LOVE!!! my first fanfic!!! part 8a, pg 34

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hey every1!
i am sonia n sum of u must b knowing me...
well guys i have ritten sum parts in joint FF's but cudnt rite my own coz didnt have d tyme....but now em starting my very own fanfic...unfortunately this will b a short fanfic i dunno how many parts it'll b having but i'll try to complete it widin 10 to 15 days.....
i have ritten d intro but dis is a full first attemp so please ebar wid me!!!
p.s. i might change d name laters!!!
INDEX:
Introduction on PAGE 1
PART 1-5 on PAGE 1
PART 6 on PAGE 28
PART 7a on PAGE 32
PART 7b on PAGE 33
PART 8a on PAGE 34
LOVE!
INTRODUCTION!
Dr. Armaan Mallik:
He is doing BBA from IBA (institute of business administration)...this is his 4th year...n as he complees dis yr he'll be doing MBA! his personality is same as in dmg...girls are crazy abt his looks, he has dis charm which makes every1 go crazy abt him btu yeah he is a ver bright student n when it cums to studies he is very serious! n hey how cn i forget armaan is dating ridhima gupta.
Sushant Mallik:
Armaan's dad...(remember d guy who played aditi's dad in jaane tu ya jaane na? he is armaan's dad here)...he is a very fun loving guy and an extra ordinary father, he has always thought of d better for armaan...he himself is a business man but very kind at heart n ya he n armaan share a very special bond!
Ridhima Gupta:(shilpa anand)
she is also doing BBA, same as armaan, same institute and same class....Daughter of shashank gupta(who passed away in a car accident when ridhima was only 7 yrs old) and padma gupta (her mother who has raised her up since den)....she is d same cute ridhima form dill mill gayye but ya she is not as shy as in d show..she is a very confident gurl...she has a very decent sense of clothing..
oh ya!!! she is dating humaare dr.armaan
Anjali Mehra:
Ridhima's elder sis...she is marrried to Angad Mehra(dey got married last yr)...she is done wid MBA from d same institute as armi n ridz n has recently started her job as a manager in a well known finance company!
Angad Mehra:
A certified doctor at sanjivani and he is a very gd looking guy and very polite and sweet too.. and also one of d best docs in sanjivani... he is married to anjali gupta now anjali mehra... and dey both r living a wonderful life together...
Padma Gupta:
she is ridz n anji's mom as told above n she is a school principal! not a very strict one but she is very sweet n kind to kids plus she is very disciplined at d same time...
Muskaan Chadda:
She is done wid her MBA wid anji ... she and anji are best frends n she is reallly gd frends wid ridzi too...ok muskaan is a fashion freak..she is always updated abt clothing n all..she is doin a job as a project manager in d same finance company as anji... n ya, SHE IS ENGAGED TO RAHUL GREWAL!!!
Rahul Grewal:
A certified DOCTOR at sanjivani along wid his best buddy Angad Mehra...he is a very disciplined and organized person and is very confident in every case also pyaar ka maamla mein he is evry confidnt na s i have said earlier he is engaged to MUSKAAN CHADDA!!!
every1 is somehow linked to each other
thanks alott for ur lovely comments every1
heres d first part...its completely on AR so pls forgive me but i promise i will sooner or later post 1 whole part on RM n AA each!
enjoy!

PART 1:

A beutiful night.....The moon n d stars smilin at them, happy for dem, d beuty of d nyt was immense, it cud not have been beutiful dan dis, everything seemed to b in dere hands, as if timed had stopped jus to company dem n thir love for tht beutiful moment dey were sharing

All in all a car stopped on d left hand of a dead/lazy road (sunsaan gali) inside d car were two figures....hnmm a handsome guy n a very gorgeous gurl!!!

They were holding hands...sittin in his car, her head resting on his shoulder, her fringes (a strand of her hair) fall on her face n he, as usual, moving em bak in his naughty way, fist he moved her hair bak now moving his fingers downwards he touched her jhumkis n den caressed her soft cheeks n slowly his fingers made way to her neck, tickling her, makin her shiver, ....... she felt his warmth...they both felt complete, soon she was wrapped in his arms, now her head had slightly shifted to his chest touching his unbuttonned chest...her breath kissed him n tickled him a lil.....dey were both smiling... his arms around her made her feel secure....but suddenly she tilted her head makin him move a lil....she moved away n took herself out of his grip which was polite n not harsh!!! widin seconds she was out of d car ..while he called out her name twice "RIDDHIMA?" "RIDHIMA?" but no use...she didnt pay any heed....how cud she , she was enjoyin her favourite season...YUP!!! it had started raining n she way dancing in d rain jus lyk a small child who gets happy to see rain...Riddhima cud resist anything but RAIN!!! (this cud b said for alotta things riddhima lyked)

She ws about to call him to join her in d rain but before she cud she saw him standing ryt in front of her........he took his hand out n offerred her "LETS WALK?" she jumped wid excitement tht she wud walk home firstly wid her love n secondly in d rain.....she instead of giving out her hand grabbed his arm in excitement n said very naughtily "YES PLEASE"

dey started walkin to her house which was not very far jus a 10 mins walk.... her head resting on his shoulder...his left arm around her makin her feel secure...they knew everything was jus perfect but only he knew ?it cud be BETTER? wid jus a small surprise planned for her...

They reached her house but she insisted to walk more n so did he coz dey were enjoyin d rain?dey walked more passing by her house?

As the clock ticked 12:00 n so did his watch ? he saw d tyme n suddenly got her hand off makin her move her head away?He knelt down infront of her?but before hecud do or say sumthing her very much expected comment came

Ridhima: ARMAAN if u dun remember?lemme reemind u ?U proposed me 2 yrs bak n v r already dating?y r u on ur knees now?.getup aur chalo?

But he sat there smiling at d way she passed comments to him?

He took out his hand I which he ws very politely holding a ring n widin second he said it but his statement ws a lil diff from all d normal ones?

ARMAAN: Ridhima shall v get engaged? He made a puppy face

She ahd tears in her eyes which no1 cud have noticed in tht heavy rain but he did? he got up worried taking her in a hug?. But before he cud console her by saying anything there came quick reply?she got out of d hug n said OFCOURSE U IDIOT!!! He placed the beautiful diamond ring in her fingers?which looked even prettier now being in her finger.

Now he again hugged her n dis time it turned into a passionate hug? dey both fell sumthing more than jus happinness n excitement?.armi loosened his grip n holding her by her waist reeeeeeeelly close he kissed her fore head n den her cheeks den her nose n slowly his lips made way to her lips?dey both got into a passionate kiss n dey both responded equally not trying tooo hard but jus complimenting dere love by their kiss?..It wasn?t d first time dey were kissing but dis tyme it ws definitely special?very special n as dey broke their kiss dey held hands n sat down on a bench near by? his head lying in her lap

Dey both looked into each others eyes wid all d love dey shared?

R: armaan ek baat poochoon?

A: yup!

R: tumne aaj hi ke din kyun propose kiya..u know for engagement?

Armaa got up from her lap?yaar come on ridhima kisi au din karta toh tumhaara poor romancing style every year 2 baar jhelna parta?..

