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sofia

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: fanatic 21
awesome start!!!!!!!waitin to read ahead.......

thanks dear...can i know ur name please...

i am glad that u liked this one too...do keep reading...

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sofia

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit
Dis fiction is staring from the point where Raj left or from the beginning or when Naina joined KMA to proove her brother's innocence

this is from the beginning suhana...from where she came to kma to prove navin innocent...raj is yet to make an entry dear...i am sorry i got u confused....actually i wrote this after they showed raj's exit on tv but this story starts from the beginning...

hope u like it and do keep reading...

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sofia

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Posted: 16 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Nishttha
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cont soon

thanks nishitha...do continue reading....

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sofia

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Posted: 16 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: iqbal-pallavi

i think this is starting from the beginning when Naina comes to prove her brother innocent ... am i right mystified u got that absolutely right yazz.... 😃 by the way what's your real name i feel weird calling you mystified lol ... 😆 😆 now that i read it i am finding it pretty wierd tooo(lol)...neways my name is sofi😃 i hope this not wierd either😆😆.....

by the way .............. YIPEE!! 😆 😆 lol do you know what that was for ........... no ........ well i'll tell you because you started another fic i am glad that u liked this coz i was expecting u to come running behind mewith the secret weapon of urs 😆😆......... by the way is this for the contest because if it is ... i have to tell you that the deadline is end of this month ... which is nearing .... 😃 i thought i will post it there dear but i don't think i'll be able to finish it by this month end so i started this as a new topic...

and yeah .... the first part was great ... good job hun 👏 👏 👏 thanks sweety...

i am feeling really sick ...yaar i think the coll is doing wierd things to u 🤢 so i'll read WIT later on ... after i take a little bit of rest ... okie dokie no problem at all...read whenever u r fine dear...

take care 😃 u too and do get well soon....i can't make ur jaanu's entry when u r not well😉😉😉

yasmin

p.s looking forward to see my Raju *blushing* in the next update ........ 😳

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Prerna

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Posted: 16 years ago

#15

that sounds cool

plz continue soon

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sofia

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Posted: 16 years ago

#16

Woh ajnabi…

The classes were due to be started from tomorrow and he had arrived early just to check and know about his schedule. KMA was not new to him.

This was the place which changed his life once for all. He found a new path for life, a new turning point, new people whom he proudly considered as friends, people who had similar point of view as his, true soldiers who willingly became martyrs just for their motherland.

He was strolling through the corridors when he saw someone staring at the wall of fame. He slowly moved towards the person to make a conversation. Though he was supposed to be a teacher he had no experience in it.

He was appointed as a secret agent to protect the triggers and teaching was just a cover for him. He believed that a good teacher should always connect with the students heart to heart and it should never be only related with books.

This was not the only reason to approach the person in front of him but because he saw that there was a look in the person's eyes which he could not understand. It was as though an oath was being made in front of him. He was curious.

"New cadet?"

She turned around and kept staring awkwardly at the stranger. She couldn't just introduce herself to the first stranger when she had to do everything possible to conceal her identity. She stood there silently not knowing how to react.

He was not going to give up either. "New cadet?" he repeated the question.

She just nodded in a yes. He thought that it was harder than it looked. However he continued, "Welcome to the academy cadet. Hope you don't have any problem?"

She probably understood that he was not going to drop the conversation so "Actually I was looking for Brigadier Chandok's office."

"Well go straight and turn left."

"Thank you"

She was about to go immediately when he suddenly said "Hope you are successful in fulfilling your promise"

She panicked. Was she caught on the first day? But she thought that was unlikely and tried to maintain her calm. He probably noticed the slight discomfort and said "Relax I was just trying to make you comfortable".

She sighed in relief.

" Well I am going to be your teacher from tomorrow and it is good if we introduced ourselves. I am Captain Rajveer Singh Shekawat".

"Naina….Naina Singh"

She probably was in no mood to reveal more.

"Naina Singh..hmmm…Well see you around cadet and have a good day. Hope you enjoy your days in the academy!" and he smiled formally and went on his way.

He went upto the corner of the corridor and without knowing exactly what he was doing turned around and looked towards naina. Even naina was watching him go. Both were now looking at each other and for a few seconds, stood still.

Neither was willing to break the eyelock. Rajveer was the first to come out of the trance. Probably realizing what he was doing, he left from there smiling slightly in her direction.

Naina was amused and also amazed a bit at her behaviour. She was suppose to be alienating herself from the rest and here she was staring at a stranger.

But she felt something in her heart, something which said that he was not a stranger, 'woh ajnabi hoke bhi ajnabi nahi lagthe' smiling almost sarcastically at herself for the way her thoughts were going she decided to go and meet the brigadier.

Naina was on her way to BC's office. She finished the formalities and went towards the hostel along with an orderly. As soon as she entered her room pooja looked at her and beamed in happiness. She was waiting for her friend.

She had been ecstatic ever since Naina told her about her decision to join KMA. She was doubly delighted as she would be here with her friend who was also her roommate. Things couldn't get any better for pooja.

Naina also smiled at pooja. She was one person who could always make her smile. Nowadays Naina had forgotten how to smile but pooja always told her that there was always a ray of hope which helps you to deal with through any situation. Finally even she has begun to realize it. May there is an invisible strand of hope just waiting to be held upon.

Naina will have to be careful now that she is at the academy. She should not do anything too obvious to reveal herself. She sighed a bit, obviously tired from the long journey and also the meeting with BC. Then after unpacking slowly moved to the mess along with pooja as it was time for their dinner as they have got a long day ahead tomorrow.