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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Ye to hona he tha mostly live in's k result aise hi hote hain. agrred dear.... mostly cosmopolitan cities main toh aisa hi hota hai

Par ye case alag tha kyounki this belongs to our Raj n NainaπŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•. Raj jab laut kar waapas aaya to Naina ka face dekh kar hi usne realize kar liya ki kuch hua hai Naina ko isiliye vo itna pareshaan haiπŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›. Kya ye pyaar nahi hai jo Raj Naina ki aankhon se samajh gayaπŸ˜”πŸ˜”πŸ˜”? Raj apni jagah sahi tha ki agar Naina pregnent hai aur vo baccha apne saath rakhna chahti hai to vo shaadi kar lega us se but will it be practical?❓❓❓ welll dono hi aapni jagah s sahi the... par solution doondne ki jagah yeh dono jhagada kar rahe the...

Mujhe Raj ka ye point bhi sahi laga ki ek bacche ko duniya me le aaye
par aise kaise jab us k parents hi nahi ready hai us ki responsibilities k liye. Par Naina apne bacche ko nahi maarna chahti thi that was right also. Naina ne apne gusse, impractical and stubborn nature ki wajah se Raj ko choda.πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’πŸ˜’Pehle apne maa baap ko choda aur ab Raj ko😲😲😲 . Us k jaise insaan se aur expect bhi kya kar sakte hain.😑😑😑Humesha galtiyaan karo aur zimmedari doosron par daaloπŸ€”πŸ€” πŸ€”. Us ki himmat kaise hue Raj ko slap karne ki. hehehe... bechari naina ko dosh kyun de rahe ho...... woh bhi mental trauma se guzar rahi thi...
Naina ne apni zid me aa kar apna rishta bus apne attitude ki wajah se chod diyaπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺ.Us ka nature hi aisa tha ki us ne apne haathon se sab bigaad liya aur us time Sonali bhi nahi thi wahan😭😭😭. Raj ko apni galti ka ehsaas hua ki us ne Naina k saath galat kiya haiπŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜• aur Naina ko bhi ye ehsaas that ki she still loves Raj n will always love him a lot.πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰ Raj ka pyaar Naina k liye dekho ki us ne Naina ka note abhi tak samhaal k rakha hua hai.😊😊😊 well... woh dono pagal the... aur apne pagalpan mein hi sab kuch kar baithe.....
nice partπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ n cont soon. next part coming up....

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!

Raj felt something was wrong with her and asked her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊He was comforting her!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›How sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 apna Raj toh hai hi aisa....

When Naina said she was pregnant he was shocked!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲He had thought she was diagnosed with diabetes!!!!πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• yeah.. diabetes ka report aiga aur naina rona chalu kar de gi... toh raj toh yahi sochega ke use diabetes ho gaya hai...

Raj is saying sorry!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›How sweet!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Naina assured him that it is their fault, not his alone!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 yeah... he is a gentleman naah

Naina does not know what to do!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”She does not want to kill her baby!!!!! and woman with feelings will nva want to kill her unborn child...

Raj said that if she wants to keep the child he will marry her tomorrow but would that be practial!!!😊 😊 😊 😊He has a point!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 yes he has a point...

Raj is right ke are they ready for parenthood!!!! So many responsibilities come with parenthood!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” true... bache paalna is not a joke...

Raj said Naina is getting sentimental and Naina said he is heartless!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲O no!!! jagada shuru.....

Raj is also right ke it is not right to bring a child into this world when his parents are not sure about their own relationship!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 yes he is...

Raj ne usse kya kya keh diya aur Naina ne usse thappad mara!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲O God!!!! from bad to worse...

Naina ne gusse mein keh diya Raj ko he is free to move out and he also said its all over!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭O no!!!! break up...

What a way to make your relationship work!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ 😑 😑 😑 😑 terrible way indeed...

Naina bahut impulsive hai!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’Ek raat mein decide kar liya that she wanted to leave Raj and the city!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” she is impulsive... no doubt abt tht...

Raj ne toh realise kar liya that he had said all in a fit of anger and decided to go back and apologise to her!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 h is a darling... and he understood tht she needs him nosw more than ever...

Naina toh gayab ho gayi aur apne saare nishaan mita diye jisse koi usse dhundh sakta tha!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” raj ko sorry kehne ka moka bhi nahi diya...

Sonali was out of town warna zaroor Naina ko convince karne ki koshish karti aur shayad usse samjha bhi deti!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” yeah... par kya kare... kismat...