R: Armaaaaan (in her own special style when she gets irritated) n she hit him playfully on his chest?.n den placed her head on his shoulder, wid one hand she as holdin hi arm tight n wid d other hand,? caressing his chest?while he had his arm around her n was playing wid her hair wid his other hand

A: aray meri jaan? em jus kiddin?.warna tum toh itna acha romance karti ho k roz tumhare saath romantic hone ka dill chahta hia?n he giggled undr his breath

R: armaaan tumne mujhe answer nahin diya

A: jaan I jus wanted to make dis day even more special?remember jab meine pehli baar tumhein issi din apne dill ki baat bataayi thi toh kaha tha k it is d most special day in my life?..

(oh btw guys when it ticked 12 pm on d clock it ws 20th august?armaan sais I love u to ridz on 20th august 2006)

R: hnmmm

A: toh phir tumhi batao?.cupping her face in his hands now?.kya mein iss day se zyaada ksi aur din ko importance de sakta hoon?

U got my point now?

R: she giggled at his innocence n his cuteness?.his lovely thoughts?.she smiled n again rested on his shoulder?.

A: yaar honestly tht ws verrrrrrrrrry hard for me?mazaakh ke ilaawa?.i mean it ws very embarrassin?.wid a lil ashamed look

R: she again giggled remembering wht happenned tht day

**FLASH BACK!!!**

He ws sleepin when suddenly his phone rang?oh no ?.shi* its ridhima?OMG! Whts d tyme?DAMN!!! Its 1:30 in d afternoon?.wht d???? NOOOOOOOOOOO EMMM NOT GONNA PIK UP D FONE..SHE IS GONNA EAT ME ALIVE IF USKO PATA CHALA K EM STILL SLEEPIN?all dese thoughts cumin to his mind?n d stupid fone klept on ringing?finally he picked up d fone while getting wearing his jeans?he put his fone on d speaker?HI RIDHIMA...

R: ARMAAN TUM FONE KYUN NAHIN UTHA RAHE THAY?.A LIL ANGRY

WOH I WS LUKIN FOR MY CAR KEYS?

R: tum abhi tak tayaar nahin huay na? tum abhi uthe ho na (in an angry tone)

A: unmm he smiled to himself n thought how well she knew him?unmmm who ridhima bas mein tayaar ho raha tha

R; tum abhi uthe ho na??? a lil more angry

A:unmmm haar yaar?sorry but mein abhi nikalta hoon

R: nahin nahin mujhe kisi joker ke saath nahin jaana u take ur time aur dhang se tayaar hona?muski di ka phone tha..she says k humein 3:00 clock puhanchna hai toh tum mujhe abhi nahin balke 2:30 pik karna

A: OHH1!! WHT a relief he thought?n I thought I ws late for my special day?k I?ll pik u up at 2:30?bye

R; she giggled n said bye too

Now armaan ws getting ready?He took a bath n got ready into sum relly classy clothes?.afterall he ws a BBA student (2nd yr at ht time) He wore a very smart jeans?decent yet kool?.not lyk d ones he normally wears..a lil loose?he wore it lyk reeeeeeeelly low?(u must b knowing its fashion now a days?lol) ? he wore a plain white shirt almost completely unbuttoned (as much open in d actual show) his shirt ws not tucked inside d jeans but ws left out to look cooler?.den he got his favourite blazer?black one? grabbed his watch and his cell phone?placing his watch on his wrist he got out of his

but whoaaaaaaa?he bumped into his dad who ws jus gonna knock to wake him up

ARMIS DAD SUSHANT MALLIK(SM)

SM: thank god u woke up?..saari tayaariyan toh ho gayi hain na?

A: I gtg pops?.sab tayaar hai?.luv u pops

N saying this he ran out takin a piece of toast in his hand

From behind his dad declared loud enough for him to listen carefully

?waise agar tumhaara proposal reject kar de toh usko mera proposal de den?kyun son??

N armaan replied bak in d same tone of having fun n d same pitch loud enough for his pops to hear??nahin dad uska taste itna kharaab nahin hai? (directing d comment towards his dad?.

He smiled n got into his car, rushed to ridhima?s place?..

Mean while ridhima ws getting dressed for d get together at muskaan?s place ? armi ws cumin to pik her up n dey wud go togther ?.

He reached her place? n put his hand on d horn n widin seconds she cam out running?

R: hey armaan!!!

But he ws soooooooo busy staring at her tht he forgot to release d horn?

R: armaan?armaaan n he didn?t listen he ws so lost in his dream world?she sat inside d car n hit him lightly on his head to bring him bak to his senses?

He came bak to his senses n realised wht he ws doin?he looked away jus to prevent form her glare.

Ridhima knew tht he ws mesmerising her beuty but still didn?t want to show it n asked him

R; tumhein kya hua tha?

A:nuthin..nahin kuch nahin?.hum chalein?

R: Yes boss!!

During dere drive both were silent n so armi broke d ice

A:u r lookin really pretty!

(She ws wearing a very pretty white long skirt (d frill one) n a lovely decent n hot at d same time?. plain baby blue top (sleeveless but wid straps)

Wid matching baby blue earings a white strap watch n sum bracelets matching wid her clothes?n ya she ws wearing white hi heels?)

R: waise kya bauhat buri lagti hoon?

A: nahin who I mean

She giggled under her breath k he ws feelin a lil shy wid her for d first time! N she knew y!

R; aray armaan yaar tum itne serious kyun ho gayee?.. I ws jus kiddin?waise thanks for d compliment?. N she giggled under her breath!

A: u r welcum

Dey both reached muski?s place n greeted every1 well d party started n armaan ws jus lookin for a chance?.he had everything prepared but he didn?t know k ridzi k kya iraade thay

Finally he got a moment n grabbed ridhima to d garden?.

R: very cassually said..tumhein kya hua..???

A: armi looked deep into her eyes?mujhe toh bauhat kuch hua hai?but kya tumhein kuch nahin hota?.jab tum mujhe dekhti ho

Ridhim ajb bhi tum emre aas paas hoti ho my heart starts m\beatin faster than ever?.dill karta hai yeh waqt wahin ruk jaaye?.aur,,,,

