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Posted: 17 years ago
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guys main mere do dewanee ff close kar kare hu so this is my new ff agar aap logo ne mera saath diya then i will definatly cont it
SAB SE PAHELE character :naina singh alluwalia -college main parte ha she 21 years.
mr alluwalia-n ke papa aapne family se bohot pyaar karte ha
mrs alluwalia-she is a housewife
ok yeh ha n ke family
abhi aate ha rajveer ke famil ke taraff
rajveer shekhawat-bare baap ka bigra huya larka ha. sharam aur cigaratte he uske zindage ha .
mr lalajeee-raj ke papa chahata ha ke raj thora business par dhayan de .he loves raj but never shows
ab dekhte ha kya hota aage story main
n's mom-n beta uth ja beta subha ke 8 baj gaye ha
n-ha ma uthte hu
n fresh up hone jate ha
mr alluwalia-breakfast do jaldi se mujhe office jaane ke liye dar ho rahe
ma-ha dete hu
papa-n kaha ha
n-good mornig papa
papa-good morning beta
ma-eh lijiye aapka dono ka breakfast
papa/n dono breakfast karte ha
papa-main nikalta hu
ma-thik ha
n-ma bhi jaata hu
n raj's house
lalajee is reading a newspaper
kaka-sahab breakfast
l-hmm
l-kaka raj ab tak nahin uthta
kaka-jee nahin
l-hmm
kaka-main abhi uthta hu
kaka goes to raj's room
kaka-r baba uth jae 9:30 baj gaye
r-kaka plz thore dar aur sone dijiye
kaka-sahab neeche aapka intezar kar rahe ha
r-off kaka
r 'eyes are red pure body se sharam ke bu a rahe ha
r fresh up hoke neeche aata ha
l-time dekha ha
r-sorry dad
l-r kal raat ko kaha the
r-woh jay ke party main
l-r party main aapne zindage waste mat karo
r-sorry dad
l-driver car nikalo
d-jee
l goes to office
r-off kaka dad bhi subha subha suru ho jate ha
r ka mobile bajta ha
r-ha jay aata hu tu ruk
r car leke nikalta ha

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Posted: 17 years ago
#2
Too good!!!Awesome!!!
Raj amir bap ka bigda beta!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Wow!!!😊 😊 😊Raat ko party aur subah der se uthna!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒
Naina is the sweet girl next door!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
But please ish fic ka ek naam rakho!!!😕 😕 😕
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Concept ye waala jyada accha hai.
I hope aap is ko accha likhengi.
Update soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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guys
r -yeh jay
jay-hi r kab uthta tu
r-ab tu mat suru ho jaana subha subha dad itna sara lecture diya ha ke sara nasha uthtar gaya
jay- tu bhi na yar waise aaj party jaa toh raha ha
r-kon se party
jay-monica ke party
r-monica kon ha
jay-r monica 36 24 26
r-oh that bomb shell
jay-ya
r-ofcourse i will go
jay ka mobile bajta ha
jay-hello ha dad main abhi aata hu
jay-r mujhe office jaana hoga
r-ok main bhi ghar jaata hu
r ghar aata ha
n college jate ha
p-hi n
n-hi p
p-n tune philosophy ka homework kiya
n-ha
shaliny comes
shaliy-good morning class
n the evening
r ready hoke party main jaata ha
jay-hi r
r-hi where is monica
jay-hey monica
monica turns
r-wow
monica-yes
jay-monica yeh ha
r-rajveer shekhawat
monica-hi
r kiss monica's hand
dj-plz come to the dance floor
r-may dance with u monica
monica-ok
r starts dancing with monica
the party lasts till 4 am
r -jay main nikalta hu
jay-thik ha waise tu car chala payega na
r-ya i am all right jay dont worry
r car leke nikalta but as he was fully drunk he cant drive properly aur uske car jake police bale ke jeep se takra jate ha
lalajee-kaka r abhi tak nahin uthta 9:30 baj gaye
kaka-sahab r baba toh ghar nahin aaye
l-kya
l ke mobile bajta ha
l-hello
ploice-mr shekhawat
l-jee
ploice-aap ka beta r humare police station main ha
l-kya par kun
police-mr r ne policebale car toke ha
l-main abhi ata hu
l-off yeh larka bhi na
l police station jata ha
l-inspecter main hu mr shekhawat
police inspecter-hmm
l bail deke r ko churata ha
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Posted: 17 years ago
#5

So bad.

