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hey guyz here's th updt...do read and cooment..
hope you like it..

Next day..gunjan and nupur are gving afinal hug to their bauji..mayank and benji are discussing who'll sit where in sammy's car..and rimjhi is trying to solve it…sammy goes over togunjan's bauji and says

S:acha uncle main jata hoon..

GB:nahi beta..kaho..main..jakar ata hoon..aur haan…yeh tumhara bhi ghar hai..jab kabhi maan kare ajana….gunjan ya nupur ki rah mat dekhna..

[And hugs samrat…]

S:ji uncle ji…

GB:yeh mayank aur..benji kahan hai??

He looks over and finds mayank and rimjhim disussing over an open book and benji putting up luggage

GB:mayank beta…bas bhi karo..itna panda bhi acha nahi…kabhi kabhi maza bhi karlena chahiye…NUPUR ke saath rehkar bhi tum kcuh nahi sikhe kya???

Nupur beta jara batao isko maza kaise karte hian..aur tum meri nupu ko samjhana padai kaise karte hain.

M:[smiling teasingly]NUPU????..ammm ji uncle ji..padai aur nupur thoda tough hai..par main try karunga..

N:haan haan..main bhi kaab se isko bol rahi hon..hum saath main jyada time spent karma chahiye…toh manta hi nahi..[walking forward..wid a romantic look..in such a way..tht bauji can't notice it…]kyun bauji???

Mayank gets bit uncomfy and he quickly turns over to bauji

M:uncleji..mani chaloo

GB:haan beta..dhyan se jana..

N:chalo mayu yahan mere pass window seat par baito mian tumse padai ke bare main kuch discuss karma chahti hoon..

M:kya????

N:haan..bauji boliye na..

GB:haan jao beta….

S:chalo mayank ..gunjan tum front seat par biato…mujhe guide karne ke liye..benji rimjhim..last seat…ok???

All settle in their place…as soon as mayank sits and closes th door..nupur grabs his hand..and putts her dupatta on it..

M:nupur yeh kya??bauji..dekh rahe hain..

N:[ignoring his talks and still holding his hand]byeeeeee bauji…bye karo mayu..

Mayank was looking as if all his blood was drained away…and his heart was doing summersault..gulping dwn his saliva..he waved at bauji wid a weak smile..and th car drove away..on th way mayu blasted out

M:nupur..yeh kya..tum bhi na???bauji dekh lete toh

N:oooooo..honewale sasurji se darte ho..mayu so cute…[pulling his cheeks]

Mayank..breaks into small laughs nodding his head..and looking at nupur smiling he says"NUPU'…

And here our sammy is busy taking short glances at gunjan…while driving and bcoz of tht there couldn't be much of romance between them which really made sammy upset......benji..and rimjhim are hving frndly talks abt hw will they surprise dodo..

Singing songs,eating,laughing,romancing they reached Mumbai…1st dropped benjhim..then morena sisters…

[outside bhushan house]

S:chalo finally Mumbai agaye…….

M:haan aur finally kal coll jayenge..

S:nupu beta tumne mayu beta ko bataya nahi maza kaise karte hain??

N:bataya.par puri class waste hogayi by goddd!!!!!!!![frm other side of car]

M:chalo chalo..late ho raha hai..yehlo nupur[and walks to other side of car where nupur is struggling wid her dupatta stuck in car door]

S:gunjan..jara yahan aoo bahut imp baat karni hai..

G:kya hua??

S:gunjan..aaj raat agar..

G:haan bolo

S:raat ko agar..mujhe..neend nahi ayi toh tum gana gake sulaogi na??

G:kya?????main kaise samrat…ghar par sab honge..main tum

S:main kab kahan ghar par..mera matlab toh phone pe tha…

G:{shy at her thinking and abt to go wen sammy holds her hand frm behind]

S;gunjan mujhe itna bhi miss mat karma ki..main bhi tumse alag na reh paao…control nahi kar paya toh raat ko kheedki se ghar main ajaonga..

G:samrat….[slowly resting her head on his chest]

S:gunjan..i'll real miss u!!!!!!!!

[mayur]

N:yeh sammy ki khatara car….mera dupaata faas gaya…dekho na..[pulling it]

M:nupur..main nikalta hoon..ruko door kholte hain…nupur…nupur.[catching dupatta wid nupur].

