Can't Have You[[ff]] part 2 page 3 - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice part👏👏👏.the starting is very intereting.u told armaan and ridhima r 13 years old,then in the 1st part also r they 13??i like both their feeling abt love,their lines were soo beautiful.both of their thoughts have soo much reality in them,they r soo true.but y is armaan soo hurt and angry on ridhima??
continue soon...............
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Posted: 16 years ago
#12

nice concept dear

why r u not updating

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update sooooooooooooooooooon

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Posted: 16 years ago
#13
waoh👍🏼 its really a nice one⭐️ plz continue it soon😊

"khuda ne agar yeh rishta banaya na hota,
pyaar karne walo ko mlilaya na hota,
zindgi mein na hote rang sunhare,
agar deewangi ka sur sama pe chaya na hota."


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Posted: 16 years ago
#14
hey guys the new layout got a bit messed up on my tablet laptop. i'll update very soon once i think of the next part. i actually forgot i made this ff!!!!!!!!!!! ps: do not disturb. in creative mode. lol😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
#15
oh god, how cna u leave us like this...pleeeeeez update and pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeez pm me!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#16

Part 2

r- Armaan please listen too me.

A- Why should I listen to you? Give me one good reason.

r- I….

a- exactly.

r- Armaan please try to understand. It wasn't what you thought.

a- how is this different to any conversation we've had since we broke up.

r- plz listen

a- okay talk

r- ajay kissed me I didn't kiss him. I don't like him I never have. I've always loved you and that's not going to change.

a- well that's your problem.(walks away)

r-ARMAAN!(STARTS CRYING)

ajay- there there riddz.(hugs Riddhima)

r- get off me! this is all because of you.

Ajay- what can I say. When I want something I get it.

*in art class*

r- um Gerald you don't sit there Armaan does.

Gerald- not anymore. He asked mr Derek if he could sit in my place.

r- oh

mr Derek- okay class settle down. I'm going to pair you up in threes.

Gerald, donna and betty

Bob and cattyand fred

Riddhima Armaan and johnathan…..

Armaan's pov

Dang it. Country boy paired me with it. I was praying he wouldn't. I wonder what he's gonna do.

Mr Derek- right I want two ppl from each group to kiss whilst the other takes a picture. Later I want you to enlarge it and sketch it.

OMG! of all the things he could have asked us to do he chooses this

Johnathan- so I guess you two will be kissing.

Armaan- what makes you say that.

Johnathan- I have spikey braces.

r- that explains why your lip is bleeding.

Johnathan- oh god I gotta go.

Johnathan runs off to mr Derek who sends him whole because it is bleeding heavily.

Mr Derek- looks like you two will have to sketch the picture I have on the board

Phew! As I say what ever god does he does for good.

plz plz plz comment

_______________________________________________ PRIYA xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
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Posted: 16 years ago
#17
hey yaar great update
i thought u left the ff and let me tell u i am do glad u diidnt
cme on arman if ridzy sayz she didnt kiss she probably didnt
i can clearly see that ajay luvs ridz and will go to any extend to get her rite?
well i am w8ing for the next update plz cont. soon and oh yea make ur updates longer plz thxx and i will pm u if u forget 2 update K!
Star⭐️
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ohhhhhhhhhh, so this is the reason for hte misunderstanding. but why wont A believe R? if he loves her, he should atleast be willing to give her a chance to explain herself??

but its coming along soooooooooo good. pllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeez update soon. thanks for hte pm and pleeeeeeeeeez pm me when u update!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey guys part 3 will be coming up soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#20
oh man!
totally cool!
upd8 soon n plz do PM me..
btw what was the song's name that u used in the starting??
tc
hugs & luv
Nimisha

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