya to Naina ne kaha ki vo Raj se baat kar k batayegi is baare me.

"Hello, haan Naina bolo."

"Veer maine disturb to nahi kiya na tum ko?" Naina ne poocha aur soch bhi rahi thi ki aage kaise pooche.

"Nahi, par koi khaas kaam hai na?" pata nahi kaise Raj Naina k tone se samajh gaya.

Naina ko accha laga ki pehli baar Naina k bina kuch kahe Raj samajh gaya.

"Haan Veer vo........." Naina samajh nahi paa rahi thi ki kaise kahe vo.

"Bolo Naina mai sun raha hoon."

"Veer vo maa ka phone aaya tha aur unhone aaj hume khaane pe bualaya hai. Maine un se mana karne ki bahut koshish ki par maa nahi maan rahi thi." Naina ne sab kuch ek saans me hi keh diya.

Raj khamosh tha, Naina samajh rahi thi.

"Tum kya chahti ho?" Raj ne kuch der chup rehne k baad poocha.

"M.ma.........mai kuch nahi, jaisa tum chaho." She said.

"Mai 7 baje ghar aa jaaonga hum 8 baje niklenge." Ye keh kar Raj ne phone rakh diya.

Naina samajh nahi paayi ki kaise achanak Raj maan gaya jo ki shayad na mumkin sa tha. 'Kya Veer ne mere liye kiya ye sab? Jab ki vo maa k ghar jaana pasand nahi karte hain.' Naina sochne lagi.

'Mai Naina ko mana kyoun nahi kar paaya jab ki Naina bhi jaanti hai ki mai vahan kyoun nahi jaata?' jawab bhi fauran dhoondh liya Raj ne,' Shayad ye maine Naina ki khushi k liye kiya aur agar vo khush hai to mai bhi khush hoon.' Ye soch kar Raj fir se apne kaam me busy ho gaya.

Shaam ko Raj ne jaisa kaha tha vaise time pe vo aa gaya. Dono ready ho k jab Naina ki maa k ghar aaye to dekha ki vahan already kaafi log the. Naina k samajh me nahi aaya ki ho kya raha hai yahan. Raj bhi kuch ajeeb sa feel kar raha tha. Tabhi peeche se Alekh ne awaaz di Naina aur Raj ko.

"Alekh, tu yahan kab aaya?" Naina asked him.

"Mai jab se nikla hoon seedhe yahi aaya hoon." Phir Alekh ne Raj ki taraf turn hote hue kaha, "Raj tum ko kuch batana hai andar aao."

They went inside where all family members were gathered.

"Aap sab yahan? Baat kya hai?" Raj ko ab shak ho raha tha ki yahan kyoun bulaya gaya hai us ko.

wow Mahek this part was so good..i loveddddddd it...fantastic...raj is so sweet ..i love him...please continue soon

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Raj ne Naina se kaha ke woh aaj raat uski ho jaaye saare bandhan tod ke!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Maine kaha tha na ke Raj ko sirf sharab ke nashe mein hi Naina pe pyaar aata hai!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Naina was shocked by what he said!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

Raj kissed Naina and Naina could not stop herself from returning his passion!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

It's good that Naina caught hold of her emotions and stopped Raj that night warna woh Raj ka saamna kaise karti!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Magar ish baar bhi unke beech aanewaali Vaishali hi thi!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Naina ek khat likh kar chali gayi hai because she does not trust herself to stay near Raj!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔

Raj is feeling guilty that he has again hurt Naina which he had no right to do!!!!

Raj finally realised that if he did not take a decision fast then he may lose Naina just like Vaishali!!!! 😔 😔 😔 😔

Raj's dadi had come to see him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

She told him that his mom knows that Naina is there aur unhe uski aur Naina ki shaadi se koi aitraaz nahi hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Toh Raj apne ghar bhi nahi jaata apni shaadi ke baad se because he blames his mom!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj finally shared his pain and regret with his dadi!!!!!

Raj ke sabar ka bandh toot gaya and he cried so much!!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

He needed to get rid of the guilt that he was holding on to so that he could win back his confidence and faith!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

His dadi told him to get married to Naina as he still loved her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj apne dadi ke reasoning aur vishwas ke saamne Naina se shaadi na karne ka koi reason nahi dhundh paaya!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Dadi ne toh Raj aur Naina ki shaadi agle din hi fix kardi!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Raj aur Naina ki shaadi ek simple ceremony mein ho gayi aur Naina ko Raj hamesha ke liye mil gaya!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Jab Vaishali ke saath shaadi karwaya tha tab toh dhoom dham se karwaya tha aur Naina ke saath shaadi karwaya toh aise karwaya!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

This is very bad!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡I hate that Vaishali!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Raj ne Naina se kaha ke woh apne aapko samjha nahi paaya hai aur unhe ish riste ko thoda time dena chahiye!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

But Naina was confident ki jald hi woh uska hoga bas uska!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Usse suhaag raat pe bhi pila dena chahiye tha phir aapne aap maan jaata!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Like I said usse Naina pe pyaar tabhi aata hai when he is drunk!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😛

Its good to see that Raj is giving more time to Naina and taking care of her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

So Aalekh has found out who was the person who is responsible for all the problems in Raj and Naina's life!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina is feeling scared and thinking what is going to happen!!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕

Raj has once again begun to understand Naina's thoughts and feelings without her telling him!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj agreed to go to Naina's mom's house just to make her happy even though he does not like going there!!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊So sweet!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

I understand why because unhone jo bhi kiya uski wajah se Raj aur Naina bhugat rahe hai aur Vaishali ko apni jaan deni padi!!!!

Naina is thinking that did Raj do this for her!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj realised that he had done this just to make her happy and if she is happy he is also happy!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Why are there so many people at Naina's mom's house??😕 😕 😕 😕

Looks like finally Aalekh sabke saamne ush insaan ka bhanda phodega!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Waiting to know who is the real culprit!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Hi Verika

wow vertika!! nice part!👏👏