Rahul-MuskiFF-Anything But Love upd Pt5 pg23 dec 4

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Mitsy

@mits002

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#121

[quote=aish_punk]Hey Mitsy...really cute part...

I could c tat Rahul wz jealous wen Muskaan fell in2 tat dudes arms!!lolz... Rahul has strtd behavin lykk Muskaan wid her company!! 😆 I lykkd d wy Rahul felt responsible 4 Muskaan..Well she iz quite immature..bt den I h8d d way he wz over concerned 4 her.. n he made a scene out der embarassin Muskaan!! N nw Muskaans angry wid him!! Lol...

Srry 4 d shrt comment

Plzzz cont soon..

Thnx 4 d PM[/quote]

Aish... no need to be sorry for the short...it was long enough to make me feel good. In fact, just anything in this thread makes me feel good!
Thank you SO much!

[quote=sweetdamage]yay!! you updated!! that was sooooo good!! honestly! I couldn't stop laughing, and I was grinning like an idiot when Rahul pretended Muskaan was his gf when the dude was flirting with her!

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😆😆 Thank youu...That was such a cute compliment...

[quote=vaish04] awwwwwww...............dear.............simply awesome...........👏.👏.the way u described her angelious features👏.............cont soon............and PM me if possible[/quote]

😊 Thank you sooooo much for liking it so much!

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Sonia Bhalla

@SuhaniSonia

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Posted: 16 years ago

#122

I read your stuff in the weekend with rahul and muskaan thread and followed your link here. I have to say your writing is amazing. I really don't know how you think of these plots and then turn out to be so cute. Definitely loving it. Keep it goin... and PM me please...

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Komal

@AshiYuvi4life

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#123

uhhh yeah right dude. No competition there. Rahul belongs to Muskaan or ME! MWAHAHAHAHA! sorry i don't share him! As for the ff, urs is better.

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Mitsy

@mits002

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#124

[quote=ammyfan_pragati]

Hey mitsy,i hope i can call you dat)😳

i just caught up wid all 3 parts😳

andddddddddd the ff is just soooooooooooooo ammmaaaaaaaaazzzziiinggggggg

and u noe the storyline fits RM sooooooo perfectly😳😳😳

i lub RM soo mcuh..and this ff made me lub dem more dan eva😳

and aww rahul and muskaan bth are committed to sum1😕

and rahul cares fr muskaan now whoopeeeeeeee😃😃😃

oh i wanted to ask you something..can i add ur ff link to the RM resort(rm fanclub)??😳😳

luv,

pragz
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🤪 I am sooo happy that u liked it pragz!
and as i had said before..u can add this link to the RM fan club! Its my pleasure!
And thank you so much for commenting!

[quote=sweet anju] hey it was toooooooooooooooooooooooo good yaar plssssssssssss cont fast. thnks 4 pm [/quote]

Thank you anju!! 😊

[quote=pal_279] hey mitsy....

read d whole ff.....nice concept....nd wonderful updates....do cont soon...nd pls add m in ur pm list if u hav any..

btw r u d same mitali from dill mill gayye comm on orkut?!?
[/quote] Thank youuuu!! and i am def. gonna pm u when i update.!

And yea..I am the same Mitali from the DMG comm on orkut...who are you?? I am soo excited to see an orkut member here.!!

[quote=arvanu]

very cute,mitali.........do continue soon and thanks for the pm!!

-surbhi😊

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Thank you surbhi! 😊

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Mitsy

@mits002

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: *mansibhatia*
Aww,,Mitsy awsoome partt..it was soo cute of Rahul 2 be responsible for her. His thoughts were simply hilarious!! Nd Muskaan compliemtned every part..theyre chemistry is amazing!! Waiting for the nxt part!!🤗

🤗 Aww..Thank you mansi for such a wonderful comment. I am glad that you commented on rahul's thoughts because more than his..they are mine!😆

btw when are you gonna update yours??! 😲

[quote=mrsdiya]gr8 update....😉

loved it, plzzzz update soon.........🤗

luv diya
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😳 thanks diya!

[quote=nidz n] hey mittz ....i waz out f town so sory 4 late coment....
it waz very gud ....loving it as u continue....update soon
take care
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Not a problem at all...! infact, now i am sorry for the late reply!
Thank you sweetz

[quote=usharafuddin]WOOWWWWWWWWWWWWIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE awwwwwwsom man! awwsom! luved it! 😛 cont soon!
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😳

Thanks haiba!

[quote=rimli_remix rox]hi mitsy,thanks for the pm dear

i love ur FF and already addicted to it

all 3 parts r jst superb

sply i loved the intro part

awesomeeeeee FF

do cont soon and pm me when u update
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Hey..!! I am soo ⭐️ that u liked it!
Thank you soo much for taking time readinf and commenting!
Means a lot!

