*Falling for You* (AR) Part 5 (28/11)

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Richa1234

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Posted: 16 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: jia..
Hey Richa great update......🤣 and yea i am not thanking u for pming me since ur asking everyone not too....sothere no thanku for the pm...if u want u canpm me twicce thrice for each update as its not a problem rite????😈

lol, u are inviting trouble here lady. 😆 You sure you want all those pms? You are so gonna regret it later. 😆😆

P.S. If you want, I can pm you for all the parts starting from the Intro, its only a click away. 🤣

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vanita

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Posted: 16 years ago

#142

hey richa grt prt
loving ur ff more n more wid each update
thnx fr the pm sweety
tc update soon..

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Richa1234

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Posted: 16 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: suvrati
hey richa grt prt
loving ur ff more n more wid each update
thnx fr the pm sweety
tc update soon..

Thanks Suvrati. I am so glad you are liking it. Hope you had a great time on your birthday, didn't see you around much here, must have had a ball then. hmmm?

Much Love

Richa

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Anita Malik

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Posted: 16 years ago

#144

Richa, Richa, Oh Richa!

What a fabulous update! I'm so glad that I found time to catch up on your FF or else I would have missed out for sure! You are an awesome writer and you clearly know how to express emotions of a character and along with that I would like to mention that you are really good with descriptions..Im in awe sweety!

I was bowled over your writing style in 'Baby Come Back to Me'...I've been following all of Jia's FF for a long time..You both are talented writers I got to admit! I've told that to Jia a billion times already...and I would like to say the same to you. =D You deserve the compliments truly!

Coming to this update, What didn't I love....Hmm..Nothing..Everything was perfect...The awkwardness Riddhima felt when he joked around saying he 'stalked' her...She wanting to get out of the car at that very moment...Anyone in Riddhima's place would feel the same way! I love the real portrayal of emotions through the basis of your characters in this FF Richa! You sure are able to put yourself in the character's shoes to express their emotions so beautifully!!!😊

'Anytime'''.Riddhima' His eyes were warm as he looked at her''as if trying to say something to her. He was very different from what she had imagined him to be. She had spoken throughout the way about her life and he was very easy to talk to. He didn't judge her but simply listened.

So sweet! Im smitten by your Armaan man😳..He's so...whts the right word...Hmmm...Caring..Awww--he listened to he rant about her life...I wish I find a guy like him one day...LOL!

WOW Richa, the way you described that painting....You deserve a round of applause👏..I was feeling at peace reading the description and not even seeing it..lol..See what your amazing writing is doing to me...Kudos! Keep it up! Being able to make a reader visualize something is a huge accomplishment for a writer and you are doing just that. = D I could visualize all the scenes in this FF!

Loved this description of Riddhima's thoughts..You are so creative--Riddhima feeling like a child caught taking sweets..I would have never thought of that! As you know already, I love how your emotions complement their thoughts and actions..

Riddhima felt like a child caught with a hand in a jar of sweets. She felt silly. He was a stranger for her, after all. And, he had a complete right to have someone in his life. Giving a break to her senseless wonderings, she finally stood up.

Amazing Job Richa...

The most I could hope for now is for you continuing soon...Take your time though..I understand the scarcity of time..I need to work on my college apps..LMAO...

Thanks so very much for the PM..Keep them coming..LOL..

This update was a real treat to read on EID!

Love

Anita

Edited by anitamalik - 16 years ago

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Mona

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Posted: 16 years ago

#145

hey nice update......they are talking to eachother more often these days........continue soon.......thankc 4 the pm.......

❤️MONA

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Swancy Cherry xx

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Posted: 16 years ago

#146

amazing part richa

soooo sorry for the lateness

loved ur part sooo much

do continue sooon

swanzzy

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missy22

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Posted: 16 years ago

#147

I knew it!!! and I told you so!!! 😃 lol... So well written... and OMG so descriptive... I swear... It's like you've transported me to the very spot... and you know my fancy for pure English.. lol.. Bravo Richa... I told you i'd head hunt you.... and you sure have a way with words...

So I read all 3 parts.. and they all left me with an air of suspense... Still unsure if Armaan is a good guy or a creepy one.. lol.. When do you usually update?? Because I sure as hell am looking forward to it..

The beginning couldn't really be the end now could it?? I mean.. somewhere I feel the story can't end there.. Maybe that's just my brain working overtime..

I have to congratulate you, the effort you take to describe the location, the time of the day, the attire, the ambience... et al...

Brilliant Work Riches..

I'd hate to say add me to your PM list, but I know i'll check in on you whether you send one or not.. So Please... Continue soon would you 😊

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Richa1234

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Posted: 16 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: anitamalik
Richa, Richa, Oh Richa!

What a fabulous update! I'm so glad that I found time to catch up on your FF or else I would have missed out for sure! You are an awesome writer and you clearly know how to express emotions of a character and along with that I would like to mention that you are really good with descriptions..Im in awe sweety!

I was bowled over your writing style in 'Baby Come Back to Me'...I've been following all of Jia's FF for a long time..You both are talented writers I got to admit! I've told that to Jia a billion times already...and I would like to say the same to you. =D You deserve the compliments truly!

Coming to this update, What didn't I love....Hmm..Nothing..Everything was perfect...The awkwardness Riddhima felt when he joked around saying he 'stalked' her...She wanting to get out of the car at that very moment...Anyone in Riddhima's place would feel the same way! I love the real portrayal of emotions through the basis of your characters in this FF Richa! You sure are able to put yourself in the character's shoes to express their emotions so beautifully!!!😊

'Anytime'''.Riddhima' His eyes were warm as he looked at her''as if trying to say something to her. He was very different from what she had imagined him to be. She had spoken throughout the way about her life and he was very easy to talk to. He didn't judge her but simply listened.

