Kaise Kahe Hum(RN fic)'The Concluding Part' pg. 99 - Page 48

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: golu_1677

awesome part. pls cont soon



thanks a ton dear 😉 😉 😉
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: desaiprachi07

yaar pata nahi last page open nahi ho raha hai to shayad reply ko edit na kar paaon.😔
no problem dear, do reply as per ur convenience. 😉 😉 😉

nice ud.😊 Raj k liye bahut dukh hua. Aakhir us ne koi aise galti to nahi ki hai na ki us ko aise saza mile.😭 Uper se Naina bhi abhi us ko galat samajh rahi hai. 😒
That's all destiny dear, sometimes it happens with us. 😭 😭 😭

Raj ko aisa dhakka laga hai ki vo ab kuch nahi bolta hai. Bhagwaan kare sab jaldi se sab theek ho jaaye.
Ho jaayega, Raj is in shock now.😭 😭 😭

Phir bhi Naina ne Raj ka ghar theek kiya, ye ek positive cheej bhi show kar raha hai. Naina ne lekin aisa kya dekha jis ko dekh k vo shock ho gayi thi.😕
bus dekhti jaao u will get to know soon.😛 😛 😛



thanks Drishti 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: varshita

ab i think jaldi hi is ka number aayega.



yes is ka no aa gaya. 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: watch rajeev

when will u update dear??????its more than one month noww😭



Originally posted by: desaiprachi07

ab is week me is ko hi karna ud kaise bhi.



Originally posted by: vvdn

Yaaaaar ye UPDATE kab hoga????????????????



Going to ud gals, don't worry 😆 😆 😆

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: srojaleen

( 2 Seema):-Don't worry Seema...Vertika ise next yr valentine day ko ud karne wali hai...!!!😆
(2 Mahek sinha):- jaldi se ud kar de...varna Seema aur main sath me aajayenge...teri watt lagane...😡!!! vaise hum dono sath me aur bhi jyada dangerious ho jate hain...aur tu humain sambhal nahin payegi. isiliye saayana ban aur jaldi se ud kar de...kya...???😡



Nahi yaar abhi jaa rahi hoon ud karne, tab tak mai wait nahi kar sakti na.😆 😆 😆
Par yaar dhamki kyoun de rahi hai mai to kabhi nahi deti tujhe?
ok baba ab jaa rahi hoon ud karne.
😛 😛 😛
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: watch rajeev

bikul sahi kaha hai priya ne......priya mujhe lagat hai iska ilaaj bhi ussi doctor se karwaana chahiye jo raj ka karne aaya tha tabhi update milegi😆



yaar this is not fair both of u r gang up n i think u want to beat me na?
So no more beating i am going to ud it.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Part 15:-

Ek baar to Raj ko saamne dekh kar Naina us ko pehchaan hi nahi paayi thi. Raj ki shave badhi hue thi, aakhon k neeche kale ghere ban gaye the and his skin has lost his color. He was looking dull n pale.

"Veer", she called.

Raj was lost after looking her but this word "Veer" made him realizes who is she.

Pata nahi kyoun par Naina ko apne saamne dekhte hi Raj se raha nahi gaya aur barson se jo dard Raj k seene me kahin daba pada tha vo ansoon k raaste nikal aaya. Naina apne Veer ko bahut dino baad apne saamne dekh rahi thi par us ko is baat ki khushi kam aur is baat ka gum jyada tha ki us ne apni behan ko kho diya hai.

Aage ka bahut kuch Naina ko yaad tha par abhi tak Naina ki aankhon me ansoon the aur vo bahut buri tarah ro rahi thi. Alekh se ye sab dekha nahi jaa raha tha to vo vahan se uth kar chala gaya aur Naina Appu ki god me apna sir rakh kar vo sab baatein yaad kar k ro rahi thi.