R: aur??? Acting very inncoent as if she doesn?t know a thing

A: he points towards d sky she looks up

she sees a helicopter riting

"I LOVE U RIDHIMA....ARMAAN"
n he bend down on his knees taking out a rose from his bak...
A: I LOVE U RIDHIMA!!!
n ridzi bursts out laughing
hahahahahahaha
n armi gets confused
he gets up jerks her...shakes her
tum theek toh ho na ridhima???
n she points in d left direction
n as he looked there only one word came out of his mouth
SHI*...
he turned to run away but ridzi took d rose form his hand n said
I LOVE U TOO MR ARMAAN MALLIK!!!"
n den took him in tht direction
dere every1 ws laughing at him...k wht dialogues he ws saying n every1 started teasing him n mimickin d way he said everything...n it reaaaaaaaally made him embarrassed...
later ridhima told armaan tht his dAD HAD TOLD DEM HIS PLAN N SOOO DEY HAD PLANNED TO HAVE SUM FUN
btu den armaana sked her
A: but all dat mazaakh is aside...do u love me? (very cutely jus lyk a kid asking for confirmation)
R:uf mere buddhuu ofcourse i love u...ab yeh bhi confir karna padega kya???
**END OF FLASH BACK**
hehe
n they both laughed away....
dey shared sum more cute moments n den at 3:00 am in d morning armaan dropped her bak home n went home den!!!
SO GUYS THIS WS PART 1 FULLLLLL ON AR...plss lemme know ur comments
dis part no 2 is dedicated to sum very dear frends of mine on dis forum ASTI, YOGI, DMG_SONIA (SONIA), SHELLY, DURGA, SHEENA, SWINI and KAT!!!
PART 2!
Days passed n so did months?armaan ridhima were sharing there thoughts their ideas?their love for each other n dey had maintained a balanced life by being serious in studies as well as being STABLE in dere love life?.d dating scene ws on?they usually wud spend d weekends together as in go on dates sum special ones n sum lyk jus takin a walk in d park or jus sittin in a caf? talkin!
The point is dey were in love n were happy together!
Well apart from AR v do have other characters in dis story so now em gonna jump to d next couple
This is another special day but for sum1 else , in sum1 else?s life
18th NOVEMBER 2008!
A beautiful house, lookin too perfect for words??
As they enterred d house, he took off the blind fold from her eyes n whisperred softly in her ears??MUSKAAN, ab aankhein kholo? (she knew they had come to see their new house where dey wud spend d rest of their live?s after marriage ?) she slowly openned her beautiful eyes, only to find d most beautiful house she had ever seen?.d colour, d architecture, d walls, d floor, d furniture?everything ws jus toooo perfect?d first words she spoke were
?OMG!!!!!!!??OH MY GODDDDDDDDDDD!!!?
?RAHUL U GOTTA B KIDDIN ME?
?JALDI BATAO KITNI RISHWAT DI TUMNE YAHAAN K MALIK KO?
Jaldi bolo hum kitni der yahaan ruk sakte hian?I mean kitni der ka bhara diya hia tumne??
R: smiling to himself?.?cumon muskaan meine yeh jagah khareedi hai?
N now hugging her form behind he softly spoke in her ears
?SIRF TUMHAARE LIYAY!?
This made her blush ?.
M: acha waise rahul tumhaari choice itni achi kab se ho gayi?
R: jab se tumhein pasand kiya hia!!!
This made her blush even more n he noticed it?
R: so meri jaaneman sab se pehla konsa room dekhna pasand karogi (while leaving her n moving forward to face her he said loudly)
M: unmmmmmmm tum kahaan se shuru karna chahte ho?
R: well!!!! Mera toh ek hi favourite room hai?.u know!!! He said a lil naughtilly n moving forward?closer to her but she pushed him bak sayin
?KEEP SAFE DISTANCE?
N ran upstairs?..he smile to himself while she was signalling him from d stairs to join her
So he followed her n dey both openned a door n dere she stood frozen?
It ws such a beautiful room?huge room wid one wall black n all d other white!!! A huge bed wid a black n white floral print sheet on? all sorts of decoration pieces but d thing tht took muski by shock was tht d whole room ws filled wid pictures of muskaan alone and wid rahul n besides d besd was a huge Photo of muski n rahul n was ritten I love u below it
Rahul saw a etar roll down her eyes n took her in a hug?cummon muskaan tum itni emotional kab se hone lagi?
She playfully hit him on d chest
R: aray dekho abhi tumhi nay kaha tha KEEP SAFE DISTANCE aur ab khud apni baat se palat rahi ho ?waise I dun have any problem?
M: she got out of d hug hit him on his chest n said
M: badtameez!!! N smiled to herself!
Dey looked around d whole house n muski went on praising everything? she jus loved d house soo much!
Now dey were sitting in d lounge on a black leather couch!
N rahul was playing wid her her while she rested her head on his shoulder?
M: rahul I love my house?thanku!
R: ur house? Yeh mera ghar hai!
M: nahin rahul yeh mera ghar bhi hai!
(A LIL ANGRY DIS TIME)
R: aray baba meine kab kaha nahin hai mein toh keh raha tha k shaadi k baad eh tumhaara hoga!
Abhi shaadi thodi hui hai!
M: par engagement toh ho gayi hai na aadha mera hai n shaadi k baad poora mera ho jaaye ga?.waise bhi time hi kitna hai shaadi mein? Kuch maheene hi toh hain!
R: oh meri hone waali patni tumhaare liyay bauhat aasaan hai but not for me baby!
M: acha forget it?tum toh har baat ko shaadi se relate karte ho?waise ek baat kahoon
R:haan!
M: tumhaari choice sachi bauhat achi?.honestly tumhaara taste bauhat acha hai?
R: waah bhai apne aap ko compliment de rahi ho (as in she is also rahul ki pasand)?
M: thanks for d compliment DOCTOR RAHUL!!!
They both giggled remembering there first meeting!
FLASH BACK!
A guy was hurriedly getting out f a huge shopping mall n thankfully he was busy on his mobile (aray thankfully iss liyay coz if he wudnt have been busy on his mob this nuthing wud have been possible) and co incidentally a girl was rushing into d mall n even she was busy wid her cell?.what else cud have happenned other than?.**CRASH**
Dey both fell down?she got up hurriedy n as soon as he tried tog et up he was taken aback by her beuty?he kept sitting dere n admiring her beuty?.as soon as she collected herself she realized sum1s gaze on her?normally she didn?t feel awkward or anything if any1 ws staring at her infacr she used to jus pass by n pay no heed to ppl who stared at her but dis time sumthing was definitely different she didn?t walk away infact she fell like sum1 jus touched her soul she thought at d same time ?kitna handsome hai yaar?n why do I feel so different?abay muskaan kya soch rahi ho aaj toh tumko koi dekhne aa raha hai?acha lemme jus help him n?.? wid such thoughts goin on in her mind she gave out her hand to him?so tht he cud stand..but unfotunately he kept staring n now she snapped infront of him , thrice!!! N so yes!!! He finally got out of his dreamland! He took her hand n got up?
?SORRY? they both said together?
Dey both smiled
?Meine aapko dekha nahin tha? again together
Dey both gave a lil bigger smile dis time
?I was busy on my cell sorry!?
Again dey stated together which made them laugh now?n so dey both finally shook hands, said sorry n left to their respective destinations?
He drove home, safe n sound, all the way his eyes were on d street but his heart was sumwhere else?lost in d thoughts of d one he had jus met or lemme say crashed into?his mind was concentrating on his destination n on his driving but his heart was constantly concentrating on tht lovely moment he shared wid her?her adorable face, her cute smile, her curly light brown hair, her brown eyes to die for, uski who adaaaein, jaise who palti?.every single thing of her kept flashing infront of him his heart told him to stop d car, go bak to d mall n look for her but his mind said sumthing else n he was bound to follow his mind due to d logic it presented infront of him?..
At home he kept thinkin of her but he knew it ws no use, he had wasted d moment n not said anything n now he had to get ready n go to see sum1 his parents had chosen for him (this is d decision tht his mind had made on his way home), he had always given his parents d responsibilty to choose his life partner! He quickly washed all her thoughts from his mind though in his heart he knew he wud never be able to forget her, but still he had to move on in lyf so he went n changed his clothes?he wore a black pant along wid a white shirt which was decently buttoned?n a black coat over it looking very decent and smart at d same time?as soon as he got ready he got into his car n drove to a beautiful house?.he parks his car rings d door bell n soon dere is a person at d door!
?oye rahul beta?aoo jee aoo?
It is d gurls father chadda jee!!!
Rahul steps inside d house wid beautiful interior d gurls mother also greeets rahul n soon he is sitting on a comfortable sofa waiting for d gurl to be shown to him but actually he wasn?t really desperate to meet her coz e ws stilll thinkin abt his morning meeting!!! D accident he had wid dat gorgeous gurl!
But whoaaa!!! Sumthing had to get him out of his thoughts?.he heard a familiar voice call his name out
He looked up n?
R:?BHAABHI AAP??
BHAABHI:?Haan jee DR.RAHUL GREWAL MEIN?
R:?But anjali bhaabhi aap yahaan kaise??
Anji: aray baba toh aap hian who jinab jo meri ebst frend ko dekhne aaye hain?
R: u mean aap muskaan chadda ki best friend hain?
Anji: ofcourse!!! Wht a coincidence na?
R: ya?.wht a coincidence?
Anji: ?Tumne usse nahin milna jisse tum milne aaye ho??
R: unmm?haan?haan bhaabhi! Wid a lil confused expression on his face
But anji widout notiicing his expression moved aside n there was standing the gurl he ahd come to see?
He ws lookin down but anji requested him to look at her atleast once?he looked up n she looked up at d same time?there eyes met but widout wasting a single second dey both said it together again
?AAP??
N dey both started laughing lyk crazy now?hahahahahahaha
D others gave dem weird looks but den rahul infront of every1 knelt down saying d three magical words
?MUSKAAN CHADDA I LOVE U?
N she ws lyk
?OK! I?LL MARRY U? being a lil naughty
Dey both shared a hug n thus every1 ws happy but dey still had to explain to every1 how dey knew eac other
It took them a whole of 3 hours to explain d whole story?though it ws jus sum moments tht they had seen each other for tht morning but they explained those moments wid such detail tht it seemed they were d most prescious for dem!!! Dey both had their hands in each others n fortunately every1 loved their lovestory n no1 had any objections tod ere so called ?LOVE YET ARRANGED RELATIONSHIP?DEY SOON GOT ENGAGED ON D 26TH OF NOVEMBER?..?
?END FLASHBACK?
They were still sitting on tht huge black couch in dere NEW HOUSE in dere lounge!!! Slowly it ws getting late as they had reached there by 7:00 in d evening as rahul used get free from d hospital at dat timing n muski used to get home by 6:00 pm so now it ws 11:45 n rahul n muski had been there for 4 hours n 45 mins so ofcourse it ws getting late?.Muski was feeling sleepy n she had slept on rahuls shoulder while sitting on d couch? hence rahul picked her up placed her on d front seat of his car making her comfortable?he sweetly kissed her forehead n den he sat in his driving seat n took off to muskis place to drop her off! Dey soon reache muskaan?s house n thus muski woke up?unfortunately not givin rahul a chance to take her in his arms again?she gave him a good nyt kiss on his cheek n jus turned around but before she cud take a single step rahul held her hand pulled her back facing him?dey both were extreely close..they cud hear nuthing but each others heart beat which was getting faster than ever?rahul cupped her face dey both stared at each other for pretty long n den finally ?DEY KISSED? not d first time but d first time after 10 days coz d last 10 days dey both had hardly seen each other?dey were jus too busy
They shared a long romantic kiss n then departed both said bye, waved to each other?.rahul got into his car ? dey both passed cute n sweet smiles n den he finally took off to his own house?.!!!
END OF PART 2!!!
PART 3!!!

