Shall We Dance- AK ff- part 15(end) pg 128(3/17)

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Posted: 16 years ago

#441

Does Kripa have a history that we'll learn about as the story unfolds... somehow her reminder to herself that he had no right to see her tears, nor her weaknesses makes me think that she does 😕 I'm sure she'll find peace when Angad turns over a new leaf in her pyar 😊
Thanks, Bheegi!

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Posted: 16 years ago

#442

Originally posted by: mahi4u
hey di

awww............

bechara pappu 😆gosh angad ko gussa agaya😉

grt prt di

cont super soooooooonnnnnnnnn

luv ya n tak care
mahru

thanks mahru...yes angad is very angry now😡...let's see what he does with this anger😃

@ Shafoo....thanks dear😊

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Posted: 16 years ago

#443

Wow, talk about wishes do come true

HeHe Angand was sooo funny in this part! After reading this part, reminded me of KYPH magic.....man i soo missed that show! *tears*

From the hand brushing, to body contacts, you had it all, didn't missed a thing!!

She had offended him so many times, but why was he still craving for her?*kaisa yeh pyaar hai lalala* lol

OMG! Prithvi gone for 6 WEEKS........hmmm this looks good! Lol

LMaFO!!! Pappu can't Salla! That had me laughing in knots!! That was too guud!

Kripa in tear?.....is there a connection?......hhmmm spill spill spill it out!!!

Outstanding part! Update soon!!

-Natasha

P.S. hearing this song reminded of ur part, http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GYAPMkCuqrk Just a thought of sharing with you 😊

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Posted: 16 years ago

#444

Originally posted by: anitamalik
OMG!
Was I right or what...LOL...Di, im like seriously beginning to think on your terms now..I knew Angad--being a temporary dancer would have to turn into a non-temporary substitute dancer...I was positive that Prithvi would get hurt somehow after reading the fourth update for some reason..It was a sixth sense or something..and I was right..YAY! LOL...If only I could figure out how you are taking DYM---I don't think that I could figure out what things are going to happen in DYM as ANYTHING can happen..LOL..I'll let you suprise me with that one...

thanks anita...yes ur guess was absolutely right😃. As far as DYM is concerned, i will just say aage bhi jaane na tu, peeche bhi jaane na tu, jo bhi hai bad ek yahi pal hai😊

Di, you did a fabulous job with the whole update, as always... The way you portray emotions and all--I swear, that has to be your forte in creative writing! It is awesome..I get soo attached to a character when I read the description of thoughts and emotions...Kudos!

awww....have said that ur a very sweet and kind girl😊

Kripa muttered angrily to herself, 'pole? He is probably worse than a pole!'

LOL! Although I might agree he might be worse than a pole since he has played only cricket in his life, Kripa should give him a chance...LOL...I love Kripa's one-liners Di! Have me laughing for a LONG time...You have that affect Di on us readers with your characters = D

looks like armaan and kripa always get the one-liners😉 and thanks to all of u, i am inspired to write more and more of them

The places Angad's imagination is taking him..He is prob feeling like he is in heaven..LMAO!

Angad observed intently and imagined holding Kripa just like the other dancers were holding each other. In his imagination, they were twirling with each other-him holding her close to his body, his hands on her waist, and their eyes glued to each other.

An embarrassed Angad lowered his eyes as the other dancers broke into splits, 'Oh'sorry'..I..I didn't realize.' She slid off his arms, but something strange happened inside her- a strange inexplicable feeling she had never felt before- as their bodies touched each other and his fingers brushed against her waist on her way down from his arms. She lowered her gaze and turned around to play the music. Angad in the meantime was still delirious from her fragrance and the feel of her bare waist on his fingers. It was not any perfume, but her natural scent that had him all aroused.

