AR FF~Set Ablaze~ part-14 page-110 28/07 - Page 68

fab parts krati!! the last bit was hot!! armaan for sure is planning something big...i loved his dialogues abt romeo-juliet...very well written👏👏👏 come back soon with next part plz...cant wait to read!!

thanks a lot for pm

-harika

Originally posted by: amna malik

Excellent part Krati........truly outstanding.

Loved the depth by which u described ridz character. Don't know y but its the first time i actually liked ridz in this FF. The Romeo Juliet scene was fab. Armaan's POV on love and then the kiss n hug......it all came together beautifully.

The end was totally amazing. Armaan making her look up to him and ridz smiling at him.......loved tht part.

Cont soon

Originally posted by: rajeev_crazy

hey awesome part krati,

wow really well written,

loved it and enjoyed reading it very much,

fantastic work babes,

especially the ending was super-awesome,

continue supersoon ,

tc,bye

Originally posted by: prernawaghray

hey kratz
wow maaaannnn
um blown bu this one
seriously what a sensual part yaaar
was trying to imagine shilpa in a black n red sari
n must say was truly mesmerized by her beauty
but what abt our dear karan???
do mention abt his outfit hun
this was a delight to read ... a splendid treat
loved it yaar
update soon

Originally posted by: dmgaddict

that was amazing

m new to ur ff and its really good!!!!!

cant wait for the next part

Originally posted by: Catwoman

great update love ur thoughts on RJ.... will when it comes down to the arguement its all about perception i guess and all.... the true love stories are never written about and we are inspried by fictions and myths...as the say!! Very true Kat...and yes it is about perception but i really don't beleive in RJ..somehow they seem fake to me...the only love story that ever appealed to me is of Anotny and cleopatra...that one seems true to me...the others seemed more like puppy love...anyways...

I guess we all want to be loved when it comes down to it....love Ridhima turmoil and all.... i guess we will see if Armaan is 'the one'. I'm still unclear about him as we progressing... Riddhima at the cross road its seams...

yeah...armaan is true or not that remains to be seen...am glad u liked the part.

Sam hmm still unsure about him as well.... Poor Monica is in the same boat!!

Anyway great update

Love Kat😳thanks a lot for the comment

Originally posted by: angullgrl91

hey! wow..u seriously did an amazing job w/ the part. and you seriously shouldnt doubt urself at all!!!! ur an amazing writer..and i think that every part you've written is awesome. i have a feeling that the last bit of this part will turn it to be a dream..part me wishes it is..and part of me wishes it isnt. but thats up to you to decide. anyways, cant wait for the next part =D

and thanks for the pm.

Originally posted by: aish_punk

Hey krati..howz u?? I loved d part...srry 4 commention soo late..!! I'm not a Romeo Juliet fan exactly but I believe that their love was eternal..n what Ridhimma was thinking wz absolutely wrong...I don like Abhimanyu even though he was right to a certain extent.. D moment btwn AR was masha-allah..!! There's definately somehting flying btwn them..obv it's a AR ff..!! The way Ridz screamed @ Samuel wznt gud..he luvz her..n he wz jus expressin it..!! ntn more..!! bt Ridz dusnt noe Samuel..v unnersan bt she shudnt hv hurt him @least...Monica truly luvz him n Samuel shud realize tat..!! They shud seirously hook-up Dis IF is really irritatin mee nw..!! itz nt allwn mee 2 press enter twice 😛...

hey..nw itz hppnin...hehe....kool....

waise I lykkd d way Ridz wz sturgglin wid her saree....tat wz cute..!!

D lst part wer dey lykk kiss..wz 😉...WOW!

Plzzz cont soon..

Thnx 4 d PM

Aish

Originally posted by: jia..

Kratzzzzzzz🤗


Me here now, though um ot supposed to be here....with two papers tom :(. But i cudnt resist putting it off till um done with exams! Considering how brilliantly ur conjuring the whole thing up.....um just at loss of words actually....a contradiction seeing um commenting nd if fail to make sense of the nonsense i just wrote.....pls excuse me and blame it on those two papers that have affected my brain deeply....ok i better shutup!! ahahha...jiaaaa!!!!😆


The part...(coming back) it s just wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, omgosh i was like wat as that??? The RJ bit left me simply wide eyed frankly, the arguments omg for a minute reading it i actually forgot we were in set ablaze, the arguments were so powerful, so strong, so fabulously worded.......you guys did a terrific job i have to say, kudos to both of you!!
thanks so much jia....glad u liked it...finally my frustration over RJ found a vent...hehehe nd it was perfect....nj supporting them...me opposing so i pretty much had the whole thing with me...just had to edit a lil and was done with it...

So she finally has the feelings resurfacing?? Again brilliantly described, the dilema, the pain, the fright...everything!! And Armaan just seems to be intent on making her feel it......

Coming to Armaan, babes the guy is still a mystery, i mean besides his superficial attributes you havent really introduced him, wats his agend?? though thts wat adding the extra zing to this entire ff....um loving it, cant wait till u put all the cards on the table!!

yeah...i think i'll take a little time to reveal all the cards...u'll have to wait but gonna increase the pace of the story now....

Sammy-Monica scene was again hmm.....yep hmm...so he loves her to obsession or something?? Not liking him much....never was in favour anywas, haha, u know that right!! Lets see wat u do with him....

aah!i know i know...none of u supporting the poor guy...anyways...me is not gonna let the character fall soo soon...

The last bit...ahhhh um gonna zip my mouth o it now....letsjust wait and see wer u intend to take it. U r doing a fab job Kratz....and now i better shutup up for real before i blab more and bore u.....!! Love ya!!

thanks jia...loved the comment....love ya