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Posted: 16 years ago
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aarora , sannila , saridena , meow23 , .:.MONA.:. , tanasha1993 , monadarling2628, Iqbal Neha1 , redi50 - thank u all for your sweet comments.😊😊😊 i will try to continue soon
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OMG its fantastic sweety

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awesome part loved it. thank u.
actually my coll has started yaar so just cant space out my time right now so my comments myite be delayed n short sorry - its ok. studies come first.

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Originally posted by: swetha10

Hey Sony itz a beautiful story.. really liked the concept..... the first part is rocking..thank u soo much😊😊😊😊... I really like the idea of switching between past n present.. its goin to very interesting..... I really cant wait to read the next part..... PLzz continue asap.... n Plzz add me on to ur PM list...- sure......😊

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i just loved your ff plz cont soon.........
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Originally posted by: sameera_12

hey,
i just loved your ff plz cont soon.........- i am glad that u liked it😊
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PART 2
Armaan was going in search of Ridhima.

While he was driving he remembers their first meeting.

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****Note : the names of the places, I use in this FF are fictitious.****

Few months back.

''''Flash Back Starts'''''

There was a late night party going on at blue lounge. Armaan was dancing with some girls on the dance floor while Rahul was having a drink. Girls would always drool over Armaan be it for his looks or attitude or his money. (Armaan would just have fun with them but never had any serious relation with them.) So Armaan was always the centre of attraction where ever they went especially with girls around. Rahul was not as popular as Armaan especially with girls but he never minded it. After some time Armaan too joined Rahul. Armaan, Rahul would always do late night parties with their friends. After the party, Arjun(one of Armaan's friends) and Armaan had a bet on who was fast driver. So they decided to have a race. (There was not much traffic since it is late night.) Armaan and Arjun were driving in full speed. (Rahul is also in Armaan's car. He was cheering Armaan to drive faster). Armaan was ahead of Arjun. All their friends were following Armaan and Arjun to know who wins the bet. There was a turning and Arjun could finally manage to overtake Armaan. All the others were carefully watching them eager to know who would win the bet. Armaan was angry at Arjun and took to rash driving. Within no time Armaan was leading again. The race was about to finish, but a truck suddenly came in his way and Armaan hit a tree in his attempt to avoid the truck.(nothing to worry, just small accident) All his friends came to see what happened to Armaan. Rahul assured them that nothing was serious. So they left while Rahul pushed Armaan out of driver seat and drove to the nearest hospital in spite of Armaan's protests.

Armaan : Rahul , what is the need to come to hospital? I am a doctor myself. I can do my dressing.

Rahul : shut up Armaan. I don't believe you. And moreover I think you require stitches which u obviously can't do it yourself. If uncle sees u in this condition he will kill me.

Armaan : so you don't love me. You are just afraid of my father??😡

Rahul : of course, I don't love you. Don't you know it??😛

Armaan : Oh!

Armaan, Rahul both laugh loudly at their stupid joke.😆

Wind blows and Armaan starts flying. When he turns to look at his left he sees a lady in yellow sari coming towards the room in which they were seated. Lady Doctor enters the room and asks them to maintain silence. (Though Armaan stopped laughing, Rahul was still laughing.)

Doctor : I am the doctor at night duty today. I came to attend you.

Saying this she examines Armaan's injuries, while Armaan is busy staring at her. Armaan couldn't turn his away from her eyes. Never in his life did he see such beautiful eyes. Her eyes captivated him soo much that he felt he was drowning in them. Armaan couldn't take his eyes off her face. She had no makeup. Armaan felt that she was as fresh as a dew drop. She was soo simple yet soo adorable to his eyes. It was the first time Armaan saw a girl looking soo beautiful in sari and that too without makeup. He couldn't believe that a girl could be soo simple yet soo pretty.

Doctor : you will need 2-3 stitches on your forehead. Your arm doesn't have any deep cuts so just dressing would be sufficient.

(Did you guess who the lady doctor is?? Ya, you are right. She is none other than our sweet Dr.Ridhima(shilpa) )

Ridhima asks the nurse to bring the necessary things for dressing.

Ridhima : how did you get hurt?

Armaan was busy seeing Ridhima that he neither heard her question nor was in a mood to answer her.

Rahul : we were driving home after a late night party and we met with an accident.

Ridhima : Oh. Be careful while driving. Life is very precious.

Ridhima competed the dressing Armaan's arm. She gave an injection. She was now doing the stitches while Armaan was staring at her.

Ridhima to Armaan : are you having pain because of the stitches?

Armaan was soo lost in Ridhima that he didn't even realize that he was having stitches. Ridhima done with the stitches.

Ridhima to Armaan : how is the pain now?

Armaan : (who was busy checking out Ridhima) beautiful. (He whispers. But Ridhima couldn't hear it. She thinks he is still having pain)

Ridhima to Armaan : I am giving some pain killers. Use them if you have pain.

Ridhima to Rahul : dressing is complete. You can take the patient home. They are just minor injuries. Nothing to worry. He is fine. She leaves saying that.

Rahul, Armaan also leave the hospital. Rahul is driving the car. Armaan was wondering why he was soo lost seeing Ridhima. He was sad that he forgot to ask her name. He was surprised by the way he was attracted to her.

Armaan (thinks) : This girl is too much. She was busy in doing my dressing and she didn't even look at me properly. How could she resist the great Armaan?? Girls would die for my one look. But here I was constantly looking at her and didn't even bother look at me?? Forget about it she didn't even ask my name?? (he said the last sentence a bit loud. Loud enough for Rahul to hear)

Rahul : what is the need for her to ask about us. She is a doctor and she doesn't need to know our names to do your dressing right??

Armaan : ya, you are right. (But he still not happy. He says to himself ' chill Armaan, chill!! She is not your type. Forget the thoughts of her.)