Wonderful detail...That sure must have been heaven for him! LOL.

sher ke mooh ab khoon lag gaya hai😳

I loved the way you handled the whole Press-Reporter scene...It was commendable...All the news reporters fishing for the masaledar news as that really happens in real life with huge stars...Loved how you portrayed it with that real aspect and then Angad having to act normal in front of the press, although being furious for a moment...Lovely! two faced celebrities😡

I miss Kanan! Although I initially start out imagining Gauri playing her, my mind somehow goes to Sunaina...I can't help it..lol.. Bring her back Di! LOL... she will be back in next part

LOL..I liked how for one moment Angad hated how Mishti acted with Kripa and then he is like..

Angad smiled at Mishti's statement, 'this chipkali is not that bad'..mujhey kitni achchi tarah samajhti hai.' yes indirectly hi sahi, mishti kuch kaam tho aa rahi hai😆

LMAO!

LMAO--Kripa made him dance on Pappu can't dance saala...WOW...She gots guts to be messing with a egocentric star like him...lol.. u bet...he is one angry man

Dialogue of the update:

'LISTEN YOUNG LADY'.ENOUGH IS ENOUGH''.AAJ TUMNEY MUJHEY BAHUT BADHA CHALLENGE DIYA HAI''YOU DON'T KNOW THE REAL ANGAD KHANNA''.AGAR MAIN KUCH HAASIL KARNA CHAAHOON THO KAR LETA HOON''.I AM A QUICK LEARNER TOO''.IF I AM AT THE TOP IN CRICKET TODAY ''.IT'S BECAUSE OF MY NEVER SAY DIE ATTITUDE''.AB DEKHNA DANCE MEIN BHI MAIN PAPPU SE MICHAEL JACKSON BANKAR KAISE DIKHATA HOON''..BAHUT GAROOR HAI NA TUMHEIN APNE HUNAR PAR''..DEKHNA YOU WILL BEG ME TO DANCE WITH YOU ONE DAY''YEH MERA VAADA HAI''YOU CAN'T SCARE ME OFF WITH THESE PAPPU TACTICS''IF YOU ARE STUBBORN'.SO AM I MS KRIPA SHARMA!'

I so want to see the real Angad Khanna.I bet Kripa sort of wants to see him too...They were passionate dialogues on Angad's side...Great Job Di...AK have always been passionate in their emotions

This was not how it was supposed to be- she would have to make sure not to lose her self control in front of him ever again- he had no right to see her tears, nor her weaknesses''.

Awww...I wonder what her financial situation and weaknesses are...hmm

hmm....keep guessing😉

Great update Di..I was fast this time..LOL..you posted SWD fast this time.---or so I think...lol

will keep trying...next one will be in 1-2 days

Continue soon! DYM's turn coming this week... = D

- Anita

[quote=armaanridz4eva]yay, the Step up part is here!!

Haww, naughty Mishti blackmailing Kripa!! and then Angad intrigued to get to know her further!!

loved the update as usual

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thanks sania....mishti is a pakka business woman😡 but in this case it is to our advantage😳

[quote=missypatel]allrite!! uve got him all qorked out..even gt him dancing 2 our pappu song...guess every guyz gonna go through dt frm no on..u koe!!

luv d description!! so clear and sexy imagination!!

lke d flicker!!already??????K really needz 2 keep a check on herslf!!lol

ohh n luv Az curiosity!! glad he cares....enuf!!

grt update!! surprisingly..unexpected!! ;)

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Thanks missy...yes angad is livid after being taunted as Pappu😆 Kripa has def felt something...let's wait and see if this flicker smolders into something big or not😳 Yes angad is a caring guy but in a weird way😆

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Posted: 16 years ago

#445

Originally posted by: saridena
hi bheegi di
awesome part di

angad kripa's partner

lets wait and see angad and kripa's

update sooooooooooooooooon

luv soumya

Thanks soumya😊...yes now they are forced to be together 😃

[quote=abhilashasharma]that was so passionate.... angad became their pappu.... no much rhea in this part..... i miss her... angad and kripa... so kripa has her weakness too...