13th DECEMBER, 2008

SHE WALKED DOWN D STAIR...her hair tied in a bun, wearing a knee length black fitted skirt wid a white business type shirt, a briefcase in her hand...a very stylish briefcase, wearing black high heels and a pair of white pearl earings (tops)

she was all set to got o work!!! btu as soon as she got downstairs to grab her keys shhe found something unusual....Her husban was standing rite infront of her, wearing a chef's clothes wid a knife in his hand n a bleeding finger, wid a PUPPY FACE...

as soon as her eyes fell on his bleeding finger she dropped her briefcase n ran down....she stood ryt infront of him n started shouting at him....ANGAD tumse koi kaam dhang se nahi hota...tumhein mana kiya hai na kitchen mein jaane se...toh phir tum...kyun jaate ho kitchen mein haan??? jawaab do...kat gayi na ungli...dekho kitna bleeding ho raha hai...kuch bhi soche samjhe baghair bas shuru ho jaate ho.... uf!!! mein kya karoon tumhaari thinkin ka...oh sorry nahin nahin tumhaari bewakoofi ka kyunke sochte toh tum ho hi nahin...(she said this in a very taunting way!!!)...haina???

now before she cud say anything else her husband meaning angad sharma interrupted by putting a finger on her lips....(oops n yes it was d same bleeding finger) anjali thought for a second n den lyk a romantic wife forgetting everything licked d blood on angad's finger...but..............."OH SHIT I AM SOOOO DEAD...YEEH OH MUJHE CHORE GI NAHIN....SORRY SORRY.....SORRYYYYYYYYYY...."

dese thoughts came to his mind as soon as he saw anjali's face burning wid anger as she had not tasted blood but d fake blood as in ketchup!!! n now angd ws sooo sure she ws gonna kill him.....by her looks he ws already dead...

HUNNY PLSSSSSS MERI FINGER TOH NA CHUBAOOOO...AAAAAAAAAAAA"

he though as she bit his finger

"OUCH" he screamed as she kinda bit his fingers a lil bad this time...

"oh sorry hunny...kuch hua toh nahin???"

she exclaimed wid naughtiness twinkle in her eyes...wid an attitudish smile on her lips...

"Haan bauhat zor ka kaata tumn but it felt lyk honey....coz tumne kata na hunny"

she passed a blushy smile to him n hurriedly said before getting into a serious eye locking or lemme say romantic talk wid her husband

" ok hunny em leaving?warna office ko der ho jaaye gi??

?Bye hunny?

But as soon as she stepped forward to leave he gripped her arm n pulled her bak? too close for words?he kissed her on her cheek. . . she closed her eyes n all se cud say ws angad??..

He slowly moved bak making her feel uncomfortable coz whenever he left her lyk dis as in in such a situation she felt incomplete widout him?.when he ws sooo close she wud blush but she always knew she ws secure?

As she felt him move away from her she oppenned her eyes jus to find him a feet away from her she jumped up to him n hugged him really tight?.

When dey departed form d hug after abt 12 mins she said acha mere husband ab em complete ab mein jaooon????

?NOPE? came an instant reply form angad111

She looked at him wid a blank look indicating in a way by jus saying through her espressions ?what??

He signaled her to keep quiet n asked for her hand!!!

She said through her actions ?what hell is happening?

He forcefully took her hand pulled her closer hugged her n whispered in her ears??MATT JAO?

Se whispered bak ?JAANA ZAROORI HAI,?TUMHEIN BHI TOH KAAM PER JAANA HAI NA??

He said while slightly n dweetly pushing her bak

?NAHIN MERI CHUTTI HAI AAJ!?

She excitedy asked

?tumne humaari anniversary ki wajah se chutti li??

He replied very rudel or lemme say fake rudeness?

?Nahin mera peon bemaar hai ss liyay?ofcourse hunny aaj humaari 1st anniversary hai issi liyay li k full day tumhaara ghulam banke rahoonga but tum khud hi yeh offer reject kar rahi ho toh???.toh mein kya kar sakta hoon?

She replied while slightly interrupting him

?NAHIN NHIN?OFFER ACCEPTED MERE HUSBAND JEE?.AAJ AAP MERE GHULAAM BANEIN?YEH MUJHE MANZOOR HAI??

He happily hugged her n said HAPPY ANNIVERSARY HUNNY!!!

?she hugged him bak n said d same ?HAPPY ANNIVERSARY TO U TOO HUNNY?

