Chahat link new thread posted on pg. 154 - Page 11

Originally posted by: *Rajeevian*

awesome👏.cont soon.....

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

👏very very good.........loved d way u showed nainas confusion n den dialouges btwn karan n naina very sweet

Originally posted by: varshita

vaah vaah laut kar aane k baad to aapne kamaal kar diya madam. superb update really,

par jo baat mujhe confuse kar rahi hai vo ye hai ki kya Vyom hi Raj hai ki koi aur.

Pata nahi kya haii, bada confusing hai sab kuch.

Naina jab bhi milte hai us se dar jaati hai aur us ka dil joron se dhadkane lagta hai.

Vo samjh nahi paati hai ki kya ho jaata hai us ko Vyom k saamne.

Vyom k saamne bahut uncomfortable feel kar rahi hai vo pata nahi itna restless kyoun ho jaati hai Vyom ko dekh kar.

Karan is really sweet frnd of her, vo jaanta hai ki Naina ko kaise hansana hai.

I like his 'Surparakhna ' waala dilao the most.

update soon.

Originally posted by: george eliot

oye mujhe hamesha bolti rehti hain ki chhhota update hai lekin tera update kitna chhota hai yaar 😕 pleaaaaaaaaaaaaassssssssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeee agli baar post a long update, itne chhote uopdate se dil nehi bharta 😵 hehehehehehe waah kya baat kahi hai tune man khush ho gaya mera.😆😆

lekin jitna bhi tha, tha bada hi amaaaaaaaaazing! awesome writing, wonderful portrayal of scenes and characters👏

thanks madam ki aap ko mere dwara likha hua fic accha laga. 😉

i love the relationship between Karan and Naina, they are sooooooooooooooooo cute together, pata hai tune mujhe apni dost ki yaad dila di, we were just like them, always pulling each other's legs😛 chal kam se kam Karan ki wajah se Naina hasi toh..........nehi toh uska dukh mujhse dekha nehi jata 😭

haan bahut hi acche dost hain jo bus ek doosre ki khushi dekhna chahte hain na.Karan Naina ko khush kar leta hai aaram se.😛😛

Naina Vyom scenes were sooooooooooooooooooooo romantic, haiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii, and the song...oh my God, just too good, par Naina sirf Raj ki hai aur mujhe pata hai yeh Vyom Raj hi hai, chahe jitan bhi koshish karle apne aap ko Vyom Rathod sabit karne ka😉

vaah par mujhe nahi lagta ki koi khaas romantic the,abhi tume mere romantic scenes ki skill dekhi kahan hai.😆

waise bahut saare mysteries hai tere fic mein, Vyom Raj hai toh woh yahan Karan ke saath kya kar raha hai? agar woh Raj nehi hai toh fir Raj kahan hai? Yudi ke mysterious bride abhi bhi janna baki hai, fir the acedemy mystery................oh God, kiten saare sawal, can't wait anymore, jaldi se tu update likhna, plssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

haan yaar mystries to hain hi kyounki maine jaan moojh kar ek aisa fic likha hai na.😛

lots of love

Originally posted by: riyaa_1985

Hi!!Vertika!!

Hope u are fine dear.😊

Such a short update after such a long time!!!!!😭

The update was fabulous.👏

Naina pareshaan hai......

don't worry Naina..yeh jo humari author hain na..inhe hum

bilkul nahi chodenge agar inhone Vyom ko Raj nahi banaya toh.😆😉

Too good sweety.

Take care.

Continue soon.

love

Riya😊

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!Awesome!!!!