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Thanks abhi....Ak always bring passion with them, don't they?😳 Rhea will be back in next part. Will wait and see what's up with Kripa's background

[quote=musicdiva]

great part bheegi! sparks are flying highh!! haha

misti for once did something quite good! hahah

cant wait till more dance practices.. and hopefully angad does his best!

and hopefully... he makes kripa change her opinion of him hehehhehehhe

i wonder what kind of financial burden kripa has on her...

cont soon! [/quote]

Thanks simi....yes sparks have def ignited...let's see what fuels them further😳 Yes Mishti is a blessing in disguise😃 Wait and see how kripa's story will unfold😊

[quote=ttimpy]well well it was definitely a passionate encounter.............the right mix of attraction, fast hearbeats, somewhat misplaced anger and churning emotions..................oooooh la la.........

angad is really behaving like schoolboy who shud have the best of everything..................and shud be the first one to be given so..............their chemistry was very intense..............loved it...............

prithvi's misfortune is angad's gain..............wonder how he's going to manage both the practices.....

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Thanks ttimpy.....great descriptions👏👏 Yes, angad is a fat headed celebrity who thinks he can achieve whatever he wants AK chemistry has to be intense and passionate😳 yup, kisi ki haar, kisi ki jeet ban jaati hai😊

[quote=sweet_mittal]hi di how r u

i love the last parts awwwwwww angad is getting attracted towards kripa and also he is softening toward rhea soon and accept her as his daughter

so angad will be kripa's partner that will be so funny so see they dance together

i love the pappu song haha

i feel like that something happen with kripa regarding boys that y she really hates angad

hopefully they come together soon

pleaseeeeeeeeee continue soon

love ya

mittal[/quote]

Thanks mittal....I am fine but how are U? How's nursing college? Angad is def getting attached to rhea😊 and very attracted to kripa😳 Good guess about kripa...that's all i'll say😃 will let u know when i post next part

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Posted: 16 years ago

#446

bheegi ji both parts were gr8

part 5

loved how angad had a dream sequence ...

part 6

was gr8

sholon si is back love that song

pappu cant dance.. was funny

i loved the details it was soo good

eps the ending scence where Angad n KrIPA are staring at each other

the detail gives it so much its easy to visulize

i loved it

n i cant wait

till u cont

plz do so

rabiah

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Posted: 16 years ago

#447

Originally posted by: sea_nyx

loved the part, especially the dance sequence 😉 and "female shabbir" ?😆 but i'm really going to do something to that mishti 😡, i hope she gets what she deserves and that too soon

thanks sea_nyx.....hey don't do anything to Mishti because she is unintentionally bringing them close to each other😆

Female shabbir - because she has that authority over people like the way she shooed away the press😆

[quote=teri_susan]Wow great part.Angad really enjoyed his dance with his enchantress.Prithvi got fracture,that's a bad news for Kripa and a good news for Angad😆.Angad doesn't like Mishti flirting with him,but sometimes he like her suggestions,especially her idea of him dancing wiht Kripa.Kripa too feel the attraction towards Angad.She played a perfect prank on him,he went in it without realising what is going to happen😆.The news is going to on press now,wat Angad is going to do? [/quote]

Thanks teri susan....well let's see what happens when the press finds out😆

[quote=tanasha1993]Angad rocked today;D

Loved the part where rhea did a thumbs up to him

I am sure that he will turn from pappu o michael jackson in 3 weeks

and show it to kripa that he can dance too

do write soon bheegi

love

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Thanks tanu....oh yes give angad a challenge and he will do it😃

[quote=deeya123]faboulous part di

awsum ,fantastic

so passionate

waitin for ur next part eagerly[/quote]

Thanks deeya...AK always bring passion with them😳...ladai ho ya pyaar

[quote=armaghan0]wow talk about intense loved it everything was great oh i so hate mishti then again if it wasnt for her ak wouldnt be dancing patners everything was great especially loved the remark about kripa being a woman shabbir loved it all do con soon its getting really exciting and interesting [/quote]

Thanks sidra...ur right Mishti is responsible for bringing them closer so even if she is irritating, she is helpful😆