Naina ne India hamesha ke liye chhod diya with the idea of never coming back!!!!! par use ana pada...

Naina ne kya sirf rebel karne ke liye bacche ko abort nahi karwaya??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• shayad...

Ek taraf she does not want to see him and interact with him but she still kept his baby!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 bache ka kya kassoor..

Naina's daughter Prachi looks remarkably like Raj!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›So sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 yes it is sweet..

Naina always wished she could have had a family with Raj because he was the first and last man she ever loved!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 ok mujhe rona aa raha hai abhi...

Toh phir kyun aise chhodke chali aayi thi!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 impulsive....

Naina's letter was very emotional and Raj still has this letter in his wallet!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Kitna pyaar karta hai aaj bhi usse!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 pyaar toh kabhi nahi jata hai...

She said she can never forget the time she spent with him and loves him and will always love him!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 truee... love never dies...

Raj said this time he will not let her go and will compensate for all the hard times he has given her!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊Wow!!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ next part.. coming up....

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: riyaa_1985

Hello!! Deeya!!
Wow!!πŸ˜›πŸ˜›. Beautifully written dear..... thank 8u so much....
What an emotional part!!!!😭 i glad tht u found it emotional.. and didnt laugh at my writing
It was really sad to see two mature people behaving in such a manner!!! it always is a pity...
I think their relationship always lacked the amount understanding that is needed to make the relationship work.... true..... very true...
may be both were immature to handle a relationship as delicate as this.....πŸ˜”πŸ˜” yes they were nt prepared...
But it's great to see that Raj is ready to give his relationship one more chance....πŸ˜› he is ready to compensate for the hard time s he has given her
And according to me it's the best thing to do...since they both love each other so much till date...😳 yes... love still exists...

Well ...I think....there are times when 1 cannot decide who's right and who isn't...!!! there definately are..
Raj and Naina went through that phase of time ...I suppose....
I am sure everything is going to be fine...in future.... it will be... we learn thru mistakes onli....

Now the update was simply breathtaking......beautiful......πŸ‘ thank u so much....
Loved it...once again a great part dear....πŸ‘πŸΌ
Please continue soon...


With love
Riya.....


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Posted: 16 years ago

Part Fourteen

It was 6.30pm and it was dark outside, and the electricity had gone off and naina had looked in every nook and corner for a candle, the doors and windows were open as it was stuffy, she was grateful that Prachi was asleep or else she would have had more of a problem, now that she had found a candle her next quest was to find a way to light it, after a lot of searching she found an age old lighter, suddenly she heard footstep and she shivered, it couldn't be him is what she thought, because those footsteps sounded familiar, but in a few seconds she saw him at the door, it had been 3 years and this fact hit her like a lightning, she was standing a little inside the room and he came in and locked the door from inside.

"Raj, what are you doing here"

"What I should have done 3 years back"

And he fell on his knees and joined his hands infront of her and slowly started weeping

"Naina, I know its late, very very late and I cant return the 3 years of your life, but I want to say sorry for my foolishness"

"Saying sorry is not going to reverse the damage u have done Raj"

Even though she said this her heart was crying seeing him crying

"Did Sonali tell u?"

"No Sonali didn'tell me, I heard her"

And he narrated the whole incident to her of the way he had followed them

"Why did u do this Raj?? If you knew I didn't want to meet u then why did u come here"

"Because I love u Naina, and I cant live without you"

"Well, that wasn't the way tht u put it 3 years back"

"I know Naina, I was a jerk at that time and I agree with that"

He got up from the floor and went forward and held her by the shoulders, and said

"Don't you want me now? Don't you love me now?"

Naina looked into his eyes and saw the sincerity in them and that threw her off balance

"Raj these three years hav been like a nightmare for me, going to a foreign land, bringing up a kid, its not been easy"

"And so what is the practicality in continuing wid the same nighmare"

Naina just turned away

"Naina it was meant to be this way, we were meant to meet and that's why u are here infront of me, if destiny is giving me one more chance then why are you taking it away from me??"

