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Posted: 16 years ago
#71
hi all sorry for keeping u waiting bt my exams r in a months time nd midsem in 15 sem nd since i havent studied a jot dis sem i need 2 study very badly
bt i will try 2 update as soon as humanly possible wid all dose horrendous subjects dis sem 2 study
nd thanx for reading
love anshu
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@samijan thanks, nd srry for d long wait, here is d update @soumya
thanx yup all 4 were real close. bt den dey fell apart, as for d past lets wait nd watch
@prenawaghray
thanx, nt even n acquintance, a passing face more like. bt she was d 1 who left dem, nt d other way around, nd den dere r all sort of misunderstandings.
@bary
hey thanx nd i will try 2 keep improving
@bhanu_rekhag
thanx, sumthing very fishy indeed is going on, past will unfold slowly bt surely, here is a glimpse in the past
@ksdbstjodi
thanx
hey ppl here is d update
love
anshu
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Posted: 16 years ago
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3.

hey d text btw dotted liness is d past so dont get confused. here is update , i dunno wen will b next bt as soon as possible.
-----------------------------------------------------------------"ridhi phone hai tere liye."

"coming…" for me. Mom called dis morning so it can't be her. Armaan, angad are working nd krips is in manali. Maybe its her.

"hello, ridhi I mean ridhima."

"ms. Gupta mr. Shiv malik will talk 2 u now." Mr. Malik, who is he? Nd y does he want 2 talk 2 me.

"ms ridhima gupta, I would like 2 meet u, rite now. U see that limo rite infront of d main entrance, come dere." "wait, u must b…" click… "…mistaken I don't even know u…"

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[ridhi]if I wud hav known he was armaan's grandfather…bt how could I? Armaan worked wid me as a waiter for goodness sake. Jst like dat one phone call changed my life, took me away frm d love of my life, my friends, everything…everything…

"ms gupta…ms gupta…ridhi"

"hmm…wat?"

"lets dance."

"wat?"

"y r u acting dumb? I asked u 2 dance. Once u liked dancing if I remember right and my memory is never at fault. So cum on…" jst like dat, wen did he ask? More like commanded, nd y m I obeying him. For goodness sake, its jst a dance, nd u do like dancing.

No no not dat song…its d song we first danced at, oct 18 wen we first met, , wen we confessed we loved we each other…on my b'day…wend at phone call happened…wen we separated…

"ridhi remember dis song,,,"

"no…no, but it's a nice song." Aww god I should nt hav said dat knowing armaan as I did he will definitely prove it's a very nice song indeed. No,no…already we were dancing close but now he pulled me closer, so dat we touched from our shoulders to our knees, nd dat tingling sensation began again.

Since the beginning of time

Since it started to rain

Since I heard you laugh

Sine I felt your pain

I was too young, you were much younger

We were afraid of each other's hunger I

have always loved you

Every nerve ending craved for a much closer contact. It was like coming out in sunlight after being in dark for a long long time. I lifted my hands 2 his chest 2 push him away bt all I could do was hold on bcoz I could feel my knees giving away.

There's never been anyone else

I knew you before I knew myself

Oh my baby, I have always loved you

Since we kissed the first time

Since we slept on the beach

You were too close for comfort

I wonder y m I feeling d same way I felt all dose years ago. Too close for comfort definitely. Its 6 yrs since we danced together nd yet d same feeling. No I don't feel nething, dis is jst a figment of my imagination, or is it?

You were too far out of reach

You walked away, I should have held you

Would you have stayed for me to tell you? I have always loved you

There's never been anyone else

Ha ha as if all dose tabloids full of armaan wid all dose bimbos. Dey were d only things I knew abt him. He is a A classified playboy nd A+ heartbreaker. Though he was nt dat all dose yrs ago.

I knew you before I knew myself

oh my baby, I have always loved you

And when you call it makes me cry

We never made time for you and I

If I could live it all again

I'd never let it end, I'd still be with you

Oh God, I miss you

Did he miss me dat is? No, y wud he? Y wud he nt? Its u who did d vanishing act, not he. Bt all dose bimbos, were dey nt compensation enuf, aww god wen will dance end, I cant take it nemore, it feel like we r glued together frm head to toe, nd now he is nuzzling my neck nd I cant disentangle myself frm him without making a scene. Bt d question is do I want 2.

