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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: redi50

hey nice character sketch

plz continue soon
wit the part '
luv heli



thank u heli! i will continue and i hav finished riting the part but if i get a few more comments then ill continue..😊. Thank u for complimenting my ff already!!
Edited by vcaobi - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12
ok i will comment again cause i really want u to update. LOL!!!!!!plzzz update soon!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hehe Samira...i just decided to update!! i'm really nervous so pls try and comment and i know this part is a bit boring but when AR meet then all the fun will start. Hope u guys like it!!

Part 1:

She gets up and just remembers wat she has to do today and quickly jumps out of the bed with a huge smile on her lips. She rushes into the washroom, takes a bath, goes down and sees a few men emptying the house and her dad supervising them.

She quickly runs down the stairs and hugs her dad from behind making him turn with a huge smile on his face knowing it was his daughter.

'Good morning beta' Shashank greets his daughter 'bahut khush lag rahi ho!'

'Good morning papa!! Aur waise aap kam khush nahi lag rahe, akhir aat saal baad hum wapas jaane wale hai!! Koi pagal hi hoga jo khush nahi hoga aur'

She was cut off by her mother.

'Riddhimaaaaaa'idhar ao zara' Padma calls her daughter.

'Ji ma' saying tat Riddhima gives a smile to her dad and runs to the kitchen knowning her mother will be preparingbreakfast there.

'Riddhima beta good morning! Aur tumhe pata hai Armaan ka fone aaya tha' Padma said to her daughter with a smile on her face.

'KYA!!!!! Armaan ka fone aaya tha!!' Riddhima lightens up but suddenly a frown takes over her face. 'Theek hai ma, main waise bhi usse baat nahi kar rahi, itne phone kiye aur ek ka jawab bhi nahi diya aur phir wapas phone bhi nahi kiya!'

'Arrey toh kya hua, kissi kaam main phas gaya hua hoga. Acha Riddhima beta tumhe pata hai na hume ek ghante main nikalna hai airport ke liye toh jaldi se jakar naashta khakar taiyyar ho jao aur Armaan se baadme jhagadlena!'

'Theek hai ma main Armaan se baad main jhagad loongi..' with that she goes to the dining table and sees her dad sitting at the table and begins eating her food with her dad and mom who joins them later.

At the Delhi Airport.

Riddhima smiles as soon as she gets off the plane and smelling the very fresh air of Delhi.

She hopes she is able to see her frnd at the airport but its impossible bcoz this is a surprise for him.

The Gupta family is received by Dr Shubhankar who takes them to their new house. Everything is already ready kept for them as Shashank came a few months ago and got all the work done.

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Riddhima goes to her room and settles everything and now is ready to give her best friend a surprise and so she leaves the house with her parents and calls Armaan's dad as he know's tat Riddhima and her parents r bak but unfortunately he had an operation to attend to cud not receive them.

On the phone.

Riddhima: Hi uncle!! Main riddhima bol rahi hoon.

Amit: Hi Riddhima beta! Tum log aa gaye?

Riddhima: Ji uncle hum abhi abhi aaye. Uncle Armaan kaha hai?

Amit: beta who ghar par hi hai. Tumhe humara address pata hai?

Riddhima: Ha uncle mujhe pata. Main Armaan ko chhitiyaan bhej thi thi na.

Amit: Acha beta tum abhi humare ghar aa jao. Main bhi ghar par hi hoon.

Riddhima: Acha uncle ab main rakhti hoon. Bye uncle!!

Amit: Bye beta!

With that Riddhima leaves for Armaan's house.

Riddhima enters his house to see a beautiful mansion. It was huge. Just then in the living room she hears some argument and goes there to find a handsome young man arguing with his dad.

'Dad I wanna go out! Y rnt u letting me?!' the yound man told his dad.

Just then his dad smiles looking at Riddhima's direction. Then the young man turned around to see who distracted them. The young man was none other than Armaan Malik.

Armaan got up while Riddhima was walking towards them but as soon as she saw Armaan she stopped in her path.


Plz copliment\criticize. and sorry for the extremely boring part. I promise the next update will be better and i will updt soon!!

Edited by vcaobi - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow that was a great starting👏.it is very interesting.i like the concept that armaan and ridhima are best friends.waiting to see how armaan's reaction will be.i am excited to read the coming parts.continue soon............
Edited by sasya - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#15
sounds nice so far
plzzz try n pm me wen u contonue
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Posted: 17 years ago
#16
Seriously awesumm....wud love to read more anjie di (hope can call u that)....rilli gud plot n I tink the story's gonna rock...em dying to read the first prt...update sn....n plzzzzz do PM me wheneva u update (if possible)
Do cont sn....
Love ya anjie di.....t.cccccc
-Ur's Ever Madhu😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#17
hi😊
nice intro
contd soooooooooooon and plzzzz pm me
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Edited by saridena - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#18
very sweet.. dis seems 2 b really cute........waiting to read more of it.........
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Posted: 17 years ago
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man!!awsum....
sry 4 de late comment...
n thx a ton 4 de pm dear
jst luvin de ff....best frens!!hmm..lts c wats in store 4 us huh!!
cont asap
waitin 4 ur nxt part
luv u lts
ashu
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Posted: 17 years ago
#20

great intro!

do cont soon yea?
love
tanasha

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