Lost#2- (RN) p74 'The Traitor' pg144 - Page 92

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varshita thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey a good update!!!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

With a lost of suspense which made my interest so much!!!!!!!!!!! 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉

It's a perfect fic of yours which includes all suspense, thrill, romance, passion and comedy!!!!!!!!! 👍🏼
👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Perfect for perfect situation when Raj was busy with that idiot Sonia and she was hit by that unknown person who targeted Raj and who was that man? 😕 😕 😕 😕 😕 😕

Thank god Sonia was safe varna Raj ka kya hota? But that stupid Sonia think Raj has kidnapped her!!!!!!!!!! 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Major Nair and Major Bhargav got strict warnings from their Chief n that stupid Nair thinks Naina knows the secret? 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛

Update soon dear n do pm me!!!!!!!!!!!


naujoker thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Please update
Waiting to see what happens
The suspense is great, but its killing me
Please update soon!!!!!
luvraj4ever thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update ...it seems like everyone is working and planning against each other. ..no one trusts other person and wants to win...
There are so many enemies of raj and naina that I am afraid that one of them is bound to get hurt...I just hope that they stay together no matter what...
And who is the person rajveer encountered in the end??? Can't wait to know that. .
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

very interesting and intriguing update...thank you for the PM...👍🏼


Thanks very much for liking it so much





Originally posted by: asha_mehta

Very nice

This chase is getting very dangerous.
This needs to end soon
Who is the person which has been caught by raj
Continue soon

thanks very much for liking the post.
Yes certainly it shall end very soon





Originally posted by: ksasi

interesting part.

Thanks very much





Originally posted by: suhana.dixit

so the mystery still continues.Interesting part.👏 - thanks very much

I really wish Arwa that u update this fiction often so we get to read more of Lost. - yeh i too wish i can write more but have too many things to do so i get to update this once in months

Rajveer is shocked to see the shooter??Who is he and why did he shot Sonia?? - hmmm lets see





Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

Another cliffhanger... 😲

hehehe thats the fun part





Originally posted by: arpita25

Finally read all the parts of this FF. - oh wow thanks

I think u didn't pm me but no worries I am here with my comment.😛 - oh ill add u in the list

This is an awesome FF with a lot of suspense and incidents with a lot of romance and passion. 👏 - glad u liked it so much

Now coming to the recent update who was that man who attacked on Rajveer aka R2? 😕Does the chief know about the truth of of Raj?? 😕 - hmmm the mystery continues

Naina to still jealous knowing very well that Raj is just having a mission and that's why he is involving with Sonia.😆 - well at present everything appears real

Major Bhargav wants to see the face of Chief I think 😉 and now Major Nair is in tension n that stupid man thinks that Naina knows about the nuclear triggers.😆 - right everyone thinks many things. let's see what happens next

Update soon n do pm me this time.
- shall do so





Originally posted by: XoxowpdXoxo

Good Update😊

Thanks very much





Originally posted by: naujoker

Please update
Waiting to see what happens
The suspense is great, but its killing me
Please update soon!!!!!

Thanks for enjoying the update and yeh i shall try to update soon





Originally posted by: luvraj4ever

Lovely update ... - thanks very much

it seems like everyone is working and planning against each other. ..no one trusts other person and wants to win... - yep that is the whole game

There are so many enemies of raj and naina that I am afraid that one of them is bound to get hurt...I just hope that they stay together no matter what... - hmmm lets see

And who is the person rajveer encountered in the end??? Can't wait to know that. .
Continue soon - surely wud be revealed in the next update





Originally posted by: angelsabreenxz

awesome fanfic👏👏

Thanks very much


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Hey Arwa 🤗🤗🤗

Great part with a lot of suspense and interesting one.👏 👏 👏 - thanks very much

Raj was in the party and his full focus is on that hooded man but Sonia didn't let her take sigh of relief and why would she? 😡 😡 😡 It's her work to trap Raj in her tactics. - yes she is to keep him with her at all times

But who was that shooter and why he wanted to kill Raj? 😲 😲 😲 - that is the mystery

I liked that song of movie Khel u used here perfect and suitable for the situation. 👍🏼
👍🏼 👍🏼 - thanks and the song is from Zindagi Ek Jua not Khel

Sonia ko dekh k Naina ka temper rise hona obvious hi hai vo bhi tab jab she know everything. Sonia was thinking that she is very smart but now she has been shot when they wanted to kill Raj.😆 😆 😆 - hehehe yes she thinks she is too over smart

Head of all that planning himself didn't know who wanted to kill Raj? 😕 😕 😕 - perhaps the person wasn't after Raj

Major Nair is now in tension and he has to make Naina ready to reveal all the info about the triggers.😛 😛 😛 They fool think that Naina know about it.😉 😉 😉 - hmmm yes he also thinks he is over smart when everyone is playing with each other

Raj wanted to make Sonia get up but she was unconscious, thank god she was alive and that bitch was thinking Raj has locked her here.
Who called her? 😕 😕 😕 Was that the chief? 😕 😕 😕 Does the chief know that he is Rajveer not R2.😕 😕 😕- hmmm it was whom she works for

He know that very well that Raj is busy with Naina and he wanted Sonia to be with him.😛 😛 😛 That Sonia is really useless and which kind of video she has in her mobile? 😕 😕 😕 Where are the rest of cadets now? 😕 😕 😕 - that is a very good question. its a private party so others are not invited

Finally Raj caught that hooded man but who was the second man chasing him? 😊 😊 😊 - mystery mystery all the way

Good that the killer was caught but Raj was shocked to see his face who can that man be? 😕 😕 😕 - lets see

The fast part which has a lot of confusions for us.🤔
🤔 🤔 - haha
Now update this fast.




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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: varshita

Hey a good update!!!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 - thanks very much

With a lost of suspense which made my interest so much!!!!!!!!!!! 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 - glad it did

It's a perfect fic of yours which includes all suspense, thrill, romance, passion and comedy!!!!!!!!! 👍🏼
👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 - aaaw thanks

Perfect for perfect situation when Raj was busy with that idiot Sonia and she was hit by that unknown person who targeted Raj and who was that man? 😕 😕😕 😕 😕 😕 - too many questions which makes it more interesting

Thank god Sonia was safe varna Raj ka kya hota? But that stupid Sonia think Raj has kidnapped her!!!!!!!!!! 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 - situation hee kuch aisi hain ke kuch bhi hosakta hain

Major Nair and Major Bhargav got strict warnings from their Chief n that stupid Nair thinks Naina knows the secret? 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 - hmmm yes both of them find Naina dangerous

Update soon dear n do pm me!!!!!!!!!!!
- surely wud do so



Dcrn thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
Nice ff..loved it...Kindly Complete the ff. Update plz
Edited by Dcrn - 10 years ago
arpita25 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey Arwa nice update. Who is that man and Raj know him? Update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: arpita25

Hey Arwa nice update. Who is that man and Raj know him? Update soon.


Thanks Arpita

Well lets see in the next update
RNforever thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow nice ff
i just love it plz continue soon
we r waiting for ur next part
😃

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