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kash_lover

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Posted: 16 years ago

#211

very nice part!!

like it!!
upate soon!!

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Qwerty123rty

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Posted: 16 years ago

#212

Originally posted by: ashluvdmg

OH MA GUDNESS!!WAT A PART ,MANN!!
RELI IT WS AWSUM,SUPERB... N DE WY U HAV RITN ITS LIKE OUT OF DE WORLD ITS HARD 2 BLIEV RIDZ LIKE DIS... BT DIS IS TOTAALLY DIFFERENT FROM DE OTHR STORIES WUD LUV 2 READ DE OTHER PARTS ASAP....
KILLER UPDATE DEAR

CRAVIN 4 DE NXT UPDATE

N THX A TON 4 DE PM

LUV U LTS

ASHU

Hey Ashu…am glad you liked the part…and ya Riddz sort of different here and relief that u still like her char becoz its so in contrast with the sweet, angelic Riddhima…

Originally posted by: forevercharmed
omg i cant believe ridz did that!!!! it was an amazing part though!!!!!!!! when is something going to happen between AR?? ridz is attracted to him but anything else? how does he feel? pleaseeee continue soon!

Avanti

Thanks a lot Avanti am really glad you liked it. You'll see more of AR from the nxt part and as for the romance…attraction and stuff..guess you'll have to wait for that.

Originally posted by: nyla_193
amazing long part
omdays ridz is EVIL in this ff but i like lol
i was half expecting armaan to walk in lol dunno y tho hehe
great part as alwayz n thnx for the pm
plzz update soon
cnt w8 till this chat between AR about hotel

Hehehe…ya she is EVIl…Armi to walk in…okay I know he is the hero and all but he can't walk into ppl people's home just like that…lol..

Glad u liked the prt..

Originally posted by: aravi

OMG riddhima is horrible actually 😆😆 i mean wicked wud b an understatement for our heroine here!!!!!!! i pity john man he just had to fall yaar 😉 as she was so hell bent on seducing him no matter wat😉😉!!!!!!!!! but still armaan has an effect on our princess here 😳😳!!!!!!! it was killing cant wait 4 more !!!!!!!!!! dai jaan is rocking must say i mean she just noes riddhima so well !!!!!! god dis FF is gng places !!!!!!!! riddhima is really sumthing i mean she noes to control ppl !!!!!!!thnks 4 d PM n mam puhleeezz dis tym cont soonnnnnn!!!!!!!! hope u r well by now ???????
luv ya aravi

Hey Aravi

Am so glad you liked it....and ya Armi does have an effect on here..isn't that obvious..lol...everyone seems to be in love with Dai jaan here

thanks a lot for all the compliments and am glad u r liking it all...and am alright now..thank you.

Originally posted by: AngelicSoniya
awesum update...
very well written...cont soon

& thxx alott 4 da pm

Thanks a lot

Glad u liked it.

Originally posted by: samijan
gr8 part. continue soon!!!!!!!!

Thanks a lot

Originally posted by: x-Ridzzie-x
aaaaahhhhhhhh she knows how to do it alie....lol
i knw y u made da scene between ridz and john...i dont mind because dis is hw she iz lyk u said...

but cant w8 until armaan nd ridz light shows up..

thanks 4 da pm

luv ya

BleSS .x.

hehehe ya she knows how to get what she wants here..or who she wants...

oh man....thank you so much for saying that coz no body else liked the John- Riddz thing and i guess u the only one who understands that it was a crucial thing...

and ya there is going to be more of AR now.

Thanks a lot...glad u liked it

Originally posted by: prernawaghray
hey krati
gosh ridz is just too much of a schemer yaar
my god a devil's brain
seriously uve written it very well dear
loved it all
update soon

Hehehe….exactly, a devil's brain..

Thanks a lot

Originally posted by: saridena
hi krati
thks for the pm dear

superb part

this is totally concentrated on john and ridz

hope next there will be AR scenes more

i perfectly understand that ridz character is like that which will slowly change

update soooooooooooooooon

luv soumya

Hey Soumya……Glad u liked it. And ya there will be more of AR now..

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Posted: 16 years ago

#213

now wher hav u been young lady bin waiting lyk ages 4 u to update n wen to do im way 2 l8 in readin n commentin. anyways u disappearin mite hav dun wonders as ur update was fantastic, but dont do da disappearin act often(lol) well.. well wat can i say bout ridz shez got her way eventually even though it took longer than she anticipated. got to giv it dis girl she definately nutz if she iz willing to risk everything jus to cause pain in other peoplez lives, no matter how close they r 2 her. wat she needs it a good spankin 2 set her strait n i think we all no who dat person is RITE? hoping he'll bring her back from self destruction b4 its too late. once again an amazin update n do continue sooon

luv iram

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Qwerty123rty

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Posted: 16 years ago

#214

Originally posted by: Jodubai
Hi Krati,

Ok, I must admit I was a little taken aback when I read this part.....not cos you got Ridz & John doing it...but the extend to which Ridz could go about to destroying LOVE....she is so adamant & stubborn that she wants to destroy his love at any cost.....you really defined Ridz's character with this part....

taken aback...thats exactly wat it was supposed to do to you...hehehe...

