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Posted: 16 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: Kiran_1

Awesome update 👏

Kanya's such a brat 😉
Ranbirs line never judge a book by its cover, is kitaab ka cover to bohot sunera tha, lekin kitaab fullto bakwas, never want to read it again! totally cracked me up 😆😆😆
Hope he sorts Kanya out
Shanaya seems like Kanyas carbon copy
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue sooooooooooooooon 😛

Thanksz😉 yeh i guess you should never judge a book from its cover!😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: miss.sonia

goshhhhhhhh pehli nazar mein pyaar
or doosri mulakat me nafrat
shit shit shit!!!!!!!!!!!!
kiya kiya kya kiya kya kiya re sanam(lol)
ok but what kanay feels at that moment
i feel that too
it was like i was in her place and i begin to hate him
and that line:
never judge a book by its cover, is kitaab ka cover to bohot sunera tha, lekin kitaab fullto bakwas, never want to read it again!
soo good it really true i had that thing once😳

yeah, he saw her and fell in love when he knew her he hated her!😆😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: spate22

I read this before I going to sleep because I just had to read it!!! Even if I had to sleep late!!!😆 I was surprised that you updated!!!😲 Rankan had their bad encounters!!!!😆 I bet there will a

World War 3 happening in college!!!😆 I can't believe he followed her to the bathroom even though he was turned off by her behavior earlier!!! That kind of gives me hope in the future for Rankan!!😉 I can't wait to read what happens next!!😃 Please update soon when you can!!!
Shreya

thanks, and yeh he feels something for her he doesnt know why but he loves to argue with her, he needs to ask himself, Kya yehi pyar hai? will update in a bit!😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: stars_shine*

awesom part

continue soon

Thanks will update in a bit!😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: punjabi.princes

great update

continue soon!

Thanks im glad you liked it!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: patel12345

nice update
plz update soooooooooooooon

Im glad you like it, next update will be in a while😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanx! im glad you like it!😉😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks alot! for all the awesome comments! i really appreciate it! im glad you all liked it well heres the next update for all you awesome people out there who read and comment on my FF!😉😳
Edited by nadz_J - 16 years ago
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Update 7

Kanya goes home.

K: hello everyone!
H: hey di, you look really excited,

P: ya kinda unusual in India. [laughs]

K: hah very funny, and harry first of all, im not your di, it sounds too old whats up with u? di and all? and second yep im really excited I got a new friend, and we are goin to the disc tonite!

H: okay KK, well that s cool, im also going to the disco with friends but dunno if it?s the same.

K: lets hope its not, anyways guys got lotsa things to do, see ya!

Kanya goes to the room to choose clothes. Her mom follows her.

Pam: Kanya, tu yahan nayi hai, akeli kaise jaa sakhti hai?

Just then mansha enters.

M: aunty main Kanya di ke saath jaa sakhti hoon, lekin aapko mamma ko samjaana hoga.

Pam: haan, yeh theekh rahega, main teri maa, ko kuch bhi kehdoongi. Don?t worry.

M: yes!! Hope you don?t mind Kanya di?

K: im cool with it! and plz call me KK.

They both go to the room to get dressed,

[Okay I just saw Shah Rukh on view asia and im soooo excited, cant think of anything else he looked sooo cuteeee!!!!!]

They both get dressed into decent clothing and take a bag with the other clothes ;-). They go to the nearest shopping mall and get changed their. Kanya wears the following.

http://image1.indiaglitz.com/hindi/wallpaper/ACTRESS/PreityZinta/Prity2304_800_1.jpg

And manshaa wear the following!

http://www.orbclothing.ca/database/images/display/sb467bfddbc8941.jpg

Kanya fones shanaya and tells her that they are at the coffee shop, she must pick them up their. Kanya and manshaa sit in a coffee shop to have coffee.

M: first time I?m going to the disco on a Friday night, wow its awesome, kabhi kabhi chup ke jaati thi, but today its cool!

K: KK ke saath rahogi to u?ll always benefit.

