Jeevan Saathi- AR-Part 5 Pg.1 | 11/25/08 - Page 9

Originally posted by: jia..

Anita!! 🤗

God wat an update!!! Loved the clash and Ridz telling him off casually!! Poor girl was in for a surprise......and in the scene i have to admit you set up the background brilliantly......the office staff looking stunned and Ridz carrying on without bothering.....

Riddhima stared at the man in disbelief as the office staff looked at the tension brewing up between the two and felt pity towards the girl as she was going to get a handful today.

'How rude,' said Riddhima as she pulled herself up after collecting her files on the floor. 'First off, you bump into ME, Riddhima Gupta, and then instead of giving me a hand and helping me up, you give me a lecture?' she said as she narrowed her eyes at the man while pointing her finger at him.

Awesomely created scene girl!! Way to go......👏

And Armaan's outburst......haha gave me a shudder too...poor Ridz....

But oh well she got the job and i really loved the fact that you depicted him not bringing professional and personal issues....great scene yet agan. The way you penned her getting scared was excellent girl!!👏

Convo with Muskaan again very naturaland flawless but my favourite scene has to be Rahul-ARmaan interaction...annd before that Armaan thinking.....Anita u left me stunned with the way u penned his thoughts...hats off to u.....

He took out his wallet from his pocket and opened it, turning his attention to the picture displayed in it, as he continued walking. It was a picture of him and Anjali when they were together. It was a Kodak moment picture. Armaan sat with Anjali on his lap in the small cubicle of the photo-booth where he gave her a surprise kiss right on the cheek when the picture snapped. Anjali's mouth was wide-open as Armaan had a mischievous grin on his face as he kissed her on the cheek. He still vaguely remembers how much he irritated Anjali due to his naughtyness and childish behavior, but in the end of it all she loved it; She loved his childish habits. How he missed these moments'Now the best he could do to relive these moments was to reminisce about them and wander back down memory lane. Nothing would ever replace these wonderful memories no matter how hard everyone tried. They were the only cherishing thing he had in his life. These memories would teach him to live eventual

I loved ^^^ that. its was flawlessly outstanding Anita....poor guy is so hurt....wish we cud just heal the pain......quickly and fast......lets see how u make Ridz heal the tender wounds...u will do a fab job i am sure....will be waiting. Brilliant update yet aagain.....and i wud appreciate a pm Anita...though i will ofcourse make sure i catch up on ur updates without fail...still dun wanna miss out.......

love
Jia

hey sweety..whn u ll update??

Originally posted by: aarora

hey sweety..whn u ll update??

Originally posted by: jia..

Wohooooo an update tonite?? OMG *rubbing hands with glee*😆

now that ur Sats r done (O btw how were they??? I am sure u r gonna do fab) we can get updates sooner nahi??? I am dying to see the khadoos boss melting...hehe.

Originally posted by: anitamalik

LMAO Jia!🤣 Yeah, hopefully tonight..I think I can finish it up..I just have finishing touches to put on the update..lol...

SAT's were alright...Not bad...lol...Thanks for asking about them Jia...I just hope my score improved from the first time I took it... Thanks for best wishes!😳

LOL...I wish I could type out a update per day...LOL...That would make me happy and you all happy too...Hopefully, I can update sooner and more frequently as time goes by and holidays nearing up in November for Thanksgiving!

LOL--I want to see khadoos boss melting too...