FF Life when in Pyaar ~ Pg Pt 2~ 12/09

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey ppl! I'm back with another ff and hope to complete it unlike my other ff. I'll only continue if u like it so plz comment!
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'Malhotra House, St.Parks Street please' said a lovely 25-year-old girl as she entered a taxi.
D: Ji ma'am.
Girl: Ma'am nahi Kanya. Mera naam Kanya hai'
D: 'Ji Kanya ji. Mein hoon Jitender'
Suddenly Kanya's mobile starts ringing.
K: Ek minute Jitender ji
'Kan, when are going to reach here?' screamed a voice from the other end of Kanya's mobile.
K: Shan, I'll be there in 30 mins. Wait karo na! Flight late ho gayi so that's not my fault!' replied Kanya.
This voice belonged to none other than''''''SHANAYA!
S: Achha baba! Teek hai. Paanch saal hogayi hai tumhe dekh hai aur kitna wait karma hoga?
K: Sirf aadha ganta aur
S: Agar tum late aaya tho bahiyya ko bohuth dukh hoga!'
K: Pata hai, Shan. Issiliye mein ek second bhi waste nahi kiya tumhare ghar aane mein. Aakhir meri pyaari dost ki bhaiyya aur meri saabse achha dost ki shaadi hai. Mein agar shaadi miss kiya toh mujhe bhi bohut bura lagega. Shan, mein abh phone rakti hoon. Tumhare ghar ke paas awunga toh phone karunga. Teek hai? Bye'
Kanya drifted into her own world. As she passed by the streets of Mumbai she remembered her old days. Her collage days were the most important for her. Her life had changed after Collage. She left for New York for studies when she was 20. She was glad that after so much traveling she could rest at her home rather Shanaya's home peacefully.
That's all for now! Do comment!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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loved it....😊
plzz update soon....
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awesome begining!
It sounds good so far!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do carry on
it sound so interesting
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Very interesting!!!!😃 Please continue!!!!
Shreya
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey ashu..great start...update soon coz its brill!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Its a short update for now. Plz Comment!
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Kanya reaches Malhotra House. She gives Shanaya a missed call before stepping out of the taxi.

S: Kanya! I'm so glad to see you!

K: Me too!

S: So Kanya come in. RAMU KAKA!!

Ramu Kaka: Ji mem sab.

S: Kanya ka samaan andher leke aana.

R: Ji mem sab.

Shanaya and Kanya go inside.(It's the Nanda house by the way). The Malhotra house was decorated beautifully. Shanya takes Kanya to her room.

S: Kanya tum change karo. Mein bed pein ek gagra choli rakhi hai with jewelleries. You'll look fabulous in it.

K: Ok Shan.

S: I'll go now. See you soon.

K: Ok Shan. Bye.

Kanya goes the bed and sees a beautiful pink Gagra.

(It's the dress that she wore in june 3rd episode)

She wears it looks at herself in the mirror.

K: I hope I don't look like the dulhan. J

She goes out of the room.

K: Yeh Shanaya kahan hai! Uffo I forgot to ask her where she'll be. Lagta hai mujhe hi usse dundna padega!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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yaar please pm when ur updating!

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