newff....click(AR)...stopped

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Posted: 17 years ago
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college rivalry....money need.....boss-employee relationship.....caught on a barren stretch of land....assasins trailing

hey hi
jst thought abt this plot for the ff
i need to know if u ppl like it?
should i go ahead with it?
and would u like the characters to be tv based or individual characters?
prologue pg1
part1 pg2
part2A pg3
Part 2B pg5
part 2c pg8
part 2d pg9
part 3 pg10
anshu
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Posted: 17 years ago
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plz also tell the characters little bit in brief its too short plz i think u can
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ok as u wish
since they r to tv based or not is not as decided so i will jst go on with b and g
girls first
g is like the first rain drop refreshing and new
she is an average next door girl with normal looks
i.e. long waist length black hair, big black eyes that twinkles whenever she is happy which is like always , fair complexion that glows with an ever bubbling happiness
b is a cool dude
he is arrogant, well not in an offensive sort of way bt more in a sense of leadership quality
his looks
i have not yet decided abt his eyes colour bt they could see in ones soul
he is an instinctive kind of guy who can know the thoughts of person opposite him by observing his/her fleeting expressions.
anshu
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Posted: 17 years ago
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please start this as AR-KaSh ff,i think it really goes well
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Posted: 17 years ago
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plz start it with AR kash plz continue it with them
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Lol plz keep the chrecters AR-KaSh/KaSu...

and ya plz do PM me wen u update it...

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey hi here is the character sketch with the prologue.

Armaan malik

The moon is always jealous of the heat of the day, just as the sun always longs for something dark and deep.

That's how armaan is, insatiable, even the moon is not enough… an evident cynic expression… polite but aloof… deadly enemy…voracious competitor… uncompromising ethics…

he is gorgeous…he is the synonym of tall, well not dark and handsome…deep gray eyes… 6'3"… broad shoulders(what all the girls dream of)… stone cut features… stubborn jaw…

That's is armaan malik presently…he loves and protects his completely…guards his possession jealously…never takes anything for granted.

He can be a child with a child, he is a mixture of contradictory emotions…very complex but very adorables(once u r in his circle).

He is 25…the most eligible bachelor…the most arrogant boss…the most loving brother…the most infuriating man.

He is sharp…very sharp, as cunning as fox. He believes clever virtue is the need of the day…

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=710403&PID=12047284&#12047284

Ridhima gupta

Beauty isn't worth thinking about; what's important is your mind.

Ridhima gupta is a completely, irresistibly adorable small town girl. She is 24…not beautiful but unique…like a mermaid…she is like the first drop of rain…refreshing…a strange mix of bold and soft… her eyes…big black… her hair…long black…

her love of life is her paintings…soul searching….gate crashing paintings…alluring is the word that defines her perfectly…she is a people's girl…made for them to be with them…yet there is that invisible defence mechanism that no one can breech…

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=710403&PID=12391678&#12391678

Prologue

July 2002

"armaan shashwat malik u need to prove urself worthy of the post." Funny I never thought that. I mean being son of shashwat yash malik was enough bt non, now I discover its not so, so lets here what granpa has to say. 😲

"kkk… da what do I need to do?"

"start as a waiter……"

"what that is so not funny da…"

"u think I m joking I m deadly serious…" now u must be thinking what's happening well as u can guess my da is insisting me the future president of malik and corp. one of the biggest hotel companies to be a waiter I mean that's utterly ridiculous.

"da I don't understand…" he didn't let me finish.

"u will, just do as I say…and I say u will be working as a part time waiter from tomm…in addition u will continue ur studies…"click…😡

hey

this is the first part do reply
anshu
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey anshu
ive read ur ff ka prologue
its amzing yaar
will be waiting for the next part
plz pm me
update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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armaan as waiter,i am happy u started AR ff and hoping it would be kash ff and thanks for pm, eagerly waiting for next part
Edited by bary - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Heya sweety loved the prolugue...
Tahnx for keeping the chrecters as AR..!!!..
well truly loved it...u rock sweety...
Thanx for the PM...
Love,
Riddhima...

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