Definitely Yes, Maybe I- (AR) pt1- 13 - Page 7

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Posted: 17 years ago
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superb part! i loved it immensely... please do continue, i have a feeling Riddhima is going to meet her actual prince charming Armaan in Italy, oh that sounds brilliant... romance in italy! wow!

sangeeta, plz pm me when u update this ff please- this is definitely going to be one of my favourite AR ffs...

btw, when reading this, are we meant to imagine Sukirti or Shilpa as Riddhima, i know its up to us, but as a writer who have u decided to picture as Riddhima? personally i feel that Riddhima has always been Shilpa for me, but if you have decided that Riddhima is Sukirti , I really don't mind, its up 2 u!


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Posted: 17 years ago
#62
WOW Di!
You started this FF with such a BANG! I loved the first part...The way you described Riddhima's emotions and then her thoughts taking control of her better judgement and so forth...It was all beautifully penned down..What more can I say? You are a very talented writer...and im in awe of your way with words!😳
I kinda knew that Rahul would be close to Riddhima since the intro--since you said that both lived in the US and I was right..He is now her fiance...Your descriptions and dialogues of Rahul show me that you portrayed him as a punctual, time-keeping person, who wants the best and for that he always thinks ahead of time...I'm liking seeing this side to Rahul...He is a guy fond of statistics..Everything is calculated already..LOL...I guess his accountant self takes the better of him..LOL..can't blame him for that--he loves his career..
"I have checked out the train stations….they are less than a mile away from the neighborhood…..you will be at Grand central in precisely 33 minutes!"
I like how you portrayed Riddhima's character also...Her being accustomed to American values and traditions--her sticking to her adopted language rather than her mother tongue...
I am also a very organized person like Riddhima--so there is a similarity..Im kind of OCD about cleanliness too..LOL...
I love the way you wrote out her thoughts also...How she was dissapointed upon seeing some facets of Rahul...like listening to the Proposing CD rather than being creative...and then her imagining life fulfilling Rahul's commands like a servant...but despite that, she loves the guy...She is ready to put all that aside for their relationship! True love, I guess...
Anjali seems laid-back and carefree--love her character also..Im in love with the characters already Di...you described their personalities so effectively!
Can't wait to see how Riddhima's life changes in those 15 days in Italy--beautiful place I will go to one day..lol..Obviously Armaan will be coming in the story in Italy..I can't wait...Continue soon Di!
It was a GREAT way to start off the story...can't wait for the action to unfold...
Love
Anita
P.S- I love the way you have described the setting and background of the characters...Loved the way you described New York--seems like you know a lot about the suburbs and all...and then the universities--colombia and cornell.. .Awesome portrayal Di!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#63
Omg fantastic start....I was shocked to read the beginning when Rahul was proposing Rhidimaa😲....

Its cute how Rahul and Rhidimaa are childghood friends...and rahul really seems like a caring, respectful, and sweet guy.....But in my opinion the only thing missing in RR's relationship is pure joy of love...or maybe love itself...

It seemed like Rhidimaa was just marrying Rahul for 3 reasons... firstly for the sake of her parents...being the "perfect" daughter since childhood...Another reason might be the fact that she hasn't really met anyone else...I mean as far as I recall she mentioned that she has been with Rahul practically her whole life....and even in high school they both went out....so she really didn't get to meet any other guy....maybe mutual friends but it doesn't seem like she actually got to know them...The third reason I might say is her upbringing...I mean since childhood she has seen profession, and perfection in her family...(excluding Anjali of course)....She hasn't really gotten to think like a normal teenage girl..I mean regardless of the fact that she's really perfectionist but she still has dreams and desires which every girl had about her life partner/prince charming....but she hasn't really been given a chance to live the kind of life a normal young teenage would....Anjali would have been the only person who could have actually showed her how to really LIVE and ENJOY life....and show her that she doesn't need to be perfect all the time....that there is much more to life than just profession and perfection....But even she went away to live her own life....

