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Senny

@Senny

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Posted: 16 years ago

#861

oh gosh nihu thanks for the pm , i am so sorry for replying so late. but your update was fantastic and mayur were simply bombastic, i just loved mayank's way of stopping nupur man, it was just tooooooooooooo good, you are truly the highness of romance, everything was perfect. It was the most efficient mix of romance, masti, comic relief and what not. the update was damn yummy. excellent update nihu. i really wanna read ahead now man. Keep up the awesomeeeeeeeee work woman.

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Niharika

@NaughtyNihu

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#862

Originally posted by: reshmahn
awesome update..... plz continue k... luvd mayur part ....thankoooooooooooooooooooooo.. 😛

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Niharika

@NaughtyNihu

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#863

Originally posted by: ArpitaLuvsMayur
AWWWWWWW..................such a SWEET update.arpita januuuuuuuu....muahhh nihu di kya baat hai.muahxxxxx to u tooooooo janu..........best part mayank and nupur phone convo.😳ma fav tooooooooo...LOL.....WANT MOREEE!!!yaaaaaaaaaaa sure sweetyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
hugs..u too*HUGS*
arpita

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Niharika

@NaughtyNihu

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#864

Originally posted by: ruky786
please update soon loved the update

thankoooooooooooooooo sure januuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu😛

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Niharika

@NaughtyNihu

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#865

Originally posted by: pakirani
😆😆😆...the last scene was the best!!!! they should really have that in one episode of mjht..awwwwwwwwwww..so sweet janu...yaa sure yaar...we should tell PD abt it....it would be rocking!!! loved sajan and mayur's romance and the bache part 😆 haha...how cute!! thankoooooooooooo........looking forward to reading more 😃sureeeeeeeeeee jannnnnnn

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Niharika

@NaughtyNihu

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#866

Originally posted by: Senny
oh gosh nihu senny januuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
thanks for the pm ,awwwwww...tht's ma duty yaar..no thankoo shankoo😉

i am so sorry for replying so late. nahiiiiiiii janu...dn't bee

but your update was fantastic awwwwwwww..so sweet of yaaa

and mayur were simply bombastic, i just loved mayank's way of stopping nupur man,

it was just tooooooooooooo good, gladddddddd to hear frm u....i was w8ng ur commnet on ths..yaar..am honoured

you are truly the highness of romance, OMGGGGGGG...ur words are killing me januuuuuuuuuuuuu

everything was perfect. thankoooooooooooooooooooooo

It was the most efficient mix of romance, masti, comic relief and what not.really??? sos weet ur are..ur words always inspire me...

the update was damn yummy. hehhehhe

excellent update nihu. i really wanna read ahead now man.yaaaaaaa sureeeee sweety

Keep up the awesomeeeeeeeee work woman awwwwwww u touched ma heart senny..ths is for ya

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Tanya

@TINAMALHONTRA

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#867

GR8 Update Nihu......

Ab humaare Mayu ke saath aagayi humaari Nupu bhi dono kitne cute hai By God
Aur yeh kya Mayank bana Samrat aur Nupu bani Gunjan and Gunjan bani Nupur
and Benji bana Samrat

And the Mayu-Nupu and Sajan scenes were cho chweet...har taraf pyaar hi pyaar hai

Vaise toh highlight specifically toh nahi the BUT!!! the children part was amazing.....
Samrat ko 20!!! bache chahiye....then he is sitting and bargaining with Gunjan aur Nupur
voh toh bechaare Mayank ko embarass hi karti hai like jab bauji the....I'm sure unhe shaq
ho gaya hoga....atleast we know usse twins chahiye....how sweet
Update soon yaar can't wait to see ki Samrat ki shock kahan tak jaayegi!!! when he sees
personality transformation
Thnx for the pm and do pm me in future too
Love ya

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Let-It-Go

@Let-It-Go

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#868

nihuuuuuuu .....mere jaan 🤗🤗🤗

first of all...tere pass aise dhaansu ideas aate kahanse hain?????👏

it was amazing😊😊

my adrenaline pump still on...by god !!!!!! jumping on my chair after reading it...and my roomie luking at me with a 'not so gud expression''😆

hahahahaaaaa

it was awesum awesum jaan

maaza aa gaya....loved bauji-nupur-maynk convo😉

jab nupur romantic hote hai toh maynk hota nahin hai but jab maynk romantic hota hai toh dill garden-garden ho jaata hai yaar...*bells ringing all around*😉

lol....proper nupur act--calling maynk to ask whether he wants a boy or a girl..par humara mayu toh aur bhi teez nikla ussne toh baacho ke traits bhi decide kar liye...awesumji👏

last part was the bstest...out-of-the-world idea mere jaan⭐️

maaza aa gaya yaar padhkar......

