New Horror FF: The Haunting Part One page 7 DMG - Page 6

Hi Shriya

grt part really good pls continue sooon

great part👏👏👏.i thought this was a love story,but after reading the note i remember it is a horror,it was soo beautiful.the proposal was soo cute.he told every one before only.

Hi thanks for the PM, i am so glad u finally updated really wanted to start reading this fanfic, loved the first part, the way armaan proposed to riddhima and the love and understanding between the two, waiting eagerly for part 2, update soon.

hey shriya
awesome part dear loved it
running out of time now willl comment later on in detail from the next part onwards
plz pm me

hey dat was a very sweet part! cont soon n pm me! tc!!

Originally posted by: patem031

hey, it ws beautiful nd amazzing prt
luved the scene whn he proposes ridzthanks that really helps...was worried it would be too corny
so everyone knew he ws gonna propose ridz we'll see
ccontinue soon wid yur awesome prts😃Will do

Thanks a lot

Originally posted by: *mansibhatia*

hey Shriya..I actually wanted 2 come here n chk wether u hav updated n 4gtten 2 PM. I luv horror. Oh I PMed...u received a PM right?😕

Right..I was actually confused with this romantic partt..but it was beautiful! The words which u used really touched me..ur diction is jus gr8!! To eliminate all confusion plz read the notes I have written at the top/bottom of the part....thanks a lot😆

Is dis an only AR FF?! I wud be happy if u can give enuf space for other characters 2..if u dunt mind..No it is DEFINITLY NOT ONLY AR! I hate stories with only one couple...ask all my readers😃 This includes AR, RM, AA, AS, and a surprise jodi which u will have to read and find out for

Pls update soon & dunt delay!! Will so do

-Mansi

Thanks

Originally posted by: Jodubai

Hi Shriya

great part 1

I don't mind the romance at all....love it actually

waiting to see ur secret jodi & horror of course!

Thanks a lot Jo😃

Originally posted by: mar-

grt part really good pls continue sooon

Thanks...will do😃