Dey both departed from d hug n decided to spend d whole day together?anjali knew her husband very well n she also knew tht d best gift for him wud b her time?.d best thing he wud ever wihs for ws to spent time wid his wife ns o she decided to give dis whole day to angad but???????? ANGAD knew wht anjali wanted he knew tht she wud definitely miss her family n frends on ds occasion?though she ws very straight forward n a confident woman she always needed her families support n love n her frends by her side so he had already planned sumthin which wud definitely make her happy as well as make angad himself happy coz he ws happy whenever she ws happy

They spent d day together n as soon as dey reached home from dere dinner at blue moon restaurant d best there was in mumbai!!! She noticed angad ws feeling sleepy thought for once tht her plan wud b spoilt wid his laziness coz he wudnt enjoy it as much as she had wished him to?.but unfortunately she didn?t know tht he ws jus acting n thus as they walked inside d house?dey opened d door?.n?.1 2 3

SURPRISE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

HAPPY ANNIVERSARY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Every1 from anjis family to her frends to angads frends ws there?.

Anji had tears in her eyes?one by one she hugged every1 n dey all greeted each other while angad did d same!!!

So d list of d ppl present there was

1)RIDHIMA

2)PADMA

3)NANI

4)MUSKAAN

5)RAHUL

6)MUSKI?S PARENTS

7)ARMAAN

Everyone enjoyed d surprise?there was music drinks food?.everything tht a party need but ya dun forget anji?s gift ws yet to cum

Angad n anjali both were standing together when suddenly there ws an announcement MERE HUSBAND???..THIS IS FOR U!! (anjali?s voice!!!it ws a recording she had made earlier n it ws to b played at dis time but in private)

Angad looked upto anji n gave her a smile where as anjali ws nervous coz she had not planned this to happen infront of every!!! ANGAD had his arm on her waist n hearing this announcement he tightened his grip around her waist?.she ws continuously struggling to get out of his grip n angad noticed d nervousness on her face?

Every1 ws lyk wht is for angad?????

Array batao na

Ridzi: Di aapki hi voice hai recorder mein?ab aap bataiye k yeh kya hai??

Anji:unmm who who?ridiz?unm

Rahul: Anjali bhaabhi sweating infront of every1 due to nervousness thts new!!!(he said this jus to tease her)

Soon enuf every1 ws teasing anji abt d announcement k is k baad kya hona tha??? Wht ws d announcement abt???

Now anji ws nervous n angry both at d same tiem?.Angad had nto said a word yet but anji?s face cud tell him tht she ws not ready to share d surprise!!! SO being a naughty husband he enjoyed her nervousness for a couple of minutes but as soon as he realized tht she ws serious abt d surprise he said in a oud tone OK PPL!!! Which made every1 quiet?

Now he ws lyk

Common yaar aap log party enjoy karo n plss dun teae my anjali (he said this while pulling her closer with an even tighter grip?dis time around her shoulder jus to cnifrm to her tht nuthin wud happen n to tell her to chill n relax?SHE FELT COMPLEE N RELAXED NOW

WID ANGADS MSG TO EVERY1?ALLL TOPPED TEASING HER N GOT BAK TO ENJOYIN D PARTY!!!

As soon as d party ws over?..n as anga n anjali bid bye to d last one to leave tht was ARMAAN!!!!

(so wht ws armaan doing there as d last person sumthing staange na)

FLASHBACK!!!

In d party armi had secretly sent ridhima a msg tht ?hey jaan!!! I wanna drop u home?.i wanna spend sum time wid u toh v vill leave early lyk 1:00 clock coz baki sab to 3:00 ya 4::00 tak rahein ge?toh pls plsss plssssss cn v leave by 1 toh v spend sum time alone n I?ll definitely drop u bak before padma aunty n nani get bak?.? But?.

Unfortunately d msg instead of reaching to ridzi fleww to anji (ofcourse it ws a tissue paper?armi ne table per rakha tha ridhima k liyay but unfortunately uss se pehle anjali wahaan chali gayi n picked up d tissue paper coz she saw jaan ritten on it?.though angad did not address to her as jaans he thought this myt b for her

So she piked it up but when she read it she went ff laughing lyk anything n so angad came upto her n asked if she ws ok so she told him tht?yeh dekho angad mere hone aale devarjee ne meri sweet sis ko pre pattr llikha hai?

Angad read it too n even he ws laughing!!!

Now armi had seen dem laughin toh he went upto dem n asked dem wht dey were laughin abt

Anji handed over dat tissue to armaan n she n angad both tried to control dere laugh looking at his pale n innocent face?he passed dem a nervous as well as shy smile but inside he knew he ws in trouble?.

Anji said in his ears (bachooooo aj toh tum sab se late jaaoge n if u try to sneak out early wid meri behna?I?ll kill u?

END OF FLASHBACK!!!!!!!!

So this ws y armi ws d last to leave?.

Now as every1 had left d party n d doors of d house were closed Anji went into d kitchen at 3:00 am in d morning, she cleared everything up alone while angad ws jus following her everywhere n staring at her continuously!!! This ws irritating anji but she knew wht he ws looking for?a chance which she wasn?t giving him?.u know he ws being naughty so even she ws being naughty!!!

Soon enuf she ws done wid her cleaning n all but?? angad wasn?t

She went upto her room while angad followed her!!!

They both went in?she changed into her nighty but angad stood outside d washroom waiting for her?as she came out after taking her regular bath n changing into her nighty wid wet hair?.n a towel to dry her wet hair in her hand?.she ws busy dryin her hair sitting infront of d dressing table when angad finally got d chance n hugged her from d bak?she sat still?widout any movement coz jus lyk he ws enjoying d moment?she was tooo!! He had his head on her shoulder resting dere wid his chin on her shoulder n looking at themselves in mirror?.acha hunny what ws dat announcement for?.

Anjali replied wid a naughty expression ?tumhaare liyay surprise tha but?. ?She turned bak getting out of d hug standing up ns ooo even angad stood up n thus she pinched his nose sayin naughtily? ab toh nahin mile ga? she went to her bed but before she cud reach her bed angad pulled her bak in his arms ?. Whispering in her ear? agar aisa surprise that oh I wud never let u cancel it?

Anji a lil shyly replied ?nahin aisa waisa kuch nahin tha jaisa tum soch rahe ho k? toh ab so jao mein surprise kal doon gi she struggled to get out of his grip but instead he turned her around saying ?NA AA?surprise toh tumhein aaj hi dena parega ab marzi tumhaari hai apna wala dogi ya mein apni marzi se le loon?

She tried to push him bak but no use his grip ws extremely tite which she cud have never gotten out of??

Acha baba surprise de doongi btu pehle mujhe choro aur neeche chalo

Dey both went down hand in hand?.

Anjali went on n turned on d tape?.which again said ?MERE HUSBAND?..THIS IS FOR U?

Angad ws like ?iss k aage?????

Den she switched off d lights n turned on sum candles n thus she placed a sheet on d floor n thus brought 2 floor cushions along wid it?then she went to d kitchen grabbed d rich double chocolate cake (the one I love?.lol! its available in a specific store here in Karachi only)

Along wid d delicious chocolate moose?.chocolate icecream wid heart chocolates? n ofcourse PEPSI and chocolate milkshake!!!

(all dis had been arranged earlier by anjali)

She placed everything on tht sheet wid two plates jus to serve her n her husband? they both sat down together?now dey were having there ?candle light sweet?

Wid a touch of uniqueness?..