''''Flash Back Ends'''''

Armaan stops near a person and asks him the root for karjat(small village called kondivade. Its 2-3 hrs from Mumbai). The person tells the root and Armaan again starts going.

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Raj (Iqubal khan) : he is a thief as of now. You will know more about him as the story progresses.

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We see a lady running after a person.

Lady : chor!! Chor!! Pakdo ise.

Few more people join her and finally they catch that person. People ask that lady what the person has stolen.

Lady : isne necklace repair kane ki bahane se mere ghar aaya aur meri necklace leke bhag gaya.

People : hum is chor ko police station leke jayenge. Tabhi to ise akal aaye ga aup eisa kaam phir kabhi nahi karega.

People to lady : aap pehele is chor se apna necklace vaps legiye. Phir hum ise police station lejayenge.

Seeing the crowd a police man comes to enquire what was going on.

Police : aap sab log yah ape kya kar rahe ho?

Lady : isne meri necklace churakar bhag raha tha, par in sab log ke madat se maine ise pakad liya.

Police to thief : pehele iske necklace dedo. Uske baad mai tumhe arres karunga.

Thief gives the necklace back to the lady. But all the others (including the police)😲 were shocked to see the necklace he had stolen.

(it was not only thin fancy necklace, but it was also broken)

People to lady : aap ko koi kaam nahi hi kya. Aap is tute hue fancy necklace keliye hume itna door bhagaya?? koi ise neclace bolte hi kya??😕😕 Aap ne hum sab ki waqt barbaad kiya.😡😡

Saying this they leave from there.

Police to the lady : kya madam? koi ise neclace bolte hi kya??😕😕 thik hi, Ab aap ko aapki necklace milgayi na, aap plz chale jao. Mai is chor ke bare mai sochunga.

Police to thief : tumhara naam kya hai?

Thief : Raja 😃(giving a stylish posture)😃😃

Police to thief : naam to raja hai, par kaam dekho to😡😡😡?? Tum chori bhi thik se nahi kar sakte ho kya?? kya tum ko chori karne keliye koi aur cheez nahi mila kya?😡? Is tutehue fancy necklace keliye complaint likhna bhi waste hi. Chal bhag yaha se. agar dubara koi chori kiya to mai tumhe nahi choodunga.😡😡

Raj runs from there.

He goes near his gang who were also robbers. But the only difference is that they were successful robbers. (I guess usage of wrong word.) (R-robbers)

Raj : kise ho? (Sad mood)

R1 : kya hua. Aaj phir se koi useless cheez curaya kya??

Raj : ha.

One of them (raj's gang) hits raj on back. Raj, tum koi valuable cheez kau chori karoge. Hume dekho, ye bikes, ye watch, ye sabkuch chori kiye hue saamaan hi. Tum kab seekhoge??

R2 : ise chod yaar, isko kuch nahi aata. Isko to hamare robber's gang me honahi nahi chahiye. Tum hamare gang me daag ho daag😡😡.

Raj : eisa mat bol. Mai kosish to karta hoon. Par mujhe churane keliye koi cheez milta hi nahi hi.😕😕😕 Aur agar mai kuch churata hoon wo to useless nikalta hi. Mujhe ek chance to do. Mai ye saabit karunga ki mai bhi tum logo ke tarah kabil robber bansakta hoon.

R3 : thik hai. hum tumhe 10 din ka samay dete hai. tub tak tum ko koi khas cheez churana hi. Agar tum ne nahi churaya to tumko hamare robbers gang se nikaldenge.

Raj : thik hi. Mai kuch na kuch zaroor churalunga.

R : kuck na kuch nahi. Kuch khas churana.

Raj : mai kya churavu (what should I rob??)

Just then they see Armaan going on his bike.

R : ye bike kitna acha hi yaar. Raj tum ye bike churalena.

Raj : par me ye kise churavunga?

R : hume nahi pata. Tum usko follow karke us bike ko churalena. Nahi to tum hamare robbers gang me nahi reh sakte.

Raj thinks how he should follow that bike. Then he gets an idea.

Raj takes the bike of one of his gang member and follows Armaan's bike inspite of his gang members shouting at him

R : maine tumhe kisi aur ka bike churane ko kaha. Mera bike nahi. Mera bike mujhe wapas kardo.😡😡

Raj : mai jab us bike ko churalunga, tab mai tumhara bike tumhe dedunga. Gussa mat hona. Mai bike ke bina us bike ka picha kise karunga??😃

R : is ko idea deke mai phas gaya. 😡 Kash mai ise eisa idea nahi diya hota.😕

Raj could hear him as he already left to follow armaan's bike. He decided to get that bike at any cost.

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Happy Diwali to all those who celebrate it. 😃😃
thanks for reading.😊😊😊 Leave your frank comments.😊😊
Edited by sonia-kashian - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow!!awesome part yaar! do continue soon😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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loved the flashback, the way ar met was awsome! armaan is so adorable, he was so lost in riddhima! lol love at first sight...but obviously riddhima wasnt lost in armaan, she didnt even look at him right! hmm wonder how raj will fit into the story! good update, continue soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow you read it even before i could PM you😲. thanks for ur comments.

Originally posted by: Robin_M

loved the flashback, the way ar met was awsome! armaan is so adorable, he was so lost in riddhima! - i am happy that u liked it.😊😊😊

lol love at first sight - lets see if it was love or somthing else😉😉
...but obviously riddhima wasnt lost in armaan, she didnt even look at him right!😆. poor armaan
hmm wonder how raj will fit into the story! good update, -thank you continue soon!

Originally posted by: visalover

wow!!awesome part yaar! do continue soon😳- thanks for liking it.😊 i will continue soon

SONIA😊😊

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