Mauja Hi Mauja-DMG ff (Part 11-Pg 17) - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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amazing part sweetie
loved it soooo much
tooooooooo gooooood
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I loved this part.......Ridz , Rahul and Anjie are interesting characters...😊Plzzzzzz continue soooooooon......can't wait to read more....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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It was amazing.😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice update
hope ridz meets armaan in india
plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey naina😊
thanks for the pm sweety😉
i liked the intro
it defines their chars 😊
lovely part
update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thank you friends for your nice comments…😊

PART 3

{{RECAP:Gupta family's intro...They are going to spend their vacation in India}}

One week later, Mumbai:

Armaan and Atul were returning from a farewell day party at night...Armaan was driving the car and Atul was sitting near him..

Ar:Atul..Party bahut acha tha na..

At:Haan Armaan..Ab toh humara college bhi khatam hogaya...We will miss our friends...

Ar:Haan..Anyways...Ab toh 3 months ke liye aaraam hi aaraam hain..(smiles)

At:Haan..And after that we both will be joining for M.B.A..

Ar:Bechari Muski..Usko toh bas 2 months holidays hain..(laughs)

At:Haan yaar..(laughs)

A girl who was travelling in a car at their right side waved at Armaan..

G:Hey Armaan..

Ar:Hii Pooja..

P:(blews a flying kiss)Goodnight Armaan...

Ar:(waves)Goodnight sweetheart..(smiles)

And then he took the car forward and overtook that car...

At:Tu bhi na...(laughs)Now you are going to miss these girlfriends too..

Ar:Who cares Atul..!!(laughs)All these girls were just for time pass...

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Meanwhile, at Melbourne :

The Gupta family was busy with their packing...Anjali and Ridhima were in their bedroom and were filling their suitcases with all the necessary things...

An:Mera handy cam kahan chala gaya..?(searches here and there)

Ri:Di..Aap ne cupboard mein check ki..?

An:Nahin..Dekhti hoon...

Ri:Offo..Ab yeh mobile charger kahan reh gaya..?

An:Wahan dekhi thi maine..(indicates the place)

Ri:Haan..Mil gaya..

Just then Rahul came into the room..

Ra:Ridz, Anjie, kisi ne mera 'i pod ' dekha..?

An:Haan...Its in the sitting room..Maine sofa par rakhi thi..

Ra:Kya Anjali..?How many times I have told you not to keep it here and there..Tum bhi na..(shakes his head disapprovingly)

An:Sorry bhaiyya...

Rahul left the room and Anjali and Ridhima continued with their packing..

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Atul and Armaan reached home..Muskaan was watching the t.v sitting on the sofa..She didn't notice them coming...Armaan winked at Atul and went behind her slowly, without making any noice..He pounced on her and grabbed the remote...

Mu:Ouch....!!Kaun hain..?....(sees Armaan) Armaan..!!

Ar:(laughs and sits on the sofa beside her)Chal Atul..Baith..Hum t.v dekhte hain...(starts changing the channels)

At:(excitedly)Haan..(sits on her other side)

Mu:(irritated)Armaan..Mujhe woh do..I want to see that film...(and tries to grab the remote from him)

But Armaan didn't let her have the remote and he kept on changing the channels, while Muskaan struggled with his hand..At last Armaan kept the cricket match which he wanted to watch and then he sat on top of the remote so that she couldn't get it...

Mu:(angrily)Tumhe toh main..(and starts to beat him and pinch him)

Ar:Oww..Oww..Stop it Muskaan..Ouch..Arre Atul..Tu mujhe bachaa na is shaitaan se...

Atul holds her from behind and started to pull her backwards...Muskaan turned back and started to hit him too...Kanya came running into the hall hearing all the noise...

K:Atul..Muskaan..Armaan..Stop it...

Mu:Bhabhi..Yeh dekhiye na..Yeh dono mujhe t.v dekhne nahin de rahi..(and starts pinching Armaan again)Do muhje remote..

K:Armaan..Woh remote de usko..Kyun pareshan kar raha hain bechari ko..?

Ar:Bechari?!!Aur yeh..!!Par bhabhi...Humein match dekhna hain...

K:Tum log party ke baad abhi aaye ho na..?Jaao jaake fresh ho jaao..

