My Fan-Fic: When Hate Turns Into... - Page 67

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Posted: 19 years ago
😆 😆 😆 greatttttt jobbbb
cont sooon 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
aww sat waz such a cute part!! cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
that was superb!!!wonder, what's goin on in naina's mind????????do cont. soon n let us know!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
omg that was a fab part
cont soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
i just read the whole thing ur an amazing writer veronica hats off to u. plzz forget the friday thing. I know u wont but plzzz consider it i just love ur fan fiction its sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good. Write sooon 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
really great part dear...It's so cute...I hope Naina talks about A & K's marriage....
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hey nausheen i just read ur f-f itz awsome....i under stand the whole friday thing...plz cont soon 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
Moderator's Note:
There are way too many unnecessary posts asking the writer to continue. This is considered spamming and those posts will get trashed!
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Posted: 19 years ago

Episode 28:


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In Angad's room:
When Angad put Kripa down, they both hugged each other.
When Kripa let go of Angad, she was about to leave the room, but Angad grabbed her hand.
Kripa: "Angad, leave me, someone might come."
Angad didn't listen to what Kripa said and pulled her back to him. Kripa and Angad both looked into each other's eyes. Angad went closer and closer to Kripa. He put his arms around Kripa's waist and pulled her towards him. Their faces touched. Angad slowly moved Kripa open hair to the other shoulder (moving it out of the way), and then he put his head lower and softly kissed her on her neck. Kripa felt shy and was about to walk out the room but Angad grabbed her arm again. Suddenly, Naina called Kripa from downstairs. Kripa got scared and Kripa took Angad hand off her arm and ran out the room. Angad was left in the room with a cute grin on his face.


Downstairs in Khanna house:
Kripa went down to check why Naina had called her. She realised that Naina and Gayathri were in the kitchen cooking dinner. She went in.
Kripa: "Aunty, you called me?"
Naina: "Yes Kripa, can you go and phone Prithvi and tell him to come home please beta?"
Kripa: "Yeah sure aunty."
Naina: "Thank you darling. And tell him that dinner is being made so come home quickly."
Kripa (going out the kitchen): "O.k. aunty. Will do."
As Kripa left the kitchen, Naina turned round to Gayathri and said to her that she wanted to talk about her daughter (Gayathri) and Prithvi.


Over to Kripa:
As Kripa was about to phone Prithvi, Angad came down the stairs and checked if nobody was in the room (except him and Kripa). So he went behind Kripa and hugged her.
Angad: "Hello sweetie."
Kripa (shocked and scared if some one caught them): "Angad let go, some one will see, and then I'll be dead."
Angad: "No, first I want a kiss."
Kripa: "Angad you'll get a slap from me if you don't let go of me."
Angad: "O.k. C'mon Kripa, I will like to see you try."
Kripa put the phone down and turned around to face Angad. Angad closed his eyes. Angad put his face forward. He twitched his eyes. As Kripa was about to playfully slap him, Naina called Angad from the kitchen. Angad quickly opened his eyes.
Kripa: "Haha, no go."
Angad made a sad face and was about to leave. All of a sudden, he turned back round and quickly gave a little peck on the lips to Kripa.
Angad (running to the kitchen): "Haha Kripa, I got it."
Kripa was angry at first but then she started laughing at how silly Angad was acting (like a cute little child).


Hope you like it
Veronica

PS
Naina asks Kripa's Parents for...


Edited by Veronica4eva - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
wow that was brilliant continue soon

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