Shaam hone vaali thi aur Naina rote rote so gayi thi , Appu ne theek se us ko bed par litaya aur sheet se cover kar k bahar Alekh k paas gayi.

Alekh kuch soch raha tha aur khada tha tabhi Appu ne us k khandhe par haath rakha, "Kya hua abhi tak pareshaan ho?"

Alekh ne Appu ko dekha mud kar, "Kya humari zindgai me pareshaaniyaan hona itna jaroori hai ki vo hum ko humesha pareshaan karti rahein?"

"Pata nahi Alekh mai bhi aaj tak samajh nahi paayi na. Par shayad kabhi kabhi ye lagta hai ki ye sab bus is liye hota hai ki hum ye jaan paayein aur samajh paayein ki hum jin ko apna kehte hain ya samajhte hain vakai me kya vo humare apne hain?" she said thoughtfully.

"Apun samjh raha hai teri baat?" he asked.

"Hmmmmmmm chalo kahin bahar ghoomne chalte hain?" Appu suggested.

"Aaj nahi, kabhi aur challenge. Apun thak gaya hai." Alekh ne bahana bana kar baat ko taalne ki kosish ki.

"Ye to mujhe kehna chahiye na kyounki aaj mera vrat jo hai. Par tum kyoun thak gaye ho?" she asked him.

Ab Alekh ko samajh nahi aaya ki kya jawaab de par us ko bahana soojha ek dum bindaas. "Apun is liye keh raha tha kyounki apun ko yahan jitna time tere saath yahan bitane ka milega vahan nahi milega."

"Kyoun vahan koi aur bhi jaayega kya hum dono k saath?" Appu asked confusingly.

"Nahi tu samjhi nahi, apun k kehne ka matlab ye tha ki yahan apun tere saath romance kar sakta hai. Aur jaisa ki tu jaanti hai na ki romance me kaafi aise cheejien hoti hain na jo hum sab k saamne nahi kar sakte." He winked her n gave a naughty grin.

She blushed to the core n didn't say anything. He pulled her into him n started giving soft love bites on her face. She tried her best to stop him but he was getting naughtier n naughtier.

Tabhi Moti aaya us k kadmo ki aahat sun kar Appu ne door push kiya Alekh ko. He gave what's this type look.

"Sahab vo colony ki kuch aurtein aayi thi Naina memsahib ko shaam ko apne ghar bulane pooja k liye. Maine dekha to madam jee so rahi thi na to maine socha kyoun na aap ko bata doon. Aap un ko bata dijiyega abhi mai market jaa raha hoon." He left after telling it.

"Hmmm to ye baat thi jo apun ko itne teji se dhakka diya tune." Alekh said nearing her.

"Haan yahi baat thi, par tum bhi na kahin bhi start rehte ho jagah to dekh liya karo kam se kam." She said ruffling his hair softly.

"Theek hai is baar apun koi galti nahi karega." And with in a second she was being carried by him in his strong arms towards his room.

They reached in the room n Alekh placed her on the bed n turned to close the door. When he turned after closing the door n checking all the windows he didn't find Aparna there.

"Ab kahan chali gayi maharani jee." He thought n tried to search her.

Soon he heard sound of water falling n he understood that she was in washroom. Alekh understood that she was in washroom n he started waiting for her outside.

After ten minutes she came out from there n when Alekh's eyes fell on her he was clean bold. She was standing there in towel. Her hair was left free n water drops were falling from them. She was looking extremely hot n he was loosing all control over him. He went to her n looked her from top to bottom.


She lowered her eyes as she was unable to look in his eyes which were melting her.

"Kya baat hai irade to nek hain na?" he asked to tease her.

She blushed n Alekh hugged her instantly n started placing love bites to her shoulders n neck. She murmured, "Make my Karwachauth very special for lifetime Alekh."

Alekh stopped for a moment n looked at her face. She has closed her eyes so he asked, "Really?"

