Shall We Dance- AK ff- part 15(end) pg 128(3/17)

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bheegi

@bheegi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#431

Originally posted by: me_iq

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waow tht was awsm...

i loved it...the fire btw ak!!

haiii i loved it how he picked her in a wrong way lol...the laila majnu style!!

sheesh she almost cried wen he grabbed her so tightly...thtz so sad...men usually do this in dangerous anger..uff...bt its worth feeling!!!😳

cant wait 4 em to fall in love!!!

tc

Thanks iqra...yes the fire has just started...let's see how more sparks fly after this😳

thanks

@sweet honey: ur right Kripa does have a history...will find out soon. Rhea will back in next part

@ angullgrl...Angad can be funny when he wants to, sweet when he wants to and intense when he wants to😕

@ sweetaddiction...AK stories are always intense, aren't they?😊

Edited by bheegi - 16 years ago

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monika

@monikaseth

Sparkler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#432

Hahahahah prithvi gaya raste se now angad more Happy .

Misty you soo sweet you allways bring ak together wowowo . looking forward for dance session between ak kya kya hoga wowowo .

Thank you sangeeta for Pm.mondblowing part.

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aishwarya

@aish_punk

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Posted: 16 years ago

#433

Hey bheegi..dis wz 1 part I wz rilli lukn fwd 2.... rilli cute part!!

The AK dance wz jus brilliant!!! Hope it lastd lngr tho n hope Kripa dint hv 2 b teachn @ tat tym... Mishti seriously luvz Angad or wt?? tatz wt it seemz lykk..... nw tat Prithvi's got a fracture Angad g8z 2 spend more tym wid Kripa..yay!! Kripa is a bit too mean 2 Angad bt.... Mishti jus suddenly announced 2 d media tat Angad's gonna b deir lead dancer.... tatz jus soo kool!! I seriously don unnersan y Kripa wudnt wanna wrk wid such a hawt guy lykk Angad... crazy gal I tell u....

Wt Kripa n d odas did 2 Angad wz rilli mean 😡 ..bt it wz kinna funny too 😆 Good selection of sngs.... bod of em wer damn gud.... n suited d moment.... Angad wz actually ryt in telln tat stuff 2 Kripa...bt d thng iz Kripa has misunnerstud Angad jus cuz he ditched Simran..... maybe if tat g8z cleared we can AK love story flourshin further...d relation btwn AR is damn cute.... n yeah itz nt Armaan-Ridhimma!! 😆 N I cnt blv Angad actually said srry!! gud he did...tat mst hv made Kripas heart feel smtn.... newy she wz kinna g8n attracted 2 Angad's lukz n body.... hope it goes on further...

Plzzz cont soon....

Thnx 4 d PM

Aishwarya

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@spln

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Posted: 16 years ago

#434

wow bheegi di...that was an action packed part...alot happening all at once...i hate that mishti though...ur making her detestable wat can i do lolzzzz...n kripa n angad...oh well...will wait to see how things work out...prithvi with a fracture just in time haha!!!...wish to see more of rhea soon again :)

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Mauli

@mpatel97508

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#435

Ah, I'm happy Angad's taking Prithvi's spot in the competition!

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Rima

@Rimsie.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#436

thanks for the PM
fantastic part
love the part, its fab
never expected this at anytime soon
lolz angad got called pappu, those people really did piss him off
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!! angad can be pretty angry
wo apne josh mein hosh kho betha
oohhh kripa weaken a bit at the end, not bad at all!
can't wait to see more action/surprise between the two
i wanna know what rhea feels about this so called pappu scenario
p.s. sorry for the late comment, i came and gone like 2 or 3 times to finish reading the entire part

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krina

@krina_17

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Posted: 16 years ago

#437

hi.... di...both part is awesome

di.... it is fabulous that Misht is dayan and farshita... for ANGAD...

Di.... Kripa started to feel intense vibration in heart..... as Angad picked her up ... I love when Angad gave her challenge... at the End....

NOw Angad is determined............... And Kripa will teach him how to dance?????

this was gr8 part... with Angad and Kripa's fight, feeling and Dayan Mishti intervention..

Di.... how you put all this stuff togehter... gr8 applause to you.....

yes, kripa has some majboori and all and i think simone is surely dead and kripa's majboori to keep Rhea at her home. So then see thouhgt to teach this arrogant, self-centerd man.... and good lesson to shrewd famous personality.....

all dialogues are at the Best of this situation.............

take care, keep up the excellent work.......

krina

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Heena

@wintersunshine

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Posted: 16 years ago

#438

hey bheegi di...srry for the late reply! just caught up on both the parts and totally luvd them...specially part 6 where angad get super pissed and shouts back at kripa...i agree with kripa to a certain point where she hates angad but the way she was behaving with him wasn't good so she deserved what she got..hehe can't wait to read more and am sure ki in 6 hafton main pyaar hone wala hai...

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Niyati Joshi

@noyonika

Beginner

Posted: 16 years ago

#439

hey bheegi!!!
that was awesome!!!! the part was full of chemistry, biology physics...et al!!! hehe... ;))

mishti is such a........ i dont have the rite words also!!! but the rapport developing between AK is nice....im all excited now...

the circumstances are soo cool!!! i cant believe angad's gonna have to spend so much time with kripa now....(i know angad's savouring every little moment..;)

as i had predicted, u brought out their emotions and feelings perfectly in the ff.....i knew u'd do justice to it.....

im sad again now....coz i'll have to wait for the next update...... :(( but the next update will b e worth the wait....:) so am waiting eagerly now!!!!!!!!!!

i hope u're updating soon...and there's a reason coz now we'll get to read the update of DY,M....*excited* *excited*....

looking forward to the next update.....pls put it up soon!!!!!!!!!

love u!!!!
Niyati...

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CutielovesChocs

@CutielovesChocs

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#440

Hey Bheegi (Sangeeta)Di.. (i hope i can call u that...) :D

i dunno which FF will u check first, so jotted my comments on both !! :D:D:D:D

OKay.....

I seriously have no idea why i never got to commenting on ur FFs..

So lemme tell ya i hv read allllllllllllll ur FFs and i simply luuuuuuuuuv em !!! m not a new reader, but just didnt get round to comment on ur FFss..

They sumtyms make me senti and sumtyms make me laugh out loud and sumtyms, make me go awwwwwwwh at the cuteness...

But seriously, i have to tell u , u r an amaizng writer...

and i luuuv this FF and alll the other ones..

Now cuming to the story, I luv the starting whr Angad is shown as the celeb and he meets Kripa ... luved his emotions whn he is with Ria !

And, i simply laughed out loud wen Angad saw Kripa dancing and he was glued tot he spot !!! :D:D:D And how he thought Mishty was 2 chipkoo....

And the funniest part was wen Kripa played Pappu Cant Dance with Angad being Pappu !! and liked the confrontation after the song...

Can u plzz PM me whn u post the next parts...

Thanks..

Tajju

And Ps-- Continue soon !!!!!!