Glad u liked it.

Originally posted by: kvn1983

waoh👍🏼 its really a nice⭐️ and sweet one😊😉 superb😊 so romantic😉 and hot one😳 plz continue it soon😊 and thanks for the pm😉

Hey Nidha thanks a lot

Originally posted by: angelnevelie
great update!!
cont soon

Thanks a lot

Originally posted by: aarora
hey sweety..sorry fr late comments bt exams goin on..amazing part..luvd it..bt ridzi is really wild..heehee..update soon..
thanx fr PM hun..

luv ya..

Thanks a lot..good luck for ur exams.

Originally posted by: chaiti!
hey nice part but yea i m definitely cursin u for where u left it !! i thot u wud make armaan cum instead of john n then ntn wrong wud happen in johns life !! so sad yaar!!!!!!! but anyway i know u must ve thot of what is gonna happen so ill just wait to read on!! tc!!!!!!

hehehe....its not a bollywood flick where hero always comes out of nowhere...lol...It was all planned so obviously it had to happen this way...Thanks a lot for the comment.

Originally posted by: aishar
hmm ridhima is realy ..um. .gr8 1 ! cont soon!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks

Originally posted by: saira_1
😲 amazing part krati👏👏👏!
i wish ridz wasnt so ruthless😭

hope you update soon😳

Thanks a lot

Glad u liked it.

Originally posted by: Catwoman
OMG this Rids is like so calulating hehehe

John ki izzat gayi!! LMAO

Great update ....

Love Kat

Thanks Kat...hehehe...ya John ki izzat gai and Riddz gonna make the most of it..

Originally posted by: rani 19
now wher hav u been young lady bin waiting lyk ages 4 u to update n wen to do im way 2 l8 in readin n commentin. anyways u disappearin mite hav dun wonders as ur update was fantastic, but dont do da disappearin act often(lol) well.. well wat can i say bout ridz shez got her way eventually even though it took longer than she anticipated. got to giv it dis girl she definately nutz if she iz willing to risk everything jus to cause pain in other peoplez lives, no matter how close they r 2 her. wat she needs it a good spankin 2 set her strait n i think we all no who dat person is RITE? hoping he'll bring her back from self destruction b4 its too late. once again an amazin update n do continue sooon
luv iram

Hey Iram thank you for the comment....sorry made you wait.

Am really glad u liked the part...

She is like this cause of the suffering that she had in her life...just trying to vent out her pain..

Thanks a lot

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Qwerty123rty

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Posted: 16 years ago

#215

Originally posted by: tanasha1993
mr winston shouldnt have fallen for her charm
i feel so bad for erika and his married life...as for ridz...she will change later on so no worries there and hopefully erika and john will some how patch up after she finds out abt it all...anyways...do cont soon krati...lved the part;D

love

tanu

Thanks Tanu

I know...erika wasn't at fault nor was john but both will suffer in a way.

Originally posted by: xxlibragurlxx
Hey...thks for the pm...I wish you make ridz fall in love with armaan soon so she'll stop acting like a b****...great part cont soon...

Thanks

Originally posted by: cute_unknown_fr
interesting........
very nic epart yaar

thanx fo rpnm

Thanks

Originally posted by: Robin_M
omg i sooo hate riddhima right now! she is sooo evil! and you are doing a fabulous job portraying this dark character of hers! hats off to you krati!!!!!!!
awsome part, its been a while since u updated, so it was great to read! continue soon!

Thanks a lotttttt.....i know she is really bad...u must hate me bad for making her like this but than thats a part of the story but glad u enjoyed reading it.

Originally posted by: krazyboutkaran
hey!
nice part.....hated wat ridz did to john but i guess dats how she is....

looking forward to ar scenes...😃

nd thanx for d pm...😊

urvi

Thanks Urvi

Originally posted by: angullgrl91
wow! definitely awesome part! ur such a good writer!!!!
nd u describe everything so nicely..i cant totally imagine everything going on. lol..gr8 part!

Thanks a lot

Originally posted by: Ladoo645
What a come back! You portrayed Ridz 'blacken' dill perfectly!

Excellent update

-Natasha

Glad u liked it.

Originally posted by: twinkle94
hey i luved it do cont soon! thnx 4 tha PM/update!

❤️twinkle!

Thanks

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Qwerty123rty

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Posted: 16 years ago

#216

Originally posted by: meow23
update soon

Will start the part today and mite update either later today or tom.