thank u mam.😊😊

Bechari Naina!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Dil kehta hai woh Raj hai aur dimag kehta hai ke woh Raj nahi hai!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

vo to humesha dil aur dimmag alag alag hote hain na.😕😕

Naina dil aur dimag ke beech mein phasi huyi hai!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Uske toh aasu bhi sukh gaye hai!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔 😔Naina apne dil ki baat sun!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

kitna royegi yaar aur bhi kaam hain na us k paas.😛😛

I loved Naina and Karan's teasing!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣Karan ne kaha ke woh Sita ke role ke liye zyada perfect hogi!!!!😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

ab kya kare Karan itna roti jo hai vo.😆😆

Haan after all woh heroine hai!!!😊 😊 😊 Aur uski bhi muskilein khatam hi nahi hoti!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

abhi nahi thoda time lagega Naina darling ko.😲😲

Naina is worried ke Vyom uske baare mein kya soch raha hoga!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

hmmmmmmmmmm, so to hai, kaise jaa k gale lag gayi thi na.😲😲

Karan toh Shahrukh ka dialogue bol raha hai!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Naina ne sahi kaha that Karan can never be Shahrukh!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

haan vo to hai bhai SRK is the best.👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

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Waise bhi Shahrukh toh Raj hai!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️

Their Tom and Jerry chase started again!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Naina bumped into Vyom!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

vo purani aadat hai aise nahi aajyegi.😆😆

Vyom is making Naina restless!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Magar aise asar Naina pe toh sirf Raj ka hota tha!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊

haan us ka chehra aur kabhi kabhi us ki harkatein.😲😲

Yeh Vyom toh flirt kar raha hai Naina ke saath!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Aur Naina ko lagne laga ke yeh Raj nahi hai!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

haan kyounki Raj aisa nahi tha na.😉

Vyom ne Naina Ah Singh kaha!!!😛 😛 😛 😛And Naina's heart skipped a beat!!!!😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳

it was just a mistake i think.

Naina confused ho gayi!!!😕 😕 😕 😕Ismein confused honewaali kya baat hai!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Naina Ah Singh sirf Raj kehta tha!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

haan vo baat sahi hai.😕

Karan Naina ke liye bahut gifts laya hai!!!😛 😛 😛 😛How sweet!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Kaash aisa hi koi mera frnd ho.

Naina bhi gifts dekh ke khush ho jaati hai especially a platinum pendant!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Waise bhi ladkion ko jewellery bahut pasand aati hai!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

ye baat bilkul sahi hai.😉

Karan bhi Naina ke saath Yudi ki engagement aur shaadi mein jaa raha hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Aur Vtom bhi saath aa raha hai!!!😃 😃 😃 😃Thats great!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

kyoun na jaaye vaise bhi akele to rukega nahi Vyom vahan par.😛

Naina uncomfortable feel kar rahi hai magar mana bhi nahi kar sakti!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Par baki sab log kya kahenge Vyom ko dekhke??😕 😕 😕 😕

pata nahi tab ki tab dekhenge.🥱

Sab Dehradun ghoomne jayenge!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Thats great!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Magar Naina toh Nainital mein rehti thi naa!!!!😕 😕 😕

haan kyounki abhi sab Dehradoon me hain.😉😉

Raj aisa kyun kar raha hai??😕 😕 😕 😕I hope Naina jaldi samaj jaye ke wohi Raj hai!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Pata nahi abhi aage dekho ki pata nahi vo Raj hai bhi ya nahi.😃

Here in the next part guys:-

There was an awkward silence between Vyom and Naina. Dono hi nahi samajh paa rahe the ki kya baat karein. Finally Vyom ne baat shuru ki.

"To aap Army me captain hain." Vyom asked.

"Hmmmmmmmm", Naina nodded.

"To aap ne kai saare mission bhi poore kiye honge. By the way aap ko kitna time hua hoga Army join kiye hue?" Vyom asked.

"Mujhe do saal poore ho jaayenge ab." Naina answerd in short.

"Good, kaafi acchi soldier hain aap. Do saalon me promotion bhi ho gaya aur aap captain bhi ban gayi." Vyom praised her bravery.

"Thanks," Naina replied.

"Vaise ye Rajveer Singh Shekawat kaun hai?" Vyom again asked.

Naina ki aankhon me ansoon aa gaye. Kuch bol nahi paa rahi thi . Vo rote hue chali gayi wahan se. Karan ne Naina ko jaate hue dekha aur andar aa kar Vyom se poocha ," Kya hua kahan gayi Naina ?"

"Yaar meri hi galti hai maine us se maine Rajveer Singh Shekawat k bare me poocha aur us ka mood off kar diya." Vyom was feeling bad for her.

