Kaise Kahe Hum(RN fic)'The Concluding Part' pg. 99

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

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Posted: 16 years ago

#411

hiiiii vertika...

too gud ud dear....par thoda chota tha. plz next ud long bhejna.

ab akhir alekh ki wajah se hi naina ko sach ka pata chal hi gaya. par yeh vaishali puri baat jane bina aise hi gusse me chali gayi aur apna accident kar baithi. sayad isilie raj itna dukhi rahta hai...aur vaishali ko bhul nahin paya hai aaj tak.

naina bhi is baat se dukhi hai. par sahi waqt par appu ki entry hui...!!! us ne sara mazra samajh liya...aur use bhi laga ki RN ki zindagi ko ek naya mod deni chahoye. tabhi us ne daant kar alekh ko bahar bhej diya...lekin us ne niana se kaha kya...???

vaise koi na koi mast idea to diya hi hoga...kyoun ki ladkiyoun ki dimag ladkon se jyada tez hoti hai.😉

raj bhi baht dukhi hai...vo apni past life se abhi tak bahar nahin aa paya hai. vo janta hai ki naina us se baht pyar karti hai...phir bhi koi hai jo us ko naina k kareeb jane se rokta hai. raj ka dil kuch kah raha hai aur dimag kuch aur

par hope ki aage sab kuch thik ho jayega. aur appu ki fantastic ideas ko use kar k naina raj ko phir se pahle wala raj bana legi/.

cont soon yaar.

Edited by srojaleen - 16 years ago

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varshita

@varshita

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Posted: 16 years ago

#412

Hey very nice ud. 👏

Kaafi senti tha but still sweet.😊 Raj k bd k din Vishu k jaane ki khabar Naina k liye shock thi.😭 Par Alekh aur Aparna ne itne acche se Naina ko samhaala hai ki finally vo smile karne hi lagi n i am happy for them. 😃 Appu kaun se baatein specially Naina ko batane vaali hai ye mai soch rahi hoon abhi to.😕

Par ab mujhe lagta hai ki jaldi hi sab accha hone waala hai. 😉 Shaadi k saal bhar baad hi Vishu ko Raj ki diary se sach pata chal gaya par adhoora. Us ka shock aur hear break feel hona obvious tha isi gusse me vo ghar se chali gayi aur apna accident kara baithe.😲

now continue more n soon too.

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Prerna

@prerna1

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Posted: 16 years ago

#413

that was really nice

plz continue soon

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

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Posted: 16 years ago

#414

Thanks.. for the update...

Naina now knows the truth....about why raj does not celebrate his birthday...because vaishali aaje ke din ghar se chali gayi thi...

Naina is heart broken...because she feels the hurt that vaishali might have felt when she found out the truth about raj and naina...

But Aparna and alekh calm naina down and even make her smile by their antics. But what is is trick that apu is telling naina to try...waiting to know more...

But i hope that everything will be sorted out between raj and naina soon.

Here raj is feeling even more guilty that he was not able to control his emotions...he needs to come out of his guilt because naina has already forgiven him and loves him very much...

Alekh needs to talk to raj...

Please continue soon

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Posted: 16 years ago

#415

HIIIIIIIIIII VARTIKA HOPE UR FINE............
THE UD AWS AWESOOOOOOOOOOME...............
SUPERB.............
GR8.............
JUST TOO GOOD................
DO CONT SOOON.................

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fanatic 21

@fanatic 21

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Posted: 16 years ago

#416

wow!!!d updt was mindblowing........

loved d way aalekh n appu handled naina.....

raj's part was amazing n d way u expressed his feelings wer too good......

loved dat part.....

also d flashback was awesome....

waitin for next pls make it soon

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desaiprachi07

@desaiprachi07

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Posted: 16 years ago

#417

Nice ud yaar. 👏

Raj apna gum aur Vaishali ko kyoun nahi bhool paaya ab samajh me aaya hai meri. Vaise bhi agar koi aap se juda raha hai bhale hi aap us se na jude rahe ho to kahin na kahin ye baat hurt to karti hi hai na ki aap ki bd us ka death day hai.😭 Raj ka dard ab mujhe samajh me aa raha hai.😳 Par Alekh ne vakai me ek acche dost jaise bahut help ki hai Naina ki.😊 Appu par kya samjha rahi thi Naina ko ye mujhe samajh nahi aaya.😉

continue soon.

Edited by desaiprachi07 - 16 years ago

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Pinka

@pinka28

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Posted: 16 years ago

#418

mahak
yaar story kafi acha turn le rahi hai i mean now everything is clear what and why happen.. as alekh know evrything ab shayd kuch sahi hone ki ummed hai ...
VAise RAj ka bhi sahi hai payar to kerta hai per i guess vo shayd ab darne laga hai ki shayd usne NAINA ki bhen k sath shadi ki is liye uski mot hui aur shayd vo ab agar naina se payr kerta hai to vo uski mot ka kursur var hai hai aur use aisa nahin kerna chahiye kyonki uska naina k liye pyar hi shayd naina ki bhen ki mot ki vjah bani ...
jo bhi ho uski guilt niklani padegi vo kama ab alekh krega...
per yaar update kerna na kitna lamb intejar ho gaya... aise itne crusial point pe nahin rokte .... yaar update kerna