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Posted: 17 years ago
#11
hey that was supercool
but what was cooking in lala's mind
i hope that was not anything bad
plz update soon this and RN FANFICTION too
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12
Too good!!!!
Naina ke papa ki job chali jayegi!!!😲 😲 😲 😲So sad!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭
Magar yeh Lala Naina ko kyun yeh job de deta hai!!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕
Waise yeh situation bahut similiar hai to your previous fic!!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒
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Posted: 17 years ago
#13
guys
next day
morning
ma-n bea uth jaa
n-jee ma
n breakfast karte ha
phone bajta ha
n-hello
rec-n alluwalia
n-jee
rec-main shekhawat industry se bol rahe hu aap aaj humare office chale aaye
n-ok
n-ma main jate hu
n shekhawat industry jate ha
n-mam main n alluwalia hu
rec-oh ha sir aap ka wait kar rahe ha
n -sir
mr meheta-yes come n
n-sir
mr meheta-sara
sara-jee sir
mr meheta-n ko sara kam samjha dena
sara-ok sir
n goes with sara
sara-hi main hu sara
n-main hu naina
sara n ko sab kam samjhata ha
n-thanks sara
sara-ok
n kam main lag jate ha
n the evening
n ghar aate ha
ma-n tu aa gaye
n-ha ma
ma-thik ha tu fres up ho jaa main khana lagate hu
n-ma papa mujhe kuch kahena ha
ma-kya beta
n-ma mainne shekhawat industry main as a manager join ke ha
ma-sach
n-ha ma
papa-tumhare college
n-papa mera college hours 7 am to 11 am aur mere office hrs 12 to 7 pm ha so i will not have any problem
ma-n beta main bohot khush hu
aase kuch din bethte ha
n office jate ha office main n ke collegue bhi bohot aache ha par mr meheta na jaane kun n ko bohot na pasand karte ha
ek din
n office jate as usuall kam karte kar rahe ha
sara-hi n
n-hi sara
sara-ho gaya
n-ha bas yeh file sir ko dekha ke aate hu
sara-ok
n goes to show the file to l
but suddenly she collieds with some1
n ke file neche gir jate ha
n-hey dekh kar nahin chal sakte tum
a guy-turns( the is raj)
guy-aap ne mujhse kuch kaha
n- ha tumne mujhe dhakka kun diya
guy-mainne tumhe dhakka diya r u crazy
n-ha tumne mujhe dhakka diya aur mere file gira de now pick up my file
guy-main aur tumhare file forget it
n-just pick it up otherwise
guy-otherwise what? tum jaante ho main kon hu
n-mujhe nahin jaana
guy-main chahu na toh tumhe yahan se nikal saKTA HU 2 MIN MAIN
n-dekho plz mujhe tumhare bak bak nahin sunne ha just pick up my file
guy-main is office ka malik hu rajveer shekhawat so stup ur mouth
l jee yeh sab sun ke bahar aate ha
raj-dad yeh larke kon ha
l-kya hua n
n-sir inhone mere file gira de toh i told him to pick up my file but he said that he cant
l-hmm raj pick up the file
raj-dad
l-do as i said aur n ko sorry bolo
raj picks up the file
raj-sorry
n chale jate ha
raj-dad aapne
l-pahele bolo tum office main
raj-dad i need some money
l-money for what
raj-dad main bike racing main hissa leka chahata hu toh i have to give the tokan amount
l-bike racinh wow i will not give u any money
raj-dad plz i wan to participate
l-no raj is bar main tumhe koi paisa nahin duga bohot ho gaye tumhare manmane
raj-plz dad mainne wada kia ha
l-off raj u r just impossible thik ha main cashier se bol dunga account se paisa de dene ko
raj-ok dad thanks
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Posted: 17 years ago
#14
Too good!!!Awesome!!!!
Naina office mein kaam karne lagti hai!!!😊 😊 😊 😊That good!!!!
Mr.Mehta Naina ko pasand nahi karte hai!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Koi baat nahi kuch hi waqt mein Naina unki boss ban jayegi!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉
Raj aur Naina ki mulakat hoti hai!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Aur dono mein jhagda ho jata hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛
Raj ko bike racing karna hai!!!😊 😊 😊Wow!!!!!👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#15
guys
l-kaka raj uth gaya ha
kaka-jee sahab r baba toh gym main ha
l-hmm
r-good morning dad
l-good morning tum gym main the
r-ha
r-kaka jaldi se khana dijiye mujhe jaana ha
l-kaha jaana ha tumhe
r-dad woh bike racing ha na toh mujhe us ke practice karna ha
kaka-sahab breakfast
r and l have their breakfast
l-d car nikalo
d-jee sahab
l office jata ha
r -hey jay
ja-hi r kaisa chal raha ha tere practice