"It's ok Vyom mai dekhta hoon." Karan said n left.

Later in evening:-

All set n all of them were ready. Naina was still confused whether she should go or not. Par Naina ki mom ne us ko convince kiya ki vo jab se yahan aayi hai ghar me hai jara bahar ghoom legi na to mood accha ho jaayega.

Naina got ready n came downstairs where Karan n Vyom were already waiting for her. Vyom was mesmerized by the beauty of Naina. She was looking so pretty in simple blue chudiaar. Vyom was unable to took his eyes off from Naina. Naina was not feeling well by his gaze. She lowered her eyes n tried to avoid the eye contact.

Vyom to khoya hua tha Naina ko dekh kar kahin. Vo apne aap me soch raha hai 'Ye aankhein pata nahi kya kehti hain mujh se mera dil in me doob jaane ko karta hai. Pata nahi jab aaj is ne mujhe gale se lagaya itna accha kyoun laga jab ki aaj se pehle bhi aisa nahi feel hua kabhi. Mai vaise bhi ladkiyon''''.' Tabhi us ne saamne dekha Naina slipped from stairs n he ran to caught her.

But by a sudden jerk they both fell on the ground Naina k uper Vyom. Vo aise dekh raha tha Naina ko jaise aaj se pehle kisi ko dekha na ho.

"Aap ko kisi ne bataya nahi aaj tak ki aap kitni khoobsurat hain aur aap ki ye aankhein'''.." he couldn't complete.

"Jeeeeeeeeeeee. Kya bola aap ne? Aur aap uthenge ki nahi?" Naina was not happy at all.

Tabhi Karan aa gaya yahan. He smiled at Vyom's condition.

"Are tum log yahan kya kar rahe ho chalo der ho rahi hai na?" Karan said.

"Tum yahan kab aaye?" Vyom asked he was feeling embarrassed.

"Bus abhi ab chalo bhi." Karan pulled Naina's hand from one hand n Vyom's hand from another.

They all sat in Naina's dad's car n Karan said, "Naina ye car nahi badli na abhi tak. Vaise hi hai jaise pehle thi na?"

"Haan paa ko ye car bahut pasand hai ; kyounki ye car Naveen bhaiya ki pasand thi isiliye vo is car ko change nahi karte hain." Naina said n her eyes filled with tears.

Flash back:-

"Maa''.maa..kahan ho tum?" Naina was super excited.

"Mai yahan ho ." her mom said.

"Maa paa aur bhaiya car le aaye dekho na kitna aacha color hai na is ka." Naina pulled her mom out n show her.

"Haan sach me bahut pyaara color hai. Accha jara ruk." Her mom said n went in.

"Hoga kyoun nahi aakhir Navin ki pasand hai." Naveen said proudly.

"Haan haan ud lo mujhe pehle pasand aayi thi." Naina said.

"Tujhe nahi mujhe pasand aayi thi chuhiya." Naveen said.

Soon their fight started. Tabhi mom andar se foolon ki maala aur diya le kar aayi saath me naariyal bhi tha.

Naina ki mom ne car ki aarti ki us par tilak lagaya aur car par maala chadhaai aur Naveen se boli, "beta ye nariyal todna car k samne."

As a obedient son Naveen did what his mom said.

"Haan to maa bataiye pehle kahan chalna hai?" Naveen asked.

"Pehle maal chalenge kuch khareedne." Naina suggested.

"Haan tum ladkiyon ko shopping k alwa kuch aur yaad bhi hota hai kabhi." Naveen taunted.

" Bhaiya I will kill u." she ran behind him n soon she came out from her memories when car stopped.

"Kya hua gadi kyoun rok di?" she asked Karan.

"Are baba jahan jaana tha vo jagah aa gayi ab utar na." Karan said.

Vyom jo ki aage ki seat par baitha tha Karan k saath vo bade hi dhyaan se Naina k face par aate jaate expressions ko dekh raha tha. Kuch ajeeb sa tha Naina me jo us ko apni taraf kheech raha tha.

