AR FF~Set Ablaze~ part-14 page-110 28/07

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Jia

@jia..

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+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#141

Wohooooo Krati a brilliant update yet again!! OMG the way ur taking this......its great. The pace and flow is excellent!!

Loved the various interactions and mannerisms of different characters u brought into picture.....and the party picture u painted was outstanding!!

Ofcourse the AR interaction..the tension...the strong pull was excellently penned!! Krati ur going fab.....and Ridz character too ur developing marvelously...great guts....and i have to point a fact which i admire...that u didnt change Ridz character overnight as soon as she met armaan....that was outstanding!! kudos for that!!

Looking forward to next....continue soon. And do take care!!
love
Jia

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aishar

@aishar

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#142

mg it ws a n awesdome 1 !!!!!!!!!!!

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Shania

@x-Ridzzie-x

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Posted: 16 years ago

#143

ohh gosh....cnt believe you ended it..i wanted to read it untill the whole ff ended lol

i luv ridhimas character...too good..so inncocent nd sweet yet so evil nd bit*h lol

ahhh armaan cnt say nufink about him too good

luv da way to discribe wats going on ridz mind...mysteryous girl!!! lol

thnx 4 da pm

luv ya

ridz,

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Kinza

@xxlibragurlxx

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#144

poor riddima...but she doesn't have to punish everyone for some people's mistake...i hope she fells in love with armaan and vice versa then her family realises their mistake but she doesn't forgive them...that'll be good...great part...cont soon

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chaiti!

@chaiti!

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#145

hey dat was an awesome part!!! ridz n armaan already fallin for each other!!! awesome!! and i hope ridz does not do anythin wrong with the wiltons yaar!!!!!

cont soon n tc!!!!!!

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lakshmi

@meow23

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#146

LOT OF charachters n loads of mystery n suspense..
luvd d prt...
hope u better now..
thnxx, 4 d pm.. update ssoon

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Tanasha

@tanasha1993

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#147

ridz is a sad woman

sigh armaan must change her soon

she needs to see the beauty of life

and not the pain of betrayal\

great part krati

loved it to bits

do cont soon

and hopefully your injuries are healed soon

though I dont mind more updates;D

love

tanu

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360913

Suspended

Posted: 16 years ago

#148

hey krati gud 2 c u bak n wat an update cant believe ridz being such an evil b**** she is willin to destroy everyones happiness jus because she once livd thru sadness. hoping armaan can change her even through he has already become bessotted by her bt nt willing to accept jus yet. bt gt 2 say i lov this ridz as shez portrayin herself to b toooo confident n she believes she will always have an upper hand when it comes to playing these dangerous games.bt get da feeling it mite nt wrk dis tym round especially wen armaan is involved. do continue sooon

luv iram

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Qwerty123rty

@Qwerty123rty

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: spln
reserved ....sooooooo sorry krati....this delay is most unacceptable from me at least i know...il be back...with a lon detailed comment....

alright here i am at lonnnnnnnnnng last krati, apologizing for the delay again, fab part.....o boy ur so making me think like totally the way u wud want areader to considering the inspiration, n yet theres this inescapable krati touch to it (which is a compliment i assure u!!!)

it was awsome....the char of sara reminded me of a character too!!!i think ur pulling off the character sketch well for one of course, but the track by itself is going great guns, the whole concept is new n fresh, n the chars fit in so well just like u wud have wanted them to....ur doing a fab job hun!!!!

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was looking frwd to ur comment....and am sooooooooooooooooooooooo glad that you liked it...k "Krati touch" huh?...well good thing that you mentioned that its a compliment or else u had me thinking....

I knew Sara wud remind u of a character....

and thanks so much for all the compliment....

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Qwerty123rty

@Qwerty123rty

Inactive

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Posted: 16 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: rani 19
hey krati gud 2 c u bak n wat an update cant believe ridz being such an evil b**** she is willin to destroy everyones happiness jus because she once livd thru sadness. hoping armaan can change her even through he has already become bessotted by her bt nt willing to accept jus yet. bt gt 2 say i lov this ridz as shez portrayin herself to b toooo confident n she believes she will always have an upper hand when it comes to playing these dangerous games.bt get da feeling it mite nt wrk dis tym round especially wen armaan is involved. do continue sooon
luv iram

Thanks Iram

ya she is trying to make ppl suffer just the way she did so that she cud vent out some frustration.....she is evil...true.

am glad you liked the update.

Thanks