They enjoyed dere late nyt sweet wid exchangine the food?.they were feeding each other n they also exchanged some KISES some on d CHEEKS while some on d LIPS as dey were having a very romantic sweet???..

They enjoyed it?anji again cleared up everything n tht night ws one of d happiest n most memorable nights of dere lifes n ya tht day tooo ws one of d most memorable ones?. Dey both had a very peaceful sleep wid angads arm all night on anjis waist jus to make her feel secure?

They slept peacefully n thus continued wid dere lifes from next morning!!!

P.S Ok so armaaaaaaaaan?s name is in d end coz he is d youngest in d guys n plus he is related to ridhima n not anji directly but ya he is very free wi all these ppl as he has known them since he has known ridhima sooo he is easy chilled n n frank wid all of dem?.n ya every1 knows tht he has already been granted permission to join the FAMILY!!!

Ridhima?s name on top coz she is anji?s sis!!!!!!!!!!!

PART 4!!!
She pushed him back slightly, signaling him to stop his badmaashiyan but he insistently pressing her wid all his weight pinned her to d wall (not hard), n he again started playing wid her hair, kissing her hair gently n placing gentle kisses every where, on her forehead then her pink cheeks her cute lil nose her beautiful (jin mein doob jaane ko man karta hai) eyes n slowly makin way to her lips but??NA AAN MR.ARMAAN MALLIK, YOU AINT GETTING A CHANCE HERE?? she saidwhile putting her finger on his lips (n now the distance between their lips ws her finger ?. As in onluy her finger ws between dere lips?.d finger ws touching both?s lips)
Listenin to her firm statement, before she cud mover her delicate finger from his lips he intentionally bit her finger (very lightly?enuf for her to move it away but not hard at all) makin her move it away wid an ouch but before she cud complete her ouch armaans lips had captured hers?.it ws a gentle n sweet kisss?not a forceful one nor a hard one? it ws gentle yet passionate n one of d sweetest they had shared?
The broke d kiss after 4 mins n 34 seconds?She wasn?t shocked nor did she mind this naughtiness of his coz she ws used to such badmaashiyan of his as he used to take kisses lyk dis quite often?
He left off sayin Thanks jaan!!! Nw tht I have my lucky charm din acha jaaye ga n BM ka test bhi set hoga (BM stands for business maths)?he left off with a cheeky smile n as he walked out of d stair case he had a bright smile on his face with him dimples twinkling even more?
She grabbed herself n walked out a couple of minutes later?.as she walked out o f lovers point she went directly to d cafeteria n sat there wid her frends chit chatting?.
SCENE FADES!
?POPS?u know na k aaj meri ridhima k saath formal date hai?issi liyay u r teasing me na ? armaan said lyk an irritated kid tryin to tie his TIE!!!
His dad who was standing in d middle of d door way cud do nuthin but laugh at his sons condition, the way armaan ws tryin to do his tie ws hilarious n extremely weird?n so in tht situation any1 cud do nuthin better den laughin his head off?.
Armaan irritated wid his dads behaviour asked in a kiddish manner ?Pops? r u gonna help me wid dis tie thing or not??
But his dad ws stil laughing n nw dis ws making armaan angry
As he got reeelly irritated he said in a firm tone ?Dad u better make dis tie for me or?or? I mean coz its not my fault tht u never taught me how to make a tie??
His father said while cutting him off ?N its not my fault tht u never learnt how to make a tie when I tried to teach u how to.?
?But dad u promised me?remember when I was in 8th grade k jab tak I dun get married u?ll make my tie n shaadi k baad either I will or my wife will?toh to remind u em not married yet?n waise mein tie banana seekhoon gab hi nahin coz ridhima knows how to make a tie?but abhi em single toh u have to make my tie?.AAP APNA PROMISE TOR RAHAY HO? came an instant reply form Mr. armaan mallik who didn?t know how to make a tie
His dad while folding his arms said as if complaining??Achaa bachooo? Mera sadiyon puraana promise yaad hai n apna do din ka promise bhool gaye? Yeh kahan ka insaaf hai(he said d last line a lil dramatically)
UNMMM?.(while scratching his head armaan thought for 5 seconds n den said firmly??Meine konsa promise kiya tha??? I didn?t make any promises!?
?ACHAWWWWWW? His dad said surprisingly?.?son tum apne chote se zehan par zor na do mein khud hi bata deta hoon (he said in a taunting tone while armaan listened wid an irritated face) ?Tumne promise kiya tha apni last date per k next time tum aur ridhima yaane meri hone waali dhokebaaz bahu mere saath dinner karo ge who bhi ghar par aur who bhi mere haath ka bana hua sooooooooooooo??he left his sentence in mid way coz ryt now armaan ws sitting on his knees infront of his dad in an apologetic manner holing his hands together ?Dad plsss mujhe maaf kar do n ridhima toh hai hi dhoke baaz?yaar pops I promise next tym pakka apna promise poora karoon ga aaj jaane do plsssssssssssss? (he said while requesting
His dad replied in a simple tone ?Toh jao emine kaunsa tumhein roka hai?
Oh thanku dad (he stood up n kissed his dad on his both cheeks?once each n then went towards his mirror?stood infront of d mirror n looking at himself in d mirror ordered his dad naughtily) chalo pops now make my tie!
?SORRY SON!!!? came a sad reply balke teasingly sad reply form his dad ?a promise is a promise n tumne apna promise tora so meine apna promise tora? n his dad walked out of d room tryin to control his laughter cozz after hearing this armaans face ws lyk as if he ws jus abt to cry lyk a school child who cannot find his mom?
SCENE FADES!
Armaan is sitting in his car outside ridhima?s house wid his hand on d horn?it had been 5 mins n ridhima had still nt cum out?
?UFF!!! Yeh larkiyan tayyar hone mein kitna time lagaati hain?
He said this while checking out his hair in d back view mirror?
Saying dis he put his head on d horn n closed his eyes cursing himself to arrive on time for the first time ever
This wasn?t their first formal date?dey had gone ot many formal dates normally when armaan used to b verrry happy abt sumthing he wud arrange a formal date n if ridhima wud b very happy he wud arrange one too but sumtimes dey wud go for formal dates jus lyk dis one?though it wasn?t their first formal date this ws d first time armaan had arrived on time?DID HE HAVE A REASON FOR BEING SOO PROPER THIS TIME??? NO THERE WASN?T ANY SERIOUS REASON, D REASON WS ONLY THT THIS TIME HE WANTED TO SHOW RIDHIMA THT GUYS CAN B PUNCTUAL?WHY??? LETS FIND OUT
FLASH BACK:
(after the stair case scene in d morning in d university, when ridhima went home she found a card on her bed side table saying
?I?ll pick u up at 8 sharp! Be ready JAAN. Love Your armaan!?
She turned to d bak of d card to find d special msg?(armaan always used to invite her for formal dates in d same way n he always used to ryt sumthing naughty or cute or any special note on d back of d card)
Dis time d msg said ?colour BLACK, u dun need to worry abt my timing dis time sharp means SHARP?I?ll definitely b on time?so 8 means 8!!! N jaan plsss wear d light pink gloss?it tastes veryyy sweet?(there ws a naughty face in d end of d last line)
After reading dis card she picked up her mobile n called armaan who ws lying on his bed as usual thinking abt ridhima n smiling?as soon as his cell flashed JAAN an even wider smile came upon his cheeks makin his dimples shineas always n go deeper n deeper?he picked up d phone n said ?Hi jaan!!!?
Hey! (she replied in a lil shy way)
Soooo?u?ll b ready at 8 na? he asked in confirmation
Oh u mean 9 ryt? She said in a taunting manner
Hey taana kyun maara? Came an instant reply form armaan (in an angry tone!)
She said while biting her lips as to y she said tht coz now armaan wud definitely get into proving himself ryt! ?Oh I didn?t mean tht?mein toh bas aise hi?.woh?.it?.it jus slipped out of my tongue?
?Achaaa toh tumhaare kehne ka matlab yeh tha k em never on time? Ryt? U meant k mein bilkul bhi punctual nahin hoon??
?Armaan mein?come onnn don?t start argueing on dis?.meine aise hi keh diya tha?
:ohhh no no?u actually meant k mein kabhi time pe nahi hota?haina haina MS RIDHIMA?
Now armaan ws angry n ws getting into wht ridhima thought he wud do?he ws getting into proving himself right?
N nw his tone ws makin ridhima angry?so as dey argued on d fone n continued n continued n it went on for 10 minutes finally armaan said ?Oh ok! Now I?ll tell you k I can be on time?
END OF FLASHBACK!
As he ws cursing himself under his breath to arrive on time wid his head on d horn he felt sum1 get hold of his right ear n he shouted loud moving his head up ?OUCH? realizing it ws his mother-in-law whom he called MOM!!! Padma who ws squeeziong his ear
While he shouted ?OUCH OUCH AAAAAH MOM PLS AAA?OUCH SORRRY!?
She let go off his ear n looked at him wid killer eyes?
?Mom comeonnnn ab mujhe itne ghusse se na dekho aap?apni beti ko bhi kuch samjhao?kitna time lagati hai?
Soon her anger changedinto a wideeee smile nden a laughter
Hehe listenin to the way armaan ws complaining abt one time tht ridhima ws late
She said ?LOOK WHOS TALKING? while armaan felt a lil embarrassed
?Acha acha tumhe aur nahin staoon gi theek hai? ab beta tum andar aa jao?
?But mom mein aur ridhima toh bahar jaa rahay hain na..ap plsss usko bahar bhej do!? He said making a puppy face.
?Hnm lagta hai tumhaare dad ne tumhein nahin bataaya?
?Unmm kya nahin bataaya mom??
?Kuch nahin tum andar chalo ridhima aati hi hogi?
Armaan doesn?t argue wid paddy n so he goes inside but as he steps into d house the view he sees is:
HEY SON! His dad is sitting dere playing cards wid ?
Hi armaan! Cums ridhimas voice wid an innocent smile?hehe armaans jaan is playin cards wid his dad?
He is confused!!!
Standing there he starts asking questions
?pops? Aap yahaan? N ridhima y aint u ready? Unmm padma aunty yeh ho kya raha hai? ridhima aren?t v goin on our date? Dad aapne mera plan kharaab kiya na? WILL SUMBDY TELL ME YEH HO KYA RAHA HAI? shit man meri arrangements ka kya hoga? Ridhima u shud have told me na? n he is abt to ask one more question when he feels ridhimas soft hand on his mouth? not letting him speak? she ws laughin in front of him wid her hand on his mouth but d thing ws tht here ridhima padma n armi?s dad all 3 were laughin while armaan had forgotten everything n ws staring at his JAAN? Soon he kissed her hand which s still on his mouth making her shy?as she felt his breath on her hand she moved it away but armaan grabbed her hand n dey both started walking hand in hand?.as they walked upto where armi?s dad n pasma were sitting
?AHEM AHEM!? said armi?s dad
Which made ridz shy n she took out her hand from armaans grip n ran to d kitchen whereas armi started smiling n sat down wid his dad n padma?
?So yeh sab kya hai?? armaan asked looking at his dad for an explanation of ruining his romantic date!
?Woh son actually I heard ur conversation wid ridhima in d afternoon n mujhe ussi waqt yakeen ho gaya k u wud break ur promise toh I called up ridhima n made a plan wid her k v wud have dating cum dinner at her place?n dun worry khana meine hi banaya hai? son u see?.d son cn only b naughty if d father is naughty tooo?n jaisa baap waisa beta?so tum yeh na socho k tum mujhse zyada tez ho?mein har cheez mein tumhaara baap hoon bache?
He started laughing n so did padma n so did armaan himself
Lol!
As his father n padma continued talking abt elderly stuff armaan grabbed the opportunity n made way to d kitchen but as he ws going or lemme say sneaking padma said
?BETA WAISE RIDHIMA IS NOT IN D KITCHEN WHO APNE ROOM MEIN CHALI GAYI THI? n continued laughin wid her samdhi jee
Armaan felt a lil embarrassed but he changed his diorection n went to ridhimas room?n lyk a nice husband oops boyfriend oops mangetar walked in her room widout knocking d door!
But as he walked in he ws left wid a beautiful view!
?Ridhima !!! tumhein zara bhi sharam nahin aati?chalo abhi toh mein hoon?agar meri jagah koi aur hota toh? chee chee?.? he said while closing his eyes
Ridhima ws sittin infront of her dressing table?
?A?..ar??armaaan tumhein? tumhein zara bhi tameez nahi hai? (ghabra ke kaha)ek larki k kamre mein baghair knock kiyay n phir .. phir mujhe ghalat keh rahe ho? (daant k kaha) N waise bhi I was jus zipping up my shirt iss mein itni bari bhi koi baat nahi hai?(taunt karte huay kaha)
Armaan smiled to himself n den being a naughty youngster he closed d dorr n locked it n started walking towards ridhima?.
??????????????????????.
She stood up n as she turned back she didn t have place to move coz she had armaan covering her?armaan ws standing ryt in front of her not a single cm away?..ryt there. Touching every single part of each others body dey felt d warmth?.armaan took hold of her right hand wid his left hand?.he took her hand moving it towards his lips