M: yep, got that ryt!

They both order cold coffee. Just then Ranbir is screaming and joking with his friends he enters the coffee shop. He sits on the table next to them.

R: oh no not you again!
Kanya turns and sees him.

K: oh god, tum mera picha kab chodoge?

R: [laughs] main tumhare piche? Please itne sarewe jokes mat mara karo koi sun lega to tumhe pagal khane bheg dega!
K: just shutup, why are you talking to me?

R: I like making girls like you see their own standards.

K: how dare u? mujhe mere standards matt sikhao, pehle apne standards dekho, just look what you are wearing, EWWWW!

Ranbir stands up and goes up to her. She also stands.

R: eh, if you don?t know, hazaron ladkian mere piche hain.

K: sach kaha tumne, woh sab tumhare piche isiliye hain, take tumhe pakar ke pagal khane mein dal sagein.

R: how dare u!

K: I know, I know sachayi kadwi hoti hai, but its true,

R: just shut up, you bloody chipkali!

K: hhhahaaaa, What did you just call me???

R: phir se suna chahti ho, well here goes, chipkali, chipkali, chipkali?

K: just shut up! You stupid donkey,

R: bandaria

K: Monkey!

R: chuhiya!

K: Bull!
R: Pagli!

K: Mental!

R: angrezi pagal! [laughs and walks away]

K: hhaaa, how rude, she wants to go and slap him she goes behind him, and suddenly slips and he turns and sees her and holds her in his arms. They both look at eachother with a cold vibe,

R: [thinking and smiling] ghusse mein bhi kitni khoobsurat lakti hai, na? but she is so ghamandi!

K: stop staring at me and leave me!

R: are you sure?

K: of course who wants to be in your arms?

R: okay [and while saying this he leaves her and she falls]😆

Everyone starts laughing!🤣

K: [on the floor] haaaa, [frowning] how dare u?

R: tumne hi to kahan, leave me! So chod diya, have a nice day, bye! And he leaves.

K: bloody IDIOT, MONKEY, BULL, DOG, oh im gonna kill this guy!😡

M: [holding her laugh🥱] Come KK, lets go I think shanaya will be here!

K: ya, lets go. [shes still fuming and soo embarassed😡] us idiot ko to main chodoongi nahin.

They go and see shanaya outside.

S: hey Kanya! [looking at mansh] Hi? manshaa ryt?

M: yep, how do u know?

S: you are angads sis,

M: okay, now I know how.

S: just came recently but I keep info on everyone.

M: that?s nice.

K: hey shane! [frustrated😡]

S: sorry, howsit Kanya?

K: im okay can we leave now?

S: lets move!

They drive off and go to the disco. They enter the discotheque.

M: how come its so quiet?
S: well its my private party, still waiting for the guests.

M: oh cool, that?s so nice, can I call my friends? Please?

S: sure, go ahead.

Mansha calls up few of her friends and invites them. After a while manshas friends enter.

M: Yay, my friends are here, Thanks so much, will see u guys later.

K: okay, but take care, you are my responsibility!
M: will do! See ya!

K: shane, I just need to go to the girls room, to fix my hair and make up.

S: cool go ahead.

K: [looking in the mirror] us saandh ko to main, aisa maza chakhaoongi, I hate him! [she keeps blabbering and putting makeup in frustration, while saying all that]

She takes quite long while taking out all her frustration on the mirror. When she gets out she sees the disco is packed, and the party is grooving.

K: hey shane, your party looks quite happening!

S: Thanx! Come I?ll introduce you to some people. She takes her to a guy, KK, this is akash, and akash this is Kanya!

A: hi Kanya [puts his hand to shake]

K: she shakes, its KK!

A: KK, u can call me akki!

K: cool.

A: wanna dance?

K: sure.

Akash shah aka akki:

Played by jatin shah, hot and famous he is also in the same college but kanya and akki never came a cross each other, he is hot happening and a total womanizer. All he sees or knows is women!

S: you guys enjoy I?ll be back, in a bit!