At:(leaves Muskaan and gets up)Teek hain bhabhi..

Ar:(makes a face at Muskaan and gets up)Hum abhi aayenge..

Mu:(stuck out her toungue at him and takes the remote)Thank you bhabhi..(smiles at Kanya)

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Next Day morning, in the Flight to India:

Anjali,Ridhima and Padma were sitting in together in the central row where as Rahul and Shashank were sitting together at the seats near to the window..

An:Ridz..Its a good thing that we have 1 and a half month holiday..

Ri:Haan..woh toh hain..Aur Papa bhi 1 and a half month holiday liya hain hospital se..

An:Mama..When will we reach Mumbai Airport..?

Pa:In the afternoon..

Ri:Shaadi toh kal hain na..So we will be staying in Khanna uncle's home tonight..?

Pa:Haan..

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Atul was sleeping peacefully in his bed in the morning...Muskaan came to his room and sat beside him..

Mu:(shaking him)Atul..Utho na..

At:(closed eyes)Hmm..Jaa na Muski..Sone de..(turns to the other side)

Mu:Utho Atul..Please..I have an idea...

At:(closed eyes)Kya Muskaan...?Subah subah aayi hain meri neend kharaab karne..

Mu:ATUL!!Nahin uthoge toh main paani daaloongi tumhare upar..Utho..8 baj chuki hain..(hits his arm)

At:(opens his eyes)Mujhe maar kyun rahi hain..?Teek hain..Main uth-tha hoon..(sits up)Ab bataa..Kya chahiye tujhe..?(rubs his eyes and yawns)

Mu:(excitedly)Atul..I have an idea..Let's go for a one week tour..Sirf main, tum aur Armaan..

At:(smiles)Idea toh acha hain..But will they give us permission..?

Mu:Kaun..?Maa Papa aur sab..?Unn logon ko hum manaa lenge..

At:Tumhe lagta hain ki Maa humein permission dengi..?Unhe toh pata hain ki tu hum donon se humesha ladti rehti hain..She won't let you come with us even if me and Armaan gets the permission..

Mu:Oye..!!Aise kaise jaane denge tum donon ko..Idea toh mera hain na..I won't let you go without me...Haan..!!

At:Ok..Ok..Hum Armaan se poonchte hain..Chal..

Atul and Muskaan came to Armaan's room and found him asleep on his bed...Both of them went and shook him..

At:Armaan..Uth..

Mu:Utho..Utho..

Ar:Kya yaar Atul..Sone de..

Mu:Its already 8 o clock..

Ar:Muski..Tu jaa na yahan se..(opens his eyes)Kya chahiye tum donon ko..?(sits up and stretches himself)

At:Armaan..Ek acha sa idea hain humaare paas...

Mu:Oye...Mera idea hain..

At:Acha..teek hain..iska idea..Let's go for a one week trip to somewhere..Just the three of us..

Ar:Kya!!Hum donon is Muskaan ke saath jaayenge..?Tumhara tabiyat toh teek hain na Atul..?

Mu:Armaan..!!

Ar:(laughs)Acha..Teek hain..Par kahan..?

Mu:Woh toh pata nahin..Tum hi bataao na..

Ar:(thinks)Acha teek hain..Hum GOA chalte hain..!!(looks at them with excitement)

At:Wow!!Great idea..!!Hain na Muski..?

Mu:(smiles)Haan..

At:Par Armaan..Mere khayaal se Maa Muskaan ko humaare saath aane nahin dengi..She always keeps fighting with us na..

Ar:Haan Muski..Atul is right..

Mu:Offo..Ab main kya karoon..?

Ar:Tu ek kaam kar Muski..We will plan the trip for day after tomorrow..So you should behave nicely with us today and tomorrow..So that Prerna chachi will allow you to come with us..Is that o.k..?

Mu:Ok..

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Khanna's Residence, Mumbai:

Anjali and Ridhima were sitting among the girls in the bride's bedroom..Anjali and Ridhima were looking beautiful in ghagra cholis…The bride (Mr.Khanna's daughter) was looking really beautiful in her wedding outfit...Suddenly a little boy came running to the room..

Boy:Didi..Baraat aagayi..

