Jeevan Saathi- AR-Part 5 Pg.1 | 11/25/08

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Rimli

@-Rimli-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#61

its an awesmeeeeee part anita

plz do cont soon

cant wait for the nxt part

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swetha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#62

dont forget me to add ur pm list,so emotional update in last and i really like the convo may be fight of AR

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Natasha

@Ladoo645

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Posted: 16 years ago

#63

Wowerz! I read all parts and impressed!! Ridz crashin into Armaan was funni lol Can't wait for the wedding!

-Nats

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Jodubai

@Jodubai

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#64

HI Anita,

Superb part! I didn't expect Arman to give her the job after that argument, but guess, he is professional in that manner

Rahul's efforts to get him moving in life is so touching, he is a true friend & I hope Aramn see's his true love soon.....maybe in Rahul/Muski's wedding

Do pm me for updates, I am reading both your FF's

love

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Robin

@Robin_M

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Posted: 16 years ago

#65

aww my heart really goes out to armaan, poor guy is miserable without anjie...but rahul is right, i hope he recognizes love when it comes...hope he gives ridz a chance!

omg their encounter was crazy! cant believe she yelled at her own boss! haha i can imagine how embarassed and nervous she must have been!

well i really liked the part, its going at a good pace, we cant have armaan suddenly have feelings for her, its gonna take time. and i would love to recieve a PM for both your ffs when u update :)

continue soon!

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Sona

@Sona_25

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#66

very well written....

really liked it...

cont soon & thxx alott 4 da pm

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aarora

@aarora

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Posted: 16 years ago

#67

hey amazing part as always..luvd it..bt poor armaan..

update soon..n plzz PM me whnvr u update..

luv ya..

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Tanasha

@tanasha1993

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Posted: 16 years ago

#68

thanks a lot for the PM anita;D

ridzy was so funny...loved her outburst than her guilt

and armaan must get goin in life like rahul said

do cont soon

love

tanu

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prerna

@prernawaghray

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#69

hey
nice part
um looking forward for the wedding

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Jia

@jia..

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+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#70

Anita!! 🤗

God wat an update!!! Loved the clash and Ridz telling him off casually!! Poor girl was in for a surprise......and in the scene i have to admit you set up the background brilliantly......the office staff looking stunned and Ridz carrying on without bothering.....

Riddhima stared at the man in disbelief as the office staff looked at the tension brewing up between the two and felt pity towards the girl as she was going to get a handful today.

"How rude," said Riddhima as she pulled herself up after collecting her files on the floor. "First off, you bump into ME, Riddhima Gupta, and then instead of giving me a hand and helping me up, you give me a lecture?" she said as she narrowed her eyes at the man while pointing her finger at him.

Awesomely created scene girl!! Way to go......👏

And Armaan's outburst......haha gave me a shudder too...poor Ridz....

But oh well she got the job and i really loved the fact that you depicted him not bringing professional and personal issues....great scene yet agan. The way you penned her getting scared was excellent girl!!👏

Convo with Muskaan again very naturaland flawless but my favourite scene has to be Rahul-ARmaan interaction...annd before that Armaan thinking.....Anita u left me stunned with the way u penned his thoughts...hats off to u.....

He took out his wallet from his pocket and opened it, turning his attention to the picture displayed in it, as he continued walking. It was a picture of him and Anjali when they were together. It was a Kodak moment picture. Armaan sat with Anjali on his lap in the small cubicle of the photo-booth where he gave her a surprise kiss right on the cheek when the picture snapped. Anjali's mouth was wide-open as Armaan had a mischievous grin on his face as he kissed her on the cheek. He still vaguely remembers how much he irritated Anjali due to his naughtyness and childish behavior, but in the end of it all she loved it; She loved his childish habits. How he missed these moments…Now the best he could do to relive these moments was to reminisce about them and wander back down memory lane. Nothing would ever replace these wonderful memories no matter how hard everyone tried. They were the only cherishing thing he had in his life. These memories would teach him to live eventual

I loved ^^^ that. its was flawlessly outstanding Anita....poor guy is so hurt....wish we cud just heal the pain......quickly and fast......lets see how u make Ridz heal the tender wounds...u will do a fab job i am sure....will be waiting. Brilliant update yet aagain.....and i wud appreciate a pm Anita...though i will ofcourse make sure i catch up on ur updates without fail...still dun wanna miss out.......

love
Jia

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