[quote=luvingRM] itz gr8 ....... m waiting 4 next part[/quote]
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[quote=ramusk]hey mits,

i hav read thro ur FF .It's fabulous an entirely new scenario of R and M . gr8 goin.. if possible plzz update the next part also .... eagerly waiting for it.Luvd the way R was protective of her n she cutely obeyed him n stood thr.

ramusk
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Heeyy!! One more WWRM buddy! woohoo!
Glad that u likd it!

[quote=luv_dmg_armaan]Hey! I just read your entire ff...aww love rahul and muskaan! wow btw fabulous writing!! update sooon!! btw can u add me to your PM list?

tc
radhika
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I love RM tooo..and that too toooooo much! and thanks for the compliment! 😳
Will PM u next time i update!

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Mitsy

@mits002

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#126

[quote=anhdara13]
very nice! love this jodi.. waiting for the next part..

Love,

Radz
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Hi radz!
Next part is coming up as soon as tmrw!
and thanks for the comment[:)}

[quote=SuhaniSonia]
I read your stuff in the weekend with rahul and muskaan thread and followed your link here. I have to say your writing is amazing. I really don't know how you think of these plots and then turn out to be so cute. Definitely loving it. Keep it goin... and PM me please...
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You are soo nice! Thanks for the compliments! means soo much!
will pm u the next time i update!
Thanks again Sonia! 😊

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Mitsy

@mits002

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life
uhhh yeah right dude. No competition there. Rahul belongs to Muskaan or ME! MWAHAHAHAHA! sorry i don't share him! As for the ff, urs is better.

😲😲

Komyy...!!
Rahul is MINE!

ok...fiinee! its urs and muskaan's. But i get to be drushti dhami. 😆 deal?
🤪

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Mitsy

@mits002

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#128

First of all, I would like to thank each and everyone of you for continuous support! Makes me feel soo good. REALLY! Sorry for the late update!

PART 4: FRIENDS?

They sat almost 5 rows apart from each other. Rahul was feeling bad in a way but then he thought about it and he figured it wasn't his fault. I mean, she could have waited till he was back. Rahul took it as blessing in disguise. Atleast now, he didn't had to listen her blabbering for hours.

In air:

Muskaan got up to wash her hands. She passed by Rahul. He looked at her and she gave him a angry look. 😡
Rahul mocked her! and then nodded his head smiling. 😛

5 minutes Later

Muskaan was yelling on top of her lungs:
RAHULLLL RAHULLLL!!

Rahul couldn't believe this! First this girl acts immaturely, then doesn't talk and now shouts across the plane on top of her lungs! She has GOT to be kidding him!

Muskaan: Rahul! Rahuuuul!

He turned around to see her waving vigorously. She waved him to come here.

"NOW WHAT" he thought.
He knew he had to go. or she would scream even louder..so he got up and went there!
"kya hain?"
"Waha Dekh.." She said pointing her finger towards the window by the emergency exit door.
He looked outside and what he saw was awe inspiring. The view was just out of this world. It was never seen in movies or pictures. The plane was cruising thru the clouds and they could see an island underneath, a green patch, carved carefully by God amidst the dark blue ocean. The sun hit the land and the water in such a way that the reflection was enough for a person in the plane to wear sunglasses. The environment was deep orange-yellow in color and it was just out of this world. He was soo mesmerized by the beauty of nature that he could not even hear what Muskaan was continuously commenting on.
"WOW!" he finally gasped.
"Dekha! Hain na..ekdum badiya".

She knelt a little bit, resting her left temple on his right shoulder. She grabbed his right arm. He felt her so close that he turned his face to face her. She was SUPER excited and her smile seemed no bounds..her face was small for her smile he thought. The reflection pierced thru the window on her face and boy! Her eyes were shining like brown diamonds. His jaw dropped. The nature is beautiful, ofcourse but she is BEAUTIFUL.

Muskaan managed to convince the lady next to her to switch seats with Rahul. (without him knowing) She didn't even try to change her seat because how could she give up a window seat!
She went with the lady to his seat.
"Rahul..yeh maan gayi..tum mere saath aake beth sakte ho"
"huh?"
"Kya huh!..Main jaanti hoon..tum bore ho gaye hoge hain na..yaha pe akele akele beth ke..kisise baat nahi ki..to maine socha ki main isko
pata loon.. aur pat bhi gayi..hahaha"😆
"Par Muskaan"😕
"Can u please talk later" The lady interrupted..