Thanks

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Qwerty123rty

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Posted: 16 years ago

#217

Originally posted by: pwincess kanzi
really intestin prt krati! i lked it! i jst cnt imagin riddhima doin all dis! its so unbelievable! lol! i wnder how she is gona fall in love wid armaan at this state! bt i m sure sumfnk amzin and extraordinary lke always is cookin in ure computer lke mind! lol! i just cnt w8 2 read ure nxt prt! plz do cntd asap! i ill be despratly w8in lke always dear! plz do cntd asap and thank u tons 4 d pm1 i really do appricate it!

Thanks a lot Kanan sweety...i know hard to imagine her doing all this..i don't know if the story i hv is nything amazing or not coz thats for u to decide...my seal of approval😉...

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes
superb, wow! i love this gray shaded character of riddhima!

looking heaps forward to when ridz falls for armaan!

Thanks a lot...glad u liked it...u r one of the very few ppl who liked riddz character.

Originally posted by: mahi4u
hey

wowwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

luks lik ridz ka dimag jelousy sey bhar gaya hai🥱 kya kya kar rahi hai😕

but.................................. grt prt 😉

cont super sooooooooonnnnnnnnnnn

luv ya n tak care
mahru

Thanks Mahru...glad u liked it so much...and i know hard to imagine our sweet riddz in this new avtar but i wanted to experiment with something new...i am loving writing this one...

Originally posted by: amna malik
Tht was gr8 krati. It was hard to imagine riddhima in tht kind of character but u did a fab job. Still, would like to see some more AR interactions.

waiting for the next update

Thanks a lot. U'll see more of AR from the nxt prt...not romane but ya their scenes are going to be there.

Originally posted by: jia..
OMGGGG Krati!!! that was brilliant girl!!!

Wats most striking is Riddhima's character here, its so outstandingly portrayed!! U deserve standing ovation for it. I know its a ruthless, cold side, anyone will hate but i believe ur doing a mindblowing job portraying it!!! Hats off to u girl!!!

So she succeeded with John.....i can very well see the hatred, filled in her, the urge to destroy everything she wants to or wishes to be destroyed......the way u described her was outstanding!!!!

And dai jaan....her character is fab too,....ofcourse the slow attraction between AR.....great going girl.....waiting eagerly for the next....ur taking this amazingly......

Thanks so much Jia. Glad u liked it so much. Your comment always makes me feel so good and positive about my writing...it makes writing worth it..

everyone seems to be in love with dai jaan..

Thanks again

Originally posted by: swansea
amazing part karti di
loved it sooooooooooooo much

toooooo gooood

plz continue sooon

Thanks a lot

Originally posted by: meow23
gr88 prt.. luvd every bit of xplanation n d minute details.. wid full perfection u hav written.. n gt 2 tel u itz deifferent frm d rest of ur ff's..
luvd d prt.. thnxxx 4 d pm... update soon

Thanks sooooo much...am glad u liked it.

Originally posted by: rhama2
ya i understand what u want to portray ridzie's ablazing character
but plz plz bring the romance bet armaan and ridzie
as we people wait to read ur wonderful ff
plz dont feel bad
just a suggestion
anyway's cruel ridzie as usual setting blaze!!!

love:
aishwarya

p.s. thanks for the pm

Thanks a lot

You'll have to wait for the AR romance coz i just can't throw it in like that...i have to develop the story for that...hope you enjoy the parts till than.

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Misha Rai

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Posted: 16 years ago

#218

Hiya Krati!

Im Riddhima n was a silnt reader of this i gotta say hats off to yhuu!

Vahh kya baat hai1

Meri toh neend hi churali

plz pm me wen writng the nxt part

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Veronica

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Posted: 16 years ago

#219

hey krati!! i just read 2 of ur ff's already--The Painful Side of Love and In Love with the Enemy and they r awesumm!!! i just got to know abt ur 2 other ones and since i had time only to read 1 and decided to read this 1 and ur ideas are just the best, ur ff's are the most mature and sensitive 1's well thats wat i feel...4 ff's isnt an easy thing HATS OFF TO YOU!!! this ff is awesumm too!! plz cont sooooonn!!!

love u!
--Anjali

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Qwerty123rty

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Posted: 16 years ago

#220

Originally posted by: vcaobi
hey krati!! i just read 2 of ur ff's already--The Painful Side of Love and In Love with the Enemy and they r awesumm!!! i just got to know abt ur 2 other ones and since i had time only to read 1 and decided to read this 1 and ur ideas are just the best, ur ff's are the most mature and sensitive 1's well thats wat i feel...4 ff's isnt an easy thing HATS OFF TO YOU!!! this ff is awesumm too!! plz cont sooooonn!!!

love u!
--Anjali

Hey Anjali

Thank you so much for the comment and am really glad u liked my FF

Originally posted by: DMG4EVER
Hiya Krati!
Im Riddhima n was a silnt reader of this i gotta say hats off to yhuu!

Vahh kya baat hai1

Meri toh neend hi churali

plz pm me wen writng the nxt part

Thanks a lot Riddhima and am glad u commented.

hehehe....i didn't know that the FF is this good....thanks.

Will surely PM u wenever i update.