FF: A different angle (ending) KIT 4eva

Ranbir: I love u kanya! I cant live without you, agar tum chalija ti to mein marjata?

Kanya: I love you too ranbir! Tume kya lagta hai kya mein tumhare bina jee pati?

Eye lock between them and background music playing: aa aa aa aa aa aa ankhon mein ankhei teri, baahon mein baahein teri?

Malika asks shanta tai: but how did you find them?

R: ya I also want to know how did you find them? Why was akki trying to take kanya away? How does Natasha know akki? Why does kanya become Natasha?

Shantu: Tumhare sare sawalon ke jawab mein deti hoon. Mujhe jab pata chala ke kanya ghar pe nahin hein to mein samajh gayi who zaroor Natasha bangayi hain to mein use doondne nikhli? (sorry my hindi in writing is not good at all plz Pardon me)

Shantu: Natasha tum kahan jarahi ho?

Nats: Shanta tai, yehi hai akki jise mein pyaar karti thi? itne saalon baad who mujhe lene aya hai..

Shantu: Acha to tum ho akki,

Akki: ummm

Nats: oh sorry akki mein tumhe batana bhul gayi yeh meri mummy ki best friend thi? unke baad hamesha mera khayal rakha hein inho ne?

Akki: oh, (touches her feet)

Shantu: par Natasha tum aise kaise jaa sakhti ho? Kya tum apna badla bhulgayi?

Nats; Shanta tai mein kuch nahin bhuli, Mere mama papa ko marne wala aur koi nahin RANBIR NANDA hai? aur mein use nahin choroon gi!

Shantu: Tumhe aisa kisne kaha?

Nats: Akki ne mujhe bataya ke Ranbir hi asli katil hai,

Shantu: Nahin Natasha yeh sach nahin hai!

Nats: aap aisa kyun keh rahe ho? Agar kaatil Ranbir nahin hai to kaun hai?

Shantu: Yeh to humein Dr. Akki hi bata sakhte hein!

will continue in a bit

CONGRATULATIONS .WHAT A ROCKING THOUGHT.

Contunued was little stuck but i hope its not pulling tooo long.😉

Akki: Trying to run

Shantu catches him and gives him two hot slaps,Natasha Is shocked but she trusts shantu so, Shantu and Natasha tie him on the chair..

Nats: Akki akhir baat kya hai tum ne mise jhoot kyon bola?

Shantu: yeh aise nahin baatayega! (She slaps him again and takes out a knife and puts it on his neck) Ab Bol tujhe mardiya jaye ke chod diya jaye hun?

Akki: thike mein batata hoon? bas yeh churi hatayo yahanse? (sweating)

Shantu: thikhe bata ab tu Natasha ko kaise janta hai?

Akki telling the story

Paanch saal pehle ki baat hai, ek din main eek bohot hi khoobsoorat or bholi si ladki ko dekha, use dekhte hi mujhe use pyaar ho gaya par mein kabhi uske pas jaa kar use yeh kehne ki himat nahin jota paya? bas door se dekh ke ahein bharta?

Phir ek din maine guruji ko bataya:

Akki: mein is ladki se bohot pyar karta hoon?

Guruji use dekh kar dang reh gaye

Guruji: Yeh to? vadehi hai? ya shayad Natasha! (shocked)

Akki: Natasha? Par yeh to kanya hai!

Guruji: tum ise jante ho?

Akki: nahin ab tak baat nahin ki hai... par guruji aap kaise jaante hain ise?

Guruji: 15 years pehle ki baat hain;

Mein Mumbai mein bohot bada don tha lekin koi ne kabhi mera chehra nahin dekha tha koi nahin janta tha ke is bhole se chehre ke piche itna bada raaz chupa tha? mera ek bohot acha dost that Ashok, Ashok ek CBI Officer tha, who apni biwi Vedehi aur bachi Natasha ke saat rehta tha?hum bohot ache dost the

Par us din jab hum milein, ashok jaan chukka tha ke jiske piche who din raat laga raha hai who khooni, kaatil aur don mein hi hoon!

Who mujhe pakarna chahta tha, lekin ise pehle ke who mujhe pakar ta maine use goli mardi, (dushkiaon, dushkiaon, dushkiaon, dushkiaon, dushkiaon,)

Guruji: abhi bhi ek goli bachi hai, HA HA HA HA

Vedehi: Nahin plz mujhe mat maro! Meri beti ka kya ho ga? Mein kiso ko nahin bataon gi? plz!