All the girls went to the balcony and looked outside..The 'baraat' was indeed coming towards the house..Anjali and Ridhima were excited when they saw the bridegroom sitting on the horse, with a headcovering with flowers..

An:Yeh ladka horse pe kyun baitha hain..?(giggles)

Ri:Aisa hi hota hain di..I have seen in Hindi films..

An:Acha..?Well..Its really funny...And we can't even see his face..What is that he has on his head yaar..?

Ri:Its called the 'Sehraa'...

They all walked down to the hall where the marriage was going to take place...Anjali and Ridhima went and stood with Padma who was talking with Mrs.Khanna..After some time Rahul came to them..He was wearing a sherwani…

Ra:Papa is calling all of you..

Pa:Me too..?

Ra:Haan Mama..

Anjali,Ridhima and Padma went with Rahul...They saw Shashank looking at them and smiling and he was telling something to two men who were standing beside him..They were none other than Vinay Nanda(Armaan's and Ranbir's father) and Lalit Nanda (Atul's and Muski's father)..As they came near...

Sh: Yeh hain meri daughters Ridhima aur Anjali..

An and Ri:Namaste...(smiles)

Vi & La:Namaste bachon..(smiles)

Sh:Aur yeh hain meri wife, Padma..

They also greeted each other..

Sh:Padma, yeh hain Lalit aur Vinay bhaiyya..Lalit mere best friend the school mein...Aur yeh hain uska bada bhaai, Vinay bhaiyya....

La:(to Anjali and Ridhima) You both are in college right..?Which course are you doing...?

Ri:I am doing my Journalism degree..I have finished my first year...

An: Finished my second year degree in English Literature...

La:Oh..That's good..(smiles)

Sh:(smiling)Padma, I am very lucky to meet them here..We are meeting after so many years..

Vi:School ke baad Shashank toh Australia chala gaya tha Medicine padhne ke liye...

La:Aur humara contact bhi toot gaya...

Pa:Aap log Dr.Khanna ko jaante hain..?

Vi:Nahin..Hum toh ladke waalon ke taraf se hain..Ladke ka baap humara ek business partner hain..

La:Waise Shashank, tumhe Deepak yaad hain..?

Sh:Haan yaar..Kaise bhool sakta hoon tum sab doston ko..

La:Uski beti ki shaadi hain do din baad..

Sh:(smiles)Acha..?

La:Haan..He was telling that he wanted to invite you too..But none of us knew your contact number or address..Ab agar main usse yeh kahoon ki tum Mumbai mein hi hain, toh woh bahut khush hoga..

Vi:Waise Padma..Aap sab aaj humaare saath ghar chalenge..

La:Haan..Aur yeh Shashank kisi hotel mein rehne ki baat kar raha hain..

Sh:Par...

La:Dekho Shashank..Koi bahaana nahin chalega..Tum Humare saath ghar aa rahe ho..That's final...Main abhi Prerna ko phone karke bataata hoon…

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Meanwhile at Nanda Mansion:

Since Muskaan had after all behaved well for two days with her two brothers, Prerna had given them permission to go for the trip..So Muskaan, Armaan and Atul were all packing their bags to go to Goa..

Muskaan was humming some songs as she was doing her packing...Just then Prerna came to her room...

Mu:Maa..Meri madat kijiye na...

Pr:Muskaan beta..Main tumse kuch kehne aayi hoon..

Mu:(concentrating in her packing)Toh phir kahiye na..

Pr:I am sorry beta..Tum log abhi yeh trip mein nahin jaa sakte..

Mu:(turns to face her mother) KYA?!!

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What will happen when the six youngsters meet? Keep reading 'Mauja Hi Mauja' and I shall promise you that this story is full of unlimited fun as the name suggests...So get ready for the fun and well...Romance...😊

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END OF PART 3.....HOW WAS IT....? PLEASE COMMENT....

LOVE,

NAINA😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey amazing ff..add me 2 ur PM list if nt a prblm wd u..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey naina
thanks for the pm sweety
must say
this part was awesome dear loved it
um looking forward for their meet
update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome yaar........
very nice ff
loved it
plz continue soon
pm me when u will update next part
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Posted: 16 years ago
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really a nice one awesome plz continue it soon

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