AR FF~Set Ablaze~ part-14 page-110 28/07

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Tanasha

@tanasha1993

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#201

mr winston shouldnt have fallen for her charm

i feel so bad for erika and his married life...as for ridz...she will change later on so no worries there and hopefully erika and john will some how patch up after she finds out abt it all...anyways...do cont soon krati...lved the part;D

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Kinza

@xxlibragurlxx

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#202

Hey...thks for the pm...I wish you make ridz fall in love with armaan soon so she'll stop acting like a b****...great part cont soon...

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KAT

@Catwoman

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#203

OMG this Rids is like so calulating hehehe

John ki izzat gayi!! LMAO

Great update ....

Love Kat

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saira

@.x.Saira.x.

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#204

😲 amazing part krati👏👏👏!

i wish ridz wasnt so ruthless😭

hope you update soon😳

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aishar

@aishar

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#205

hmm ridhima is realy ..um. .gr8 1 ! cont soon!!!!!!!!!!

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chaiti!

@chaiti!

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#206

hey nice part but yea i m definitely cursin u for where u left it !! i thot u wud make armaan cum instead of john n then ntn wrong wud happen in johns life !! so sad yaar!!!!!!! but anyway i know u must ve thot of what is gonna happen so ill just wait to read on!! tc!!!!!!

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aarora

@aarora

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#207

hey sweety..sorry fr late comments bt exams goin on..amazing part..luvd it..bt ridzi is really wild..heehee..update soon..

thanx fr PM hun..

luv ya..

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Nidha

@nidha1983

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#208

waoh👍🏼 its really a nice⭐️ and sweet one😊😉 superb😊 so romantic😉 and hot one😳 plz continue it soon😊 and thanks for the pm😉

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Jodubai

@Jodubai

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#209

Hi Krati,

Ok, I must admit I was a little taken aback when I read this part.....not cos you got Ridz & John doing it...but the extend to which Ridz could go about to destroying LOVE....she is so adamant & stubborn that she wants to destroy his love at any cost.....you really defined Ridz's character with this part....

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aishwarya

@aish_punk

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#210

Hey...dude dis iz 1 of d best parts Ive eva read...I noe it mst hv taken a lot of effort 2 write dis...bt Hats off 2 u tat u cud carry it soo well..n I dunno if d IF rules wer broken or nt..... bt i feel dis part shud b allowed...

Ridhimma is a bit too stubborn...eva tho Fatima tld her nt 2 do wteva she wz gonna do...she jus dint bother...she iz evil maan!! she made John fall 4 her.... n it wznt gud 4 her 2 b rude 2 Armaan on d fone @ 1st...n she jus emerged wid a cocktail party... she wz totally crazy 4 John nw...I mean purposely spillin juice on him...n touchin d rong part n awl.. Nina is crazy...tho nt crazier than Ridhimma...she got 20 ppl alng wid her n called it a 'few'.Lol... I feel Armaanz a vry nyc guy as compared 2 Ridz...or maybe his evil side iznt bn revealed yet... n I seriously feel sad 4 Erika.... n gain she purposely punctured John's tire..a bit too lame...d lst prt wz damn sensous.... u potrayed it damn well n tat mst hv bn quite a lot of effort... she finally made John fall 4 her..awl dose efforts...n d lst prt..wz betta if it dint hpn...I wish it hadnt hppnd tho.... btwn AR wud b betta...Hehe....vry bad note 2 stp d part..Well l8z jus c wt hppns nxt....

Plzzzz cont soon.. I cnt w8 2 read more

Thnx 4 d PM

Aishwarya