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Aishwarya

@Aishwarya..

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Posted: 16 years ago

#131

wow!!!

so u started another ff!!!

that was a part which was filled with boiling emotions from ridz side(of jealously) and from armaan's side (of attraction towards lust)

and the destructive thought which ridzs got twice in the part shows how much she was hurt from the her previous relationship and also how she wants to destroy other's happiness when they exprience love

was actally written so so beautifully

take care

can u pm me??

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aishwarya

@aish_punk

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+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#132

Hey krati... cute part... I really liked it... dis FF is lykk an ideal FF 2 read...

I dunno y Ridhimma is still bhnd married guys eva tho shes got Armaan!! Evrybudy is smitten by Armaan... eva Ridhimma bt she dusnt show it.. N Sara is a chweet character.. m nt surprised she also luvz Armaan..I knew Armaan had a chweet side 2 him n it wz cn in dis part... Armaan wz chweet 2 Monika...bt den ow can he call her d mst beautiful prsn wen Ridhimma wz der?? 😲 tatz y eva Monika dint unnersan!! Lol... bt newy tat got Samuel-Monika 2 dance n more imptntly AR also got 2 dance...

I was soo shocked wen Ridhimma got soo furious seeing John n Erika happy... I unnersan she wznt treated 2 happiness in her yesteryrs.. bt she shudnt b cursin odas happiness.... I don thnk she shud b doin dis..John n Erika r such a cute n happy couple... mayb eva she shud jus settle dwn wid Armaan lykk Neena advised her... shell b happy also!!

BTW if u can reveal hu wz tat guy hu cud actually dump "her"?? hu dared 2 do tat??😲

N ow did u fall 4m a horse?? shud hv a bn a bit more careful..I hope ure fine n d injuries r nt major... i don wan 2 c u heart eva if it means ull b able 2 update more... Get well soon!!

Plzzz cont soon.. nw tat ure lyin in bed..lol..JK..take ure time

Thnx 4 d PM..odawise I wud hv missd out such a gr8 part!!

Aishwarya

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aravi

@aravi

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#133

heyyy krati!!!!! welcome back sweety n read u hurt urself datz bad!!!!!! still GET WELLsooonnnnn!!!!!!!!!! but u really set d screens ablaze wid dis one gurl!!!!!!!! itz reaching heights hehe.... aww.. horse riding can really hurt am experienced newaz ridzy is tooo much here!!!!!!! but attraction b/w AR is inescapable !!!!!! u r impossible .......n obviously take rest n update sonnnn!!!!!!!! luv ya aravi

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Robin

@Robin_M

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#134

amazing part!!!! wow ridz has sooo much anger and hate in her, she went through so much pain and wants everyone to suffer! gosh thats so harsh! she should destroy the people who hurt her, not the ones that are innocent haha but thats what makes this ff so different! never seen ridz in such a role, it great! the dance scene with her and armaan was hot! they both are sooo attracted to each other! hehe wonder how long they will hold back till! awwww im sorry to hear u got hurt, bed rest is no fun! but at least u can update more! hope u get better soon! take care :)

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Nidha

@nidha1983

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#135

waoh👍🏼 really an awesome one⭐️ too gud😊😉 its mind blowing😊😛 so armaan and ridhima r together dancing😊😉😉 superb😉 plz continue it soon😊 and thanks for the pm😉

"Lehar ko pyar tha kinary se,
Par us ki shadi ho gaye sagar se,
Kinary ki chahat lehar ko khench lati hay,
Par badnaam na ho MOHABBAT is liye wo laut jaati hay"

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@spln

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+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#136

reserved ....sooooooo sorry krati....this delay is most unacceptable from me at least i know...il be back...with a lon detailed comment....

alright here i am at lonnnnnnnnnng last krati, apologizing for the delay again, fab part.....o boy ur so making me think like totally the way u wud want areader to considering the inspiration, n yet theres this inescapable krati touch to it (which is a compliment i assure u!!!)

it was awsome....the char of sara reminded me of a character too!!!i think ur pulling off the character sketch well for one of course, but the track by itself is going great guns, the whole concept is new n fresh, n the chars fit in so well just like u wud have wanted them to....ur doing a fab job hun!!!!

👏

Edited by spln - 16 years ago

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Glinda Elizabeth Kushero

@Ezria_Fan_4ever

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#137

what do i say krati,

im speechless,

this part was soo beautifully written , that im not getting the right adjective to describe ur work,

very well written

continue soon n thanks for the pm

Edited by rajeev_crazy - 16 years ago

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Kanzy

@pwincess kanzi

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#138

awsum prt krati di! lke always! i loved it d way u explained and described everyfnk, its excellent! ridz is so evil, destroying everyone's happy go lfe! i cn totally imagin everyfnk, as u lke described everyfnk so fantasticly! i love armaan and riddhima's dance, it was really romantic! i wnder wat is gona happen nxt, well its no point 4 me to wnder, ure jst extra ordinary and unpredictiable. yaar u hve a mind lke computer! plz do cntd asap, i cnt w8 till u do! how was ure camp? i m sure u'd enjoy it! i hpe the minor injuries u got, is recovered asap! cntd sn and thank u soooooooo much 4 d pm! i m really sorry 4 d late reply, bt 2 busy wid my borin hmwrk and stuff! lol! cntd sn!

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unknown cute

@yogzz

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#139

very nice part.......

thanx for pm

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prerna

@prernawaghray

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#140

hey krati
thanks for the pm sweety
well firstly hope ur fine after that accident n ya get well soon dear
after quite a long time how was ur vacation
must have enjoyed
awesome part dear
so finally ridz falling for armi
wohho
heheheh lolz
seriously loved their small interaction
n then why is she a bit evil yaar coz of her past doesnt mean that she ruins everyone's life naa
hope u change her character soon
n wow armi being nice n cute lolz
update soon

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