Rahul is great guy.....and there is nothing wrong with being ambitious...but looking at RR's it seems their relationship is formal...Even tho they have known each other for 18 years they still act and talk in a way two business clients would or maybe even two strangers....They are missing that magic of love in their relationship...i mean for god sake they were stuck in the middle of traffic and yet instead of sharing some romantic sweet moments like any normal couple would Rhidimaa was organizing his letters and financial documents???😆....and on top of that Rahul asked her to organize his CD collection as well??......wowww!!🤔

And ok I really don't think Rahul is human...loll..i mean even his CD collections had no songs or anything...instead they were all business oriented and stuff....and woww he actually carried a CD of how to propose a woman??....

aww....poor rhidimaa....she was so disheartened after finding out that...rahul's proposal was not from his heart and soul...rather was an idea taken from someone else's point of view...

Anjali is really cool....even tho not a lot was shown about her character yet but even the little role she played seemed really interesting...she seems like a full of life character...hopefully in those fifteen days Anjali will be able to show Rhidimaa a new phase of life...

Looks like AR are gonna meet in Italy😳....and Armaan would be the total opposite of what Rhidimaa is...I am assuming he might be a good friend of Anjali and thats how AR will meet....and with Armaan coming in Rhidimaa's boring life things would defiantly change😃...

Great start...continue soon...and keep up the great work👏


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Posted: 17 years ago
#64
Definitely yes, ridhima's life would be changed in Italy..romantic Rome mein..Armu will apear there to show the meaning of life/perfection/satisafaction and luck!!!!
wonderful beginning. It's lil hard to imagine Rahul and Ridhima as pair. But glad you gave only one part for that troubles!!
Anjali is like Misthy of KYPH..hope Arman is not her date!!
can't wait for next part...till I see Arman!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#65
HIiiii,
you didn't pm me....guess you had many people on your list!!!
Well, what can I say, this was a PREFECT part, sometimes, too much of perfect thing can also get so boring, I hope Ridz get to be all wild & wacky in Italy, with her di...
do continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Bheegi, know what was the 1st thing that I noticed. How RIdz is trying to convince herself that everything is perfect. and how she also tries to make sure that she also belongs to the same category. The occasional glimpses of being a rebel (or should I say being normal) comes out when she has her moments while arranging the CD and of course during when she hears about why Rahul proposed. It made a very good read and hope that Ridz gets more normal when she gets to Florence.
Swathi
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ahhh im soooo excited!!!! haha shes off to italy, where she will no doubt meet armaan! gosh im already looking forward to their first meeting, and much more after that! hehe

ok as sweet and perfect as rahul is, he is a bore! and so is ridz for that matter! i mean, organizing his glove compartment?!! geez, angie is right to worry! but i have a feeling armaan is going to change ridz!
well it was a GREAT first part di, im really excited about this new fic! hope ur able to update soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#68

awwwesomeeeeeee👏

the storyy lone is soooooooooooooooooo awesomeeeeeeeeeee😳
haha...RR😆😆..and rahul.high maintenance?😆
gawwsshh i am already in luv wid d storyy line😳
i bet in dat trip armu is going to meet ridz😳
aww..poor rahull!!😳
i hope he finds muskaan😉
luv,
pragz😳
p.s-if possible do pm me😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#69
hey sangeetha di😊
awesome part di
loved it seriously amazing part1 cum intro😛
so for riddhima gupta life is just soo perfect naa 😛 not untill she happens to be on her trip to her di's place if um not wrong😆
but this rahul i some how dont like him everything to perfection is not good for health u see😆
um waiting for our hero's entry😳😆
update soon di
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Wow nice story Sangeeta Di! Loved reading it! 👏
Gosh, Rahul is sooo boring..so perfect yet soo boring.. and here Riddhima is the goody-goody girl who wants to please her parents and glad to know she likes romantic stuff.. I thought she might b as boring as Rahul.. Hmm trip to Italy.. wonder why Anjali called her and that too on an urgent notice.. and hmm she doesnt sound so happy.. does she love Rahul? and yay Riddhima will meet Armaan there.. Its soo exciting!
Cant wait to read more! 😃

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