Guruji: Sorry bhabiji! Dushkiaon

Vedehi: AAAAAAAAA

Natasha: crying continuously

Police siren ringing

Guruji: jab maine police ki awaaz suni mein waha se bhag gaya.

Phir maine Natasha ko dhoondne ki bohot koshish ki lekin who mujhe nahin mili.

Lekin ab mein chahta hoon ke yehi Natasha humare liye kaam kare! (smiling)

Akki: par kaise? Aur kya kaam?

Guruji: yeh ladki ab humare liye un sab logon ko nuksan pohchayegi gi jinhe hum koi nuksan nahin pohcha pate hein, (still smiling)

Akki: confused) par guruji woh bohot bholi hai aur kamzor bhi woh aisa kaise?

Guruji: mere paas ek plan hai (explains everything in silence)

Originally posted by: rajkin

CONGRATULATIONS .WHAT A ROCKING THOUGHT.

Originally posted by: yogitz

hey its gr8
do continue. i can envision rankan and shantu in ur writing.

good it needs more than one episode
but I must say I am impressed
what is ur name.

Continued...

Shantu: Lekin tum Natasha se kaise milein???? Tab to Kanya Natasha thi hi nahin? kahin Kanya ka Natasha bana is tumhara to haat nahin tha???

Akki: Haan tab kanya sirf ek bholi bhali si kanya hi thi? Maine use Natasha ban ne pe majboor kiya?

Nats: Kya mujhe kuch samajh nahin araha, Tumne akki, muse jhoot bole? Mein tumhein nahin chodungi tumhein mar daloon gi! Samje tum!

Shantu shouts and says Kanya hosh mein aoo!

Kanya feels dizzy and comes back in vision, she is shocked by seeing akki tied up and they are in a old haveli?

Kanya: Shanta tai hum kaha hai??? Hum yahaan kya kar rahe hain? Aur ranbir kaha hai?

Shatu: Kanya tumhein tumhare sare sawaalon ke jawaab miljayenge bus thodi hi der mein..

Kanya confused

Chalo ab tumhari kahani puri karo

Akki: us din se maine or guruji ne mil kar aisa mahol paida kiya ke jahan bhi kanya jati kuch na kuch zulm aurto ke saath kiya jata. Kanya yeh saab dekh ke bohot dhukhi hoti lekin who kuch nahin kar pati?

Phir ek din jab kanya aur nahin dekh sakti thi who ek haveli mein jaa ke rone lagi ke who itni kamzor kyon hai ke who kisi ki madad bhi nahin karsakthi? Kyon bhagwan tumne hum aurto ko itna kamzor kyon banaya???

While she was crying someone came their? It was akki, before she could see him and say anything he started hypnotizing her?

He told her: Jab bhi tum Aag dekho gi tum Kanya nahin raho gi! Aaj se tum yeh zulm nahin saaho gi! Tum har aurat ka maseeha banogi! Har us aurat ki madad karo gi jo apni madad nahin kar paa ti! Aaj se tum bohot takatwar ho! Tum NATASHA Ho! Pammi aur anand tumhare maa baap nahin hein! Tum apne maa baap ke kaatil ko dhoondo gi!

He stops and kanya faints

Akki: phir mein kanya se roz milta lekin koi bhi baat karne se pehle mein lighter jalata aur kanya Natasha banja ti? Natasha ko dheere dheere mujhse pyar hogaya! Mein bhi Natasha se pyar karne laga tha? Guruji roz Natasha ke post box mein letter post karte jiski wajah se Natasha anjaane mein unka kaam kar deti.

Phir kuch samay baad guruji ko Natasha ki zaroorat nahin rahi aur unhe London shift hona parha, mujhe bhi Natasha ko chor ke jaana parha.

Pammi aunty aur anand uncle jaan chuke the ke Natasha sirf aag dekh kar ati hai to unh one diye jalana chor diya, aisi koi bhi cheez jisse aag ya chingari hoti kanya ke samne lana chod diya? yahan tak ke kanya ko kabhi kichen mein bhi jaane nahin diya? uske baad unhe laga Natasha kabhi lot ke nahin ayegi? lekin woh ayi teen saalon baad ayi aur uske aage to aap bhi jaanti hain?

Originally posted by: rajkin

good it needs more than one episode
but I must say I am impressed
what is ur name.

better logic than the serial
who are you