They dance for a while and akki asks her out.

K: [shocked] that was quick, but yeah I wouldn?t mind giving it a try!

S: EVERYBODY, WELCOME TO Shanaya Kher?s Party. I?ve kept this party for all the friends I?ve made and the people I wanna make friends with. I hope you all are enjoying!

Everyone: YESSS!!!

S: Well because it is Shanaya khers party we are going to make it different so guys get ready for it!

Everyone: WHOOOOOOO!!!

S: I like it! I?ve wrote down names of all the guys on these chits, and I want the girls to come and pick a guys name then they will dance with that guy till the end of the party, isn?t that cool?

Everyone: WHOOOOOO!

S: very good, well then girls come up! And one more thing no cheating if you don?t like the guy you still have to continue dancing with him, don?t be a spoilt sport. Okay. Come on girls!

All the girls go get their match then Shanaya calls Kanya and she picks a chit,

K: RANBIR NANDA! No way, u must be kidding, is he here? And if he is im not dancing with that idiot.

S: c?mon KK, you cant do that! Ranbir, are you here? Please come on the stage!

K; yes! Hes not here, im so happy can I pick another?

S: oka?.

R: hey Shanu!

S: Ranbir, they both hug! So u know what the game is, ryt Rambo?

R: yep, I have to dance with?. This chipkali [whispers]

K: [frowns] shane im out of here!

S: c?mon kk.

R: its okay shane shes scared of me.

K: hey, KK is not scared of anyone, do u get that? And certainly not a idiot like you!

R: oh really, lets see how you dance.

K: we will see [raises eyebrows]

R: [winks at her]

They go and start dancing, Ranbir and Kanya look at eachother with disgust and Ranbir keeps pulling her here and there to just irritate her. [just like he did when they were in goa]

S: okay, everyone, hope you enjoying with your partners!

Everyone: YEAHHHH!!!!

S: so now is the second segment, its raining guys, yes u guessed it ryt, its gonna be rain dance! They open the showers and everyone is wet.

Kanya absolutely loves rain and cant resist it, she forgets everything when she dances in the rain, at the moment she also forgot Ranbir was there irritating her.

She opens her hands and looks up and starts going round.

Ranbir sees her and gets lost in her, shes looking beautiful with her hair all wet and she looks so sweet and innocent far from the KK she pretends to be.

AA AA AA AA AA AA AA AA AA AA AA AA AA AA AA AA AA AA AA AA AA

He just keeps staring at her with so much love in his eyes.

Na hai yeh pana, na khona hi hai,

He Starts thinking looks down then looks back up!

Har ghadi saans ati hai, zindagi kehlati hai. Tumse hi, tumse hi!

She is splashing water and dancing he gets Flashbacks of the time he saw her with a puppy, then having ice cream and then with a scarf at the mandir.

Ankhon mein ankhein teri, baahon mein baahein teri,

He gets flashbacks of the time she was in his arms at the airport then at the coffee shop.

Main kahin bhi jaata hoon, tumse hi miljata hoon, tumse hi tumse hi!

Thinking about the times the argued.

Shor mein khamoshi hai, thodi si behoshi hai, tumse hi, tumse hi!

All he can see and hear is her! Thinking why is he feeling like this?

Raaste miljaate hain, manzilein miljati hain, tumse hi, tumse hi!

AA AA AA AA AA AA AA AA AA AA AA AA AA AA AA AA AA AA AA AA AA

Kanya gets a grip of her self, shes a little embarrassed thinking that everyone was looking at her behaving childish and turns to see Ranbir.

K: tum abhi bhi yahan ho?

R: hmmm? [still looking at her]

K: what?

R: kuch nahin

K: then why are you looking at me like that?

R: because I think you are not what you try to show that you are!

K: [confused] Meaning? [raising eyebrows]

R: well, I think from inside you are also sweet but just to keep a rep you try to be mean and arrogant but you also like these small small things, that make you happy!

K: Whatever, and I am what I am, okay I don?t show something apart from myself, this is me!