N:nahi main khud karongi…[ But before mayu could do nething th duptta suddenly came out causing both of them to loose their balance & land nupur in mayu's strong arms..]

Nupur got bit conscious and tried to get up..buh mayu held her firmly refusing to let her go..and wid th piercing paasinate look he said

M:so?? Tum mujhe batane wali thin a..maza kaise karte hain..

N:mayank..mujhe jana hai..

M:[moving close to her,looking in her eyes]…NUPU…

Nupur knew that if she looked at him any more- her feelings would run wild How she wanted to be in his arms wanting to comfort and be comforted. His eyes were now strangely burning with a luv.. Suddenly their eye-contact was broken by the jingling of the keys on th other side of car..and nupur just pushed him away and stood straight

N:acha mayu byeee

M:[holding her hand and pulling her to himself]..nupur tum kuch bhul rahi ho…

N:kya??[shying…half expecting a good night kiss]

M:apni bag!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! [LAUGHING loudly]

N:kyaaa????????

M;nupur….byeee[and kissed her on forhead and walked to th other side of car.leaving nupur awestruck]

Even samrat and gunjan bid each other byeee and they leave for their respective..home…

At night..nupur is almost lost in her sweet dreams buh gunjan is unable to even close her eyes..she's badly missing sammy..wen her cell rings

G:hello samrat…

S:bola than a..miss karogi toh main…bhi control nahi kar paonga..

G:toh tum yahan ho..sab ghar par hain aur..

S:gunjan..main apne ghar pe hoon…neend nahi ayi toh tumhe call kiya..apne fav song ke liye..

G:[upset as he's nt there]oh!!!!! Acha

S:kya hua??chashmish..ek min..kahin tum..main wahan nahi hoon isliye..oh upset nahi ho???oooooooo godddddddd..i missed nice opportunity….abhi ajaoon kya??

G:nahi nahi…[smiling]…phone par hi bolte hain na plzzzzz

S:hmmmmmm tik hai…gunjan…main soch raha hoon shadi karlo

G:oo..par kise??[teasing]koi ladki dekhi??

S:haan….par who bahut shy hai..tum use baat karo na

G:tik hai…kya bolo usko

S:pucho mujhe raat ko miss karti hai..

G:hmm

S:main moody hoon adjust kar payegi??

G;oooo..acha..karlegi..

S:hamesha….apna room mess up karta hoon..reh payegi??

G:rehlegi..nahi toh uski probs

S:toh tumhe koi farak nahi padta..main kisike bare main baat karu toh

G:nahiiiii..kyun padega..

S:main music loud suntan hoon..sab ko sonata hoon…

G:good…

S:aur muhe 10 kids chahiye..shadi ke baad

G:dus?????

S:haan..sab ladkiyan…uske jaisi

G:kyun????ladke kyun nahiiiii

S:tik hai..aur 10 ladke bhi

G:kya???????? 20 kids pagal ho???

S:kyun??mujhe koi probs nahi bada ghar hai mera..

G:lekin muhe hia..samrat..main 20 kids nahi……[stopped at realizing wot she said]

S:bolo n a

G:byeeee

S:gunjan…10 kids ..5 ladke 5 ladkiyan par tumhare jaise..

G:byeeeeeeee

S:gunjan…4??

G:samrat??

S:gunjan..2???boy and girl..like u..both chashmish??plzzzzzzzz

G:hmmmm…ok buh..boy like u!!!!!!!!!byeeeeeee[cutt th cal]

As she's abt to sleep..a voice says..

"Hmmmmmmm toh main do bachon ki masi banongiii!!!!!!"gunjan is shocked at ths hse turns around to see nupur sitting on her bed and smiling..

G:di??

N:gunjan…kitna cute hai yeh sab!!!!!!!!! Aur ek mayu hai……kabhi nahi pucha ladka ya ladki..roko main puchti hoon..

She grabs gunjan's cell and dial's mayu's cell num..

M:hello

N:mayu tumhe ladki chahiye ya ladka??

M:kya???????nupur tum kya bol rahi ho???????

N:bolona mayu??shadi ke bad tumhe ladki chahiye ya ladka??..acha kitne bache..

