AR FF: Last Request.. IMP note on PG 44!Plz read. - Page 4

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Posted: 17 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: pwincess kanzi

interstin concept! plz do cntd and thx 4 d pm!

I'll count soon..😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
hey piya wow yaar i lke d charactr sketch nd intro grt waitng fr prt1.........
cont soooooooooon
luv yachna
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Posted: 17 years ago
#33
nice intro...
cont soon & thxx 4 da pm
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
hmmmmm............inro toh intrestin tha
ab rahi stroy ki baath toh letz see how it goes....
do PM me wen u update
will be waitin
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Posted: 17 years ago
#35
Part-1
Atul & Armaan sitting at college campass..Armaan is reading a book & Atul is preparing filmy words 4Anjali..
At-Ek ladki thi dewani si..Ek ladke pe woh marte thi..
Sharmake..palk jhukak..galion se ghuzar ti thi..
Jab v milti thi mujhese baas yeahi pussa karti thi..
Yea payyaar kaise..hota hai..yea payaar kaise hota hai..
Aur main srif yehi kahe pata tha.........😕
Arre yaar kya kahe pata tha..kya kahe pata tha..😕😕😕Yaar Armaan main hamesha sahi time per lines vul ku jata hu..bata na..😕
[Atul was calling Armaan..but Armaan doesnt giving him any respond..he was busy to read..Atul & Armaan was sitting back to back..Atul trun back & Ask Armaan..Armaan fall...]
A-Yaar champ tu kya karraha hai..Dekh nahi raha k main padraha hu..😛
At-Dekh Armaan tu mujhse aise baat maat kiya kar..Mujhe bohout bura laghata hai..[He said it like a teddy bear,even he was sitting like a teddy]😆😆
A-[Armaan puting his hand on Atul's shoulder & said]
Yaar champ..Tu to bura maan gayaa..accha baba soorry..bol kya huya hai😊
At-He gets so much excited😊 & said..yaar main na Anjali k lia Sharukh khan ki Mohabbaten flim ka😍dialouge prepare karraha tha,per na vul gayya..
A-Baas..itna sa problem hai..Tu bhi na..but champ tujhe maine kitni baar samjaya hai k Anji ko yea sab bilkul pasand nahi..aur manle pasand aa bhi gayi aur tu aghar aise hi bhil gaya na,to tujhe to pata hi hai champ😊😉
Atul was imagine he's saying these lines to Anji & he 4got & Anjali gives him a slap😆😆😆
A-[He's now out of his imagination but his hand is on his face..& he said to Armaan..]ha yaar Armaan tu bilkul thik bolraha hai yaar😕Anjali waise hi mujhse kati kati raheti hai..pata chala mujhse aur naraz ho gayyi..Thanks yaar Armaan tu mera saccha aur sabse accha bhai hai..Give him a hug..🤗
A-ha champ ha..abhi chale ..😊Class start ho jayeghi..😊
At-ha chal chal..😊
Both r in classroom..Anjali & sapna also join them..
An-Hi bro😊Wassup?😊
A-Hey Anji..😊[Giver her a hug]Kaha thi tum..shubha shubha kaha chali gayyi thi?Mom dundrahi thi tumhe..
An-Main jogging k lia gayyi thi😊& brother ..Waise v mom ko chiillak yelawa koi kaam thodi na hota hai..
A-Accha thik hai..ab baith jao..😊
An-Yeah😊
At-Hey Anjali yeha baith jao na..aur tumhe jogging karne mein koi takleef to nahi huyi na..😊
An-Takhleef!Woh v jogging karne mein..How silly u r Atul😆
At-Tumhare hasi dekhne k lia main to kuch bhi kar sakta hu Anjali..😊😊😳
An-Yeah rite..😊
Armaan 7 Sapna was watching them till now & then Armaan smile in his mind & looking at Sapna & asked:
A-Hey sapna..😊Kaise ho..kal college nahi ayi..😊
S-Main thik hu Armaan tum kaise ho?😊Woh actully pa ne kuch kaam de dia tha aur woh karte karte time nikal gaya..isslia😊
A-Okk sit..😊
Everybody sitted & proffessor entre in d classroom..
Ps-Hello students..😊
St-Hello mam😊
Ps-So.i hope u all r good..Lets star todays leason..😊
Lecture has been started & finished after 1hr..Its proffessors leaving time but she stay coz she wants to announced something..
Ps-Ok guys..its enough 4 2day & now i wana announce something..😊
Student like all of u,2new student going to join with u all..so i hope u all ''ll b coorporate with them..ok then bye..tc..😊
All students r in cafeteria..Armaan,Atul,Sapna & Anjali is also there..All r talking abt that 2newcomer..
S-Armaan tumhe kya laghta hai yea do new student kaise hoghi..😕
A-Mujhe kya pata yaar k kaise hoghi..jo hoghi dekh lenge yaar..per jo bhi ho per hum se accha nahi hogha ku Anji😉
An-Right bro..😊Giving a fie..
Suddenly a girl come to them..& said hummare baaten karraheho & this girl is none other than Musskaan..😊Every1is shocked suddenly heard that..
S-Aa..hum samje nahi..tum..😊
M-Ha ha main samjati hu na..mere matlab hum..i mean main aur mere bahen hi nayi hai iss college mein😊
An-Oh ok..😊Hi,My name is Anjali..
M-Hi..sake hands..
A-Hello musskann.😊Im Armaan..
At-Hi Musskaan😊& im Atul..
M-Hi..😊
At-Accha yea toh batao,tum to aa gayyi per tumhare bahen kaha hai,abhi tak ayyi na..😊
M-Ha..abhi yehi mere sath hi to thi per...aa there she's😊
Everybody looked back..every1 very happy to see her..Armaan also saw her but he was amaged by her look..😍She is very beautiful..She wears a pink-white shated salware suit with a red-pink shated dupatta..😊😊A beautiful innocent smile in her face😊She came in a way like heaven anjel's came in this world.. & she came to them & said..Hi guys..😊
Ok friends..heres d end of my Ff's 1st part..hope u all liked it..Plzz do read & comment..then i'll count soon,,
piya loves u all.
Edited by piya2025 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: friendly girl

hey nice part

continuee soon..

Thanks 4ur comment dear..yeah i'll count soon..😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#37
Hope u liked it.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38
hi piya😊
thks for the pm
nice part
atul part was cute😃
plzzzzzzzz update asap plzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: saridena

hi piya😊

thks for the pm
nice part
atul part was cute😃
plzzzzzzzz update asap plzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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hey thanks dear..I hope u really liked it..Thanks 1s again & i'll count soon..
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Posted: 17 years ago
#40
hi. i just read the intro and the 1st part. gr8 concept. continue soon!!!!!

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