She nodded in yes n now he understood her desires. He him self wanted that from a long time but never dared to ask anything about it to Aparna directly. Kahin na kahin us k man me bhi kuch desires thi is tarah ki par sach to ye hai ki 2 saalon k baad jab dono mile tabhi se Alekh kuch aisa chahta tha jis se vo dono jud jaaye aur fir kabhi koi na aa paaye dono k beech.

He pushed her towards the wall n started kissing her lips as they are still as fresh as two years ago. His hands were moving on her bare body parts n she was feeling as if it's a fun wave which is making her wet with fun. Soon he brought her on the bed n lied over her. He crushed her all body with his weight under him n started kissing her bare chest n his hands were traveling on her legs which were making her crazy. He slowly opened her towel n looked at her bare body. She has closed her eyes tightly.

After two hours:-

Jab Naina so k uthi to saamne Raj ko khade dekha.

"Veer..aap kab aaye Veer?" she asked getting up quickly.

"Bus kuch der hue tum so rahi thi to maine disturb nahi kiya. Vaise tum so rahi thi to acchi lag rahi thi." He said smiling.

Naina smiled."Mai aap k liye chai aur naashta lagtai hoon aap thake hue honge na." she said n was about to leave when Raj caught her hand.

"I love u Naina." He said.

"I love u too Veer." She said.

They hugged each other. "I love u too Veer." Us ne kai baar bola aisa aur harbada k uth k baith gayi . Ab samajh aaya ki ye sab ek sapna tha.

"Are biwi ji aap uth gayi. Vo kuch aurtein aayi thi aap ko Karwa Chauth ki pooja k liye bulane." Moti told her.

"Theek hai sahab aa gaye kya?" she enquired.

"Abhi to nahi haan par ab aap pooja ki taiyaari kar lijiye jyada time nahi reh gaya hai." Moti suggested.

"Hmmmmmmmmm, vaise Alekh kahan hai?" she asked again.

"Vo to Aparna madam k saath apne room me hain." Moti told.

"Theek hai tum chalo mai aati hoon." Naina said n left the room. She went to Alekh's room to call both of them for Pooja's preparation but when she was about to knock the door she heard some sounds.

"Ufffff Alekh bus........" It was Appu.

"Pls. Aparna kuch der aur." Now it was Alekh.

Phir kuch aise hi awaajein jin ko sun kar Naina sharma k bhaag gayi vahan se aur us k gaal laal ho gaye aur daute hue us ne dekha bhi nahi ki vo kis se takra gayi.

"Are Naina kya hua? Aise kyoun bhaag rahi thi?" it was Raj.

"Nahi Veer vo mai.............." par ab aage kya bole Naina ye us ko samajh nahi aa raha tha.

Raj ne dhyaan se us ka face dekha aur kaha, "Bhoot to nahi dekha hai ye baat tumhare face se clear ho rahi hai kyounki tumhara face blush k baad vaala red hai. Aisa to tab hota tha na jab mai tumhare paas aa kar tum ko kiss karta tha ya fir kuch aur.............." Raj said naughtily.

"Dhat Veer tum bhi na bahut besharam ho." She blushed again n went inside her room.

Naina k jaane k baad Raj ko samajh aaya ki us ne kya bola hai par is baar pata nahi kyoun Naina k face ka blush dekh kar Raj ko accha laga us ko ab lag raha tha ki Naina k saath is tarah se behave kar k agar vo Naina ko khushi de raha hai to burai hi kya hai is me aur vaise bhi sach to yahi hai na ki vo abhi bhi Naina se pyaar karta hai. He smiled n entered in the room n found Naina still blushing n thinking something.

"Ab bata bhi do na Naina baat kya hai?" Raj asked crossing his arms across his chest.

"Kuch baat nahi hai mujhe pooja ki preparation karni hai mai chalti hoon." She said n left the room.

After half an hour:-

Alekh gaya Aparna ko chodne us ko aakhir ghar jaana tha ready hone aur jab vo Naina k paas aaya tab tak Naina ne pooja ki saari preprations kar k rakhi thin.

