My Fan-Fic: When Hate Turns Into... - Page 69

Originally posted by: munizaaa

i just read the whole thing ur an amazing writer veronica hats off to u. plzz forget the friday thing. I know u wont but plzzz consider it i just love ur fan fiction its sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good. Write sooon 😃

sry dear i cnt becoz i av wrk n olny on fridayz i am off wrk..so datz da only tym i get 2 write n continue 4 my darlings!!! 😳..hope u dnt mind?

Originally posted by: hawoo

hey nausheen i just read ur f-f itz awsome....i under stand the whole friday thing...plz cont soon 😊

well fnx dear!! 😃

i just read that part it was cute
cont soon 😃
~mira~ 😃

Hey...
I caught up after a while and let me say that all the parts were really good. I just really liked them... Hope u continue soon..... wait... I didn't really get the part after naina told kripa to call prithvi..I mean what did naina say to prithvi... 😕, anyways it was really great part.. Angad acts silly 😆 😆 . plzzzzzzzz cont soon if u can..
bye 😊

datz woz fab...well done nausheen!!! 👏 👏 😳

awww anagad iz soo cute!!cont soon

Episode 29:


Continue:

In The Kitchen:
As Angad entered the kitchen, he went right up to Naina (who was cooking dinner with Gayathri).
Angad: "Yes mum? You called me?"
Naina (turning round to Angad): "Yes Angad. I just told Kripa to phone Prithvi, and now can you please do me a favour and phone your father and your uncle Suryban to come home for dinner?"
Angad: "O.k. mum."
As Angad was about to leave the kitchen he turned round back to Naina.
Angad: "Mum, why didn't you tell Kripa to phone everyone as she was phoning Prithvi as well?"
Naina (in a smiling way): "Angad, beta I'm busy so please do the job. Please beta?"
Angad: "O.k. o.k. mum. Inabit."
Naina: "O.k. beta."
When Angad had left the kitchen, Gayathri and Naina started chatting.
Gayathri: "Awww, bless him."
Naina: "Yeah, I love my son's."
Gayathri: "Yeah, I love my daughter."
They both started smiling.
Naina got thoughts of when Kripa stayed at Khanna house, pretending to be Angad's wife.
Naina: "Do you know what Gayathri?"
Gayathri: "What?"
Naina: "When Kripa lived in this house, even in that month, our family (for the first time) actually seemed like a family. Everyone was so happy when Kripa was around."
Gayathri (joking): "Really? You better have taken care of my princess!"
Naina: "Oh my god Gayathri. You should have seen it. O.k. the family did take care of Kripa, for your information, but my Angad...he took extra care of Kripa. I mean, after she had that accident, he wouldn't let her go out of his sight. He was so protective over her."
Gayathri: "That's so sweet of him."
Naina: "I know. And he didn't even let her get out of her bed, because she had a bad foot."
Gayathri: "Bless him."
Their was a minute's silence. Gayathri started having thoughts as well.
Gayathri: "Naina, can I ask you something?"
Naina: "What sort of question is that? Of course you can ask me something."
Gayathri: "Well..."
Naina: "Well?"
Gayathri: "I was just thinking."
Naina: "What?"
Gayathri: "When Kripa stayed here, did she and Angad act strangely in front of each other?"
Naina: "Well, when Kripa newly stayed, Angad and Kripa did not get along. You know how much they used to hate each other? But as the weeks went on, I think they got a very close relationship. And when Kripa got the accident, Angad was really worried about her."
After Naina had said this, Gayathri left the kitchen with a big grin. Naina was left in the kitchen with a very weird and confused thought about Angad and Kripa.


In The Living Room:
After Kripa had told Prithvi to come home for dinner, she put the phone down. As she was about to turn around, Angad came right in front of her face.
Angad: "Hey Kripa, what did Prithvi say?"
Kripa: "For me to know, and you to find out sweetie."
Angad: "What the crap. I just asked you what Prithvi said, that doesn't mean that you act like that with me."
Angad was about to leave in a strop, but Kripa grabbed his arm and pulled him back. She moved him close to her and put her hands around his puppy dog face.
Kripa: "Awww, is my baby angry?"
Angad didn't reply.
Kripa: "I was only joking sweetie. O.k. I'm sorry."
Angad still didn't reply.
Kripa: "O.k. does my baby want his kiss back?"
Angad looked up in surprise and joy. He was about to say yes, but he saw Gayathri come out of the kitchen.
Angad nodded his head: "No!"
Kripa (confused): "What? C'mon Angad, you're still angry with me? I'll give you a kiss."
Angad: "No Kripa...no!"
Kripa: "But why?"
Angad: "No, please, no!"
Kripa didn't listen to Angad and grabbed his face and gave him a big smooch. Before Gayathri could look at Kripa Angad, Angad pushed himself and Kripa behind the staircase (underneath the stairs). Kripa was still kissing him. As Gayathri saw that nobody was in the living room, she went into the bathroom to wash her hands (because she was cutting food). Back to Angad and Kripa, well...Kripa was still kissing Angad. As soon as Angad saw Gayathri leaving for the bathroom, he quickly got Kripa off him.
Angad: "Are you mad Kripa?"
Kripa: "what?"
Angad: "Your mum was in the room!"
Kripa: "What? Oh my god, did she see me?"
Angad: "No, because I moved you...luckily."
Kripa (smiling): "Awww Angad, you're so sweet."
Angad and Kripa were going to go for another kiss, but all of a sudden, Gayathri came out the bathroom. Angad and Kripa a parted. Kripa fixed her hair and wondered off. Angad also straightened out his shirt and wondered off.

Hope you like it
Veronica

PS
As you all didn't want Kripa and Prithvi together, I've changed the script. I hope you enjoy this one.

I loved da part!! So sweeet. Not fair veronica, we wait for a week and we get tiny miny part!!! 😡

awwwwwwwww dat woz so cute...fnx hun! 😳

Hey...Thanx fro not keeping prithvi and Kripa together.... Cuz as you know angad and Kripa are the best. It was a great part... Kripa 😆 😆 Lovely..
Bye
Caontinue when you can..
Divjot