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Posted: 17 years ago
#11

woow thts a great start the tittle is also really great

and plz do write a part in the dharamveer fanfic tht everyone is going together
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: hiri

tammanna is cool name do conti olz make it a bit longer and yes it was amazing


glad to now tat u liked it😊
s next update will a longer one😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetest girl

woow thts a great start the tittle is also really great

and plz do write a part in the dharamveer fanfic tht everyone is going together


hi iram😛
thanks dear😳
s im also looking to write in it😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashah03

heyyy

pls continue... sounds interesting


thank u😊
s i will continue.....
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part2:

It was the Prince of Sumaina Veer ,he was there with his mother Maharani Nivriti

Dharam was very happy to see his best friend veer ,dharam just rushed to veer and took the little prince who was of same age as him to show his sister

dharam: "veer dekho... ye humari choti behen hai, aur humne iska naam ananya rakha hai"

Veer was unable to react, he dint know what to say and then he said "achcha,naam to bohot sundar hai,likin...."he then stopped

dharam:"likin kya veer"

veer : "kuch nahiiii..." he starts critisizing the girl with a cunning face "humto bas ye sonchrahe tha ki ye dekne main kitni ajeeb hai!!, iski naak to deko! patahi nahi chalta ke hai ya nahi? Aur iski ankhen to gotiyoon ki tarah gol gol hain"

dharam gets a little anger and says "veer ye to bohot choti hai ,isi liye ye aysi hai, aur haan! ye humari behen hai, hum iske bare mai ayse koi bhi baath nahi sun sakte"

Veer then not letting dharam to say anything more "main to masaak karraha tha dharam! lekin tumto naraz ho rahe ho" dharam was so angry with him,seeing this veer says "teek hai teek hai main age se aysa kuch bhi nahi kahunga" dharam smiles knowing that veer will never change ,he will be critisizing the little girl his whole life......

Then veer's mother maharani nivriti and dharam's mother maharani swathi come near dharam and nivriti takes the little princess in her hands and start prazing her

"Ye kitni sundar hai didi , aur ye to bilkul bhayya par gayi hai"

Maha. Swathi: "Haan, par Hum tumse bohot naraz hai nivriti"

maha.Nivriti: "Kyun didi?"

m.Swathi: "Tumne kaha tha ke tum do ya teen din mai aajaogi, lekin tumne ek mahina lagadiya"

m.Nivriti: "Didi aapto jaanti haina jab se veer ke pitaji is dunyamain nahi rahe, tab se sumaina ki zimmedari humpar agayi hai aur veer ke dadagiji ki halat bhi theek nahi rahti,haan veer wahan hota hai to wo bohot khush rahte hai,unki badi eksha thi ke wo veer ko apne saat he rake ,lekin jabse veer paida hua hai woto aaphi logon ke saat rahraha hai, wo to humse door rehsakta hai, lekin dharam ke bina uska man kahin bhi nahi lagta"

Swathi: "Haan in dono ki dosti aur shaytaniyon ke bare main to sare aryanagar ko pata hai"

nivriti: "haan didi"

dharam interrupts them"maa kya mai ananya ko kuch der ke liye apne paas rakoon" swathi noods her head in agreement and handover the child to dharam.And again starts their discussion....

Nivriti:" kal dharmveer ko vidhyashram ke liye nikalna hai na"

Swathi:"haan tum chinta mat karo humne saari tayyariyan karli hai"

Nivriti: "chinta kaysa na kare didi ye veer to kisi ki bhi nahi sunta,meri bhi nahi,use to sirf dharam hi sambhal sakta hai"

Swathi:"Tum chinta mat karo nivriti,ye dono humeshe ek dusre ka khayal rakenge"

Veer was standing there and gets bored by lisening to there discssion

And goes near dharam who is still playing with the little baby

Veer stands behind dharam and starts making different faces at the girl, the little girl gets afriad and starts crying...

Dharam takes the princess to his mother and handover the princess to his mother

After some time the little girl slept

And dharam goes to veer who was very silent!!....and asks "kya hua veer"

Veer: "tumhe humari koi chinta nahi hai na"

Dharam:"tum aysa kyun sonchrahe ho"

Veer:"hum dekhrahe hai jab se ye ananya ayi hai ,tumhare paas humare liye koi waqt nahi raha"

Dharam:"veer aysa bilkul nahi hai, wo to hum bas" interrupting dharam again ,veer says "hume pata hai ab tumhe hum se jayada uski phikar hai"

Dharam: "veer wo humari choti behen hai,aur waise bhi hum dono kal vidya ashram ke liye nikal rahe hain,to hum use phir 10 ya 11 saal tak nahi dekh payenge,aur waise bhi tumhari jagah to koi nahi lesakta veer"

Veer: "Ananya bhi nahi"

Dharam:"Haan ananya bhi nahi,ab teek hai"

Veer:"Haan ab teek hai"

Then nivriti comes to them and says "tumdono ki baate khatam hogayi ho to jao aur sojao ,kal suraj nikalte hi tum dono ko yahan se vidya ashram ke liye nikalna hoga"

Veer: "haan maa, main to kab se dharam se yahi kehraha hoon,lekin wo hai ki ananya ananya kehraha hai"

Dharam:"achcha!!"

Veer: "chalo ab sojao mujhe bohot neend aarahi hai"

Booth the prince goto sleep

The next morning at the entrance of aryanagar gate

Veer: "dharam ab chalo bhi"

Dharam: "haan"

Veer: "dharam hume deri ho rahi hai,aur tum phirse ananya ke saat khel rahe ho"

Dharam: "teek hai baba,chalo"

Both the prince go to the Maharaj Aryavardhan, Maharani Swathi and Maharani Nivriti and take their blessing

And then they started their journey..........

Edited by starpisces123 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#16
please continue.i really,really,really like it. i'm just hooked to your story.👏it's brilliant.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#17
👏👏
Veer feeling jealous of ananya, and dharam so cute and responsible (itni kam ummar mein..lol😆)
both going to gurukul, that will be cool..😳👏👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#18
wow yaar... 😛
loved the update..👏
especially the conversation between Dharam-veer......😳
veer feeling so jelous of ananya..... 😆😆😆 lol....... if after growin up sia jaise koi rajkumari aai toh uski toh kair nahi 😉😆
n dharam so cute... 😳
veer- overpossesive 😉😆 afraid of losing his brother's attention and love 😃😳 so cuteeeeeeee 😛
🤗
plz post next update soon 😃😳
Edited by Rash2cool - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: kiran_baidya

please continue.i really,really,really like it. i'm just hooked to your story.👏it's brilliant.


thank u🤗
am soooo glad that u liked it😛



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Posted: 17 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: subha2601

wow,it's lovely.plz continue.


thank u for reading and comenting🤗

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