Shall We Dance- AK ff- part 15(end) pg 128(3/17) - Page 78

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Posted: 16 years ago
gr8 part! i hope nothing goes wrong once simone gets here and angad actually proposes! cont soon :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
has simone come already? whose familiar voice is that? not anitha plz...the part proceeded so quickly... i wonder whats gonna happen when simone comes back....
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Posted: 16 years ago
heyy....awesome part......lovd a-kz dance....awww kripa thought angad was up2 sumat else wen he was jus goin to turn the music on lol....hmmmm wndda wats gna appen at the function....huz voice was dat? simones??
a cnt wait 4 nex part plz conts oooon
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi... di.. This part part really nice and At end the surprise... of Unknown entry is like SOME ONE COMING AS AN WALL BTWEEN AK's LOVE STORY...
MY guesses are: Simone, Anita or Rosie (Angad's Ex-GF)....
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This part was nice and yes di i remeber the Predictions in my last few updates.... It is wonderful that my predictions became the major part of this FF... it is gr8....
This part seems shorter, but u left us with lots of thinkin that who is that Person??
And as now Angad is Planning so much for him and Kripa's Proposal.... I hope Simone's entry does not ruin all of that....
And also Mr. Josh Abraham seems to be a strange man... I think it is Shabbir, came here find out mystery btwn Angad-Kripa-Rhea....
It was the fast part and very well written. the scenes of Dancing was good and the song Kahin To Hogi Woh.... Is one of the Favorite Song.... very romantic.... I Hope that Naina Khanna becomes Angad and kripa's support In the Strom that 's waiting for them....
Simone is the Big Strom for AK's Love story.....
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Keep up the excellent scenes and also reveal the mysterious people in Next Part...
Anxiously Waiting.... Update Soon.... til than BYE AND HAPPY THANKSGIVING....
TC, krina
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Posted: 16 years ago
PART 9

I am glad that Angad is taking good care of rhea..they would definalty follow for any father daughter jodi.....I am happy that Rhea is finally getting the love and care which she deserves...

haha...Rhea is one smart cookie...the way she catches the little details is really impressive...

Its cute how after being caught be Rhea Angad acted all ignorant about where kripa lived loll

I like the changes in Angad ...in the beginning I would have never imagined him playing cricket with some young boys off the street...i thought he would have been too proud of his position that he wouldn't want to ruin his reputation by playing with a group of young teens...But now it seems like he could care less about such small things...even tho he would not admit that right now...and would think of it as just another stint to build hi image...but deep down he knows that's not true...he really whole hearty had enjoyed himself...

aww...Angad feeling protective not just for Kripa..but Rhea as well is really cute...and on top of that he found an excuse to pick up Kripa everyday loll

haha....Rhea is soo adorable..embarrassing angad in front of kripa...haha..

I am glad that Angad had praised and admired Kripa's dancing skills...Not just as an entertainment...but he really respected her skills and that obviously means alot to a girl like kripa....especially coming form Angad..

well looks like Angad is slowly realizing his past deeds..and really thinking about all his wrong doings...Its true when people say that one cant see their own back until someone points them out to u one cant always see their negative points..and in Angad's case...not only kripa and Rhea but people like mishty are even getting angad to think about his own behaviors...

I hope that its not too late before Angad realizes his mistakes and does soemthing to improve himself....Not everyone is lucky enough to get second chances...

oh wow...Angad is really daring..lol..The way he lifted kripa in front of the whole class is really admirable...lol...Only he can act to Kripa's stubbornness...lol

loll...The scene when Angad was curing Kripa's injured kneww was both amusing and sweet...And the way that Angad mentioned that Kripa got distracted because of him and kripa having no reply back was so cute...

Looks like Kripa really has something against guys who flirt or look at woman in a not so pleasant way....And from the thing which she had heard from Simone certainly is holding her up from falling into his charms...But then again for how long will kripa keep away form Anagd...she cant resist his charms for too long....loll

And AK's teasing when they got out was quite funny...loll

Oh god so Anitah wants to leak info about both Angad and kripa to the press??...Why would she want to do soemthing like that??

I really liked how u described Kripa's emotions: Kripa turned the lights off to the studio and followed them to the car with a knot of confused emotions inside her…it was a struggle between her heart and her mind, between right and wrong, between loyalty and betrayal…….despite all these internal struggles, she was sure that there was an invisible cord that drew her closer and closer to this man, whom she had pledged to despise, but was now having a hard time resisting….


PART 10

The way that Angad's, Kripa's, and Rhea's views were portrayed in the beginning was a great touch..Angad is slowly realizing the changes which have been taking place in him...and Kripa is starting to realize the positive things in angad and how he's a different person than what he was when they first time they had met..and from what Simone had told her about him.. I am glad that even Rhea is liking Angad...and I hope that really soon her wish about all of them living together in one house comes true...

aww...angad was trying to find an excuse to prevent kripa from going home..lol....how adorable..

haha...Angad should have become an actor..hes really good at faking things..

