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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi guys this is my new ff on rn

n alluwalia -naina ke ma baap bacchpan main mar gaye ha .n aapne mama mami ke ghar main rahete ha.
mr alok desai-naina ke mama n ko bohot pyaar karte ha.alok jee ek farm main karte ha.unke 2 beti ha
mrs niyati desai-n ke mami n ko bilkl pasand nahin karte ha
diya-alok jee bare beti .diya n ke saath college main parte ha
tia-bilkul aapne ma jaise n ko nafrat karte ha
now coming to the story
mami-are o n ab uth bhi jaa subhe ke 6 baj gaye ha main hee kya sab kam karo
n jaldi se uthte ha fresh up hoke kitchen main aate ha
n-jee mami
mami-uth gaye tu ab kya main tere liye mahurat nikalu
n jaldi se chai banate ha
n-mami chai
n -mama jee chai
mama-are beta tu th gaye
n-ha mama jee
mami-n
n-jee mami
tia-mama
mami-ha beta
tia-mama mujhe school jaana ha mera uniform abhi tak iron nahin huya ha
mami-n tune tia ka uniform abhi tak press nahin kiya
n-mami woh mujhe kuch notes banane the isliye
mami-ha bare aaye notes banane bale jaldi se tia ka uniform press kar de
n-jee
n uniform press karte ha
n-tia tumhare uniform
tia-mama mera tiffin
mami-yeh le mere bacche
deeya-n
n-ha diya
deeya-tune history ka homework kiya
n-deea woh mami
deeya-hmm ma bhi na le mere copy se likh le
n-par deeya
diya-tu jaldi se likh le main kitchen main jaate hu
n-hmm
alok jee-suno niyati
n-ha bolie
a-aaj shayam ko tm log taiyar rahena
n-kun
a-aaj shayam ko bare sahab ke ghar main party ha
tia-wow party papa mujhe naye dress kharidne ha
a-beta is main nae dress lene kya zarurat ha
n-kun nahin ha beta tu zarur dress kharid lena
tia-thank u ma
a-thik ha toh main chalta hu
ab aate ha hum dusre family ke taraff
shekhawat family
sab se pahele
dada jee -dada jee ke 3 bete ha
1-amar shekhawat-is a ery good business man who loves his family.he have 2 son kavya and prem
amar ke patni ha savita -she is a very loving and caring woman who cares for eery1
2-lala shekhawat-he only loves his business .he have only 1 son raj .
3-lalit -he is also a good human being loves his family but his wife vasu is very cruel .she loves status .parties ,she have only 1 son varun
kavya-amar aur savita ka beta bohot aacha larka ha .he is a mba abhi london main raheta ha.kavya ke patni ha anjali
anjali is a housewife bohot aache ha
prem is spoil brat .she loves to flirt with girl
varun ke patni ha kajal just like her mother law loves to tease other
yeh ha shekhawat family
a jee sab ko leke shekhawat house aate ha
tia-wow papa kitna bara ghar ha
a-hmm
a-namaste dada jee
dadajee-are aae alok jee
a-dada jee yeh mere patni niyati aur mere 3 betideeya ,tia ar n
dada jee-aao beta ander aao
kajal-mama dekha aapne dada jee ne kis logo ko party main invite kiya ha
vasu-are babujee ka toh aasa he ha abhi bhi gaobalo ke tara behave karte ha
kajal-ha mere toh nak he cut gae in logo ko dekh ke
prem-ohh excuse me
tia-hiiiiii aapne mujhse kuch kaha
prem-jee ha
tia-hi main hu tia
prem-hmm main hu prem shekhawat
ek waiter n ke dress par drink gira deta ha
w-sorry madam
n-its ok
n-are mere pure dress karab ho gaye ab kya karu
n-suniye
savita-jee beta
n-aunty mere dress pe drink gir gaye ha kya aap mujhe bata sakte ha washroom kaha ha
s-oh beta ao mere saath
n s ke saath room main jaate ha
s-beta tum mere yeh red saree pahen lo
n-par aunty
s-beta tumhare pure karab ho gae ha tum isse pahen lo
s neeche jate ha
n saree pahen ke aane ke samne khare ha tabhi ek admi aake n ke gaale ke pass chaku rakte ha
n is scared
n-aap aap kon ha
guy-main mar dunga tumhe kun chor ke chale tum mujhe
n-main aap ha kon plz mujhe jaane dijiye
guy-chup phir se mujhe chor ke jaana chahate ho mujhe
n-nahin plz mujhe choria
n-mama jee
guy-chup chup awaz mat karna main mar dunga tumhe
n toh dar ke mare rone lage ha
guy-kun gae tum mujhe chor ke bolo
n ke rone awaz sun ke sab log uper aate ha
n-mama jee
mama-n
n mama ke pass jaate ha
mama-dada jee yeh
vasu-off kitne bar kaha ha is r ko pagalkhana de aao par nahin rakkho is se ghar main
r-mujhe chor ke mat jao
vasu-ram singh is r ko le jao
ram singh aake r ko le jate ha
r-chor do mujhe
n ro rahe ha

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!
Naina ki mammy kitni buri hai!!!๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜กJab dekho usse kaam karati rehti hai!!!!!๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’
Deeya is so nice!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜ŠNaina ki kitni madat karti hai!!!! ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š
Alokji ki family Shekhawats ke ghar party ke liye jaa rahe hai!!!!๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›Great!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š
Raj ne Naina ko pakadke uspe chaku rakha!!!!๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Raj ki dimagi haalat theek nahi hai kya??๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜•
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey nice plot yaar.