So sweet! Im smitten by your Armaan man😳..He's so...whts the right word...Hmmm...Caring..Awww--he listened to he rant about her life...I wish I find a guy like him one day...LOL!

WOW Richa, the way you described that painting....You deserve a round of applause👏..I was feeling at peace reading the description and not even seeing it..lol..See what your amazing writing is doing to me...Kudos! Keep it up! Being able to make a reader visualize something is a huge accomplishment for a writer and you are doing just that. = D I could visualize all the scenes in this FF!

Loved this description of Riddhima's thoughts..You are so creative--Riddhima feeling like a child caught taking sweets..I would have never thought of that! As you know already, I love how your emotions complement their thoughts and actions..

Riddhima felt like a child caught with a hand in a jar of sweets. She felt silly. He was a stranger for her, after all. And, he had a complete right to have someone in his life. Giving a break to her senseless wonderings, she finally stood up.

Amazing Job Richa...

The most I could hope for now is for you continuing soon...Take your time though..I understand the scarcity of time..I need to work on my college apps..LMAO...

Thanks so very much for the PM..Keep them coming..LOL..

This update was a real treat to read on EID!

Love

Anita

Anita Anita Oh Anita lol

First things first, more than you, I am glad that you caught up with this little piece of whatever you'd like to name it as. Having a reader like you is a sure bonus for any writer. I am totally blown away by your comment Anita, it is really sweet of you to be saying all that.

Coming to the portrayal of the characters, woaahhh, that is one highly flattering compliment. But seriously, I still think a lot more can be added to it and I am trying my best to give a better picture about the characters here and about their nature, habits, thought processes, so on and so forth.

I am glad you found Armaan sweet and caring, everyone else has been finding him scary till now. lol But, I can't blame them either, his characteristics haven't been described much till now so that's understandable.

My God, you felt peaceful reading about the painting? That's a relief, really. My main aim of describing that has been achieved then, that's what I wanted to depict through that painting and I am happy that you could imagine it all Anita. Like you said, being able to make the reader visualize the scene as you imagine it yourself is a very tough thing to do, I am not sure if I am able to achieve it through my ramblings but if you could really imagine it all happening in front of you, then I think I was able to do my job well to at least a certain extent. You might be very good at imagining things too, so I won't like to take all the credit here. lol

Thank you so much for such a flattering comment Anita, you really made my day with such a detailed one yaar. This is what makes me write more and more, even if there is a shortage of time. lol And, it is a pleasant coincidence that the things you mentioned above were exactly the same mentioned by Jia too. That says something about "great minds thinking alike" thing huh. lol

And please don't thank about the pm, its a free service from my side. It will be sent to you after every update. lol

Last but not the least, you really brought a smile on my face with your last line. I am so glad you liked it so much to be reading on your festive day. May the grace and blessings of Allah be with you always. Eid Mubarak!

Love
Richa

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Richa1234

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Posted: 16 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: .:.MONA.:.
hey nice update......they are talking to eachother more often these days........continue soon.......thankc 4 the pm.......
❤️MONA

Originally posted by: swansea
amazing part richa
soooo sorry for the lateness

loved ur part sooo much

do continue sooon

swanzzy

Thanks for leaving in your comments ladies. Swansea, you don't need to apologize for commenting now ya, I can imagine you'd be busy with your other commitments too. Take your time with reading the chapters and comment only when you get time ya. Appreciate you taking out time and giving your opinion here.

Much Love
Richa

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Richa1234

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Posted: 16 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: missy22
I knew it!!! and I told you so!!! 😃 lol... So well written... and OMG so descriptive... I swear... It's like you've transported me to the very spot... and you know my fancy for pure English.. lol.. Bravo Richa... I told you i'd head hunt you.... and you sure have a way with words...

So I read all 3 parts.. and they all left me with an air of suspense... Still unsure if Armaan is a good guy or a creepy one.. lol.. When do you usually update?? Because I sure as hell am looking forward to it..

The beginning couldn't really be the end now could it?? I mean.. somewhere I feel the story can't end there.. Maybe that's just my brain working overtime..

I have to congratulate you, the effort you take to describe the location, the time of the day, the attire, the ambience... et al...

Brilliant Work Riches..

I'd hate to say add me to your PM list, but I know i'll check in on you whether you send one or not.. So Please... Continue soon would you 😊

Mic, so you made it huh? lol I am so glad you went through this little attempt of mine. My God, you too found it descriptive enough, I am so on a high now. You and Anita are literally making me jump on my bed now. lol Thank you so so much yaar, I myself feel honoured to have you here.

Feeling an air of suspense around you? Gotcha there. lol Everyone else is feeling the same way as you Mic. lol

ha ha, your dilemma about the beginning being the end or not, I am loving seeing you like this. lol I won't blurt out too much just now and I am sure you'd hate me disclose everything yourself. All I'd say is there is a lot more to that as well.

I am a bit slow with the updates for which I am deeply sorry, that's the saddest things of all with me. But to be honest, seeing such amazing comments first by Anita and then by you, I don't think I'd be able to keep myself away from writing part 4 for that long now. I'll try posting it early this time.

Thanks for leaving such a lovely comment and honouring me full fledgedly, you haven't left even a single chance for me to have a safe landing on the ground with a comment like that Mic. I'd surely land with a thud. lol

That pm request wasn't needed ya, your ticket has automatically been booked for this little journey and all I can hope for you is to have fun as you pass by the different stations in between. *winks and smiles*

Love
Richa