The Destiny updated pg. 145 part 23 - Page 6

Originally posted by: yyyy

wow nice update👏👏

Thanks darling😃

Raj fell for naina at first sight how nice.....i hope naina too agrees to marry raj..by seeing raj reactions i can surely say he will say yes to the rishta...

Haan vo to maan hi jaayegi aur Raj bhi.😉

What happened to naina's father..hope he is fine...

Let's see what happens.😛

Originally posted by: prerna1

ohhooo so that was love at first sight 😉

hehehehe😆

so nice u depict Raj's feelings so well after seeing Naina👏

Thanks darling.😳

Raj's Mom is so cool she knows that if Raj saw Naina then he surely say yes to marry her👍🏼

Haan un ko pehle se pata tha tabhi to bheja tha unhone Raj ko.😉

and now Raj will definately say yes to Naina

Hope so.😛

what happened to Naina's Dad😕

Dekho kya hua un ko.😕

plz continue soon

Originally posted by: varshita

Hey really amazing fic buddy. 👏

Really loved the way u expressed Naina's beauty.😳

Thanks Varshita dear.😳

I am touched by it.😉

Update was really awesome.⭐️

Thanks again dear.😛

Naina kitna miss karti hai na apne bhai ko yaar, kitnma roti hai us ko yaad kar k.😭

Koi bhi behan jis ka bhai aise chala jaayega aur vo us se pyaar karti hogi dukhi hogi hi.😭

Raj ki mom ka plan bhi bahut accha hai, hope so vo jaldi hi maan jaaye shaadi k liye.😃

Offcourse maan jaayega yaar.😉

Ye Naina k dad ki awaaz thi na?😕

Haan dekho kya hua un ko.😕

update soon yaar.

Originally posted by: *Rajeevian*

excellent👏.cont soon.........

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Thanks Shaina ji.😊

Raj ne Naina ko dekha aur dekhta hi rahe gaya!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Aur kho gaya!!!!😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Haan he was lost in her beauty.☺️

The lines describing Naina's beauty were too good!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏

Thanks darling.😃

But Naina ki ankhon mein kitna akelapan hai!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Haan us ne apna sab se jyada anmol cheej kho jo di hai na.😕

Raj ki mom ne usmein shagun bheja tha!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊Wow!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Un ko pata hai na ki ab un ka beta shaadi k liye maan hi jaayega.😊

She is right!!!!! Raj Naina ko dekhne ke baad haan zaroor karega kyunki Naina toh hai hi aisi ke usse pyaar ho jaye!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Hopefully haan.😳

Raj's mom is so clever!!!!!😊 😊 😊 👏 👏Good for her!!!!!!👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Kya karein vo Raj ko aur us k dad ko jo jhelne padta hai na 😆,koi normal lady nahi kar payegi akele aisa kaam.😛

Raj ko lagta hai agar pehle milta toh he would have fallen for her!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊Haaiii!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳

Haan vo to hai hi.😉

Navin ke jaane ke baad uske dad ko paralytic attack aa gaya!!!!! Thats so sad!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Haan shock ki wajah se.

Navin Raj ki baatein karta tha!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Naina toh rone lagi yeh yaad karke!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Poor Naina!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

She misses him too much na.😭

Ab Raj phir se apne aap ko kosh raha hai!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Raj ab Naina ko comfort kar raha hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊So sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

us ko lagta hai na ki sab k ansoon ki wajah vahi hai. 😔 😔 😔 😔 😔 😔

Naina ki mom ko heart attack aaya tha!!!! Dukhon ka toh jaise pahad tut pada hai!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Har taraf se aayi musibat un k uper.😭

Raj jaana chahta hai magar Naina ki mom usse rok rahi hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Thats nice!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj rukega toh Naina ke saath aur wat bitayega!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Ye shure nahi hai.😆

Naina ke dad ko kya huya???😔 😔 😔 😔

Pata nahi dekhna padega ki kya hua hai un ko.😲

Ab Raj shaadi ke liye haa zaroor kar dega because he has already fallen for Naina!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Yeah mujhe bhi yahi lagta hai. 😉

Originally posted by: TaNia2008

hey fantastic update!

👏 👏 👏 👏

waiting for the next.

plz update soon.

Here is the third part guys:-

"Naina dekho kya hua tumhare papa ko." Naina's mom screamed.

They all ran in that direction (room). They saw there a horrible sight. Naina's father was lying unconscious on ground n his mouth was twisted. He has fainted.Kuch aisa lag raha tha ki jaise unhone apni jagah se uthne ki koshish ki ho aur vo gir gaye hon .

"Papa kya hua aap ko?" Naina screamed.

"Naina ruko let me check." Raj leaned n examined him.

"Call doctor fast Naina." Her mom instructed.

"He again got an attack I think." Raj said after examining.

"Whattttttttttttttttttttttttttt" Mrs. Ahluwalia shocked. Her voice choked.

"Aunty please calm down every thing will be fine." He assured her.

Doctor reached with in fifteen minutes. He examined him n cleared what Raj said. They immediately brought him to the hospital with car and admitted him in hospital n Raj completed all formalities.

"Lagta hai phir is k baap ko attack hua hai." A man said.

"Jaise karni vasi bharni bhai kya kiya jaaye.Jaisa kiya bete ne baap us ka khamiyaza bhugat raha hai." The another person said.

Raj clinched his wrist and he really wanted to punched them hard but Naina made him stop.

"Kaise tum itna cool reh leti ho Naina? Dekh nahi rahi ho ye log kaise aur kya kya bakwaas kar rahe the." He said with anger.

