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Posted: 15 years ago
i'm very happy
finally sujal realise his mistake
hope ki kash mil jaye
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome part dear really cute cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow very emotional update. loved it.each and every emotion of kashish was described well . hope they reach kashish before she boards the plane. cont.soon
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
oh awesome update..i felt like crying 4 the mails she had sent...plz update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Fantastic update...
Pintu did knock sence into sujal....Kashish's emails very emotional....if only Suajl had reas them earlier. Hope he stops her from going.
please continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago

Pintu aur sujal dono sujal ki gaadi mein baithte hain.

He speeds up his car as much a he can.

p-arre arre kya kar rahe ho marvaoge kya?

s-arre pohonche nahi to waise hi marr jaunga !

atlast they reach the airport.

s-kahan hai teri di?

p-mujhe kya pata, dikh to rahi nahi hai andar chali gai hogi !

s-damn !

sujal bhaagke starts going in.

security-sir your ticket.

s-se i..i don't have a ticket listen. I gotta stop someone its urgent..i..

sec-no sorry sir, sir please leave.

s-no i..

sec-sir you have to leave!

s-but..

tabhi pintu aa jaata hai.

p-arre faltu magaj-maari kyun kar rahe ho? Di ko phone karo naa ! dimag kaam nahi kar raha kya

s-oh i…[jaldi se he dials her no.]

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As she is heading the baggage checking, her phone rings.

k-excuse me! 1 sec my phone

wo bag se phone nikaalti hai.

Sujal ka no. dekhti hai.

s-come on come ! pick the phone.

Kashish phone ki taraf dekhe jaa rahi hai, she doesn't know what to expect, samajh nahi paa rahi phone uthaye ya naa uthaye.

Atlast she hesitantly picks up the phone.

k-emm..hello…

phone uthate hi he abruptly speaks up.

s-KashishILoveYouPleaseDontGo !

pintu sujal ke peeche se bolta hai.

s-arre saans to le le bhai !

k-wh..what?

s-emm..i..i..said..kashish..kashish wo..wo baat…

kashish achanak se sujal ko saamne khadi hui dilh jaati hai, baggage ki line mein.

He is almost bursting with happiness after finally locating her.

s-KASHISHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

phone pe itni zor se chikha ki kashish bechari ke to kaan ke parde hi phatt gae, she looks over her shoulder & finds him standing.

Kashish ke saath saath airport ke saare ke saare log bass sujal ko hi dekh rahe hain.

He has a foolish ear to ear grin seeing her.

He waves to her foolishly.

s-KASHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIISHHHHHHHH !!!!!!!!!!!

a smile comes on her lips seeing sujal look cutely foolish.

Kashish ko hasta hua dekhke to jaise sujal ke lie puri duniya ruk si gai ho.

s-KASHISHHHHHHHHHHHH !!!!!! I LOVE YOUUUUUUUUU !!!!!!!

she cant believe her ears.

She looks down as her cheeks turn from pinkish hue to rosy red.

The airport has gone completely silent.

Everyone is wondering what will happen next.

Sujal jumps over the steel railing & reaches her.

Bilkul saamne aake khada ho jaata hai kashish ke.

She is still looking down as feeling too shy to look up.

s-kashish ! kya main isko haan samjhun?

She is still looking down, she is so filled with emotions that she is finding it hard to find words to express herself.

s-kashish, come on. Haan keh do. Itna time thodi lagate hain. Abhi shaadi karni hai , bachche paida karne hain, aise kaise tum? Dekho aise to puri raat waste kar dogi tum, to hum dono…

kashish sujal ko ankhen dikhati hai.

k-chup ! besharam !

he takes both her hands in his hand.

He looks into her eyes with his passion & love oozing eyes.

s-i love you !

he bends down upon his knees.

s-you know what, all these years were like death. I was dying without you. It was like slow poison. I cant feel happiness , cant feel life without you. Will you please save me? Will you be mine, forever & ever? Will you be my wife, Mrs Kashish Sujal Garewal? Will you marry me?

The emotions of her heart were rolling down her cheeks, as her heart was overflowing with emotions.

She tries he level best to form a word but her emotions are to much to be expressed in words.

She just nods her head.

He smiles as he feels today he is the happiest man ever.

He plls her into his arms & embraces her tightly & safely in his arms.

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Posted: 15 years ago
omg did u finish it, i wanted some romance between them........there's been too much rona-dhona. thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 15 years ago
dnt worry epilogue is left
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Posted: 15 years ago
too good waiting for the epilogue
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Posted: 15 years ago
It's awesome yaar..woh dono mil gaye.. I love the way Sujal said "agar pohcha nahe toh marr he jaoga"..
Aur jab woh phone pe Kashish chilata hai.. Vahh yaar woh scene mere imagination mein kitna cute lag raha hai kya batao..
And when he said abhi shaadi karne hai..bache paida karne hai.. Woh line b bohat achi..
Saare lines, saare words, sab kuch bohat he sweet tha..
But what yaar story khatam????.. Nahi!! Please jaldi se new fic likhna start kardo..becoz living without reading ur fic is like slow poison..😉
Love Ya..

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