[quote=nisitta]cool one... all the tym i was seeing AK doing all these scene and wow.. it was amazing 👏[/quote]

thanks nishitta...that';s a gr8 compliment😊

thanks coolpal.....wait and see what happens

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Posted: 16 years ago

#448

Originally posted by: someanshu2008
hi di
thanx for d pm

jst read d update

poor prits fracture dats so sad

nd angad was hell happy abt it😡

aww i loved d lift scene

bt i really missed rhea in dis part

di nxt time plz insert a cute part of rhea

so simone will soon enter d drama

i m really looking forward 2 d competition

angad had accepted d challenge nt only 2 dance well bt i think 2 change his image in d mind of krips 2

loved d update di

update soon

love

anshu

thanks anshu.....Rhea will be back in next part. Angad loves challenges and now he will prove it to everyone what he can do😕.....but let's wait and see what happens😊

[quote=vallanki]wonderful part!!

Angad can take Prithvi's place!!! Good Misthy!1 she is the person always brought AK together either directly or indiectly👏 everywhere, whether it is KYPh or any ff.

So, now Angad will be in kripa's territory all the time..wanna see more fireworks.

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thanks vallanki....yes angad ka haq hai😉 and yes mishti has always brought them close one way or another😳 AK will have to spend a lot of time with each other now...😳

[quote=tehreemmirza]awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww poor angad everybdy made soo mch fun of him and i just luved th chem b/w AK luved this part continue soon 😊

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thanks tehreem ....AK chemistry is always sizzling😳

[quote=angadzgirl]Awwwww di.......wat great part....😉👏

Awwww prithvi has fractured his leg...

hmmm Angads taking pithvis place....thats was sooooooooo good...😉😳

cant wait for next part....😉

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Thanks shweta....yes thank god for prithvi's fracture😆

thanks angad kripa# 1 and stars shine😊

[quote=kvn1983]

waoh👍🏼 di its mind blowind⭐️ so prithvi is injured😳 and now angad is going to be the lead dancer😊😛😉 superb😊😛 its going to be so intresting😛😉😉 plz continue it soon😊

"Bahut tamanna thi, pyar mein aashiyana banane ki,
Bana chuke to lag gayi Nazar zammane ki.
Usi ka karz hai, jo aaj hai aankhon mein aansoo,
Saza mili hai humein muskurane ki !..........."[/quote]

Thanks Nidha...yes angad ki lottery lag gayi😆 and lovely sher👏

[quote=yamnovbloom]wow mast tha yaar, really can' wait for more Pappu to michael jackson wow that seems to be treat let's hope he changes from a womenizer to one man woman that is from beast to human.
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thanks yamini....yes the second part is most imp...i think he already has😉

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Posted: 16 years ago

#449

Originally posted by: Jodubai
HI Beeghi, Thanks for the pm, I was away for a week, hence the delay in response

Loved both the parts...

Angad finally started hav some liking towards Rhea

Rhea helping to break the ice between Angad & Shabeer

Angad the new dancing sensation, the part, where he thought he should practise the step 5 times as well, was so funny, I felt...he is sweet, when he wants to be

Now, the fun begins......with our dance partners ready to rock the floor!

oops! forgot about Misthi, she is just like Misthi (sweet) but sweet poison kind....

can't wait for you to update more

thanks Jo! No problem about the delay ...even i am late in responding to the comments. Angad will prove that he is a fast learner😆

[quote=arohaangel]that was freak** awesome!! loved the intense passionate, hot chem between AK!! both in the dance and the last part...uve done an awesome job dii!!! seriously.....i love this FF!!! yayy!! i am in love!! :p gr8 job di!

sameera[/quote]

thanks sameera.....i am glad ur in love😳 yes AK chem is always intense and passionate

[quote=monikaseth]Hahahahah prithvi gaya raste se now angad more Happy .

Misty you soo sweet you allways bring ak together wowowo . looking forward for dance session between ak kya kya hoga wowowo .

Thank you sangeeta for Pm.mondblowing part.
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thanks monu.....yes prithvi is out and mishti is a blessing in disguise😆

[quote=aish_punk]Hey bheegi..dis wz 1 part I wz rilli lukn fwd 2.... rilli cute part!!