"Pata hai Rajveer ji par ab humari aadat ho gayi hai ye sab sun ne aur sehne ki." She said with a normal tone.

Raj was looking her straight in her eyes and Naina too.He was thinking in his mind that only he is responsible for all of this. Na hi vo Nandini k pyaar me aisa andha ho jaata na hi kuch aisa ho paata. Naveen has hinted him once that he didn't trust Nandini but Raj's blind love was unable to face the truth and when the truth came in front of him , it became unbearable for him.

TabhiA nurse came out n asked, "Naina ji aap hain?"

Their eye contact broke n she said, "Haan mai hi hoon Naina ji kahiye."

"Vo aap k papa ko hosh aa gaya hai aap mil sakti hain un se ab." She told.

"Thank u", she replied.

"Naina tum jao mai abhi aata hoon." Raj said to which Naina nodded n left.

Raj stood there thinking some thing. He was in his deep thoughts when some one put his hand on his shoulder. He turned and saw doctor there.

"U r with Naina na?" The doctor asked.

"Yeah", he replied.

"Come with me." They both made their way to doctor's cabin.

"Please have a seat Raj." Doctor said n both seated.

"Doc anything serious?" Raj asked .

"Look Raj to be very frank I would like to tell u that Mr. Ahluwalia is not in good state and reports says that his life is not much left now." He added.

"What???????????????????????????? Kya keh rahe hain ye aap?" He asked in a state of shock.

"It's true Raj. He will be last may only a few hours a few days or a few months." Doctor said.

"Is there any hope to make him better?" Raj asked.

"Raj I can do the best treatment but it will cause of no use." Doctor told.

A thud sound was heard by Raj and doc, they turned and found Naina standing there. Raj understood that Naina heard it all . He called Naina but of no use she ran away from there.

"Naina listen, stop it Naina," Raj chased her.

But she didn't stop she continue running.

"Stop Naina listen me first." He tried to make her stop but of no use.

"Naina ruk jao tum ko Naveen ki kasam." Raj said finally.

This made Naina stop. She sat on ground with thump sound n started crying bitterly.

Raj came to her n sat besides her. Naina saw him n said, "Kyoun di bhaiya ki kasam; kyoun? Mai nahi jeena chahti ab ; nahi jeena chahti." She said almost shaking him by his collar. She was crying hard. She hugged Raj tightly while crying.

Raj was just soothing her back hugging her tightly too. "Aisa kyoun ho raha hai mere saath veer kyoun? Maine kis ka kya bigada tha jo mere saath hi aisa ho raha hai.?" She was crying on his shoulders.

"Sab theek ho jaayega Naina sab theek ho jaayega." He consoled her.

"Nahi kuch bhi nahi hoga theek , kuch nahi hoga. Mom aur dad ko agar kuch ho gaya to mai kaise joyoungi." She said still crying.

"Nothing will happen to them Naina. All will b fine." Raj said.

After fifteen minutes Naina realized how she sits with him. She detached from him n said, "I………I am sorry vo mai." Wiping her tears.

"It's ok Naina." He said.

There was an awkward silence between both finally Veer broke it, "Naina I think I must meet ur dad first." He said.

She nodded and both went to meet him.

Later in that night Raj brought Naina and her mom to home and he stayed in hospital. The whole night passed smoothly and in morning some one woke Raj when he was sleeping on chair.

It was Naina. "Veer ye coffee aap k liye." He handed over the cup to him.

He woke up immediately n asked, "Tum yahan kab aaye Naina?"

"Bus abhi kuch der hue. U was sleeping peacefully so I thought not to disturb u." she said.

"I will be just back." Saying this he left.

He returned after half an hour . "Kahan reh gaye the aap Veer?" Naina asked.

"Kuch nahi yaad aaya achanak ki mom ko inform nahi kiya tha to phone kar ne gaya tha un ko." Veer told.

"Haan vahi batana tha ki kal raat me ghar par phone aaya tha aunty ka, vo aap ka mobile mila rahi thi par nahi mila to unhone ghar par kiya tha phone." Naina said.

"Haan abhi ma ne bataya." He said.

"Veer aap ghar jaaiye mai yahan hoon." She said looking him but found him gazing her. She blushed but didn't know y.

"Kya hua Veer?"she asked lowering her eyes.

"Vo nahi …………..kuch nahi." He thought 'Naina k muh se Veer kitna accha lagta hai na.'

Soon Raj went to her home n got ready n fresh.

"Are beta kuch breakfast kar le tab chalte hain." Mrs. Ahluwalia said.

Raj nodded kyouki kal raat me bhi kuch nahi khaya tha us ne to bhookh to lagi hi thi us ko bhi.

Update was really very emotional..😭Why is all Happening to naina's family..I really feel pty for her..First naveen n den her father..Thank God Raj is dere to handle her pain...😊

heya superb part.... too good... but kuch zyada hi emotional tha.. i am really feeling very sad for naina😔😔😔.. bechaari ki saath kya kya ho raha hai.. usko tho bina kisi baat ki sazza mil rahi hai... i cant bear this.. thank god that raj is with her or else she would hav been very lonely.. but more than that i am feeling very sad for raj.. he is blaming himself for everything.. bechaara apna dukh sabse chupa raha hai😭..

hope that everything comes to normal..
raj blushed when naina called him veer.. haii😳😳😳...that scene was jus awesome😉😉.. waiting for the next part eagerly..
lots of love
ritu😊

very emotional n a beautiful part