Oh wow....Kripa's life is wort than I had thought...especially with her chacha living with them.. I understand that her family feels indebted to him and that is the only reason to why they are even enduring him...but is their reputation more important to them than their daughters...I mean how can they have a guy like him stay at their house??...Thats hight pathetic...But kripa is certainly a strong women and knows how to not only look after herself but her family as well...No wonder Kripa didn't want to keep Rhea at her house...sue to her pervert chacha ofcource...I feel soo terrible for kripa..

haha...It was hilarious when angad was like Agar app ithne peeche parde hai tho I'll stay loll...Hes really something....but it was really a cute scene...I am likeing this new Angad ...

I cant belive that Kripa's family can be so desperate that they are crying about their miseries to Angad..I understand that they are stressed and worried about their financial needs themselves..but they shouldn't talk like that in front of an outsider and try to hide their miseries from strangers...

So even Angad had never thought beyond his passion for cricket and had neglected his family because of that...i hope that after looking at kripa's miserable state he realizes his mistake of neglecting his mother for his career...while Kripa is supporting her family with no support and working soo hard to help out her family all alone while they dont even care about her...while Angad neglected his only family for fame and money...

aww...anad really is starting to understand kripa..and he knows that she needs a...someone who understands her and is there to support her through her troubles...not someone who is sympathetic....

and the way that Angad conveyed his genue feelings to kripa was just outstanding really sweet

Lets see if Angad gets kripa to accept his offer...

Anyoen would be confused in Kripa's place...One one side she had her loyalty toward her friend simone and on the other hand her desires...But its true what kripa said..after all Angad is human and everyone makes mistakes....But the most important thing is one learning from their mistakes...Realizing their wrong doings and try to rectify them....and not repeat them again...So shouldn't Angad get a chance to change??...Shouldn't he be given a chance to fix his mistakes??....After all he too is human ....

I wonder what Simone and Kripa talked about which is making kripa soo aloof from Angad....

wow...AK's as always are hot and passionate...and I loved the way Angad expressed what kripa means to him...Really heart touching...

and they even had their first kiss and confession...Well i was just thinking angad will get Kripa to accept his offer of friendship...But looks like angad didn't want to waste any more time..so he decided to go straight for the confession...haha

PART 11

i am glad that angad is trying to rectify his mistakes....by trying to help out Simone and accepting Rhea as his daughter..Without even carrying about what the DNA reports say...

Its really a delight seeing both angad and kripa soo happy and in love...

I guess its still hard for Kripa to fully accept that angad has changed...Even tho she sees and feels that he is changing...But at times his past imagine is stuck in her mind...and therefore takes his words the negative way...I hope that this doesn't create problems later on in AK's life..

wow...Angad missed his friends party which seems like is something which he had never done before..But then again at that time Angad didn't have Kripa in his life..Maybe before Kripa came into his life one of Angad's reasons to go to these parties were other women...but now that he has found the love of his life....he doesn't need any other woman in his life...

hahaha....angad dancing around the house was quite amusing..and he really must have been really embarrassed at being caught by Rhea and Teddy...Well who can blame him...after all its his really first love...loll

Aww...he gave rhea a gnight kiss...how sweettt..i remember when he rudely said no to Rhea when she asked him for a kiss....

omg so Anitah did really take those pictures...But why do I feel that Mishty did have some hand in this...

I am glad that Angad took control of the situation...his actions and words certainly reflected how much kripa's respect means to him...

loll...angad is really besharam..lol...he wanted kripa to take his faida hahaha...

In this situation its certain that angad is not trying to sav ehis own imagine...In the past there must have been many rumors like that...but he knows that hearing something like this is really hard for Kripa to take in ....

haha...aww....they ran away at the end...how cutee!!!

PART 12

Omg I am soo happy that at last Angad had allowed Rhea to call him her dad....I am soo happy right now....Poor Rhea really needed that and I am glad that Angad figured out what could cheer Rhea up at that point when she was missing her mom soo much...

oh wow....Even I was scared for a moment there ...with Angad's misleading remarks...But I am soo glad that Angad that Angad didn't take advantage of the situation...That moment just proved how much Angad truly loves kripa......Oh god why am I feeling that things are gonna take a bad shape some time soon and maybe Angad would be misunderstood by kripa...oh god I hope nothing like that happens....

Oh wow...I am really feeling scared for Angad ...I really hope that everything goes the way he has planned...Oh wow...so finally Simone is going to enter too hopefully things work out...and Simone forgives Angad...

omg Angad even brought his mom...thats was certainly a pleasant surprise....I am soo glad he realized his mistake...

AK as always just rock.....But it seems like this show really means alot for kripa...for her career...But I am a little uncertain about Josh....I hope no problems come in AK's way due to him....Oh god and on top of that Simone is gonna come too...This are really unpredictable at this moment...Hope everything goes well tho...