PART 5!

KNOCK KNOCK!!!

No reply!!!

KNOCK KNOCK(a lil harder dis tyme)

Still no reply

KNOCK KNOCK(very hard this tyme)

Stillllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll no reply!!!

They were both soooooooo lost in each others eyes tht they didn't realize d KNOCKSSSS on d door!!!

They were sooo connected tht nuthin cud break them apart'tht moment felt lyk everything'(OH they have shared such eye locking sessions earlier too but everytime they feel tht special connection n everytime dey behave as if its d first time'but actually its not)

LOST IN EACH OTHERS EYES dey remembered d first time dey shared such an eye locking session'.d first time dey shared a long lasting eye contact!!! D first eye locking session which made dem fall for each other'.which made their heartbeats go form 72 per minute to 100 per minute, the first time dey ever felt butterflies of happiness in dere stomach, the first time he ever held a gurl in his arms for sooooooo long, d first time she fell into a guys arms n d first time she felt complete n secure wid a guy!!!

FLASH BACK!

Cummon ridzi'.walk fast n stop talking to urself'for GODS sake'ppl r gonna think my sis is a PHSYCO'.said anji while leading ridhima to ridhima's new class!!!

It ws ridhima's first day in her university n she ws reeelly nervous'her feet had stuck to d ground n she ws walking as slowly as she cud'she ws talking to herself, assuring herself tht nuthin wud go rong'no one wud b doin her ragging n it ws jus university nuthin else'she had to study n go home'.but as it ws her first day she ws extremely nervous'. It ws d most prestigious institute there ws'ofcourse she would be nervous'

"EM CUMMING DI!!!" she said tryin to b confident

She started walking fast'.walking along her di now'.as she reached her class'.anji wished her all d best n left

Soon ridhima ws sitting in her seat wid lots of strangers around her.. though ridhima ws a confident gurl n very kind n friendly but this ws d first time she ws feeling awkward cz she ws in a new environment away form her frendz'away from her old school n college'she felt reeelly weird sitting among soo many strangers'.