M:[feeling odd]nupur….plzzz so jao..kal baat karenge..

N:mayu bolo na

M:nupur raat ke do baje yeh sawal..tum pagal ho??

N:tum kabhi humare shadi ka nahi oschte..

M:nupur plzz

N:mayu bolo na…ek baar bhi nahi..

M:nupu

N:tum kitne bore ho..mayu abhi toh socke bolo..tum sach main nahi sochte??

M:[yelling]NUPURRRRRRRR..HAAN HAAN HAAN..MAIN SOCHTA HOON..HAR RAAT KO SONE SE PEHLE YEHI SOCHTA HOON..EK DIN HUM SHAADI KARENGE AUR HUMARE..DO BACHE HONGE.TWINS….EK LADKA EK LADKI..PAR DONO KO MERA DIMAAG AUR TUMHARI CUTENESS HOGI..BAS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

N:mayu!!!!!!!!!

M:[feeling like he hasfailed a exam]..byeeeeeee kal baat karenge..

Nupur too cuts th cal and smiles saying"mayu bhi na"

G:di kya bola mayank ne??

N:usko twins chahiye..[shying]

G:wowwwwww…so cute..

N:hmmmmm

G:di..do din bad samrat ka b'day hia..main soch rahi thi ki…kyun na usko surprise de..

N:wow..haan..par kaise??

G:mere pass ek plan hai..

Next day

Mayu's house

M:maaaaa jaldi karo coll ke liye late ho jaonga…jaldi breakfast laoo

Door bell rings..

Mayu opens th door and finds..nupur.. wearing specs and th blue frill dress fo gunjan while gunjan is wearing th red dress of nupz wid ghungroos and pony..widout specs..saying "by godd mayu itni der door khol ne main"

Mayank was about to hv aheart attack…wen benji joins in..

B:kyun kais laga???jor ka jhatka..dire se na?????

M:kyaaaa????

N:[slowly like gunjan..touching her specs..and wid lowered head]..mayank main andar aao

M:[staring wid open mouth..]

G:by goddddd!!! Mayank…hato na..

M:yeh sab kya hai…???

G:samrat ki b'day ka surprise..main samrat ko ek act gift karma chahti hoon..based on our luv story..hum kaise kab kahan mile,humari date,jhagde..jisme di banegi gunjan..

M:oooooo coolllll..aur samrat…??

G:tum??aur kaun??

M:kya??nahi…main mayank hi tik hoon!!!

B:mayank toh main hoon

M:[gvng angry look]Kya???

N:mayankji..kuch aur dialohue bolo na..kabse kya?? Kya ???kya??ek hi word.bol rahe ho!!!!!!!!

M:main smarat nahi ban sakta..

N:[cuming to her usual self]kyun?????????????

M:who..woh humesha ladkiyon se ghira rehta hai..

N:ooo..chalo ab yeh kapde lo aur pehenke bataoooooooo

Mayank goes to his room to change into th gvn clothes..

Precap:rooms door opens and…th spikes has turned to ruffled hair..few strands faling on forehead,watch is replaced by wristband,shirts into sweatshirt half zipped……hands are tucked in pockets..widout books..and tht cool walk………..

luv

NIHU

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Posted: 16 years ago

nice:)haha...luved the twins part!! cho cute

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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome😳
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: cute mayur

nice:)haha...luved the twins part!! cho cute

thankooooooooooooooo.. yaa...one mayu one nupu.hehehhehe😆
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: AMMY LUVS RIDZ

awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome😳

OH MY sweety.....tht's so cute janu..
thankooooooooo piyu..hope it staisfied u......esp mayur....😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome update..... plz continue k... luvd mayur part .... 😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
AWWWWWWW..................such a SWEET update.....muahhh nihu di kya baat hai......best part mayank and nupur phone convo....LOL.....WANT MOREEE!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
please update soon loved the update
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Posted: 16 years ago
😆😆😆...the last scene was the best!!!! they should really have that in one episode of mjht...it would be rocking!!! loved sajan and mayur's romance and the bache part 😆 haha...how cute!! looking forward to reading more 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
tht was sooo damm amazinggggggg i love it plzz contuied soon

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