The AK dance wz jus brilliant!!! Hope it lastd lngr tho n hope Kripa dint hv 2 b teachn @ tat tym... Mishti seriously luvz Angad or wt?? tatz wt it seemz lykk..... nw tat Prithvi's got a fracture Angad g8z 2 spend more tym wid Kripa..yay!! Kripa is a bit too mean 2 Angad bt.... Mishti jus suddenly announced 2 d media tat Angad's gonna b deir lead dancer.... tatz jus soo kool!! I seriously don unnersan y Kripa wudnt wanna wrk wid such a hawt guy lykk Angad... crazy gal I tell u....

thanks aish...for kripa looks don't matter....what's inside that matters😆 and as far as she is concerned angad is a womanizer and arrogant man😡

Wt Kripa n d odas did 2 Angad wz rilli mean 😡 ..bt it wz kinna funny too 😆 Good selection of sngs.... bod of em wer damn gud.... n suited d moment.... Angad wz actually ryt in telln tat stuff 2 Kripa...bt d thng iz Kripa has misunnerstud Angad jus cuz he ditched Simran..... maybe if tat g8z cleared we can AK love story flourshin further...d relation btwn AR is damn cute.... n yeah itz nt Armaan-Ridhimma!! 😆 N I cnt blv Angad actually said srry!! gud he did...tat mst hv made Kripas heart feel smtn.... newy she wz kinna g8n attracted 2 Angad's lukz n body.... hope it goes on further...

yes ur right, because of simone's story, she doesnot like angad but agains something did happen to her when they danced together....now what will she do??😳

Plzzz cont soon....

Thnx 4 d PM

Aishwarya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#450

Originally posted by: spln
wow bheegi di...that was an action packed part...alot happening all at once...i hate that mishti though...ur making her detestable wat can i do lolzzzz...n kripa n angad...oh well...will wait to see how things work out...prithvi with a fracture just in time haha!!!...wish to see more of rhea soon again :)

thanks NJ...hope ur enjoying the winds and cold weather of the windy city😃...well Mishti is a blessing in disguise😆

thanks hollister

[quote=rima791]thanks for the PM
fantastic part
love the part, its fab
never expected this at anytime soon
lolz angad got called pappu, those people really did piss him off
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!! angad can be pretty angry
wo apne josh mein hosh kho betha
oohhh kripa weaken a bit at the end, not bad at all!
can't wait to see more action/surprise between the two
i wanna know what rhea feels about this so called pappu scenario
p.s. sorry for the late comment, i came and gone like 2 or 3 times to finish reading the entire part

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Thanks Rima....pl don't be sorry. yes angad is pissed but he will channelize this anger in a positive way😳 Rhea will be back in next chapter

[quote=krina_17]hi.... di...both part is awesome

di.... it is fabulous that Misht is dayan and farshita... for ANGAD...

Di.... Kripa started to feel intense vibration in heart..... as Angad picked her up ... I love when Angad gave her challenge... at the End....

NOw Angad is determined............... And Kripa will teach him how to dance?????

this was gr8 part... with Angad and Kripa's fight, feeling and Dayan Mishti intervention..

Di.... how you put all this stuff togehter... gr8 applause to you.....

yes, kripa has some majboori and all and i think simone is surely dead and kripa's majboori to keep Rhea at her home. So then see thouhgt to teach this arrogant, self-centerd man.... and good lesson to shrewd famous personality.....

all dialogues are at the Best of this situation.............

take care, keep up the excellent work.......

krina

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Thanks Krina....i am glad u liked it. Good guesses but i am not revealing anything right now...stay tuned😉 yes angad will def learn a lesson 4 sure😃

[quote=wintersunshine]hey bheegi di...srry for the late reply! just caught up on both the parts and totally luvd them...specially part 6 where angad get super pissed and shouts back at kripa...i agree with kripa to a certain point where she hates angad but the way she was behaving with him wasn't good so she deserved what she got..hehe can't wait to read more and am sure ki in 6 hafton main pyaar hone wala hai...
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thanks dear...pl don't be sorry. well both will learn a lesson...that's all i'll say😉