He took his belongings and took the seat beside Muskaan.
M: Maine tumhe maaf kiya. (she said with a pinch of pride)
R: Thank you soo much! (he said with a pinch of sarcasm)
Muskaan frowned and then started laughing.. Rahul too laughed.😆

FINALLY NEW YORK!!

While they were waiting for their bags to come out..Rahul flipped out his phone and started dialing.
"Kise phone kar rahe ho?" Muskaan asked.
"Maya ko."
"ooooooooooo....uske bina raha nahi jaata??" she said a bit teasingly.
Rahul shook his head slightly not in saying No but at her small small adaein!
"Hii..jaan"
"Kya kar rahi ho?" He started moving towards the door for better connectivity and Muskaan followed eavesdropping.
"Haan..bas abhi hi pahocha. Bags ke liye wait kar raha hoon."
"Flight acchi thi..koi problem (he turned to see muskaan right next to his phone.😕) uhmm.....(Muskaan gave him a pressed smile😃) nahi hui.."
"I miss you tooo...kash tum mere saath yaha hoti..! Waise tumhare project ka kya hua?"
"I am so happy for you! I think mere bags aa rahe hain..ghar pahochke phone karunga ok?"
"Take care..love you bye"

He hung up and starts walking back towards the baggage claims.
Muskaan followed as well.
"To baat love shov tak pahoch gai hain..haan haan haan??" She asked teasing him again.
"Muskaan... woh meri GF hain!"
"Keh to aise rahe ho...jaise ki tumhari mummy hain.. c'mon main tumse ye thodi na poonchh rahi hoon
ki kya tum apni mummy se pyar karte ho? Main to yeh poonchh rahi hoon..kya tum usse pyar karte ho?"
Can this girl ever use her brain..he thought. "Haan!" He had to put an end somewhere.

They both took their bags and came outside. Muskaan's whole family was waiting for her; her uncle, aunt and cousins. (Thank god. they didn't bring a phoolon ka haar to welcome her) They greeted her and Rahul was busy looking for his ride.
Muskaan told her uncle about Rahul.
Rahul said Namaste to the uncle..
"Arre Namaste Shamaste baad mein..Hamare yaha gale milte hain."
And gave him a tight hug. His organs started to suffocate..
Aunty came and gave Rahul a sweet. She looked at Muskaan and winked. Muskaan moved her head sideways in a 'NO'.
Uncle talked a lot with him, asked all his information and stuff, gave his phone number and told him to call them if he wants anything.
Rahul knew that he would be good by himself but having a number was not a problem. He stored it in his cell phone under "Muskaan".
"Bye Rahul." Muskaan says as they are about to leave.
"Bye" He smiled.
Muskaan's relatives starts walking, she follows them and he starts walking in the other direction.

"Rahul...?" She called him. And paced towards him.
Rahul turned and waited for her to come near him.
Muskaan streched out her hand and with a smile asked.. "Friends?"
He looked at her suspiciously and waited a moment to think.. friends with muskaan?! hmm... if I was not "friend" of hers till now..how would she be with a friend.
Her smile was slowly diasappearing but then Rahul quipped his hand out, noddingly and shaking it with hers. "Friends" 😊

This has been my longest part, I think. I am sorry but i wont be able to PM anyone right now. Its very late and i have an exam tomorrow. I will PM everybody tmrw.
Thank you....
EDIT: I started PMing but my computer froze and now i have to go to college...so the remaining i will PM after todays Diwali Poojan! HAPPY DIWALI!!
Comment/critize! 😊

Edited by mits002 - 16 years ago

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Sonu

@x.sonia.x

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#129

very cute. i like your descriptions.

feel like i am reading a real story and can see it all play out in my mind.

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aishwarya

@aish_punk

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#130

Hey mitsy...cute part...n yeah it qz quite lng too

I guess Muskaan cnt live widout Rahul...d way she screamed..Omg!! n Rahul actually thot she wz beautiful...awww...cute!! bt I guess Rahul jus dusnt lykk her blabberin attitude..Lol .... n her p'rnts r as weird as her.....n Rahul wz ryt..if dey wer nt frndz till nw...den wt wer dey??!! She bugged him soo mch wen dey wernt eva frndz.. n nw tat dey r frndz...wt will she do!! N I don unnersan y Muskaans smile disappeared wen Rahul agreed 2 b frndz wid her...she shud b beamin in joy!!

Srry 4 d shrt comment

Plzzzz cont soon....bt afta ure xamz r ova..ure totally crazy!! U still updatin wen u had an xam tmrw!! Nt gud huh?!

N Itz kk abt d Pm's... u shudnt eva b updatin n v cnt xpect u 2 send out PMs...newy I managed 2 catch d part

Aishwarya