love u mere jaan🤗

love u to infinity🤗

ruchi

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Hgrhrnwl

@hgrhr

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#869

OMG

Y'know I'd been a silent reader on this fic for some time that was before I joined this forum...but I had missed SO many recent parts...just caught up with them and WOW!

You are brilliant!

This is an awesome fic you have going...And this is one of the first MJT fics too na...? Going on since the show started...!

BY god, I love the way you write the characters!!

Aww....that terrace scene and the Mayur scene afterwards when Mayu tries to be romantic was SO SWEET!!

The last part just killed me! I kept pausing the reading so I could laugh for a minute or 2 on a line!

Mayu and Sam's interaction with Bauji was so cute!

Aur bechare mayank ke 12 baje huye they aur upar se Nupur chance pe dance mar rahi thi! Baujike samne flirt kar rahi thi!

The phone convos between Sajan and Mayur were really rib tickling!!

Aww...Sam wats 20 kids! And nupur heard the conversation!

Its just like Nupur to pick up the phone and call Mayu at 2 to ask if he wanted a boy or a girl!

And when he yelled that I want twins now go to sleep!! By god, I went crazy laughing!! I wanted to pull his cheeks for saying that!

I love the Sam's B'day track and Mayur playing Sajan! I can jut imagine the heart attack he must've had hearing Gunan calling him Mayu!

Oh please keep updating! I love your fic...Its one of the best I've read!!

Keep up the great job!

Nidhi

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GamesOfLife

@GamesOfLife

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#870

Nihu Jaan , I made the whole comment last night and was about to paste when my computer system shutdown ... so here i am trying again......

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i loved how Nups tease Mayu about bhauji 🤣

N:chalo mayu yahan mere pass window seat par baito mian tumse padai ke bare main kuch discuss karma chahti hoon..

M:kya????

N:haan..bauji boliye na..🤣

I loved the telecom of both Samrat and gunjan and Mayu and Nups ...👏

Boy like samrat and girl like Gunjan 👏 soooooooooo sweet ❤️

and Nups reply ...

"Hmmmmmmm toh main do bachon ki masi banongiii!!!!!!"gunjan is shocked at ths hse turns around to see nupur sitting on her bed and smiling..😛😛👏

and Mayu bichara ... 2.00 in night he was asked what he wants ...🤣

but his reply was so sweet ... twins ... HA ! Ha! .. i always love my main characters in bks ended up with twins ...🥳

Most dreamy scene for My romantic heart ....❤️

N:nahi main khud karongi?[ But before mayu could do nething th duptta suddenly came out causing both of them to loose their balance & land nupur in mayu's strong arms..]

Nupur got bit conscious and tried to get up..buh mayu held her firmly refusing to let her go..and wid th piercing paasinate look he said

M:so?? Tum mujhe batane wali thin a..maza kaise karte hain..

N:mayank..mujhe jana hai..

M:[moving close to her,looking in her eyes]?NUPU?

Nupur knew that if she looked at him any more- her feelings would run wild How she wanted to be in his arms wanting to comfort and be comforted. His eyes were now strangely burning with a luv.. Suddenly their eye-contact was broken by the jingling of the keys on th other side of car..and nupur just pushed him away and stood straight

N:acha mayu byeee

M:[holding her hand and pulling her to himself]..nupur tum kuch bhul rahi ho?

N:kya??[shying?half expecting a good night kiss]

M:apni bag!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! [LAUGHING loudly]

N:kyaaa????????

M;nupur?.byeee[and kissed her on forhead and walked to th other side of car.leaving nupur awestruck]

I am dreaming Nihu ... I am dreaming ..😍. i can easily see this incorporated in original script also when everybody eonfess their love ... ❤️👍🏼❤️ 👍🏼

I enjoyed this update a lot 👏...........🤗

and yah ..... Mayu although always look good ..but . he also seems sizziling and hot in precap 🤗