AR ff untitled need advise bout ff

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey guyz

well guyz im a little confused bout wat2 do as well i dont fink i should conitinue wid my ff as i dont fink its dat good an seondly im very busy lately thirdly i wann try an have time fr studies lol
so i was wonderin if any of u guyz can help me
Well ive read many ffs an finally id decided 2 write my own obviously it wil be about my favourite couple arman ridz well the characters wil be exactly the sme as in dil mil gaye there wil be a few new characters introduced but later on so sowie peeps if u don?t like it this is my first an in this ff they r all married/ engaged so some r engaged others married

Btw this is a romantic comedy
So it starts of in sanjeevani where its all the interns last day of their internship they will receives a one month break until they officially became a doctor so everyone was very excited an ready for their hard earned vacation all couples were all ready 2 accept their certificate which officially states they are a qualified doctor with experience. All interns received their certificates by Dr shashank an were ready 2 go fr their long vacation rahul an muskaan decided 2 go 2 malasiya fr a very romantic honeymoon atul anjali were of 2 dubai as anjali liked a modern vacation an then our beloved couple armaan ridz stil hadn?t decided where 2 go they had been fightin fr the past week armaan wanted 2 go usa where else ridzie wanted 2 saty in India finally their problem was solved they decided 2 go 2 u.s.a for their honeymoon and unlike all the others they decided 2 go u.s.a one day after they received there vacation so they saud bye 2 everyone and were off 2 u.s.a new york

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Armaan and ridz are on their way 2 U.S.A they just waved goodbye to their dearest interns and were walking hand in hand to the aeroplane they both sat down onto their seats and were ready for take off
There armaaan was just waiting patiently looking outside the window on the other hand armaans love was scared this was her first time flying and was very sacred there ridzie was jus reading chants ?god tussi great ho? ?god tussi great ho? ?god tussi great ho? arman thinking wats is goin on turned around to her seein her very scared he turned 2 her 2 tell her the weather was really nice but all her heard was ?god tussi great ho? armaan thought of carckin a joke okay den im ur god and yes I am great and tehn he laughed were else riddima just hit him an was chanting. Armaan confused turned aroundand was building up the courage to turn 2 ridzie 2 ask her wat was wrong he finaaly turned around 2 ask her wats wrong darling a very scared and angry ridiima hum dum can this man get she replies wat do u fink is wrong im scared of aeroplanes wat else
Armaan looked really shocked and supreised and replied so MRs riddima arman malik is scared of flyin but now riddima was getting evrn more scared a very confused armaan thought 2 him self I better stp harassing her and held both her hands turned her face towards him and said daont be scared janoo im hereshe was so lost in his eyes and the sme fr him that they didn?t even realise the flight had taken off

Now rdzie was much calmer and they had just ate a air hostess caomes up 2 ask them if they would like anyfing 2 drink armaan replied yh sure a cup of coffe would be nice darling (he didn?t realise ho darling cme out huis mouth)
Rids gave him evils and raised her eye brow and riddima very angrily replied 2 the air hostees wh was jus starin at ridz u can go now now ridz waws boiling inside and now she was screaming at him shoutin at hima s she was very poosesive bout him she started hitting him an armaan was all scared and quiet
And ridz gt more angry wen he aid 2 her every1 is looking she turned around every1 was staring at her a air hostess was comin wid pillows hse gt a pillow threw it at armaan now every1 was shocked and ridzie replies 2 every1 he jus wanted a pillow ridz didn?t talk 2 armaan threw out the whole journey and she fell a sleep where armaan was just satring at her mezmerised by her beuty an just moved a lock of her hair back an dthen he put his head on her shoulders and eventuatlly ridz head fell on her head
Hey guyz hope u guyz liked it an plz comment
feel free to critsize if u fink it aint good
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part 2 page 5

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yachna thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey wow yaar vryyyyyyyy intrestng concept yaar wow thy all r married nd lke alwys rridz fght rt yaar i would lv 2 read mre cont soooooooooooon
luv yachna
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow loved it yaar ......nyc concept.........plsss continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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cute intro...cont soon,,,i m definitely gonna read it
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Posted: 17 years ago
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really a interesting one👏 so sweet😊 please continue it soon😊


"Frndship is like a clap it make sound great when we clap with two hands and frndship is strong when two person can understand each orther,and that two person are u and me ... thanks for being my frnd....."
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Posted: 17 years ago
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seems interesting! plz continue soon :) and can you PM me when you continue? :)
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Posted: 17 years ago
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It is really nice shelly...plz continue...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey shelly dear sounds good & interesting..'ll love to read it..do count soon..
Piya.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice concept, do update soon dear, i will be eagerly awaiting ur next update, plzzz pm me when u update
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey shelly
nice concept n intro
update soon n plz pm me

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