[quote=noyonika]hey bheegi!!!
that was awesome!!!! the part was full of chemistry, biology physics...et al!!! hehe... ;))
thanks niyati...he he AK have always been masters of all the sciences😆

mishti is such a........ i dont have the rite words also!!! but the rapport developing between AK is nice....im all excited now...
mishti is a blessing in disguise

the circumstances are soo cool!!! i cant believe angad's gonna have to spend so much time with kripa now....(i know angad's savouring every little moment..;)
bechara angad😳😆

as i had predicted, u brought out their emotions and feelings perfectly in the ff.....i knew u'd do justice to it.....
aww..thanks again

im sad again now....coz i'll have to wait for the next update...... :(( but the next update will b e worth the wait....:) so am waiting eagerly now!!!!!!!!!!
will try to update tonite

i hope u're updating soon...and there's a reason coz now we'll get to read the update of DY,M....*excited* *excited*.... DYM update is posted

looking forward to the next update.....pls put it up soon!!!!!!!!!

love u!!!!
Niyati...
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[quote=cutie_tajju]

Hey Bheegi (Sangeeta)Di.. (i hope i can call u that...) :D

i dunno which FF will u check first, so jotted my comments on both !! :D:D:D:D

thanks cutie. I have read both comments but have not had a chance to reply DYM comments yet...i usually finish one ff and then move to the other. thanks 4 understanding

OKay.....

I seriously have no idea why i never got to commenting on ur FFs..

thanks again...love it when readers comment

So lemme tell ya i hv read allllllllllllll ur FFs and i simply luuuuuuuuuv em !!! m not a new reader, but just didnt get round to comment on ur FFss..

a big hug for you😊

They sumtyms make me senti and sumtyms make me laugh out loud and sumtyms, make me go awwwwwwwh at the cuteness...

But seriously, i have to tell u , u r an amaizng writer...

and i luuuv this FF and alll the other ones..

ur comments inspire me to write more so keep commenting...and i really appreciate it

Now cuming to the story, I luv the starting whr Angad is shown as the celeb and he meets Kripa ... luved his emotions whn he is with Ria !

And, i simply laughed out loud wen Angad saw Kripa dancing and he was glued tot he spot !!! :D:D:D And how he thought Mishty was 2 chipkoo....

And the funniest part was wen Kripa played Pappu Cant Dance with Angad being Pappu !! and liked the confrontation after the song... yes i was so imagining angad sulking at the pappu song😆

Can u plzz PM me whn u post the next parts... yes i will😊

Thanks..

Tajju

And Ps-- Continue soon !!!!!! [/quote]

[quote=namelessr]Does Kripa have a history that we'll learn about as the story unfolds... somehow her reminder to herself that he had no right to see her tears, nor her weaknesses makes me think that she does 😕 I'm sure she'll find peace when Angad turns over a new leaf in her pyar 😊
Thanks, Bheegi!
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thanks namelessr....u always find the statement which predicts something about the future....wiat and see as the story unfolds😉

[quote=ladoo645]

Wow, talk about wishes do come true

HeHe Angand was sooo funny in this part! After reading this part, reminded me of KYPH magic.....man i soo missed that show! *tears*

From the hand brushing, to body contacts, you had it all, didn't missed a thing!! thanks natasha....so ur an AK fan too...welcome😊

She had offended him so many times, but why was he still craving for her?*kaisa yeh pyaar hai lalala* lol exactly! trying to recreate the theme there

OMG! Prithvi gone for 6 WEEKS........hmmm this looks good! Lol

LMaFO!!! Pappu can't Salla! That had me laughing in knots!! That was too guud!

Kripa in tear?.....is there a connection?......hhmmm spill spill spill it out!!! u will have to wait yaar😃

Outstanding part! Update soon!! thanks a ton once again😊

-Natasha

P.S. hearing this song reminded of ur part, http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GYAPMkCuqrk Just a thought of sharing with you 😊 loved that song...i might use it at some point if u don't mind...thanks for sharing that video

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