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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1111

lovely....teri nahi ud ki baat karr rahi hun...!!! tu mujhe kisi bhi tarah se lovely lagti hi nahi...kitna late ud karti hai...upar se chochlate(ud) khilane se pahle dur se wrapper(precap) bhi dikha kar chidhati hai...kabhi kabhi dil karta hai ek baar mann ki murad puri karne ke liye...teri jamm kar dhulai kar hi dun...!!!

naina n raj ka confession kafi sweet tha...!!! naina ko abhi bhi darr hai ke kahin raj use chod kar na chala jaye...!!! arre nahi jayega...kyoun ke RN ki jodi...fevicol ki jod hai...jo tutega nahi...

ab mission bhi suru hona wala hai...!!! naina ko thodi si samajh ki jarurat hai...!!! itna bachpana bhara hua hai us me...toh raj kaise share karta apna secret us ke sath...!!! sahi bhi hai...aise mamle par sirf alekh hi sahi banda hai...!!! raj n alekh ka scene thoda emotional tha...par sahi me badhia tha...

ab naina se sachhai chupayi hai toh naina toh naraz hi hogi na...!!! chalo yeh achha hua ke rajveer singh shekhwat ne naina ko kaise manaya jaye...voh seekh liya...!!!

dono pata nahi aur kab tak ek dushre me dube rahte...sahi waqt par alekh ne entry maar di...!!!

vaise yeh Pune academy me chal kya raha hai...!!! naina pe nazar rakhenge...!!! thik hai rakhne do...raj hai na naina ke sath...!!! un ke nazar naina ko na lage is ka bandobast raj kar hi dega...!!! lekin us GHONCHU ki himmat kaise hui naina ko naina ah singh kahne ki...!!! yeh copy right sirf raj ka hai...aur kisi ka nahi...!!! is 'ah' ke badle...rajveer ne agar us ke muh se dard bhare 'ahh' na nikalwaye na toh vertika ka naam badal dena...

aur ek baat yeh abhyudya verma koun hai...aur us ABHI...k UDAY hone se kuch gadbad toh nahi hoga...!!! lagta hai tu kisi Abhi ko phir se RN ke lyf me la rahi hai...!!! koi baat nahi...le aa...raj hai is baar sab ka band bajane ke liye...!!! aur naina ko us ke sath kya prob ho sakti hai...!!! raj aur alekh kya chupa rahe hain hum se aur naina se...???

ab raj bhi na ajeeb sawal puchta rahta hai...!!! naina us pe kitna trust karti hai...use pata nahi hai kya...???

chal ab next part post kar...!!! vaise ek baat bata...next part kab post hoga...2 mahine baad ya do saal baad...

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1112

way to go buddy......👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1113

It was till now the best part for me...😉...of course u knw why....😳😳.....I cant cherish the fact of having Raj....more than this....😆...have been excited since the precap....(coz I had forgot abt the last part shollie😳)...but no problem....ye part padhte hi sab yaad aa gaya...😃....and I was wondering I shud have been excited since the last part only...😕😆...anyways....the main fact is am excited even more now....to knw how he survived and all...😳

However jo bhi flashbacks u included regarding Aalekh....it was beautiful...and I loved it...😃...

But fav part and the most fab part was the RN romance one....😉....it was truly wonderful...😳😳....but am not feeling very gud abt the 'nazar rakhne wali thing on Naina'...huh!!

Well...as of now....am happy to have the name 'Raj' back again....😆.....though I am very much fond of the name Vyom (in fact I like all the names chosen by u😉)....but Naina ke saath Raj padhne me hi achha lagta hai...😉

Pls continue soon dear....mujhe bhulne ki rog kuch zyada ho raha hai aaj kal....ryt now main apni fic ka bhi end yaad nahi kar paa rahi hu....😆😆.....so plssssss....jaldi UD karna....I had always Chahat to reach this point....since the fic had started....so am realllly eager now!!

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arpita25

@arpita25

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#1114

sorry dear for replying late on precap, i hope u'll undst.
Lovely precap
aur haan mujhe thanks kehna mat bhoolna. 😉

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1115

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit
Congrats for completing 152 pgs of this fiction 👏👏

Thank u so much Suhana sweetheart. 🤗🤗🤗

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1116

Originally posted by: Sweet-Lioness

way to go buddy......👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Thank u Priya dear 🤗🤗🤗

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shreya

@XoxowpdXoxo

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#1117

heyyyyy congrats to your 153 pages....

Edited by shreyamathur_18 - 14 years ago

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arpita25

@arpita25

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#1118

A BIG CONGRATS TO U SWEETHEART FOR COMPLETING 150 pg. OF YOUR FIC. 👏 👍🏼 🥳

Edited by arpita25 - 14 years ago

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arpita25

@arpita25

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#1119

Coming to the update, superb tha. 👏

I mean jaise hi ab saare doubts clear ho gaye hain ki Raj hi hai Vyom now all has been so easy for Naina. 😊 Specially i liked the Flash back. 👏

Kis tarah Naina ko pata chala ki Vyom hi Raj hai ye abhi tak nahi pata chala, waiting for that. 😍 Alekh ka Raj k saath scene kaafi badhiya tha 👏 aur i hope agle update me FB ka vo part padhne ko mil jaayega. 😉 Raj sach me Naina ko kaise manayega ab to bahut mushkil hai na us k liye,😆 jab Naina ko aur jyada gussa aa raha hai ki us ne Alekh ko batya ki vo Raj hai par Naina ko nahi. 🥱 Ye Major Abhyuday Verma ka kya chakkar hai aur Naina us k saamne apne aap ko kyoun nahi samhaal paayegi?😕 Sahi to keh raha hai Raj ab sir kyoun kehti hai us ko Naina,😉 i know bus tease karne k liye na? 😆 Ab Academy me kaun hai jo Naina ko Naina Ah Singh keh raha tha?

kuch confusions hain is me, pls jaldi aage update karo.

Edited by arpita25 - 14 years ago