"Are Naina tum so kar kab uthi?" Alekh was overwhelmed today.

"Jab aap kisi jaroori kaam me busy the." And she winked him to which Alekh blushed.

Raj tabhi aaya andar aur us ne dekha ye sab to us ko accha nahi laga.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Raj ki haalat bahut hi kharab thi and Naina was shocked to see him like that!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

Raj started crying seeing Naina!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭But Naina is more sad to lose her sister!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Naina aaj bhi ush baat ko yaad karke roh rahi hai!!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Aalekh se yeh sab dekha nahi jaa raha hai!!!!

Aalekh toh yaha mauka dhundh raha hai Appu ke saath romance karne ke liye!!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Aalekh and Aparna are so romantic and passionate!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

They made their karwachauth was very special!!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina's dream was very nice!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Magar kaash woh sapna na ho kar sach hota!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Bechari Naina was so embarrassed when overheard Aalekh and Appu!!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Seeing Naina like that Raj started teasing her and she just could not stop blushing!!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Raj is happy to see Naina like this!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊He wants to know the reason behind this but Naina usse bataye bhi toh kya??😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😛

Raj is jealous to see Aalekh and Naina talking so freely!!!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Naina even winked at Aalekh and this was too much for Raj to digest!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉Serves him right!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

But seriously when will Raj get over his guilt for Vaishali??😕 😕 😕 😕

She is not alive but still it's because of her that Raj and Naina are not able to get close again!!!!!!

I hope soon Raj gives Naina the love she deserves, because he wants to and not because he has to!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

I don't want him to feel sorry for Naina!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒I want him to love her like he did before marrying Vaishali!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

He should just forget that Vaishali!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Zeher gholke rakha usne Raj aur Naina ki zindagi mein!!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡


Edited by Shaina_b - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Firstly thnx 4 the PM. Main soch hi rahi thi k tumhari jin fics pe main comment nahi karti next UD pe unpe kardungi like this one n 'The Unknown Desire'. Kuch hi din pehle padna khatam kiya tha.

Anyways, nice part. Accha hua flashbak se jaldi se present me aa gaye otherwise I was feeling really bad 4 Raj, Naina n also Vaishali. Naina's dream was so nice but alas, that was a dream only. Main bhi soch rahi thi Raj ko achanak kya hua. I hope it turns into reality soon.

Aalekh indeed had a gr8 tym. But uske iss gr8 tym k chakkar me Raj is having a tough tym. Bechare ko koi batata bhi nahi k yaha Aparna bhi ati hai aur......

Now w8ing for the next part. Pls continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi Dear
Update was really cool!!!!! Thanx for the pm..
Vaishali ki death ke baad Raj ki halat bahut kharaab ho gayi thi mainly bcoz he blamed himself for dat..
naina was so shocked to see him like dat..Itna ki wo aaj bhi is baat ko sochkar rone lagti hai..
Alekh n Appu uske dukh ko samajhte hain..
Yeh Alekh n Appu kuch zyada hi romantic ho rahe the..Finally they r 1..
Dreams was gud..Hope they'll confess it in real too.Both of dem love each other.
Appu n Alekh dheere nahin bol sakte apni romantic batein..Bechari naina ko bhi sun kar sharam aa gayi..
Naina blushed so much dat even Raj was surprised!!!
Raj is happy to see Naina like dis...He too wants to know the reason behind this sudden blush but bechari naian bataye bhi to kya😉😉😉
Raj is so jealous to see Alekh n Naina talking so freely n den naina even winked at Alekh..Now dat is too much for Raj to digest..
Yeh Alekh apne n Appu ke baare mein Raj ko kuch batata kyun nahin..😊😊😊
I hope both of them confess their feelings fast..
Do update soon
Bye tc
Edited by suhana_dixit - 16 years ago

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