I have always loved you

There's never been anyone else

I knew you before I knew myself

Oh my God, I have always loved you

Years go by in a matter of days

And though we go separate ways

I never stop dreaming of you

I have always loved you

He stepped back, as if nothing out of ordinary has happened. Damn him, how can he b so cool wend ere is nt cool bone left in me.

[armaan]so ridhi is not immune, not at all immune, it will be fun, dis year would def b fun. Nd here comes angad wid his pep talk.

"armaan will u stop tormenting both urself nd ms gupta." Ms gupta, well well dats new. Bt she deserves it, after all she did. Nd bcoz I m nt d mood for d pep talk I decided 2 play innocent.

"wat r u talking abt? We were only dancing." Dats d understatement of d yr.

"only dancing, more like u were seducing her in d middle of d dance floor." Yup dat is more accurate, bt will I confess 2 doing jst dat? No, never in dis life in front of angad.

"man, u r imagining things. I never knew krips had dis effect on u." I did know, bcoz dey were dancing 2, wid us, if it can b called dancing, dey were jst like us, never can dey keep dere hands off each other. Were is krips now?

"krips kahan hai?" her name is enuf 2 distract him.

"I dunno, wait here we need 2 talk I will jst cum bak." Nt dis nite he will nt cum bak. If I know krips she will b busy eating sumthing which angad don't like her 2 eat now, nd therefore his evening will b occupied in distracing her from all dose stuff. Did I tell u she is expecting? Who, krips? Dats y dis distraction mission of angad.

wonder were is ridhi? Wat is rahul doing here? R all tycoon waiters in d same party tonite, nd y is he dancing wid ridhi? Were is muskaan? Aren't his hands too low on her bak…wat m I thinking let dem do wat dey r doing.

"mr malik…" mr gupta…lets c wat now he has got 2 tell me.

"mr gupta."

"I was wondering since our deal is in final stages, will u like 2 visit d site of our joint venture." I was keen 2 do jst dat frm d beginning, bt he was nt, so y now. Bcoz perhaps he knows without looking at d site I will nt do d deal.

"yes, I will confirm wid angad nd get bak 2 u." nd was dat a grimace I witnessed before he masked it with a look of indifference.

"yes sure. By d way armaan who is d young lady u were dancing wid. Wondered if u cud introduce us." He is talking abt ridhi…

"she is off limits." Now were did dat cum frm? Bt jst as well. Aman gupta is a world renowned cassinova nd I don't him newere near ridhi. Now if only rahul will step bak or should I do sumthing abt dat 2?

hey dis is d first time i included a song, was it alrite, or was sumthing missing

do tell me

love

anshu

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Posted: 16 years ago
#74
well i should its getting better and now i am able to understanding ur ff,the song really suits the situation and nice part,still confused about the past,anyways that the suspense i think and thanks for pm
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Posted: 16 years ago
#75
hi
tks for the pm dear
nice part yaar
armi and ridz close dancing and angad comments superb
in bet it was little bit confusing yaar abt armi's grandfather from where did he come plzzzzzzzzz clear it???
armi is possessive but ridz a lot ha
update sooooooooooooooooooooon
luv soumya
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Posted: 16 years ago
#76
hey amazing parts sweety..sorry cudnt reply fr long tym cz of exams..update soon..
n thanx fr PM hun..
luv ya..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Nice part!!!!!!!!!
song u included is simply superb.......
both AR have the same feelings abt each other
n not ready 2 accept the truth!!!!!!!!

I loved that !!!!!!!!

and this part is very cute!!!!!!!!

update the other sooon!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey, Ur FF is awesome, pls continue soon, i am very excited to know what will happen next.

Kashish
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice part, a bit confused about their past, but im sure thats the piont! haha as you will slowly reveal the secrets! continue soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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🤗Hey anshu🤗..
Tahnx for the update sweety😳😳.....just luved ur update a lott....😍
I am realli sorry fr commenting in ur FF so late😕....but u no y...anyways just read ur update..& truly loved every bit of it....tooo gud..👍🏼..it was fab. awesome and very well ritten..u are improving day by day hun..!!!👏👏👏
Thanx for the PM...n do continue soon..
❤️Riddhima..😳

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