Ganda ladka.

update was cool.

update soon.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!
36 24 36 yani Monica!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉Party mein uska haath kiss karta hai aur uske saath dance bhi karta hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒
Naina college jaati hai aur padhai karti hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊The good good girl!!!!! 😊 😊 😊
Raj sharab peekar poilcewale ki jeep ko hi thokar marta hai aur usse bail par chudani padhti hai!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲Bahut bigaad gaya hai!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒
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Posted: 17 years ago
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guys
l aur r ghar aate ha
l-r what is this?
r-dad i am sorry
l-sirf ek bar tumne socha ha ke mere reputation kya hota mr shekhawat ka beta jail main kal ke paper ka headlines hota
r-dad woh main kal party se aa raha tha aur
l-plz r stop it now
r chup chap room main jata ha
l-off ka karu main
l ka mobile bajta ha
l-hello ha main office aa raha hu
l -kya hua mr meheta
mr meheta-sir humare production department main kuch problems ho gaye ha
l-hmm
l-ok mr meheta is production department ke liye hume koi manager rakne hoge
mr meheta-yes sir
l-thik ha aap kal he paper main add de dijiye
mr meheta-ok sir
n the eening
ma-n beta kaise chal rahe ha tere parai
n-thik ma
ma-aacha tu baith main tere lie kuch khane ko late hu
n-thik ha ma
ddor rings
n opens the door
n-papa aaye
papa-hmm
ma-aap aa gaye
papa-ha
ma-aap fresh ho jaye main khana lagate hu
papa-hmm
kuch dar bad
sab dinner karte ha
n room main jake sote ha
ma-suniye ka huya ha
papa-mainne suna ha ke humare factory bad ho jayege
ma-kya
papa-ha mujhe toh samajh main nahin aa raha ha kya karu
ma-aap log managment se baat kun nahin karte
papa-kuch nahin hoga
ma-hey bhagwan ab kya hoga
ma ke rone awaz se n ke need khul jate ha aur woh sab baate sun lete ha
n-ab kya hoga papa ke agar job chale gaye toh hum log ka karenge
next day
morning
n college jate ha
p-hi n
n-hmm
p-ka hua ha tujhe
n-kuch nahin p
p-phir tu itne chup chap kun ha
n-woh p papa ke factory bad ho rahe ha
p-kya
n-ha p main kya karu
p-n aaj he mainne paper main ek add dekhe ha tu jake interview de aa
n-kaise job
p-shekhawat industry main production department main ek manager ke post ke liye interview ho rahe ha
n-par
p-n jake interview de aa saed tera selection ho jaye
n-ok p
n interview dene shekhawat industry jate ha
mr meheta is taking the interview
n -mam main interview ke liye aaye hu
rec-thik ha aap wait kijie
n goes and sits
kuch dar bad
rec-miss n alluwalia
n-yes
rec-aap jaye
n goes inside
n-may i come n sir
mr meheta-what's ur name?
n-sir naina alluwalia
mr meheta-ok show me ur certificates
n shows her certificates
mr meheta-ok
n ghar jate ha
n-pata nahin kya hoga
after the interview
l-mr meheta interview ka kya result ha
mr meheta-sir mainne kuch list short down kiye ha
l-show me
mr meheta shows the list
l -ok aap ko kon zada qulified lagta ha
mr meheta-sir this 4 cadidates r very prominent
l-ok aur yeh larki
mr meheta-sir yeh larke toh gaduate bhi nahin ha she is n first year
l-hmm kya naam ha is larke ka
mr meheta-sir sayed naina
l-hmm thik ha mr meheta aap ek kam kijie aap is larke ko appoint kar lijiye
mr meheta-but sir yeh larke toh
l-do as i said
mr meheta-ok sir
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Posted: 17 years ago
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plz continue.its v.nice👏waiting for more
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Posted: 17 years ago
#9

hey update was really cool.

update padha hua sa hai.

I mean Rn fan fic me bhi aise hi condition thi na.

Chalo khair koi baat nahi.

update soon.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#10
hey thz fic is realy super n intrestn so do contn sweet heart,

itz realy gud,


Aarthi

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