I wonder who the woman outside yelling for Kripa was....Was it Simone?...it obviously had to be someone both AK knew...well lets see what happens next...as I said things can get reall unpredictable...

Great parts as always...cant wait for the next one...continue soon ...and keep up the great work!!!....👏
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Posted: 16 years ago

Hellooo Bheegi!!

Awesome part again! Im so happy Angad openly accepted Rhea as his daughter!
But knowing your story styles, i would expect something very bad happen during the performance, because u've shown angad's plannings on how he's going to propose to kripa, and all the things he's wrapped in that gift for her, and how he's got his mother and collegues to come to the event, im afraid none of this is going to work!
Mishy did have a hand in Anita's plans, and unknown to that, Angad has left everything for her to handle in the event, so im sure she might do some gadbad!
And the deal with Simone is still a little mysterious! She's only known by the "phonecalls", and never shown in person... wonder what's up with that! Im even starting to have doubts that she has cancer, but only ur story will tell! hehe
For some reason, im really scared to read ur next part because i know its not going to be as good at all as you have made it sound.. I'll still be waiting though ;-)
Tata
Simi
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Posted: 16 years ago
congo on 100 pages bheegi....:)!!lol

that was a gud catch up on d last one..yeh! luved hw its goin smooth yet like a silence bfr d storm...!!and its funny bt i cnt wait for the storm 2 erupt and wat it tkes away along wit it...
kripa-angad were beautiful..i lke how kripa for a min doubted angad but angad didnt care for her remark...he stayed calm n undisturbed...!!
luved teddyz thoughts..nainaz perfect entry..and rheaz exposure 2 the acceptance of her papa...!!
again...d familiar voice....doesnt gve sum hints..of it bein either anita or simone...more ike d latter...bt well koe wen u let us!!
will wait for the nxt 1...soon!! beats r high for it all...d dance and d risin level of d storm...yes!! update soooon!!

luved it bheegi!!

nij =)
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Posted: 16 years ago
excellent part
i do hate her so bad, she is just eewww, so hate her
love the jaane tu song
omg!! i think angad's heart will break once he sees simone
i think josh will end up with or is with simone
poor kripa, she is gonna be so confused when he proposed her
rhea, the poor thing
teddy is choo sweet
naina seems like a positive character
nishant is so rude
plz plz plz do cont soon di
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Posted: 16 years ago
owh could that be simone that sounds familiar to angad?? please continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey bheegi...cute part...
I feel soo sad 4 Rhea.... d way she wz cryin literally touched mah heart...I noe wt pain it iz stay awy 4m ure Mom 4 such a lng tym n tat too @ such a young age..I'm happy @least AK wer wid her...if it had bn nt 4 em..Rhea wudnt @ awl b happy in dis wrld...Angad unnerstud her pain..bcuz eva he wz nt close 2 his mother @ tat moment...I'm soo happy tat he finally decided 2 bcum 'Papa' 2 Rhea...Rhea's hapiness wz boundless...
Tat nyt @ Angad's place wz indeed romantic... Eva Teddy wz happy wid Kripa...bcuz she wznt lykk d oda women hu treated him lykk a slave... she wz indeed diff...I dunno y Kripa had tat insecurity in her mind eva tho she knew tat Angad has chngd 4 her....he wz jus takin her 2 switch on d muzik..n she felt tat hez takin her 2 bed..!! Newy d dance wz romantic n itz indeed memorable...one thng tat we or they can neva 4g8!!! n d FF is also such...
I'm happy Angad called his Mom bck..n she did cum..2 c her granddaughter n would-be daughter-in-law ...n Angad wz g8n soo desp 2 meet Kripa[lol] d event seems 2 b a grand 1 n d nyt-memorable..d way u hv described it...Well I hope Josh takes AK in a movie as lead roles!! [lol] It wud b amazin den..!! Well Angad is ryt abt telln Simone b4 d announcement..as she has d ryt 2 noe b4 odas..she will feel betrayed if she finds out later
Angad's plans seem very romantic wid d shagun ready n awl..I guess hez awl set....Kripa wz ryt..he thnks abt only dance nwadayz..tatz bcuz of her only...!! d green room scene wz quite romantic too..Angad as alwyz flirtin..n Kripa flirtin bck in a way..!! I wonder huz voice tat wz...it can b Simone..Anita or Mishti...it most probably seems Anita..well u've left us hangin on a cliff ryt nw..soo cnt rilli predict netyn..I hope derz no harm 2 Kripa..lykk dose typical movie stuff..dis is goin on DYM too...well I jus hope deir propsal n evrytyn goez f9..n dey g8 married soon as AK bod wish..n we awl wish..!! Then der definately will b a reason 2 celebrate
Plzzz cont soon..I'm dyin 2 read...eva update DYM soon...
Aishwarya

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