"Raj its always easier said than done, I don't want to go through the mental trauma again"

"So you are scared that our relationship will fail this time as well"

Naina looked at him and gave him a nod

"Naina I promise u, it will not be the same, if you are with me then ill make every effort to change"

"And why do you have to change?? Its better that we stay apart Raj, I don't want to change anybody"

"Naina every relationship has to have some level of compromise and adjustment, in these 3 years I have realized that, that was one thing that we never understood that in a relationship you have to accommodate and give eachother space"

Naina looked into his eyes and couldn't help but see the truthfulness, what he was saying was right

"But Raj even if we give eachother another chance what is the guarantee that something like what happened the last time will not happen again"

"Naina there is no guarantee for anything I the world, all we can try to do is be patient and everything will be fine, we are 3 years elder now, have seen bad days"

Suddenly their conversation was broken by a cry from the bedroom, the 2 of them ran inside and saw Prachi crying, for the first time Raj saw his kid and felt like a father, he saw Naina trying to pacify her and realized what she musthv gone through all these years with no fault of hers, Raj suddenly went forward to gather Prachi in his arms. And Naina gave her to him willingly

Prachi looked at him but cudnt recognize him but after he carried her to the hall and she saw his face in the dim light and recognized him at once from the photographs Naina had

"Dada"

And she hugged him and kissed him tight

Raj really hadn't expected this, and this sudden gesture from Prachi reduced him to tears

Standing in the shadows Naina also started crying

"Iam sorry beta, I am probably the worst dad in the world, a dad who doesn't even know his daughters name"

And he looked at naina, and she understood

"Prachi come to Mama now"

But Prachi was adamant and clung to raj

Raj walked upto Naina and hugged her, and Naina too reciprocated

"I am sorry Naina, I am very sorry"

And he kissed her on her forehead

"I know it will be difficult for you, after all the trouble u have gone through but I think its high time we get together not for our sakes for atleast for the sake of Prachi"

Naina couldn't help but agree with him, because she also knew that her daughter deserved to have a family,

They ate dinner that night and called Sonali and told her about what had happened and Sonali burst out with tears of happiness

The night was a beautiful night, which was spent with Raj and Naina on either side of Prachi just telling eachother of the years they spent without eachother

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Posted: 16 years ago
i kno... this is an extremely short part... but cudnt help it... will try to update the next part in 2 days time.....
ok now... i guess there r onli 2 tiny miny updates left and my fic will be over.......so no more torture for u guys...
tk cre and enjoy....
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Posted: 16 years ago
a very very emotional yet beautiful updt.........
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi Deeya
Thanks for the pm..n yeah it is a torture when we dont get to read your updateπŸ˜‰...
Update was very gud..πŸ‘.But how can Naina forgive Raj so easily..Years of pain n hurt r not easy to forget den i got the answer in dis update only..It was not dat only Raj who was at fault even Naina behaved in a very stubborn way.πŸ˜•..n den wat is Prachi's fault in all dis..Why does she has to suffer????????
Its gud dat Naina is willing to give the second chance to Raj coz its easy to break realtions but difficult to mend..Both of them have understood dis in 3 long years..n your love is back to u ..Only lucky people get dis kinda chance again...πŸ₯³That scene was really sentimental where Prachi hugs Raj n both Raj n Naina r in tears.😭
So its a happy family now with all the three members enjoying demselves.πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
Do update soon as i loved to b tortured ...Ha haπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Edited by suhana_dixit - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Deeya

Thanks for the pm..n yeah it is a torture when we dont get to read your updateπŸ˜‰...
Update was very gud...But how can Naina forgive Raj so easily..Years of pain n hurt r not easy to forget den i got the answer in dis update only..It was not dat only Raj who was at fault even Naina behaved in a very stubborn way.πŸ˜•..n den wat is Prachi's fault in all dis..Why does she has to suffer????????
Its gud dat Naina is willing to give the second chance to Raj coz its easy to break realtions but difficult to mend..Both of them have understood dis in 3 long years..n your love is back to u ..Only lucky people get dis kinda chance again...That scene was really sentimental where Prachi hugs Raj n both Raj n Naina r in tears.

well said.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Deeya

Thanks for the pm..n yeah it is a torture when we dont get to read your updateπŸ˜‰...
Update was very gud...But how can Naina forgive Raj so easily..Years of pain n hurt r not easy to forget den i got the answer in dis update only..It was not dat only Raj who was at fault even Naina behaved in a very stubborn way.πŸ˜•..n den wat is Prachi's fault in all dis..Why does she has to suffer????????
Its gud dat Naina is willing to give the second chance to Raj coz its easy to break realtions but difficult to mend..Both of them have understood dis in 3 long years..n your love is back to u ..Only lucky people get dis kinda chance again...That scene was really sentimental where Prachi hugs Raj n both Raj n Naina r in tears.

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Posted: 16 years ago
update was sweet
update soon long asap

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