R: no, this is KK. That was Kanya!

K: you are mad! Anyways, im out of this party.

R: but we didn?t dance yet!

K: better luck next time. [saying this she walks away]

She calls mansha.

K: mansh, are you done?

M: yep, I?ll be out in a min!

K: cool!

Ranbir also goes out.

R: so, going home eh?

K: [looks at him in a ?so?, kinda look]

R: kaise jaa rahi ho?

K: chal ke [being sarcastic] obviously taxi!

R: Mumbai mein, akeli ladki woh bhi itni khoobsurat bheegi bhagi ladki, its not safe!

K: how does it matter to you? You don?t have to worry, I know how to look after myself!

R: main to sirf insaaniyat ken ate keh raha hoon, warna mujhe bhi chipkalion se bohot chir hai!

K: [looks at him and frowns] just go!

R: okay, bye!

Mansha comes out.

M: kk, cant we stay for a while?

K: no mansh im tired!
M: can I stay?

K: not alone!

M: but bhayya bhi hain, hes also here.

K: okay let me speak to him.

She phones angad.

A: hello.

K: angad are you at shanayas party?

A: yep!

K: okay, mansh is also here im going home, please pick her before you come and look out for her!

A: cool, will do!

K: okay, njoy. Bye!

A: bye!

K: okay mansh you can stay but be back with angad okay!

M: cool, thank you! Bye!

K: bye!

Kanya starts walking alone; there are no taxis to be seen, so she decides to walk further.

Just then some drunkards come her way and start chehring her. She tries all she can to drive them away also her karate skills don?t work. They start touching her and she doesn?t know what to do, they also tear her jacket, just then Ranbir is passing there and goes there. So they all run away seeing him.

K: [really embarrassed as he warned her] she looks up and down for a while. Thanks!

R: [grins] its okay! Should I drop you?

K: [doesn?t say anything, she tries to cover the torn part]

Ranbir sees her attempt to hide her torn shirt so he takes out hes jacket and puts it on her.

K: thanks! Ek baat poochoon?

R: go ahead!

K: tumne meri jaan kyun bachayi? Tum mera picha kar rahe the na?

R: haan, because mujhe pata tha tum jaisi bewakuff ladki aise jamele mein zaroor phasegi. Aur maine yeh sab insaaniyat ke nate kiya!

K: tum side se baat nahin kar sakhte? [fuming because he called her bewakuff]

R: nope! [winks]

K: kahan phas gayi?

R: kya kaha?

K: kuch nahin! Tumhare paas ghadi nahin hai?

R: ya lets go, ill drop you.

They both sit in it and go. On the way they have several arguments!

K: thanks, bye! [in a arrogant way]

R: bye! He drives off. Then he goes back. Shes still standing there deciding if she should go or not. He sees her. And gets out of the car.

R: ab tak khari ho?

K: she gets scared, because he came from the back. Tum, now what?

R: andar jao!

K: I cant like this, I forgot my bag in the mall.

R: oh, to yeh sab chup ke?

K: not really, its just dadi and shanta tai wont like it.

R: oh okay, that?s sweet, you care about their feelings, [raises his eyebrows and grins] come!

K: where?

R: I know a place where you can get decent clothes at this time.

K: okay!

They go to a shop and she buys some clothes there and changes. Ranbir drops her home.

K: thank you! I cant believe im saying this to u, but yeah thanks! [smiles]

R: take care, bye!

K: [smiles] BYE!

She goes in the house.

That?s it for now, what do you all think? Is kanya the same as kk? Or does she pretend to be her? Is he also sweet and caring and dreams of her prince charming? Will kanya fall in love so soon? Will ranbir understand that he loves her? What about nats when will the nats rannu love story start? Well all the answers are by me, but before I give them to you I need comments!!!!!

Edited by nadz_J - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Brilliant update
Kanya is acting kinda sweet with Ranbir
Now Akki is after Kanya I wonder how Ranbir will react
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soooooooooooon

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