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Posted: 16 years ago
Hello!!
Wow!! what a passionate update!!!
Oh!! How I wish that they hadn't lost those 3 precious years....
So finally she is back where she belonged....
Great....Loved the update...👏👏👏

all the very best for your exams dear....
take care..

Thanks a lot Ashi for updating dear.😊




love
Riya.

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Posted: 16 years ago
pls yaar update soon as possible.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Ashi dear...........
sorry yaar.....
last written paper tomorrow...
to all my readers,
will try to update tomorrow... but may nt b able to send pm's tomorrow....
tk cre..... and thanks to all for bearing with me
Cheers,
Deeya
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Deeya

Hey Ashi dear...........

sorry yaar.....
last written paper tomorrow...
to all my readers,
will try to update tomorrow... but may nt b able to send pm's tomorrow....
tk cre..... and thanks to all for bearing with me
Cheers,
Deeya




All the best for ur exam hun! 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

To All my Readers,

Hey guys how are you????? Hope evrything is fine........

Im so sorry for being so irregular... just that the exams were taking a total toll on me, i have finally given up today, no patience at all, so im not bothered about whether i fail or not today
I will be updating part 9 today but onli half of it since ill be cming from college in the evening and then running to one of my relatives place, unfortunately that relative doesnt have internet so i wont be able to send pm's to all of you
will update the second part of part 9 on wednesday, again i will not be able to send pm's that day, coz i wont be free enough
im going abroad for my diwali vacations on this friday and will be back only after the 23rd of november, but not to worry, ill keep updating and that too regularly probably every 2 days or so.... so i guess part 10 will come onli on sunday or monday, after i hav settled in
take care and keep dropping in your replies!!!!
Cheers,
Deeya
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Posted: 16 years ago

Hey guys,

Here is your part Nine,

I have mentioned a new place in it, its name is Lonavala, its located about 2 hours away from Mumbai, im sure all of u'll must have heard about khandala, now Lonavala is a few kilometers away from Khandala, and its located higher up in the mountains, im just posting a few pics of it here so that u cud get an idea of it

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Posted: 16 years ago

Part Nine A

Naina was tired to the bone. Prachi had fallen asleep, Sonali had gone to her place to get Naina some food, she had stocked food in her fridge and had cleant the place up for her,

Naina moved towards the other bedroom which was locked and opened the door, this was the bedroom in which she stored everything, all her albums, extra designs, and many other things and so she moved towards one of the places where all her albums were kept. And she opened up the first one that came to her hand, it was their first holiday together

Their relationship was 3 weeks old, but unfortunately Naina had gotten so busy that could hardly meet up with Rajveer the entire of last week, they had spoken on the phone but that couldn't compensate for not meeting, he was really upset, and so made of a plan without her knowledge, and so he had called up Sonali

"Hey Sonali"

"Hey Rajveer! How did you think of me today?"

"Sonali, you are my friend yaar, don't talk like that"

"Ok Ok, ill not talk like that, so how is your work going on"

"Fine, fine, but my work is nothing compared to Naina's is it? She is so busy that she cant meet me"

"Hmmm….. now I understood why you called me up, to complain about Naina, right?"

"Not exactly, well I wanted to know her schedule for the weekend, starting from Friday morning to Sunday evening"

"Hmmm… to my knowledge, I don't think she has anything upto for this weekend, its Ganesh Chaturthi anyways, so all offices will be closed, she was just planning on chilling, you know how busy she has been, and the tension has taken a toll on her"

"Hmmm….. don't worry ill take out all her tension this week"

"Rajveer, what are you exactly planning on doing?"