To Raj pagal bana hai is me?
update soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#4
hey sounds interesting
plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#5

guys

mama-n beta tu ro mat
dada jee-alok jee mujhe maaff kar dijie woh r
mama-nahin nahin daa jee aapko maaffee maagne ke koi zarurat nahin ha
deeya-n chal
sab log ghar aate ha
deeya -ma aaj n mere saath soege
mami-hmm
deya-n so jaa
n-deeya woh
deeya-koi nahin ha tu so jaa
n is ver scared
kajal-are mammy jee jat jee baja se hume hamesha sarminda hona parta ha
vasu-main itne bar kaha ha tumse llalit ke babu jee ko bol ke us r ko pagalkhane
lalit-vasu plz
kuch din bad
mami-are aap ke tabiyat thik nahin ha toh aaj aap kun office jaa rahe ha
alok jee-niyati aaj mujhe yeh file sir ko dena ha
mami-ha toh kal de dijiega
alok-nahin niyati
mami-off aap bhi na
alok starts coughing
n-are mama jee aap kaha jaa rahe ha
mama-beta yeh file sir ko dene
n-par aaj toh sunday ha
mama-ha beta yeh file mujhe shekhawat house main dene hoge
mami-n tu chale jana
n remembers that incident
mama-nahin
mami-kun aaj agar deeya ya tia hote toh weoh bhi jaate na
n-ha mama jee aap mujhe woh file dijiye main de aate hu
n darr darr ke shekhawat house jaate ha
kaka opens the door
n-sir ha ander
kaka-kon se sir
n-lalit sir
kaka-jee nahin sahab aur memsahab toh mandir gaye ha
n-oh mujhe sir ko yeh file dene the
kaka-thik ha aap yahaan baithte
n goes and sits in the sofa
n magazine par rahe ha
r-tum phir se mujhe chor ke chale gaye
n darr ke
n-aap
n sofe se uthte ha
n-aap
r n ko bahon main leta ha
n-choriya mujhe
n ro rahe ha
n-mujhe jaane dijiye plz
dada jee-r choro usse
dada jee-r
r n ko chorta ha
n -sir woh file dene the aapko
dada jee-ha beta do
r-tum mat jaana plz
n aapne ghar jaate ha
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Posted: 16 years ago
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that too good
plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#7
Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!
Naina kitni darri huyi hai!!!!
Vasu chahti hai Raj ko pagalkhane bhejna magar Lalit aisa nahi chahta!!!! Good for him!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š
Naina darr darr ke Shekhawat house jaati hai!!!!๐Ÿ˜” ๐Ÿ˜” ๐Ÿ˜” ๐Ÿ˜”Par Lalit toh mandir gaya tha!!!!๐Ÿ˜” ๐Ÿ˜” ๐Ÿ˜” ๐Ÿ˜”
Raj usse puchta hai ke woh usse chhod kar kyun gayi thi??๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜•
Raj ne usse bahon mein le liya!!!!๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณNaina toh darr ke maare roh rahi hai!!!๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ
Raj ne Naina se kaha ke usse chhod kar naa jaye!!!!
Raj ko huya kya tha jo woh aisa hai??๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜•
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Posted: 16 years ago
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yaar aadhi storyline tumhari KTH hai aur baaki Dulhan jaise.

update soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

yaar aadhi storyline tumhari KTH hai aur baaki Dulhan jaise.

update soon.

Dulhan nahi Bidaai!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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guys
dada jee -savita bahu
s-jee babu jee
dada jee-bahu kal r ka janamdin ha
savita-babu jee mainne party ke taiyar kar de ha
dada jee-hmm
pura ghar sajaya gaya ha
rani-hi prem
prem-hi rani
rani-prem aaj tumhare ghar main party ha
prem-ha aaj mere r bhaiya ka birthday ha
rani-r bhaiya u mean that pagal
prem-ha
kajal-varun
varun-ha bolo kajal
kajal-dada jee har saal r bhaiya ke liye party kun dete ha
varun-dekho kajal r bhaiya ko dada jee sab se zada pyaar karte ha
kajal-ha ek pagal ko pyaar karte ha par tumhe pyaar nahin karte business man r bhaiya ko 50%de sakte ha par tumhe sirf 25%
varun-chup ho jao kajal dada jee sun lenge
kajal-toh main kya galat bol rahe hu
varun-kajal dekho ghar main guests aane suru ho gae ha
kajal-varun tumhe toh mere har baat galat he lagte ha
dada jee-aaj mere pote r ka janamdin ha
dada jee-ramsingh r ko le aao
ram singh r ke room main jaata ha
ram singh-r baba
dada jee-ram singh r kaha ha
ram singh-dada jee r baba toh room main nahin ha
dada jee-kya r room main nahin ha
dada jee-laliit ,amar,prem dekho r kaha ha
sab log r ko dhund rahe ha
par r kahin nahin mil raha ha
dada jee-r gaya kaha
p-n
n-ha
p-chal pani puri khate ha
n-thik ha
p-bhaiya 2 plate lagaye
n aur p pani puri kha rahe ha
kuch log r ke picche aa rahe
suddenly r aake n ko pakkar leta ha
n turns
n-aap
logo -hey pagal inder aa
n-kya hua
1 man-madam yeh pagal mere dukan se phool leke bhaag aaya ha
2 man-chal inder aa
n-ek min aap ke phool ka kya dam ha
man-jee rs 50
n-thik ha yeh lijiye
log jaate ha
n-aapne phool kun churaya ha
r-woh mainne tumhe dekha us dukan se toh mainne tumhare liye yeh rose ka booke le liya tumhe rose pasan ha na
n aaj r se darrte nahin ha
n r ko r ke ghar leke jaate ha
dada jee-r kaha tha tu
n-dada jee r jee ko mainne rasste main dekha tha
dada jee-thanks beta
dada jee-aa r cake cut le
r-tum bhi aao

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