r-good jay bike racing main monica aa rahe ha na
jay-ha mainne monica ko invite toh kar diya tha
r-thanks
n the evening
sab log bike racing ground jate ha
jay-all the best r
r-thanks yaar
jay-kya hua
r-monica nahin aaye
jay-aa jayege tu ready toh ho jaa
r-hmm
r helmet pahenta ha
monica aate ha
r-hi monica
monica-hi r
r-thanks for coming
monica-its ok
referry-ready (blow the whistle)
sab bike riders starts their racing
n the office
sara- n chal na
n-ha yeh file sir ko deke aate hu
sara-thik ha
n-sir may come n
l-yes
n-sir eh dene the aap ko
l-ha rak do
n-ok sir
n jaane lagte ha tabhi n see that l fell down on the floor
n-sirrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr kya hua aap ko
n-ram singh
ram singh-kya hua madam
n-jaldi se sir ko chair pe bethayo
ram singh l ko chair par beethta ha
n-sara
sara-kya hua n
n-sir ke tabiyat bohot kharab ho gaye ha hume abhi unhe hospital le jaana hoga
n l ko hospital leke jate ha
n-dr
dr-yes
n-dr plz inhe dekheye
dr checks l
dr-nurse take him immediatly in the icu
n-dr kya hua ha sir ko
dr-masive heart attack
n-kya
dr l jee ko icu main leke jate ha
n aur sara bahar khare ha
kuch dar bad
nurse aate ha
nurse-patient ke relative kaha ha
n-ka hua
nurse-jaldi se patient ke relative ko bulaye
n -abhi main kya karu kaise inform karu sir ke bete ko
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Posted: 17 years ago
#16
suspense, plz continue waiting for more.plz continue
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Posted: 17 years ago
#17
Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!
Raj ko bike racing ki padi hai bas😕 😕 😕!!!!Aur usse Monica mein kuch zyada hi interest hai!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒
Lala ko heart attack aata hai!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲O no!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭
Bechari Naina!!!!!Ab woh kya karegi??😕 😕 😕 😕
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Posted: 17 years ago
#18
guys
n -sara tu yahaan ruk main aate hu
sara-thik ha
n goes to l 's house
kaka-jee aap kon ha
n-dekheye mujhe sir ke bete se milna ha kya aap unhe bula sakte ha
kaka-raj baba toh ghar pe nahin ha
n-ghar pe nahin ha toh woh kaha ha
kaka-r baba ka aaj bike racing ha toh aap ground chale jaye
n-hmm aap plz mujhe unka mobile no dijie
kaka-thik ha deta hu
n waits
kaka-yeh lijiye
n -auto bike racing ground chaleye
n goes to bike racing ground
n- suniye r kaha ha
guy-r toh disc main ha
n-kon se disc
g-blue diamond disc
n-thanks
n calls r
but r didn't pick up his mobile
n goes to blue diamond disc
n-suniye plz mujhe bataye mr r shekhawat kaha ha
barattender-mr r waha ha
n goes to r
r is dancing with monica
n -r
r -tummmmmmmmmmm
n-mujhe tumse baat karne ha
r-mujhe tumse koi baat nahin karne
n-plz r mere baat suno
r-oh just shut up and go from here
n-r tum ko mere baat sunne hoge
n r ka haath pakker dance floor se le aata ha
n-r mere saath chalo
r-kya
n-ha r chalo mere saath
r-nahin
n-r agar tum aaj nahin gaye mere saath toh sir ka ilaz nahin hoga
r-kya
n-r tumhare dad hospital main ha unhe masive heart attack aaya ha
r-kya
n r dono hospital aate ha
r-dr mere dad kaise ha
dr-mr shekhawat is out of danger now
r-kya main dad se mil sakta hu
dr-jee abhi nahin
n calls at her house
n-hello ma
ma-ha beta tu kaha ha
n-ma sir ko heart attack aaya ha toh main hospital main hu
ma-tu ghar kab aayege
n-ma mujhe dar ho jayege
ma-thik ha beta
kuch dar bad
dr aata ha
dr-mr shekhawat se aap log mil sakte ha
r goes inside
r-dad aap kaise ha
l-thik hu
n-sir
l-are n tum
dr-yeh toh aap ko hospital leke aye ha
l-kya thanks n
n-its ok sir aap rest kijiye
r-dad
n-sara main ghar jaa rahe hu
n ghar aate ha
ma-n tera sir kaisa ha
n-abhi thik ha ma
n-ma sir ka beta bohot ajeeb ha sir ke yeh halat ha aur woh disc main
ma-chor na amir baap ka beta tu fresh up hoke kch khale
n-jee ma
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Posted: 17 years ago
#19
Too good!!!Awesome!!!!!
Akhir Naina ko Raj disc mein mil jata hai aur woh usse waha se le aati hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛
Lala is now better!!!😊 😊 😊Thats good!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#20
woooooooooow tatz realy a fantastic n lovely update,

loved it a lot sweety,

do contn,


Aarthi

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