Sitting their on her seat wid nothing in hand to do as she had 20 minutes for d lecture to start'she opened a rough notebook n started drawing stuff'.being a creative n artistic person whenever she had nuthin to do she used to draw stuff lyk anything'.be it different patterns or comics'jus anything n sooo she started doin it in class'!

Hey! Em armaan! N u? he said while keeping his notebook on d seat ryt next to her' n sat down wid her taking out his hand to shake!

She looked up to see the person who had jus introduced himself to her'as she raised her head'their eyes met n they oth were lost in their own world'lookin deeply into each others eyes' jus wayyyyyyy LOST!!! They felt dat special connection'. N dey kept on staring for 15 minutes n RING RING RING RING'The bell rang n dey finally got distracted n looked away'dey didn't even have d courage to say sorry to each other'y? coz dey jus didn't feel as if it ws rong'dey felt tht this whole staring thing ws correct, not for once they thought it to be rong!!! As dey attended d lecture dey both concentrated on d teacher n not on each other but sumwhere they both were thinking how to start a convo after dis whole eye locking session scenario' as d lecture finished ridhima stood up to leave but armaan once again held his hand out sayin'hey em armaan mallik'she turned around, avoiding any eye contact n wid a smile on her face while blushing a lil said "Hey em ridhima gupta"

He replied making a cute face'"hnm ridhima? Nyc name!" " thnx" came a sweet yet innocent reply form her' "so wht college r u from" he inquired n soooooooo dey started talking n finally interacted wid each other

END OF FLASH BACK!!!

KNOCK KNOCK!!!

This tyme it ws hard enuf to bring em bak to their senses

HUH! Said armaan while putting ridhimas hand down'.as he still had it on his lips' widout waiting for any reply from ridhima he widout realizing wht he ws doin'said in a high pitch in an irritated tone as if he ws being disturbed during sumthin reelly important "KAUN HAI BE?"

N soon came a reply form outside d door makin armaan realize wht he ahd jus done'

"TERA BAAP" said his father while knocking d door'

Inside d room: ridhimas hand fell form armis hand as he lost his grip on her hand hearing his dads voice'.. ridhima ws going red wid embarrassment n armi ws lookin for excuses to make' bcoz dey both knew verrryyy well k once dey get out of d room dey wud b badlyyyyyyyyy embarrassed'.. bt before armi cud reply n make an excuse'there came another voice from outside'

"CHAL ab bahaane dhoondna band kar aur meri bahu ko le kar neeche aa'dramebaaz!"

Bt armi started thinking of more excuses biting his nails while ridhima ws biting her lips

"Armaan ab kya kareinge?" she said in a concerned tone bt this concern ws abt d embarrassment dey wud have to face

Before armaan cud say anything to chill ridhima another knock

"Ab haan toh bol de'chalo mein neeche jar aha hoon tum donon apna romance khatam kar k aa jao"

N so he left'.as he went downstairs he burst out laughin in front of padma'..n when she asked d reason he told her everything n soon padma joined him'n dey both were laughin sitting in d lounge

Meanwhile upstairs in ridhimas room'

"Shit pops toh ab meri tang kheechein ge'n tht too v.bad'.. while ridhima started walkin towards the door gaining courage to go downstars n face dere parents but armi held her hand'

"Armaan haath choro n lemme open d door'.v r goin downstairs ryt now"

She declared in a firm tone'

"Oye MADAM itni jaldi nahin!!!"

He said wid a cheeky smile n a v.flirty accent

"Armaan itna kam tha jo aur sharminda hone ka mood hai tumhaara'.? Ab chup chaap neeche chalo" saying dis SHE GOT HER HAND BAK OUT OF HIS GRIP N took a step forward but'. Armaan took hold of her hand n spinned her bak into his arms ''. Wid one hand he ws holdin her by her waist while d othewr hand ws locked wid hers

Ridhima muttered "A'Ar'Armaa'aaa'Arma.aa..aaan!" while breathing heavily'.n den she went even closer to him'just movin her face forward to kiss'bt slowly slowly goin closer n closer n closer n' she bit his right ear n at d same time pinched him on his arm'.n as he suddenly moved away wid an "OUCH" she took d chance n ran out opening d door LAUGHING

He stood dere holding his hand n smiling to himself den he looked up as if talking to GOD'"I love her!!!'thankyou!"

N he also went down

SCENE SHIFTS'''

Everyone on d dining table having dinner!!!

And''''..

"armaan yeh bht filmy harkat hai so leave my hand' agar itne hi guts hain who bhi itna sharminda hone k baad toh do sumthing ORIGINAL" ridhima muttered to armaan while having dinner wid everyone n trying to take her and away as armaan ws holding her hand under d table n finally yessss she managed to take her hand away'

'''''.

SCENE SHIFTS

'''

Armaan has done something tht has pissed ridhima off really bad'n he'll have to pay for it

'''''''

"Armaan???" She shouted at him wid a questionary tone

"Wht were u thinking? I mean mom dad k saamne'u r pathetic'I hate u!!!"

N she left in anger while armaan ran behind her'.bt she slammed d door of her room'

TO BE CONTINUED!!!

P.S:Hey ppl!
a huuuuuuuuuuuuuge sorry from my side to all of u!!!
dis must have been d latestttttt updt n d laziest updt in history bt wht cn i do guys i try my level best bt honestly hardly get anytime...plus its not easy to ryt dis fic coz noone in my family knows tht i ryt a fic on dis forum toh i have to do it secretly!!!
i hope u guys cn understand
n i know d updt is reeeeeeeeelly short as compared to all d rest bt i will surely post a small addition to dis part to make it as long as all d others
also my exams r startin from 4th december n will end on 19th december
i'll try to post another part in betwen bt pls dun get upset if duont
pls forgive me yet again!!!
luv u all
ENJOY!!!
sonia
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wow me hooked u posted in 2 places
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awwsome to gud yaar really intresting one plz continue it
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wow soni di
amazing sweety👏
hope armaan and ridhima have a lovely relationship
and plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soooon😳
cause i loved it a lot❤️
and next time PM me tooo 😊😊😊
rahul and muskaan engageed thats good for them and all the couples together sooooo cute
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Hey Sonia!!!! thanxs for the PM! i loved you intro huni it's really good! Can't wait til you update it. Let me know wiv the link ok. 😊 have fun writing!!!!
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hey sounds good!
do continue soon!
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hey sonia
nice char sketch
will be waiting for the intro n future parts
plz pm me n update soon
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Hey soni di (I hope I can call u that)..
U r an amzin..brilliant writer n I've read u'r prts in Baby fic...They were jus too good....soory didn't get time to compliment u in there buh I did love all the prts written by u in there..
cumin to tis FF.....I tink it's gonna rock....Well ammy-ridz are dating.......Anjie n nnnnangad married n muskaan n rahul engaged....Oh god.....I got the shock of mah life when I read tis...n that's when I came to know that tis FF's gonna rock...Plzzzzz post the story plot sn...
Keep up u'r G8888 wrk...
Do PM me whenevr u update nxt (if possible)..
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ooooooo lkin 4wrd to it

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sounds intresting
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