"Ab tu utrega ki Crain mangaoo tere liye." Karan asked Vyom.

Is baat ko sun kar Karan apne khayalo se bahar nikla. " Haan chal." He replied.

"Tum log andar jaane k tickets lo mai abhi car park kar k aata hoon." Karan said n drove off.

Here Naina n Vyom were alone again. Naina was hesitant to talk with him.

"Ek kaam kariye wahan ladies line par bheed nahi hai aap tickets le aayie. Kyuoki mai agar gaya lene tickets to bheed dekh k lagata hai ki mujhe ek ghanta to lag hi jaayega." Vyom said finally.

"Theek hai mai le aati hoon aap aur Karan yahin rahiyega." Naina said n went in the line.

Vyom was watching some thing silently. Us ki aankhein kuch talaash rahi thi. Idhar udhar kuch dhoondh raha tha Vyom; pata nahi kya? Tabhi us ki najar samne ped k upper padi jahan se us ne ek gun dekhi nikle hue aur gun ka point bheed me hi koi tha.

Vyom understood very well ki kis ko aim kiya ja raha hai. With in a fraction of second he ran n pushed the person to whom that gun targeted.

A gun shot heard n people there start running here n there like mad. Naina was unable to find out that wat's going on. She immediately got up n took out her gun.

"Kya ho raha hi yahan?" Karan came there almost running.

"Karan tu abhi Naina k paas jaa." Vyom ordered him.

Vyom immediately pushed Karan at Naina's side n tried to chase the man who was running after jumping down from tree.

"Naina kya ho raha hai yahan tum kuch bataogi mujhe?" Karan asked Naina.

"Karan mujhe bhi kuch theek se nahi pata hai." Naina was also confused.

"Lagta hai Vyom ne jo kaha tha vahi hua." Karan murmured.

"Kuch kaha tune?" Naina asked.

"Nahi maine kuch nahi kaha '''maine kya kaha?" Karan said with husky voice.

Idhar Vyom:-

He was still trying to catch the man. The man was tall n black in color n he also had a long bear. Vyom shoot a bullet targeting his legs n no doubt the bullet did it's work. The man fell down on the ground n Vyom finally caught him.

He hit him with punches continuously. "Bata kis k kehne par ye kaam kiya bata?" he asked.

"Mujhe chahe maar bhi daalo fir bhi nahi bataoonga." The man said.

"Tu aise nahi batayega." Vyom started hitting him continuously like mad.

Soon some one hit on his head with a rod ; Vyom dropped down unconscious n that man said to another, " Ye chalo Khalid ko yahan se?"

Vyom kitni der tak yahan pada raha aise us ko pata nahi hai. Jaldi hi Naina aur Karan us ko dhondhte hue aaye aur us ko behosh pada dekh k Naina sab kuch samajh gayi.

They both brought him back to home n Naina called doctor first. When she was out Vyom was continuously taking a name in his unconscious condition.

Karan knew everything so he smiled but his smile disappeared when he saw Naina approaching there.

He played a music on music system so that Naina couldn't here that name.

"Ye kya paagalpan hai Karan? Tumahara dost yahan behosh hai aur tum gaana sun rahe ho." Naina was fuming.

"Naina u know kabhi kabhi music dawa ka kaam kar deta hai. Jab tak doc nahi aa jaate kyoun na ye treatment kiya jaaye Vyom ka." Karan said it in nonsense tone.

"U r just impossible." Naina said.

Soon doc arrived so Karan ko bund karna pada apna gaana. Vo dar raha tha ki kahin Naina kuch sun na le par thank god tab tak Vyom poori tarah behosh ho gaya tha.

Naina lagataar Vyom k paas hi baithe rahi. Ek pal k liye bhi nahi uthi wahan se. Doc aa kar check kar k gaye aur dawaai bhi likh gaye . Doc ne Vyom ki bandage ki aur bataya ki chot kaafi gehri hai.Karan gaya dawaii lene.

Now one thing mai jaa rahi hoon kuch dino k liye , kab aaongi pata nahi par I will try to come soon.

Fic poori karoongi.