"Im taking her to Lonavla for the weekend"

"Woow… wish I had a boyfriend like you"

"Sweetie, yeah Naina hi hamari beech aa gayee otherwise I would have gladly fallen for u"

"Raj, let Naina not hear that, or ill be getting the sack anytime, nyways I have some work pending so I will just hang up now"

"Ok bye, take care, and please don't mention this weekend plan to Naina"

He had gotten up at 5 in the morning dressed up and reached her building at 5.45am, the earlier they left the better

Naina was in deep sleep when she heard the door ring, she was pissed now, who could possibly disturb her at this time in the morning on her first day off, she wanted to meet up with Raj in the morning but this person who had disturbed her is surely going to get shouted at, she had expected it to be the milkman but to her surprise it was Raj, more than a surprise it was a shock, he was just scanning her from top to bottom when suddenly she realized that she was in her nighty,

"Raj, don't look at me like that"

She said this with a blush coming to her face

"How can I not look at you when you look so tempting"

"Raj, behave yourself, what are you doing her at this time of the morning"

"Surprise sweety"

HE said this and walked in

And she ran to her bedroom to put on her overcoat, and suddenly she felt his hands snaking up her waist, she was getting intoxicated now,

"Naina, your gorgeous"

And he turned her around, she looked at him, they were close to eachother, but soon his mood changed, better get out of your nighty or we'll never reach lonavla in time

She blushed at the first part of his comment but was surprised at the second part

"Lonavla"

"Yes Lonavla, surprise, well instead of spending our weekend in this crowded Mumbai, why not go a beautiful place like Lonavla"

"But Raj, now???"

"Yes now, we are going to leave in an hour, so freshen up, get changed, pack a few clothes and we are off"

And so she quickly got ready in record time, dressed up and packed a few clother, since it was for onli 3 days she didn't hav to do much and they were soon off

They stopped briefly at one of the restaurants for breakfast and headed towards their destination, it wasn't in the main lonavala city but somewhere in the outskirts, he stopped at a beautiful villa and got down, there was a watchman who helped them take out their bags and they headed towards the villa, it was a beautiful place, so much of peace, she just loved it. And she looked up to him

"I love you Raj, thanks for this lovely surprise"

"Naina, seeing you happy makes me happy and so always remain happy and close to me"

"Offcourse I will, but tell me something, who's house is this"

"This villa is a rented one, when I was a kid I used to come here with my parents and relatives, at that time we couldn't afford to rent out this whole place to ourselves and so we used to come here in large groups and spend our holidays here, away from the city, it gives you s lot of peace of mind"

"Raj, why did you have to spend so much of money and rent out a place just for me"

"Naina I didn't do it for you, I did it for myself, I wanted to spend quality time with you"

"Yah, but we could hav stayed at a hotel too"

"Yah we could have done that, but we went together they people would start talking and I don't want anyone bad mouthing you Naina, in Bombay it is fine, but here peoples minds are narrow and I dint want anyones foolish talks to spoil our holiday"

Naina was overwhelmed by his statements, she was convinced now that Raj was the right person for her, she loved him and he loved her, and wanted eachother

The weekend passed with a breeze, they did go sightseeing, visited religious places, but more than anything they spend time with eachother, talking to eachother, telling eachother about their lives, Naina told him about how her parents wanted her to get married to some uneducated guy and how she had ran away without much money, and how she had tried convincing them over the years , then later on she learnt that they had shifted and no one knew where they had gone, she had lost her whole family's contact numbers and her uncle too didn't have them. And in return he told her about his childhood.

Finally it was Sunday after noon and they left the villa, Naina was happy, their relationship was getting deeper, and this trip did make a difference to her life, it had given her beautiful memories, memories of a lifetime, which she had tried to capture in her camera, and she had developed the pics as soon as she had returned.

Days passed by soon, their relationship was growing, they often went to eachothers house, at times they left like crossing that boundary between them, but had resisted since their relationship wasn't that strong to take that step as yet. At times when they kisses had got heated they felt like leaving their world behind and entering a new world, but had always regained their self control and stopped.

They had been 5 months into their relationship now. Rajveer's and Naina's career was booming, they were earning mega bucks, and their love was growing by the day.

The door bell brought her back to reality. She soon headed for the door and found Sonali standing there with many bags.

"What is this?" asked Naina

"Something for you and my angel Prachi"

"Sonali you don't have to be so formal, not with me atleast"

"Naina, I had been so happy when you had delivered a girl, after all you had gone thru I didn't think that you would get thru the pregnancy, but hats off to you, and these are for Prachi and don't you dare refuse them"

"Ok Madam, now tell me whats going on"

When Sonali did not understand her question, Naina became more specific

"Who is you new boss?"

"Ekkss.. don't remind me, ill have to see her stupid face in the morning, Amrita is her name"

"for how long has she been around"

"Quite some time now, has finally made it thru to the fashion week, but bechari, Raj just shifted her to the ending"

Naina looked shocked

"And why did he do that??"

"Because she tried to line marau on him"

Naina just stayed silent, and so did Sonali

"He has never looked at any female in the past 3 years and I know he never will, you guys…"

She couldn't continue as her phone started ringing and she picked it up, it was Raj and so she put the phone on loud speaker

"Sonali, where are you?"

"Hi Raj, im out, did you need anything??"

"I know that you are out, anyways just to let you know, I am no longer part of the fashion show, I have backed out"

"And why is that Raj?"

"I have some work outside Mumbai, have to get it done soon, its just unavoidable and so im out, just wanted to let you know that"

After cutting the line Sonali looked at Naina

And Naina had tears in her eyes, it was after 3 years that she had heard his voice and he sounded just the same, but there was something different, it sounded as if were issuing from a person of stone. Had she made him like that. She also felt disappointed at the fact that there was no chance now of meeting him. Even though she had told Sonali that she didn't want to meet him she couldn't lie to herself that deep down in some corner of her heart she wanted to meet him, feel him, be with him once more, but that wasn't possible, that night 3 years back had spoilt everything, had created a barrier between them forever.

Raj on the other hand was crying, it had been many months now since he had cried, he didn't even have a shoulder to cry on, but today he was going to vent out all his feeling, all the possible feelings he had bottled up in his heart

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Posted: 16 years ago
Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!
Naina album dekhne lagi of their first holiday together!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
Naina ke saath puri week nahi mil paya toh he is going to take Naina to Lonavla for a weekend!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊
Wow!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏He is such a sweet boyfriend!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
Sonali and Raj's teasing was very sweet and cute!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊They are very good friends!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊
Naina ne irritated hokar darwaza khola toh Raj ko dekha!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛
Raj toh usse nighty mein dekhe hi jaa raha tha!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
Raj ne kaha she is looking so tempting and when she went to the bedroom tab romance karne laga!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Haaaiiii!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
But his change was very sudden and Naina was surprised!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
Raj had rented out a bungalow in the outskirts of Lonavla!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛How sweet of him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
Raj is so considerate aur usse Naina ki kitni fikar hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊
He did not want anyone bad mouthing her toh he did not stay at an hotel!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Wow!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊
They spent time together and told each other all about their family and childhood!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Thats so sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊
Their love was growing and so were their careers!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Thats great!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏But they did not cross the boundary!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
Prachi ki maasi Prachi ke liye gifts laati hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛How sweet of her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊
Sonali bata hi diya Naina ko ke Amrita ko Raj ne ending mein shift kar diya kyunki woh uspe pe line mar rahi thi!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
Raj ne 3 saalon mein kisi ladki ko ankh uthakar nahi dekha!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Naina ab toh samaj ja ke woh tujhse kitna pyaar karta hai!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭
Naina ne uski awaz suni toh roh padhi!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭She is thinking whether she has made him like that!!!!! Isn't that obvious!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔
Naina milna chahti thi,uske paas wapas jana chahti thi!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Magar nahi jaa sakti!!!!!
Aur yahan Raj bhi roh raha hai!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭I wish he would meet her soon!!!!!!😊 😊 😊
Edited by Shaina_b - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
aweome
terrific
i loved it
update soon long asap.............
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Posted: 16 years ago
mind blowing ud.......raj is really very sweet and understanding.......only he can think of giving such a surprise to his love....i just loved it.....ud soon

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